No, its Umbra like in relation to "Eclipse" which is the name of the initiative and the series. Plus Umbra goes well with shadowy happenings and such. Umbra: the fully shaded inner region of a shadow cast by an opaque object, especially the area on the earth or moon experiencing the total phase of an eclipse.
Idk about you,sure resident evil raccoon city vibes,but I got a more 28 days and 28 weeks later vibe really. The virus sent them into a rage,and we'll that is what was the name of the virus in those movies...RAGE. anyone else seen both of them? Damn good movies to.
Geesh, that was pure adrenaline from start to finish. My heart is actually racing. Great story-telling there. That writer sure knows how to pace his or her story and keep the reader involved and you the listener.
Ok is this gonna be like breach initiative? A multi part story about this team cleaning up messes? I totally loved how detailed this was and reminded me of the 28 days and weeks movies instead of resident evil. So im looking forward to more of these in the future.
Well Jordan Long is a great writer...and Magnetar you are a great narrator...thanks for this unique story...it may be a zombie story and another government mess universe that it is set in but the uniqueness comes from the point of view our the main characters love it
Cracking story - loved the imagery and description. Brilliant narration, very captivating. I really enjoyed the synergy and charisma between the soldiers. For me, I enjoyed this presentation as much as I enjoyed Arisen (MSF) and The Tide (AJM), narrated by the legendary RC Bray.
Myself and my rat (rattie boop) enjoyed that very much while she has her play & free roam time ! Good sci-fi choice , classic friends bonded till the end. Nice ...puts me in mind of a stephen king kinda feel . On another point you guys gonna be doing any unique body horror any time soon ? Its one thing ive noticed amongst the big cp ch is a of a lack of coverage of this genre . I found a couple of ch but they were all read by ai & sucked big time , i couldn't get through ten mins it was that bad !
We need stories where breach and eclipse universe join forces to fight a extradimensional and extraterrestrial infestation. Love each version of same story.
I want to join the special forces of Finland and then join a badass group like this. Play along with me guys, what would i have to do to join such elite military groups?
This is like a bollywood copy of resident evil, replace raccoon city as a college. Umbril with umbrella. A tunnel through the mountian, the catscale mountians. Havoc virus with H-virus lol a lab in the basement for human testing. An umbril special operations squad , STARS. Umbril being a tech heavy company much like umbrealla is with its red queen.
I was extremely impressed with this story and I was wondering whether you might be interested in some type of collaboration. I want to make the ultimate science-based real life zombie story
Did my screen just went dark? Just my opinion, but I think you should leave a thumb nail photo running as the video. So we know your story is ongoing. The darkness is confusing.
if youve been in the military youd know they gove you the goofiest callsigns, no one gets a cool name like tempest or whatever. if your name is Ares its because you took a massive dump
Clunky writing in this one. Author needs an editor. They overused big words that detracted from the story, as well as repetitive language. Your oration is the give away. You stumble over clunky sentences and or pause too much between them. No criticism on your oration to be clear, i can just like hear your confusion as you read it feels like. Haha
No, its Umbral like in relation to "Eclipse" which is the name of the initiative and the series. Plus Umbral goes well with shadowy happenings and such. Umbral: the fully shaded inner region of a shadow cast by an opaque object, especially the area on the earth or moon experiencing the total phase of an eclipse.
The good guys so far seem like the bad guys. The team seems like they should all be put in prison. Bribing the local cops to permit mass murder of civilians.
Plus the unrealistic inclusion of female troops in elite units. Fun fact, they can't qualify by the normal (male) standards and not one has passed without the standards being changed. EVER.
What makes you think they're the good guys? What part of working for a mega corporation trying to hide their misdeeds screams "good guys"? Also, this is a private unit, again, from a megacorp, not military.
its actually a nice touch that the team werent cold soldiers and actually helped anyone not infected. need more of that
Bootleg Resident Evil?😂😂 But in all seriousness, its a good story, I can imagine the story as first person pov thanks to the narration!
This whole story so far has such an Umbrella Corps and Raccon City vibe.
Right, when he did the community post talking about this story I straight up thought it was called the "umbrella group" rather than umbrell.
Facts.
1) It is called Umbra like Umbrella
2) the story is similar to Resident Evil: Operation Raccoon City
This is gonna be a favorite among Breach Initiative
No, its Umbra like in relation to "Eclipse" which is the name of the initiative and the series. Plus Umbra goes well with shadowy happenings and such.
Umbra: the fully shaded inner region of a shadow cast by an opaque object, especially the area on the earth or moon experiencing the total phase of an eclipse.
Idk about you,sure resident evil raccoon city vibes,but I got a more 28 days and 28 weeks later vibe really. The virus sent them into a rage,and we'll that is what was the name of the virus in those movies...RAGE. anyone else seen both of them? Damn good movies to.
bro the special forces / military stories are genuinely the best please upload more like these love the content brother keep up the great work
Especially with strong empowered female soldiers!
Wow. I'm hooked. This is on par with Breach Initiative. So I look forward to hearing more. Thank You Mag.
Very Resident Evil.. I like it, Thank You ♥️
I love the zombie stories I wish they’d get more love by great narrators
Geesh, that was pure adrenaline from start to finish. My heart is actually racing. Great story-telling there. That writer sure knows how to pace his or her story and keep the reader involved and you the listener.
Perfect voice for military/action narration! I'd love to see you do audio books in the Halo or 40K franchise.
Don't know if you're familiar with the channel "The exploring series " but he's been doing 40k content lately.
Yes and pretty good to.
his voice in the tom clancy series would be awesome too
@@shifty1927 thanks for the heads up.
Is a British accent required for 40K?
BRAVO!!! These stories are first rate, and I'm now hooked! Thank-you for this!❤😎👍
This made my day! Big zombie fan! So, most if the time, any thing zombie I'm with it!
Been waiting all day to listen to this 💪
Love the black screen
Another amazing story... And your voicing plus audioscapes are captivating.
Well done
Had me at spec ops horror. 🤘
That was a rather well written and narrated story, it was definitely worth revisiting it this morning to listen to the full story.
Dude...No One tells military horror tales like you! The absolute best!!!
These are always the best stories! There’s just so many possibilities to explore and there always fun
Ok is this gonna be like breach initiative? A multi part story about this team cleaning up messes? I totally loved how detailed this was and reminded me of the 28 days and weeks movies instead of resident evil. So im looking forward to more of these in the future.
Very much inspired by BREACH 👾
YES!
Im thinking why don’t you have more subscribers this is one of my fav TH-cam channels then I realize I want subscribed either 😢
Well we're happy to have you now ♥️ 👾
Hella awesome! We need more of these
Well Jordan Long is a great writer...and Magnetar you are a great narrator...thanks for this unique story...it may be a zombie story and another government mess universe that it is set in but the uniqueness comes from the point of view our the main characters love it
This is fire. 🔥🔥🔥🔥
Every upload I become a bigger fan
♥️
@@MagnetarYT Seriously. Great job. Love these military sci Fi ones.
Alex Jones Was Right.
Magnetar, can I get a ❤️ on this??
Thank you!!
Loved the story and especially your narration and voice.... Love from India
Umbra-umbrella 😂 still great stuff
Omg those callsigns....
When the UAC and umbrella corporation have a love child from hell
This is basically an alternate reality version of USS trying to cover up Umbrella’s bungle before the military shows up.
Cracking story - loved the imagery and description. Brilliant narration, very captivating. I really enjoyed the synergy and charisma between the soldiers. For me, I enjoyed this presentation as much as I enjoyed Arisen (MSF) and The Tide (AJM), narrated by the legendary RC Bray.
2nd video is coming out tonight at 5pm est!
This is so damn good.
Myself and my rat (rattie boop) enjoyed that very much while she has her play & free roam time ! Good sci-fi choice , classic friends bonded till the end. Nice ...puts me in mind of a stephen king kinda feel .
On another point you guys gonna be doing any unique body horror any time soon ?
Its one thing ive noticed amongst the big cp ch is a of a lack of coverage of this genre . I found a couple of ch but they were all read by ai & sucked big time , i couldn't get through ten mins it was that bad !
Perfection!
Morality bogs down Sci Fi settings.
Another fantastic story 🎉
Great story. I am sure it happens in real life .
I enjoyed this one
I'd love to hear more from team Aries
👀
Nice one
This was a great story! I hope to hear more. 🙏
I’m only 8 minutes in so far but a lot of Terragroup vibes from EFT I’m liking it
Umbrel group, sounds like a corporation I know of
A more advanced, in time, scenario of IMF, WEF, Gates foundation, reality is catching up to this
Sick demonic democrat LIZID PEEPLE!
Love zombie
Must have more
Ya know this reminds me sas 4 combot virus
I dont know why but I auto translated "Umbral group" to umprella corporation when I read the description. XD
We need stories where breach and eclipse universe join forces to fight a extradimensional and extraterrestrial infestation. Love each version of same story.
Sounds like the umbrella corporation. Sounds a lot like resident evil.
Definitely has Resident Evil vibes.
Thanks
Awesome work as always Brother. I would've listened to this last night but I had to work this morning So thanks for making my work day better
Is this supposed to be like the breach series? That series was amazing
Def inspired by
You have great stuff magnetar. Love the scifi thing you got going. You ever watch the movie the thing?
Can I get a HOYAAAAA
If you'll settle for an Oorah! Hell... beers either way 😂
I want to join the special forces of Finland and then join a badass group like this. Play along with me guys, what would i have to do to join such elite military groups?
Nice story
When do we get the perspective of the student group?
This week.
Please make this a movie.
part 2 please
Soon
This is like a bollywood copy of resident evil, replace raccoon city as a college. Umbril with umbrella. A tunnel through the mountian, the catscale mountians. Havoc virus with H-virus lol a lab in the basement for human testing. An umbril special operations squad , STARS. Umbril being a tech heavy company much like umbrealla is with its red queen.
Most soldiers are “college age kids “ so
Is there more to this? Or will there be more
Check out the pinned comment / description
Can anyone tell me the proper way to listen yo this series. (Ie book 1 book 2)
Eclipse Collection: th-cam.com/play/PLRqGY-zu4GswQxjV0sUn16XbJxgsTswTD.html
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@@MagnetarYT Now I know exactly what I will be listening to until I fall asleep!
Hope you enjoy - now I'm nervous
@@MagnetarYT Aww, don't be nervous! Your stuff is awesome 😁 Your voice is bloody amazing.
Will there be more from this special ops group?...
SO much more :)
@@MagnetarYT awesome!!
29:30 bookmark
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I was extremely impressed with this story and I was wondering whether you might be interested in some type of collaboration. I want to make the ultimate science-based real life zombie story
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Did my screen just went dark? Just my opinion, but I think you should leave a thumb nail photo running as the video. So we know your story is ongoing. The darkness is confusing.
This is part 2 isnt it...wasn't part 1 from the students point of view
Technically this story came first
these people's callsigns are ridiculous 😅😅😅
if youve been in the military youd know they gove you the goofiest callsigns, no one gets a cool name like tempest or whatever. if your name is Ares its because you took a massive dump
@weilam03 lol no shit (pun intended 😂) I was given Malice on my 2nd deployment. Semper Fi!
My absolute favorite story next to the breach aniative story
Not mark :(
Narration is a 10, story is a 5.
Show not tell
Great narration but rather dry story with low stakes. Not even one casualty makes for rather boring horror.
Can't kill people off.... Yet 👀
Ooooh touche. Can't wait for the next 😈
Clunky writing in this one. Author needs an editor. They overused big words that detracted from the story, as well as repetitive language. Your oration is the give away. You stumble over clunky sentences and or pause too much between them.
No criticism on your oration to be clear, i can just like hear your confusion as you read it feels like. Haha
Ok weak German accent attempt.
And the blatant ripping off of resident evil franchise is bugging me too. Umbral is obviously umbrella.
No, its Umbral like in relation to "Eclipse" which is the name of the initiative and the series. Plus Umbral goes well with shadowy happenings and such.
Umbral: the fully shaded inner region of a shadow cast by an opaque object, especially the area on the earth or moon experiencing the total phase of an eclipse.
The good guys so far seem like the bad guys. The team seems like they should all be put in prison. Bribing the local cops to permit mass murder of civilians.
Plus the unrealistic inclusion of female troops in elite units. Fun fact, they can't qualify by the normal (male) standards and not one has passed without the standards being changed. EVER.
What makes you think they're the good guys? What part of working for a mega corporation trying to hide their misdeeds screams "good guys"?
Also, this is a private unit, again, from a megacorp, not military.
@@MagnetarYTwell they're definitely the bad guys now that I reach the end of the story. Wow, brutal.
Craziest shit ever... I could of swarn you can't even go to selection, without being a specialist
I think it's better than resident evil totally better
Yo do you have an instagram I can hit up? I fw the stories hella and wanna see if I can impact it at all
I have an insta but don't use it much. Do you have Twitter?
@@MagnetarYT yeah what’s your twitter?
@MagnetarYT
Yo I found it