line-editing my YA fantasy book 🌈 character, atmosphere & improving a scene // edit with me

but did you really write a fantasy book if you didn’t write a tavern scene…..
📣 my next editing video will be featuring your submissions :) I am still working through them. I appreciate the patience & thanks again to everyone who let me read some of your work!!
in this video, I decided to spontaneously line-edit 2 excerpts-the start/end of a chapter-from one of my old manuscripts. just some scene tweaking + a little chat on character, atmosphere and struggles with handling nuance. (overall, a chaotic editing session lmao)
timestamps:
0:00 intro and project update
1:07 line editing is funnn
2:39 scene context
4:31 excerpt 1
21:45 first draft vs revision 1
22:14 excerpt 2
31:00 first draft vs revision 2
31:12 reflections - how to handle nuance??
32:27 the end
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