Perfect your common app essay at the end of this video / pt 2. of writing your essay

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  • เผยแพร่เมื่อ 27 ต.ค. 2024

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  • @hannahjade4945
    @hannahjade4945 2 ปีที่แล้ว +16

    you are the only person getting me through the common app essay anxiety 💀💀 thank you!!

    • @vincent_yang
      @vincent_yang  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Glad to help :D

    • @calebsatsi
      @calebsatsi 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      yeah me too, same here

  • @oscarcaino299
    @oscarcaino299 ปีที่แล้ว

    You are just godly awesome, I have never heard such advice given so smoothly and consistently! I am recommending your channel and this video to all my friends applying this and next year! Please keep it up

  • @wamyy5
    @wamyy5 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    LOL loved the pop-up animations

  • @yohi9
    @yohi9 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    please Don't be Dead😉😉 We need you! & Seriously what I wanna say is Hard work pays off so please don't stop trying your best to help others

  • @yourluckycharm
    @yourluckycharm 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    love that so helpful but what if my essay is about a challenge, not an activity it's mentioned but the prompt is about my growth and self-development after a significant tough period that changed some of my perspectives and values

    • @vincent_yang
      @vincent_yang  2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Should be relatively the same, you still need to show how you grew from the experience, so an anecdote after you describe your challenge should work.

  • @yourdailynewsguy
    @yourdailynewsguy 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Why aren’t you already famousss???

    • @vincent_yang
      @vincent_yang  2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      😂😔wish I knew

    • @yourdailynewsguy
      @yourdailynewsguy 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@vincent_yang dw Ong that’s solid advice thank you!

  • @brunodc5232
    @brunodc5232 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    lets goooo thanks for this video bro! also first

    • @vincent_yang
      @vincent_yang  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      🥳🥳Nice to see you in the comments again!

  • @centuryfrog
    @centuryfrog 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    I love nico

  • @justin234
    @justin234 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    At this point, you're my mentor for writing my suicide not- i mean college essays (•‿•)

  • @yahiaosman8938
    @yahiaosman8938 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Great vid Vincent. I hope your entrance to college has been a complete mess of work and stress lol.

    • @vincent_yang
      @vincent_yang  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      LOL YAHIA,
      dw i move in this week, it has indeed been a mess around the house

    • @yahiaosman8938
      @yahiaosman8938 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@vincent_yang LOL, is it just me or is time moving soo slowly, 10th grade has really put me in my place and I’m not even halfway through, what a year it’s going to be lol.

    • @vincent_yang
      @vincent_yang  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@yahiaosman8938 💀 Don't remind me, this week has been slower and slower, time is not linear anymore

  • @centuryfrog
    @centuryfrog 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Nico is so funny

  • @markus_park
    @markus_park 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Wow

  • @erikalenh5
    @erikalenh5 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Hello! Do you read over essays? If so, could i send it to you?

    • @rit6966
      @rit6966 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Yeah same 😭

    • @vincent_yang
      @vincent_yang  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      You can send it to my email if you'd like!

    • @erikalenh5
      @erikalenh5 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Would the feedback be private ? Or posted online?

    • @vincent_yang
      @vincent_yang  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@erikalenh5
      Ok so just to be completely transparent I won't share the essay publicly without permission, but as since I'm doing this for free, the amount of feedback I can provide won't be as thorough due to time constraints 😓. The exception is if it's for a video, then I can spend more time with it. (if I were to review the essay on the channel, it would be next year so no worries about that as well if you're worried about direct competition with same grade level peers)

    • @rit6966
      @rit6966 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@vincent_yang when you put it in a video, when will we get the feedback about it tho