The Eclipse Collection: Volume 1 | Zombie Outbreak Story

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  • Volume 1 contains "Eclipse Initiative: Project Havoc" and "Eclipse Compendium: Havoc Virus Quarantine"
    Author ► Jordan Long
    Contact Info ► jordanbethwriting@gmail.com
    What is the Eclipse Collection?
    The Eclipse Collection is a specially curated selection that combines the mainline stories of the Eclipse Initiative with the enriching tales from the Eclipse Compendium. It's designed to offer a seamless and comprehensive experience, ensuring that readers and listeners hear every story in the order they were meant to be enjoyed. By bundling relevant compendium stories with the mainline narrative, the Eclipse Collection provides a cohesive and immersive exploration of the Eclipse universe. It's the perfect starting point for those new to the series or for veterans looking to experience the stories in a new and integrated way.
    Eclipse Initiative: Mainline Series:
    • Eclipse Initiative: Se...
    Eclipse Compendium:
    • Playlist
    Eclipse Collection:
    • Eclipse Collection Mar...
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    #Scifi #zombiesurvival #military

ความคิดเห็น • 79

  • @elitacilan891
    @elitacilan891 ปีที่แล้ว +54

    I love this series, very captivating. It's my favorite along with the one where there were parallel universe nazis.

    • @CapitanGreenhat
      @CapitanGreenhat ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Yea I really wish those got more love from the writing community!

    • @pmg2120
      @pmg2120 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Ya gotta love space nazis!

    • @angelnavarro1010
      @angelnavarro1010 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      What's the nazi one called?

    • @jonathanhensley6141
      @jonathanhensley6141 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      It the alternate realities series just look through the play lists.

    • @charlesturner7579
      @charlesturner7579 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Mm😊

  • @CapitanGreenhat
    @CapitanGreenhat ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Yay, another delicious audio. And zombies, too! Perfectly in time for the kiddos returning to school and me having to wake up at 5 to get everyone up and moving. 😁

    • @randallbesch2424
      @randallbesch2424 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Technically not zombies they are infected and infectious and ravenous to feed their infection.
      Modified rabies is the most logical way of creating something like a "zombie apocalypse" only they are alive not dead-alive.

  • @WiTtYGuNs
    @WiTtYGuNs 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +9

    Umbra ,total city sterilization sounds a little familiar lol

  • @jonathanhensley6141
    @jonathanhensley6141 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    This could be a series about containment and quarantine not with just zombies but other infections and pandemics.

    • @d3ltaohniner261
      @d3ltaohniner261 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      If you like things like that, look into SCP, I know I do.

  • @randallbesch2424
    @randallbesch2424 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    A very exciting idea. I just hope there are are more than just infected, that was the good thing about Resident Evil/Bio Hazard more than just a Zombie Apocalypse.

  • @cliffcampbell8827
    @cliffcampbell8827 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Stone Bridge? Is that the name of the university? I know of UNR and UNLV but Stone Bridge is a new one on me.

  • @robertvelasquez601
    @robertvelasquez601 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Resident evil fan fiction. Nice

  • @Apex-vj2ef
    @Apex-vj2ef 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Sarah seems kinda dumb in the beginning

  • @Angry11B
    @Angry11B 28 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Listening to non-military authors write military characters just makes me cringe. NOBODY, and I swear to you, NO ONE is gonna have a callsign like 'Raptor'. Also, there is NO FUCKING WAY, a unit with as broad a mission as Aries' is a Squad sized element. It's at least a fucking platoon, even ODA teams are like 12 dudes, which is still more than a squad.

  • @harrygrimley4352
    @harrygrimley4352 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Quite heavy on discription, very slow. Short on story. And still good. I recommend ADRIAN'S UNDEAD DIARIES. Very good. And a long series.

  • @tumsekizo6478
    @tumsekizo6478 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    👍⭐⭐⭐⭐👍

  • @Fallon-ux8qu6qz3e
    @Fallon-ux8qu6qz3e 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    love all of you stories doll face...i love that dark side and the Sci fi aspect you bring out with most of them,,,that is, except the love stories you probably dont know you even do...lol...because...lets fact it...youre a guy.....haha...so i wished youd write more because they are so detailed and have a sort of kindness and longing or a real intensity to them and an edge of your seat kinda vent,,,,ohhhhh deal with it! youre very talented....like M night S...so..." U GO BOY!" keep bringing us all of what you do dude....

  • @cindaschuster6725
    @cindaschuster6725 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    💙👍

  • @megaztg8881
    @megaztg8881 4 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    The second half of story about a special unit that work for shady company where they went into the infected city to destroy evidence remind me of the game Resident evil: Operation Raccoon City.

  • @Wiggles_vs._snuggles
    @Wiggles_vs._snuggles ปีที่แล้ว +8

    First. Good stuff man. I love anything military

  • @justinrogers1575
    @justinrogers1575 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Cool story, after I finished listening I had to play Resident Evil Operation Raccoon City.

    • @arthurchadwell9267
      @arthurchadwell9267 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      Umbrel.... Umbrella
      PoTAto.... PotATo....
      😂

    • @randallbesch2424
      @randallbesch2424 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@arthurchadwell9267 from the same root slightly different meanings.

  • @lisamarieboucher9469
    @lisamarieboucher9469 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    This sounds like Jeff Probst narrating!

  • @loathbringer
    @loathbringer 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    My dumb thoughts:
    First, your voice is quite good for reading. I Can tell you put a lot of effort into ensuring you only include the takes with no mispronunciations or errors. The rest of my short criticisms are levied against whoever the author is.
    I haven’t listened to very much of the story, but I think it quickly lost steam for me. The first couple sentences were pretty good, a solid start to a story. Established the setting, and who the main character was in a quick manner. It didn’t characterize him much though, but I suppose that’s what the rest of the story is for. My problem is that it just jumped right into Alex knowing something was wrong. It’s a bit strange that his immediate reaction to seeing a man getting attacked is to flee to one of his friends and force them both to pack their things and leave. Just a paragraph or two before he stated that he didn’t think much of the virus, and now he’s in full panic mode. How did he put together that the virus and woman attacking the man were connected? I don’t believe any clues were established for him to realize that. What he should have done, with the information he supposedly had at the time, would be to flee to his dorm or hide in a nearby building, because he just witnessed a “murder” and not a zombie attack. Sure, the biting is strange, but I think most people would assume drugs before putting virus and eating people together in their heads. Ideally, a story like this has some foreshadowing and tension before things go bad. Perhaps this isn’t that kind of story and the author simply wished to jump right into the tale of survival.
    Just my short dumb thoughts on a story I didn’t finish. It’s a better start than other zombie short stories, but not great.

    • @harrygrimley4352
      @harrygrimley4352 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      If you thought this was good why did you quit? You should try Adrians undead diaries. Very good.

  • @TheStuart-of-Cosby
    @TheStuart-of-Cosby ปีที่แล้ว +13

    What better way to spend a Muggy Hot afternoon. Than with a shade break and another Awesome narration by The man the myth. The Magnetar. Thanks again Brother

    • @itsjustme7487
      @itsjustme7487 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      👏👏👏

    • @randallbesch2424
      @randallbesch2424 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Magnetar a star with a million or more times greater magnetic field.

  • @joejimenez9594
    @joejimenez9594 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    I can’t wait to listen to this thank you for all your videos

  • @GFox...
    @GFox... ปีที่แล้ว +9

    Nicely done. Very enjoyable read.

  • @demigod_inc
    @demigod_inc ปีที่แล้ว +4

    I need this a series of animated shorts. Where's the ai for that

  • @lindaarrington9397
    @lindaarrington9397 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Ive heard the first part of this before.
    Ty for the rest of part 1
    I thought that It sucked that the 4 was on their way out and the gov.
    Had other plans then wham no more
    So i do appreciate it

  • @mrwaffles6139
    @mrwaffles6139 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    tbf though i would have got the hell out of town and sod going for Sarah :P

  • @jonathanhensley6141
    @jonathanhensley6141 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Who is author of eclipse because these stories are very well written.

  • @coreywhalen1615
    @coreywhalen1615 3 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Yea, Charlie! Great story, very compelling. Loved Charlie. Question, why was the battery in the fire truck dead words the end? It's only been like 18 hours, it shouldn't be dead yet. Regardless, great story, loved every minute of it.

  • @squidlipssupreme168
    @squidlipssupreme168 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Good narration to a great story!

  • @jonathanhensley6141
    @jonathanhensley6141 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Love to see team in a the thing type of movie or alien infestation series of movies. Heck even aries v xenomorph.

  • @ScullyPop
    @ScullyPop ปีที่แล้ว +6

    What a great reading channel here.

  • @vinitkshirsagar4304
    @vinitkshirsagar4304 ปีที่แล้ว +10

    Impressive research work done for this story 💯
    Excellent and spectacular video visuals 👀
    Grand and delightful recital of the tale🎃
    Chilling and entertaining content 👍

  • @lindaarrington9397
    @lindaarrington9397 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Wow look how big you have grown. Ty for all the great stories.
    Much more success in the future

  • @Deasy782
    @Deasy782 23 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Turned off after 5 minutes. Guy sees a woman attack a man viciously and immediately runs to his ex's dorm... For what? lol

  • @arthurchadwell9267
    @arthurchadwell9267 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    Umbrel is pretty close to Umbrella... 😂

    • @arthurchadwell9267
      @arthurchadwell9267 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

      I will say- "Havoc" is a lot better than "T"...

  • @frocurl
    @frocurl 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Great job Aries! Apocalypse averted

  • @mjskinner9288
    @mjskinner9288 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Thanks Magnetar 🖤👾

  • @hashtagisaacweaver1999
    @hashtagisaacweaver1999 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    You have a great voice, dude! 💯 You know, I use to ✍️ back in 🏫; (high school) might 💪 my worn “muscles,” bc I do belief there should be more 🧟‍♂️ 😷 stories.

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Send them my way, I'd love to share them

  • @RandomTaco15
    @RandomTaco15 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    This is literally "we're alive" podcast....

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  9 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Idk what that is

    • @RandomTaco15
      @RandomTaco15 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @MagnetarYT it wouldn't be your fault at all given you're just the narrator. Absolutely love your videos, didn't mean to word it that way. It's a podcast about the zombie apocalypse which starts off almost identical to this with them being at college and not able to leave and asking to find her roommate

  • @lorddemonoss3945
    @lorddemonoss3945 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Did I just hear a rip-off of umbrella/ biohazard ☣️ 😳

  • @ACJ523
    @ACJ523 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    First

    • @randallbesch2424
      @randallbesch2424 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

      First at what being infected?

  • @CNinjaa
    @CNinjaa ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Ahh 🙉 The S' T's Sh's etcetera are too overwhelming in the audio mix. It's not necessarily bad I just can't listen to it. I will listen to something else you've made 🙂

  • @AdmiralMiller
    @AdmiralMiller ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Is this a re-upload I feel like I’ve heard this story before… I’m only 4:20mins in so idk.

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Sort of? It's just both of the stories from the Project Havoc storyline online video

    • @Deasy782
      @Deasy782 23 วันที่ผ่านมา

      It's cliche and predictable of course you know what happens

  • @TheEedjit
    @TheEedjit 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Here we go, my first time listening to this series.. 🤞 it’s worth it…

  • @MaliciousMollusc
    @MaliciousMollusc ปีที่แล้ว +3

    We need more of this

  • @merryhineline7781
    @merryhineline7781 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    The healer is a girl? /sigh

    • @randallbesch2424
      @randallbesch2424 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Woman actually.

    • @randallbesch2424
      @randallbesch2424 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      They are all badasses and cross trained.

    • @Spartan135
      @Spartan135 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

      ​@randallbesch2424 Hollywoke bs stereotype 🙄

    • @Angry11B
      @Angry11B 28 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      ​​@@Spartan135 Actually, the medic being a woman isn't atypical at all. I've met a few female 68Ws in the Army. The real problems I have with the story is a civilian author trying to write military characters with cringe fucking callsigns like 'Raptor' or 'Hawkeye', NOBODY gets callsigns like that.

  • @davidrains3918
    @davidrains3918 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Replace “Umbral” with WEF and WHO and the story feels all too real!

  • @davidk6269
    @davidk6269 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    47:00 bookmark

  • @ronaldc8973
    @ronaldc8973 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Is this a repost or different story

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  ปีที่แล้ว +5

      Repost, but it combines all the stories that fit within the Project Havoc story thread

    • @ronaldc8973
      @ronaldc8973 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      @@MagnetarYT nice thank you!

    • @TheBIackSheep
      @TheBIackSheep ปีที่แล้ว +5

      @@MagnetarYT Thank you. I was having trouble finding and keeping them in order

    • @itsjustme7487
      @itsjustme7487 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      I like the compilations of a series.
      It gives me a chance to kick back and relax.

  • @davidhorsley8461
    @davidhorsley8461 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    The hell have you been 😢

    • @MagnetarYT
      @MagnetarYT  ปีที่แล้ว +3

      I just posted a story like, two days ago? 🤔