Okame-P feat. Hatsune Miku - Miserere Novice (English translyrics + Kanji)

here we are with my fourth translyricization of a vocaloid song. this is one of my favorite okame-p songs and i find it very relatable. but first, credits:
Song + Lyrics: Okame-P (Calvi Taro)
Art: piapro.jp/maed... (the image is used for non-profit purposes)
Translation: vanderherd lyrics. though i must also credit Catalyst, the cover artist who put the lyrics in her video, since vanderherd's blog disappeared. so thanks!
Interpretation/translyrics: entirely me
now, for notes.
- wow, this song is extremely sad. that could go without saying but heartbreak is really the best word that could describe this song and the album as a whole
- i think my next subbing will be the lamentation of kalmia/kalima (seems like people spell it differently)? either that or another track off lamento.
- i didn't add romaji because i didn't want to clutter the video. but if you really want to see the romaji lyrics, here you go: vocaloidlyrics...)
- the lyrics i wrote are intended to (mostly) rhyme with the original sung words in japanese. it's easier with okame-p's work since it can get so wordy in interpretation, so you have a lot more artistic freedom.
- all-in-all, lots of fun. let me know what you think!

[@_catzee]

I just now realized that your lyrics are translyrics, not just regular lyrics -- that's amazing, and I can imagine it's very difficult! Nevertheless, you employ a very extensive vocabulary to achieve this -- some of those words I've never even seen before! This is another very beautiful song, thank you ^w^

[@117lyrics]

i didn't such praise, so my apologies for the delay. know that it meant a lot to me to read that. this video didn't do too well, but i wrote these lyrics more in my personal style, before i started writing differently for every song. i'm thinking about giving that another try

[@_catzee]

@@117lyrics Haha no worries, I'm glad it meant a lot for you! This is one of the first Vocaloid songs I ever listened to, you know! The beginning of a legacy -- I'm a diehard Vocaloid fan now ^w^

[@Detextor]

Your interpretations are really amazing, keep on bringing these bangers, I really appreciate all your effort you put into it.

[@117lyrics]

thank you!! i definitely will

[@111mi]

this is such a pretty song, and i like your interpretation of it!!!~ i appreciate this a lot!!

[@117lyrics]

tysm!! i think this has to be my favorite okame-p song, but i can't settle between this, the lamentation of kalmia (kalima??) and heath. thanks again!!