I love to hear this! And thanks for the share! I was thinking about stopping the whole series because it just isn't getting out there. Saying that, Part 32 will be out tomorrow 🥰
@@scifistories1977 if it were me in this story I would be mass producing Phantoms afap (as fast as possible) and equipping each with one proton beam an das many photon torpedoes as they can handle... but then I would want so survive all this mess...
Don't give up. Sometimes it takes a while to get more views. Keep working on improving. As AI and you improve, so will your story delivery. Accept criticism and and find ways to improve. The story is good, the delivery needs improvement, but as AI gets better, access as you get better at using it, your project will also improve.
You really need to get these animated. This would make a great series cartoon series my God this is just absolutely riveting. I think when I was a small child this would’ve been more riveting more storytelling than was in a Robotech, which was a really good series. I still enjoy watching it from time to time even now, my respect dear sir great storytelling good storyline can’t wait to hear the rest of them
I love your writing and I too am sharing. A T-Shirt would be cool man! You’re a human and so your work will evolve. I see in this story. I listened to this 2nd part in my sleep, but I finished 1st part yesterday.(awake) lol and now I listen to 2nd part again.(awake) this time! I really like the story and I am not sure how many I listen to every month. I’m not talking short stories either, I like a good 10 hour story!! lol 👍 keep it up, great work!!
@@scifistories1977 I appreciate the efforts and stories, I work so much nowadays it’s hard for me to sit down and read a book without falling asleep from exhaustion, so listening to these stories have kinda given books back to me. So thank you.
I have really enjoyed this story, i like you have implemented more and more background effects and creating an even more immersive experience. Good job! I'm a new fan.
Found this channel by mistake and im loving all the stories, amazing well presented. Engaging and tense. Although i want to make a positive criticism, you use the same words a ton of times, (echoed, resilience, stage, resolve, testament, unfolding... and much more) you also repeat the same things a couple of times before revelling more of the plot, its unnecessary, make it flow naturally. First video is done, going through this one now ❤
(Sorry about this but I can't help myself) and the mood was so palpable you could almost feel it, palpable palpitations literally bouncing off the walls...
A different AI reading text to speech (TTS). It’s better hut not perfect. Over time we we see even better emotionally narration better pass time in between important moments.
If I never hear the word palpable again it will be way too soon! I don't know how many times it was used in the first book and here it goes again in the second book.
most stars are many light years distant from one another... even hundreds or thousands of light years. So for a star to be 'extinguished' on the outer edges (presumably hundreds if not thousands of light years distant) then their going 'dark' from any cause would not be noticed for hundreds or thousands of years since the light from them would continue to be seen and the extinctions would have had to occur hundreds or even thousands of years from other points in the galaxy... my confusion is darn near palpable...
I could try to explain it away by saying the engines of the spaceships have improved over 1000 years and 4 days now was 6 months 1000 years ago, but in reality, I made some decisions early on that did leave some parts of the story open to scrutiny. Hopefully, it hasn't ruined it for you, but I promise the later episodes are a lot tighter on detail. I've massively improved my writing since I started this story back on tiktok.
@@scifistories1977I think the writing has improved. In the first video of this I noticed an over use of the word testament- which felt a little like an AI (I’ve noticed patterns in generated AI I have played with). But part of that is probably because I listened to so many chapters at once. Another thing that is probably the same reason is that I have no idea how long of time scale this thing takes place over. But I am really glad to have been pointed at this.
@@zzing I'm glad you're enjoying it. The repetitiveness for the most part has been left behind. I did think about making t-shirts with logo's like "a testament to humanities indominable spirit" but thought better of it!
this is forking amazing.....will there be anymore episodes.....i know this sounds bad / odd, but this will knock me out because i'm having trouble sleeping and the soothing voice will help me drift right off
[29:08] "...new TERROR". Shouldt that read "New TERRA"? * I mean terror might be mistranslation but what a coincidrnce rigyht? Also shouldn't they follow the retreat and pick off the straddlers, at least forcing them into fighting a constant reargaurd as with the hisrorical battle retreats described in so many histotically great human battles as echoed throughout historic human battles since time immemorial. Why stop when u got em on the run when there's no better time ti pick them off with relative ease... Or am I did missing something there, herein?
OMFG: how many times does the author need to say the galaxy was on the brink of war, the cosmos might forever be changed? Were I to drink a shot of whiskey every time this was mentioned, I'd die of alcohol poisoning within minutes.
SPOILER: humans would never be this ... nice afterwards. Occupation of the V Empire, forced disarmament, warcrime trials (and that would be a lot worse than here), and a Human Empire. How did Zorban get away?
well....The captured ship should have had a self destruct device that they triggered when they were in the drac shuttle bay. A nuclear device. For the greater good after all.smiles. All the spy ships should have had a nuke that was independent of the ships systems and easily triggered. I would have triggered it if I had been in their situation.
I do like the stories and this one is great but that repeating of the word "palpable" is getting annoying. Im listening this while driving and its seroisly overused.
where the hell is the Terran fleet all this time, on shore leave??? And when the Drac show up, what happened to the photon/proton torpedoes and weapons??? Did the Galactic Billionaires Boys Club hock them to pawnshops and forget about them??? Me, I would be very much remembering them right now!!! And one does not 'hide' in an asteroid belt by sitting still... asteroids are always in motion, rotating, tumbling etc... being the only stationary object is hanging a 'here we are' sign around your neck. You need to attach your ship to a sizeable asteroid, use inertial drives to compensate for the added mass of your ship and become 'one' with the movement of the asteroid... the asteroid motion is not altered but hides the presence of the ship... which is almost palpable LOL.
So now the oppressors are the heralds of cross species equality... I'm trying really hard to stay with this storyline but it seems to be a story that forgot its Ritalin.
Why would a space ship "list to one side"? They aren't boats, floating on the sea; they're objects in space! When a "shield" goes down, and a hole is blown in a hull, there won't be any water rushing into the spaceship's interior; rather, stuff inside the spaceship will be ejected. The spaceship won't list; it might, however, begin tumbling, if maneuvering systems are offline. And what happened to that super beam weapon the humans used, that messed up a ship with a single shot?
Its about how the aliens (Forgot the name) Came and culled earth as it had a population of 8 Billion instead of the max allowed of 8 Billion and then drops off a Container with a space craft in it for humanity to catch up to them and join the galactic community.@@scifistories1977
Thanks, I'm glad you like the story. Later today I'll be releasing a collection of parts 31-45 of "the last humans" so you can continue your journey. The omnibus is 4h 50m long!
So on top of everything else the Veritans are opressing lesser races and yet we are supposed to accept the humans as being the problematic instigator. This storyline is kinda all over the place.
So this writer really likes to constantly demonstrate their love of 3 or 4 times pointlessly using flowery language to rephrase the same point, over and over.....it's not witty or demonstrative of anything other than their love of their own voice and their lack of awareness it's distracting and annoying and removes one from their suspension of doubt and the authentic feel.....almost sounds like it is an edit or 3 away from being actually finished. Remaking the same point should at most be done 3 times and not in 3 similar sentences unbroken in timeline or other thoughts or events.
Shared! Love this series! Such a good story!
I love to hear this! And thanks for the share! I was thinking about stopping the whole series because it
just isn't getting out there.
Saying that, Part 32 will be out tomorrow 🥰
Yippee
@@scifistories1977 if it were me in this story I would be mass producing Phantoms afap (as fast as possible) and equipping each with one proton beam an das many photon torpedoes as they can handle... but then I would want so survive all this mess...
@@scifistories1977Sir, I love what you’ve done with the narration! I Love it when there’s a whole cast for a narrated story! It’s awesome!!
Don't give up. Sometimes it takes a while to get more views. Keep working on improving. As AI and you improve, so will your story delivery. Accept criticism and and find ways to improve. The story is good, the delivery needs improvement, but as AI gets better, access as you get better at using it, your project will also improve.
Can't wait for the next installment. Keep up with your excellent work.
Thanks, will do!
One thing I will say after 15 chapters, this author is good at political intrigue. 👍
I thoroughly enjoyed, The Last Humans Omnibus's excellent narration and tactical descriptions.
You really need to get these animated. This would make a great series cartoon series my God this is just absolutely riveting. I think when I was a small child this would’ve been more riveting more storytelling than was in a Robotech, which was a really good series. I still enjoy watching it from time to time even now, my respect dear sir great storytelling good storyline can’t wait to hear the rest of them
The Admiral went to the galley and ordered a malted shake, which, like everything else. was froth with danger and uncertainty... almost palpable...
Palpable but darned tasty.
I love your writing and I too am sharing. A T-Shirt would be cool man! You’re a human and so your work will evolve. I see in this story. I listened to this 2nd part in my sleep, but I finished 1st part yesterday.(awake) lol and now I listen to 2nd part again.(awake) this time! I really like the story and I am not sure how many I listen to every month. I’m not talking short stories either, I like a good 10 hour story!! lol 👍 keep it up, great work!!
Okay, i am listening... continue.
Here you go, here is my way of saying think you for your efforts and time🤩
Wow, that's crazy! Thank you so much for your super thanks 😊. I truly appreciate it.
@@scifistories1977 I appreciate the efforts and stories, I work so much nowadays it’s hard for me to sit down and read a book without falling asleep from exhaustion, so listening to these stories have kinda given books back to me. So thank you.
I peaked a head and I’ve been sleep listening again! lol I’ve heard 3rd part apparently! I will be awake listening tomorrow!!
I have really enjoyed this story, i like you have implemented more and more background effects and creating an even more immersive experience. Good job! I'm a new fan.
Found this channel by mistake and im loving all the stories, amazing well presented. Engaging and tense. Although i want to make a positive criticism, you use the same words a ton of times, (echoed, resilience, stage, resolve, testament, unfolding... and much more) you also repeat the same things a couple of times before revelling more of the plot, its unnecessary, make it flow naturally. First video is done, going through this one now ❤
It’s AI
@geraldmaschmann5576 someone must had made the text right?
Awesome job :)
Dam good story. Got me to subscribe...
Thanks!
I'm still writing the story, so there's more episodes to listen to. I'll be releasing part 40 tomorrow.
I enjoyed it.
(Sorry about this but I can't help myself) and the mood was so palpable you could almost feel it, palpable palpitations literally bouncing off the walls...
But had the palpitations evolved?
Love it !!
I'm glad you like it!
@@scifistories1977 like it I love it I can not wait for more !
@ryanwotenick5158 I've released up to part 42 so far. Just written parts 43 & 44. I'm hoping to publish part 43 tomorrow.
@@scifistories1977 I found my new fav Chanel
@@scifistories1977please release it tomorrow I’m so invested now I need more
"It was the last best hope for peace "😂
34:41. The narration just improved
The story keeps sucking me in.
You found the new narrator! In 2 more episodes, you'll get voices for the characters and sound effects 😃
A different AI reading text to speech (TTS). It’s better hut not perfect. Over time we we see even better emotionally narration better pass time in between important moments.
If I never hear the word palpable again it will be way too soon! I don't know how many times it was used in the first book and here it goes again in the second book.
most stars are many light years distant from one another... even hundreds or thousands of light years. So for a star to be 'extinguished' on the outer edges (presumably hundreds if not thousands of light years distant) then their going 'dark' from any cause would not be noticed for hundreds or thousands of years since the light from them would continue to be seen and the extinctions would have had to occur hundreds or even thousands of years from other points in the galaxy... my confusion is darn near palpable...
Don't let fact get in the way of a story. It's always been the way of them
A sfsy story in the form of a old fashion radio play expect it take place in outer space. Excellent.
Your efforts are appreciated! :)
Wow, thanks. Your "Super Thanks" is also very much appreciated! 😊
Does anyone else find it confusing that the Edge of the Galaxy was only 4 days away but had so far never been explored??
I could try to explain it away by saying the engines of the spaceships have improved over 1000 years and 4 days now was 6 months 1000 years ago, but in reality, I made some decisions early on that did leave some parts of the story open to scrutiny.
Hopefully, it hasn't ruined it for you, but I promise the later episodes are a lot tighter on detail. I've massively improved my writing since I started this story back on tiktok.
@@scifistories1977I think the writing has improved. In the first video of this I noticed an over use of the word testament- which felt a little like an AI (I’ve noticed patterns in generated AI I have played with). But part of that is probably because I listened to so many chapters at once.
Another thing that is probably the same reason is that I have no idea how long of time scale this thing takes place over.
But I am really glad to have been pointed at this.
@@zzing I'm glad you're enjoying it. The repetitiveness for the most part has been left behind. I did think about making t-shirts with logo's like "a testament to humanities indominable spirit" but thought better of it!
I can get to any place on earth inside 24 hrs how long would it take to visit every place on earth?
@@davidhicks5645 you make a good point!
On chapter 25
Fuck this could be a miniseries it’s that good
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this is forking amazing.....will there be anymore episodes.....i know this sounds bad / odd, but this will knock me out because i'm having trouble sleeping and the soothing voice will help me drift right off
I'm not sure how to take this comment 🤣
Yes, there will be more episodes, but the views are reducing, so i may draw it to an end soon.
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@@scifistories1977 nooooo I just found this! And I freaking love it!
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Grrrrrrrr
@AnXiEtY_XiE I'm going to continue writing the story! I actually love making it so you'll be good for a while.
I keep imagining the Senate from star wars
The second A.I. narration is much better. You hear it on many TH-cam channels
Jeg er vild med din rumsaga, da jeg først startede havde jeg svært ved at stoppe igen.😊 historien minder lidt omBrian Roland Larsen saga Sola☝️🧚♀️
Thanks, I'm glad you're enjoying the story 😊
[29:08] "...new TERROR". Shouldt that read "New TERRA"? * I mean terror might be mistranslation but what a coincidrnce rigyht? Also shouldn't they follow the retreat and pick off the straddlers, at least forcing them into fighting a constant reargaurd as with the hisrorical battle retreats described in so many histotically great human battles as echoed throughout historic human battles since time immemorial. Why stop when u got em on the run when there's no better time ti pick them off with relative ease... Or am I did missing something there, herein?
This is the propper way to do AI voice narration. Use multiple types to give more character to the portrade characters.
The best thing was to leave all for imagination, now hearing voices of main people there, destroys completely how I imagined main characters.
I personally enjoy the different voices
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Anyone else notice that Solane sounds like a Roosevelt?
humans stole their tech? Didn't they donate their tech to the Human Flagship (the bomb) and the humans returned it to sender... wah wah wah...
This is entertainment
Glad you like it! (I think that's what you mean)
You should use a high pass filter. Low humming coming through pretty hard.
I dont think i hope our species will never stop we strive on choas get some humans
OMFG: how many times does the author need to say the galaxy was on the brink of war, the cosmos might forever be changed? Were I to drink a shot of whiskey every time this was mentioned, I'd die of alcohol poisoning within minutes.
SPOILER: humans would never be this ... nice afterwards. Occupation of the V Empire, forced disarmament, warcrime trials (and that would be a lot worse than here), and a Human Empire. How did Zorban get away?
You've met us, huh? Well it's for the best to leave humans be eh?
Outstanding this carries on from 31 to 45 and I don't know if it goes after that I definitely hope so!!
So, uh, star wars, battle star galctica and magic smushed together, and voila!
well....The captured ship should have had a self destruct device that they triggered when they were in the drac shuttle bay. A nuclear device. For the greater good after all.smiles.
All the spy ships should have had a nuke that was independent of the ships systems and easily triggered. I would have triggered it if I had been in their situation.
So I am only on chapter 17. So what happened with the superior FTL jump technology the humans had?
I do like the stories and this one is great but that repeating of the word "palpable" is getting annoying.
Im listening this while driving and its seroisly overused.
The sol rotations is it a day or week or month and yea the 4day thing odd but they said they had faster than light engines so maybe
where the hell is the Terran fleet all this time, on shore leave??? And when the Drac show up, what happened to the photon/proton torpedoes and weapons??? Did the Galactic Billionaires Boys Club hock them to pawnshops and forget about them??? Me, I would be very much remembering them right now!!!
And one does not 'hide' in an asteroid belt by sitting still... asteroids are always in motion, rotating, tumbling etc... being the only stationary object is hanging a 'here we are' sign around your neck. You need to attach your ship to a sizeable asteroid, use inertial drives to compensate for the added mass of your ship and become 'one' with the movement of the asteroid... the asteroid motion is not altered but hides the presence of the ship... which is almost palpable LOL.
Too mucb use of palpable detracts from the story
So now the oppressors are the heralds of cross species equality... I'm trying really hard to stay with this storyline but it seems to be a story that forgot its Ritalin.
Yeahh fk the NWO. C'mon Zorban !!
Why would a space ship "list to one side"? They aren't boats, floating on the sea; they're objects in space! When a "shield" goes down, and a hole is blown in a hull, there won't be any water rushing into the spaceship's interior; rather, stuff inside the spaceship will be ejected. The spaceship won't list; it might, however, begin tumbling, if maneuvering systems are offline.
And what happened to that super beam weapon the humans used, that messed up a ship with a single shot?
😮
What happened to your series humans cannot be punished that was on tiktok?
I've done so many, I'm not sure which one you mean. Possibly the orilian war? If you find it, let me know.
Its about how the aliens (Forgot the name) Came and culled earth as it had a population of 8 Billion instead of the max allowed of 8 Billion and then drops off a Container with a space craft in it for humanity to catch up to them and join the galactic community.@@scifistories1977
why does it sound like discord notifications are beeping constantly in the background? It's driving me mad!
Sorry been busy wife is in hospital
I hope she's OK!
Me likey this story. Hit like and sub!
Thanks, I'm glad you like the story.
Later today I'll be releasing a collection of parts 31-45 of "the last humans" so you can continue your journey.
The omnibus is 4h 50m long!
I can't keep up.
So on top of everything else the Veritans are opressing lesser races and yet we are supposed to accept the humans as being the problematic instigator. This storyline is kinda all over the place.
Poor background hum is extremely disturbing.
Instead of new world order: why not use new galactic order…
The rumble in this track is too much. I like the story but my ears hurt.
So this writer really likes to constantly demonstrate their love of 3 or 4 times pointlessly using flowery language to rephrase the same point, over and over.....it's not witty or demonstrative of anything other than their love of their own voice and their lack of awareness it's distracting and annoying and removes one from their suspension of doubt and the authentic feel.....almost sounds like it is an edit or 3 away from being actually finished.
Remaking the same point should at most be done 3 times and not in 3 similar sentences unbroken in timeline or other thoughts or events.
Good story ruined by the palpable frustration over the palpable overuse of the palpable misuse of palpable….., yada yada yada
So tired of hearing, "rightful place among the stars".
Palpable. How many times can you use the same phrases?
So colonialism is bad
Yup dude you need to learn word economy and stop being repetitive and grandiose I'm out on this one
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