Bro just listened to your song. Ill get to that in a moment but in general, while length of a song is important bro, whats more important is whether you've managed to get your message across in your lyrics. Some rappers need longer especially old school writers like Biggie and Tupac usually 3-5 minutes. But some newer rappers like Earl Sweatshirt, XXXtentacion sometimes take around just 2 minutes. In regards to your song first off, I love the beat, it goes freaking hard, second of all, in terms of length I feel your 2 minutes 44 is completely fine. Your bars in terms of rhyming and flow were pretty decent and I could got the message pretty damn clear as your chorus clearly indicated your message. I could give more feedback bro but i realise thats not what you asked for so keep writing g. You've got great potential man. Kudos to you g
This channel is a gold mine on TH-cam.
I like your teaching tecnic 😀❤️
Happy to hear that!
Technique
Man u got me write complex bars and metaphors
Practice and knowledge makes you great. I got free beats, so you could get your freestyle and pen game up.
I learned from your videos thanks... Now I know little bit about RAP.
Great vid. Reading is huge to. Everytime ya come across a new word. Learn it. Ty so much I appreciate this
So much thnq brother... 🥰
From Bangladesh... 👍
Bro didnt watch u contet for long time but see u doing good
Welcome back
I always waiting your video .
Thanks you ❤️
My pleasure 😊
Love you sir ❤️
I like word plays in lyrics
Word play is the true essence of traditional Hip Hop. I got free beats on deck. Get your freestyle on.
Oh my God, please write for a full song 😂 you technic is good
You said metaphors but used “like” which makes it a simile
Is two 16 verse bars and two 8 bar choruses long enough for a rap song ??
depends on how long the beat is and how fast or slow you spit your bars
Bro just listened to your song. Ill get to that in a moment but in general, while length of a song is important bro, whats more important is whether you've managed to get your message across in your lyrics. Some rappers need longer especially old school writers like Biggie and Tupac usually 3-5 minutes. But some newer rappers like Earl Sweatshirt, XXXtentacion sometimes take around just 2 minutes. In regards to your song first off, I love the beat, it goes freaking hard, second of all, in terms of length I feel your 2 minutes 44 is completely fine. Your bars in terms of rhyming and flow were pretty decent and I could got the message pretty damn clear as your chorus clearly indicated your message. I could give more feedback bro but i realise thats not what you asked for so keep writing g. You've got great potential man. Kudos to you g
Why is it always sing rap?