3000 Years After Galactic Council Destroyed Earth, Humans Returned For Revenge | Best hfy stories
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- เผยแพร่เมื่อ 12 พ.ค. 2024
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3000 Years After Galactic Council Destroyed Earth, Humans Returned For Revenge | Best HFY Stories
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In this epic tale from our HFY series, witness humanity's thrilling return 3000 years after the Galactic Council obliterated Earth. Follow Captain Lyra Kerrigan and her ship, the Reclaimer, as they navigate through the cosmos to avenge their fallen planet. After centuries, humanity's scattered descendants reunite with one purpose: retribution. With meticulously planned attacks against the Galactic Council's strongholds, and a fierce will to reclaim their homeland, watch as humans demonstrate their resilience and strategic genius.
Experience the dramatic battles, strategic warfare, and the deep-seated desire for revenge that defines this powerful narrative. Will humanity's quest for vengeance bring them the closure they seek, or will it open old wounds even deeper? Tune in to find out in this gripping story that explores the depths of loss, the strength of will, and the enduring spirit of mankind.
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clever snow-circle and other overlays.
The story idea is great.
A writing course or an editor would help. And no I am not talking about the AI CC.
I was a student of 1950's and 1960's sci fi.
You need to understand the world you are creating, and jumps in storyline or arc are not well received.
Why did humans, apparently an unknown galactic power after 3000 years (humans grow faster than that) have to hide in the shadows? They made it to Andromeda. And those were remnants of humanity.
I am a little puzzled why they would smile at smashing aliens who certainly had no direct hand in the scorching of Earth. Breaking the system, ok. but blaming a son for the mistakes of the father is a mistake.
alternate title: indomitable human spirit causes humans to inherit the stars or something idk
Well, it is HFY, so yeah. Why act surprised?
2nd comment. The person who typed this out needs to learn english. There were so many spelling mistakes it would have been impossible to read. For example, using taught when taut is the word needed. Sight instead of site, loads of others. Plus, who the hell puts a capital letter at the front of every word.
Well atleast it's a human voice or the best ai i have ever heard. But the tranlation of the story is obviously done by A.I.
This really isn't very good. The English mistakes (e.g. 'crafts', and not surrounding speech with quotation marks) are very distracting. The use of colour is also peculiar, e.g. 'The Star [change to yellow text] Map'. 0.25/10.
Maybe explain where humanity was for 3000 years.
The far edge of the Andomeda galaxy according to the story.
They said time to RETURN to the Milky Way that implies that they are in a different galaxy
@@trenttrent2786 yes, they said they were at the far end of the andomeda galaxy
It would alot better if a real person told the story. AI voice is boring.
There is still much to improve on AI speech and cc
This ai is terrible
Absolutely horrible audio.if you can’t write English, make it audio only. This was so bad I didn’t even try to finish it. 4 minutes was all I could stand.
This sucks... Made of tropes and potholes, then stung together with bad dialog.