They Were Considered Invincible, Until They Faced Humans | HFY Sci‐Fi Story

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  • @ghostshipproductionsllc
    @ghostshipproductionsllc 16 วันที่ผ่านมา +17

    these stories were decent but they are all starting to sound to much alike. all to often a ships captain loses his daughter or an ancient earth fleet that the enemy scoffs at saves the day. And god knows there is the old "the captain fights hand to hand against the leader of the enemy even though he could have just shot him and sacrifices himself for the cause. Or the captain stays behind to sacrifice himself for the cause as the ship explodes. All of that and how many more times will you hear the writer say that the rail guns tore through the ship like paper. This worked at first but seeing the repetitive uncreative nature of it has lost me.

    • @frankhaugen
      @frankhaugen 16 วันที่ผ่านมา

      It's chat gpt so its retelling it's own stories it has been trained on 😂

    • @alpha2gproject783
      @alpha2gproject783 16 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

      Not going to lie, I could tell it was AI generated but considering I would just put it on as background noise when working or cooking I didn't pay too much attention to how deadly similar they all are.

    • @sgtbjack
      @sgtbjack 5 วันที่ผ่านมา

      I listened to one where the captain of a human ship shot the enemy of the alien on his alien ship...in the head with his sidearm lol i was like "wait like through his bulkhead, than space into the aliens ship....crazy"

  • @SelwynClydeAlojipan
    @SelwynClydeAlojipan 11 วันที่ผ่านมา +4

    The problem with this story is that it wrongly says that the human ship had five crew but describes only four: Green, Thompson, Davis, and Thompson. Then they rescue some humans but only Dr. Chen is named and given a role in the story. So basically the author misuses the number of humans and even the crew of the Kalnari who remain unmentioned in the plot. Eventually the two ship captains just sacrificed themselves in a stupid and inane plot that could have made sense if not for the simple-minded author.

  • @jamespseaman4136
    @jamespseaman4136 7 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    I can’t believe that this story is so loaded with commercials!

    • @legionx4046
      @legionx4046 5 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      ? I got none

  • @reinovator
    @reinovator 11 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    Cool story but how many times by how many different you tube channels. I'm about done with these. oh well I was looking when I found this. I guess I keep looking

  • @michellegoewey2939
    @michellegoewey2939 12 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    I thoroughly enjoyed this story! 88😊

  • @six-gunsound1145
    @six-gunsound1145 16 วันที่ผ่านมา

    88. Good story but the jump cuts were a little jarring. I don't blame you for doing a lot of editing in a short time frame. Thank you for continuing to create new stories where so many other people are making careers out of increasingly desperate efforts to revive past stories.

  • @Speedkid
    @Speedkid 16 วันที่ผ่านมา

    88 this is a great context for more.

  • @philbrowning9687
    @philbrowning9687 11 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Haven't we heard this one before?

  • @bobgabriels8456
    @bobgabriels8456 15 วันที่ผ่านมา +3

    what's with 88 ?

    • @Perurikun
      @Perurikun 2 วันที่ผ่านมา

      i'm curious myself. i do know that White supremacists tattoo 88 on themselves.

  • @DavidNieuwenhuize-pq1jm
    @DavidNieuwenhuize-pq1jm 11 วันที่ผ่านมา

    i like the stores

  • @spacemanvic3961
    @spacemanvic3961 4 วันที่ผ่านมา

    AI written?

  • @xitodivaawesome1525
    @xitodivaawesome1525 16 วันที่ผ่านมา

    hi

  • @etakataka702
    @etakataka702 16 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    🤦

  • @modeler308
    @modeler308 16 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    IF you're going to use known Star Trek references, STICK to known canon. Tellerites do NOT have 4 arms.

    • @mikeh7917
      @mikeh7917 16 วันที่ผ่านมา

      I think the AI just picks random syllables for the names of alien races. They accidentally picked the name of a Star Trek species.

    • @darkage5
      @darkage5 16 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Calm down clown. It's not that big a deal. Not even the same species as the tellerites from StarTrek.