Maybe Asha SHOULD have paid attention to some of those warning signs...it would have saved her and everyone else from Asha's rash actions, grand theft, and eventual destruction of their society when some of those vague and/or dangerous wishes are granted...kinda what King Magnifico was warning about. Also, these bad lines seem to give more credence to the theory that the plot and song lyrics were written by A.I.
@@godrules311 Feel free to watch the movie at your leisure, but don't expect a masterpiece. The animation and visuals of the film are pretty good (it's Disney), but pay close attention to everything else (especially to King Magnifico's backstory, Asha's immediate accusations when her request is denied, and WHY Asha met with King Magnifico in the first place), and you'll see why so many people have a problem with it.
@@L337M4573RK Yeah, I’ve seen some reviews (mostly on the songs, but a few on the movie as a whole). I’m just not the type to mind spoilers. Most people seem to regard it as mediocre. I should sit down and watch it sometime, but I’ve got other stuff to do at present.
I can’t wait til Jonah who two tries to refix “this wish” coz it feels clunky. The bg music seems fine, I have no complaints about it, however there are too many added words in the lyrics. I’m trying to do rewrite of the whole movie along with Jonah’s vers. Right now I’m just doing this sad excuse of the music for now until I get the fixed one. So, finger crossed. 🤞
This is such an underrated statement. Just in time, I might add, I was looking for a proper dissection of this song to compose better poetry in english and you did a great job 🎉 you just got a new sub 🎉 🎉
"I'm a star" has so many bad lines but the one that baffles me the most is the "watch out world here i are"... This isn't about poetic nonsense anymore, but first grade grammar 😂
Yeah, that one is pretty stupid, but it could potentially be fixed with some tweaking. The reason I’m going to do the “little fun allegory” line is that it is, in fact, beyond my skill to fix because of how nonsensical it is.
Is it bad that I sympathise with Magnifico more than Asha in regards to this movie? Like, I get that trapping dreams and picking only the necessary ones could be harsh, especially for seniors and children, but some dreams can be dangerous too, and I think had he been written to be an antagonist rather a villain, this film would've been better. You could keep his egotistical traits, of course, but have him learn to understand her perspective and have the two come together. As for the Magic Mirror iconography at the end, maybe he decides to step out of the natural world because he's ashamed of what he's done and can't forgive himself but because of his changed perspective, he's a lot more knowledgeable and provides guidance to those who deserve it. That, and I love the idea of the Evil Queen finding his mirror and hearing Magnifico's lack of enthusiasm starting to build overtime from being asked the same question.
@@godrules311 It's more of a retooling of the initial pitch, if that makes sense. I tend to come up with a lot of ideas on how to turn a bad movie into a good one, and Wish isn't an exception to that. It has decent qualities. It's just the music, character motivations and general narrative suck because it feels passionless and like they're checking off a box on a to-do list.
@@godrules311 Heh, I wish. I don't have a lot of confidence when it comes to my self-esteem and uh, I'm not the biggest fan of my voice either. Whilst I'd love to start making videos, I think I'll stick to writing out those ideas for now. But if you're still interested (alongside everyone else) then I don't mind putting together a public folder sometime so that people have somewhere to read my rewrites. :)
@@wadeyhyena1657 Sure, I’d like to see what you come up with. And don’t worry about your voice. After all, I’m eternally cursed with a child’s voice no matter how old I get (I’m 32). Also keep in mind that your voice sounds different to others than to yourself.
Michaels lazy and frankly dumb writing is all over the film. We all make mistakes, but if your writing is going in a feature film maybe make sure you understand the metaphors you’re using and sentence structure! Thanks for illustrating this
I mean, Disney never gave her a clear concept on what the plot is because it keeps changing and was worked with different visions, and she was given a little amount of time to do the lyrics and double checking the issues there..
@@ejoshcoron I missed when Disney hired actual songwriters and competent workers instead of bubbly pop songwriters who just couldn't get a grip on the english language..
Maybe Asha SHOULD have paid attention to some of those warning signs...it would have saved her and everyone else from Asha's rash actions, grand theft, and eventual destruction of their society when some of those vague and/or dangerous wishes are granted...kinda what King Magnifico was warning about.
Also, these bad lines seem to give more credence to the theory that the plot and song lyrics were written by A.I.
Since I haven't actually seen the movie, I'll take your word for it. Seems to agree with what everyone else keeps saying about it.
@@godrules311 Feel free to watch the movie at your leisure, but don't expect a masterpiece. The animation and visuals of the film are pretty good (it's Disney), but pay close attention to everything else (especially to King Magnifico's backstory, Asha's immediate accusations when her request is denied, and WHY Asha met with King Magnifico in the first place), and you'll see why so many people have a problem with it.
@@L337M4573RK Yeah, I’ve seen some reviews (mostly on the songs, but a few on the movie as a whole). I’m just not the type to mind spoilers. Most people seem to regard it as mediocre. I should sit down and watch it sometime, but I’ve got other stuff to do at present.
@@godrules311 Fair enough
I thought I was the only one who thought that was a weird sounding line!!
What about "throw caution from every warning sign"?
Not entirely sure what that would mean…
@@godrules311 Well, if you can't throw caution to every warning sign, what about from?
@@maddenboseroy4074 What does that even mean? No one says “throw from,” so the line still wouldn’t make any sense.
@@godrules311 "throw past"
@@maddenboseroy4074 Throw caution PAST every warning sign? That’s better, though it still sounds a little awkward to me.
I can’t wait til Jonah who two tries to refix “this wish” coz it feels clunky. The bg music seems fine, I have no complaints about it, however there are too many added words in the lyrics. I’m trying to do rewrite of the whole movie along with Jonah’s vers. Right now I’m just doing this sad excuse of the music for now until I get the fixed one. So, finger crossed. 🤞
This is such an underrated statement. Just in time, I might add,
I was looking for a proper dissection of this song to compose better poetry in english and you did a great job 🎉 you just got a new sub 🎉 🎉
"I'm a star" has so many bad lines but the one that baffles me the most is the "watch out world here i are"...
This isn't about poetic nonsense anymore, but first grade grammar 😂
Yeah, that one is pretty stupid, but it could potentially be fixed with some tweaking. The reason I’m going to do the “little fun allegory” line is that it is, in fact, beyond my skill to fix because of how nonsensical it is.
watch out word here i are 🙂🙂🙂🙂😝😝😝😝😁😁😁😁✨✨✨✨✨
Is it bad that I sympathise with Magnifico more than Asha in regards to this movie? Like, I get that trapping dreams and picking only the necessary ones could be harsh, especially for seniors and children, but some dreams can be dangerous too, and I think had he been written to be an antagonist rather a villain, this film would've been better. You could keep his egotistical traits, of course, but have him learn to understand her perspective and have the two come together.
As for the Magic Mirror iconography at the end, maybe he decides to step out of the natural world because he's ashamed of what he's done and can't forgive himself but because of his changed perspective, he's a lot more knowledgeable and provides guidance to those who deserve it.
That, and I love the idea of the Evil Queen finding his mirror and hearing Magnifico's lack of enthusiasm starting to build overtime from being asked the same question.
That sounds like a more interesting idea than anything I’ve heard about this movie (I haven’t seen it yet, but I know what happens).
@@godrules311 It's more of a retooling of the initial pitch, if that makes sense. I tend to come up with a lot of ideas on how to turn a bad movie into a good one, and Wish isn't an exception to that. It has decent qualities. It's just the music, character motivations and general narrative suck because it feels passionless and like they're checking off a box on a to-do list.
@@wadeyhyena1657 You should make a rewrite video.
@@godrules311 Heh, I wish. I don't have a lot of confidence when it comes to my self-esteem and uh, I'm not the biggest fan of my voice either. Whilst I'd love to start making videos, I think I'll stick to writing out those ideas for now.
But if you're still interested (alongside everyone else) then I don't mind putting together a public folder sometime so that people have somewhere to read my rewrites. :)
@@wadeyhyena1657 Sure, I’d like to see what you come up with. And don’t worry about your voice. After all, I’m eternally cursed with a child’s voice no matter how old I get (I’m 32). Also keep in mind that your voice sounds different to others than to yourself.
I had to agree with you
U need more subs!!
Michaels lazy and frankly dumb writing is all over the film. We all make mistakes, but if your writing is going in a feature film maybe make sure you understand the metaphors you’re using and sentence structure! Thanks for illustrating this
Well, Disney gave her very little time and almost no story concept, so little wonder if the lyrics are subpar.
I mean, Disney never gave her a clear concept on what the plot is because it keeps changing and was worked with different visions, and she was given a little amount of time to do the lyrics and double checking the issues there..
@@NineMiraculous She's responsible for her own standards. She could have said no to the deadlines rather than turn in bad work
@@ejoshcoron I missed when Disney hired actual songwriters and competent workers instead of bubbly pop songwriters who just couldn't get a grip on the english language..
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