TWICE - Doughnut [ English Version Rewrite ]
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- เผยแพร่เมื่อ 30 ธ.ค. 2023
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‼️ FULL LYRICS GOOGLE DOC CAN BE FOUND IN THE COMMENTS
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disclaimers:
-this is not an official english translation, but a
selfmade interpretation! i'm just a kpop fan
who enjoys songwriting. this is just for fun.
-sometimes i do change the overall theme of
a song in order to match the rhythm/mood.
-this is not made to discredit the songwriters
or be disrespectful towards the original language.
-i own nothing in this video but the lyrics, credits
to the respective owners.
-please credit my youtube channel with
a link if u ever use or repost these lyrics :)
original lyrics by Lauren Kaori
png credits: starcolors13 on DeviantArt
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come back we need you 😭😭😭
You got the sense of yearning in this song spot on, AND managed to tie in the slightly creepy (and maybe even delusional?) notes from the music video, AND kept all the obvious sweet doughnut references?!? You just continue to level up with each of these rewrites, and I'm looking forward to even more incredible rewrites in the new year!
HAPPY HAPPY NEW YEAR, HERE ARE THE FULL LYRICS:
docs.google.com/document/d/1GSdBXMIiCGptl7G-SQANFFGDOnEhJBp1si_BT4DU4Ac/edit?usp=sharing
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Heyya!! I just wanna thank you so much for all your covers, they are just so good that no words can describe, tysm!!!
I am literally on my knees begging you to make an English lyric version of Bibi's Bam Yang Gang. I love that song and want to sing along, and I adore your lyrics and writing skills
Girly where are you😭😭
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS
This is my favorite TWICE song! I have to sing for my class for a grade, and I was looking throug your videos, but this song is just perfect! Im so so so happy!!!
YOU'RE SOO WELCOME, good luck with the singing!!!!
@@memoriia THANK YOU SO MUCH
we need you back 😭
Ella where did you disappear 😭 i miss your videos and your creative writing 💗 i hope you're happy and healthy wherever you are :')
Doughnut - TWICE by memoriia
[ Verse 1 ]
Ever since that day,
I really wish that I didn't leave.
'Cause I'm so lonely, these feelings for you won't die.
They just occupy my mind.
Cry every night. I keep praying you'd be mine.
Can we try? Set aside all our history 'cause I was too blind.
[ Pre-Chorus ]
(Now, now, now ...)
"I miss you" is hard to say,
but letting go's impossible.
[ Chorus ]
I wanna start anew. Do you feel it too?
Go 'round and 'round, I'm your moon.
Instead of my heart there is just a void,
the endless call of your voice.
Just like a Doughnut,
I'm never whole but I'm stuck inside a loop.
I run in circles, always back to you.
I can't break our love loop.
Can't break our love loop. (Yeah, yeah, yeah...)
[ Verse 2 ]
Every single day,
I feel the crush, sugar-rush like candy.
And every minute and second I dream of you.
I'm still falling like the snow.
Sweet reveries keep on messing with my head.
Memories keep me up. Got me thinking we should break the ice.
[ Pre-Chorus ]
(I, I, I ...)
know I tore our broken ties.
But I'll still try to turn back time.
[ Chorus ]
I wanna start anew. Do you feel it too?
Go 'round and 'round, I'm your moon.
Instead of my heart there is just a void,
the endless call of your voice.
Just like a Doughnut,
I'm never whole but I'm stuck inside a loop.
I run in circles, always back to you.
I can't break our love loop.
Can't break our love loop. (Yeah, yeah, yeah...)
[ Bridge ]
So deep, so empty, I need thee.
So deep, so empty, I need thee.
Can't get over all of those feelings.
Keep me close, keep the cold away.
Keep me close 'till we forget the hurt, the pain, the things we said.
I know that my heart is right~
Come fill this empty space.
[ Chorus ]
A sprinkle of my love,
sugar powder snow.
How clear, how bright the stars glow.
Honey berry fluff,
chocolate cookie dough.
I take a bite and time slows.
Just like a Doughnut,
savor every moment. It feels so true.
Don't mind the winter if you're with me too.
(There is a place for you.)
I wanna start anew. Do you feel it too?
Go 'round and 'round, I'm your moon.
(Oh~ You make me feel so amazing…)
Instead of my heart there is just a void,
the endless call of your voice.
Just like a Doughnut,
I'm never whole but I'm stuck inside a loop.
I run in circles, always back to you.
I can't break our love loop.
Can't break our love loop. (Yeah, yeah, yeah...)
rip memoriia you would’ve loved kiss of life
come back. save the kpop industry.
Verse 1 ]
Ever since that day,
I really wish that I didn't leave.
'Cause I'm so lonely, these feelings for you won't die.
They just occupy my mind.
Cry every night. I keep praying you'd be mine.
Can we try? Set aside all our history 'cause I was too blind.
[ Pre-Chorus ]
(Now, now, now ...)
"I miss you" is hard to say,
but letting go's impossible.
[ Chorus ]
I wanna start anew. Do you feel it too?
Go 'round and 'round, I'm your moon.
Instead of my heart there is just a void,
the endless call of your voice.
Just like a Doughnut,
I'm never whole but I'm stuck inside a loop.
I run in circles, always back to you.
I can't break our love loop.
Can't break our love loop. (Yeah, yeah, yeah...)
[ Verse 2 ]
Every single day,
I feel the crush, sugar-rush like candy.
And every minute and second I dream of you.
I'm still falling like the snow.
Sweet reveries keep on messing with my head.
Memories keep me up. Got me thinking we should break the ice.
[ Pre-Chorus ]
(I, I, I ...)
know I tore our broken ties.
But I'll still try to turn back time.
[ Chorus ]
I wanna start anew. Do you feel it too?
Go 'round and 'round, I'm your moon.
Instead of my heart there is just a void,
the endless call of your voice.
Just like a Doughnut,
I'm never whole but I'm stuck inside a loop.
I run in circles, always back to you.
I can't break our love loop.
Can't break our love loop. (Yeah, yeah, yeah...)
[ Bridge ]
So deep, so empty, I need thee.
So deep, so empty, I need thee.
Can't get over all of those feelings.
Keep me close, keep the cold away.
Keep me close 'till we forget the hurt, the pain, the things we said.
I know that my heart is right~
Come fill this empty space.
[ Chorus ]
A sprinkle of my love,
sugar powder snow.
How clear, how bright the stars glow.
Honey berry fluff,
chocolate cookie dough.
I take a bite and time slows.
Just like a Doughnut,
savor every moment. It feels so true.
Don't mind the winter if you're with me too.
(There is a place for you.)
I wanna start anew. Do you feel it too?
Go 'round and 'round, I'm your moon.
(Oh~ You make me feel so amazing…)
Instead of my heart there is just a void,
the endless call of your voice.
Just like a Doughnut,
I'm never whole but I'm stuck inside a loop.
I run in circles, always back to you.
I can't break our love loop.
Can't break our love loop. (Yeah, yeah, yeah...)
YOUHA made a cover with your rewrites!!!
I almost forgot how pretty this song is. The little details wnd metaphors makes it prettier.
Dont know why you stopped uploading, maybe life just got really busy for you, or you lost creative inspo for rewrites etc etc. Either way , hope you come back to this channel one day and keep uploading, and if you have moved on to other creative projects, wish you the best, and hope you keep this channel up so i can keep enjoying it. And i do really enjoy it, feels like you do a better job on english versions than official english releases for multi lingual songs, i always use your lyrics to sing along too and will keep doing so
I never comment on these videos because I simply enjoy the cleanliness of how the lyrics are done but may I just say I was nearly brought to tears when them the chorus came😭😭 Amazing as always please keep doing these!!
Love your donut metaphors! I didn’t think donuts could be turned into a metaphor for missing someone but dang you did it! Happy New Year!
Wow I didn’t think doughnut could be improved!!!!!
omgggg yessyess, I've been waiting for doughnut. Its angelic feeling is just-MWAH masterpiece✨
I love your rewrites sm! Could you maybe do hip - mamamoo?
This is so stunning!!🤍
OH MY GOD THIS IS SO GOOD
IVE BEEN WAITING😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 best newyears gift
YOU MADE MA DAY BY UPLOADING THIS I LOVE YOUR WORK😭💗💗
My fav channel covering my ults>>>>
You just made my year. I love this song and you made the lyrics justice. Happy New Year!!!
you seriously need more followers!! the way you perfectly encapsulate the essence of each song in your lyrics is amazing!
omg, i was just searching up the english version of this song and was so happy to see your video! great job!!
I love your channel so much, you do such a good job in transliterating the songs original meaning to something english speakers can sing along word for word while still holding the original intentions.
Thank you for sharing your talents with the world , its much appreciated , all the kudos to you 💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐💐
i’ve recently discovered your channel and your lyrics always flow so incredibly well because of your impeccable eye for detail for the original syllables, every video is always such a treat!!! 🥹💖 i’d really love to cover one of your english rewrites some day! 🤩
idk if you take requests but if you do, i’d love to hear your interpretation of viviz’ maniac!! thanks for sharing your lyrics with us and keep up the amazing work 💓
You just so good at this such a talent I don’t know you take request or not but I would love your version of RV underwater
Hi, question: how/where do you write the lyrics, I've been inspired by you, and i wrote some songs and i wanna post them on my youtube channel, can you tell me where you edit. (Sorry, if that made much sense.)
can you do off the record nihht by ive?? Plss
I feel lik you could make an incredible dead man runnin' by seulgi English translation! I would live to see it
can you do off the record by ive next!! HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!
Hey I absolutely love your work! May I please request an English remake of Red Velvet’s Perfect 10 please? I feel like it would be something to levitate to 😩
I know you don’t usually do soloist but do you think you can do IU’s new song “love wins all” 💜 it would do us Uaena a huge honor to have you re write the lyrics knowing how good you are with musical lyrics 🌷💜
I have another recommendation would you being willing to translate any Heize songs!
Can you do fine by taeyon?
You should do Beautiful by Wanna One!
girl pls i NEED the english ver of maniac by viviz bc i cant even translate that stuff
can you please do love war by yena? 💞
Lyrics❤
[ Verse 1 ]
Ever since that day,
I really wish that I didn't leave.
'Cause I'm so lonely, these feelings for you won't die.
They just occupy my mind.
Cry every night. I keep praying you'd be mine.
Can we try? Set aside all our history 'cause I was too blind.
[ Pre-Chorus ]
(Now, now, now ...)
"I miss you" is hard to say,
but letting go's impossible.
[ Chorus ]
I wanna start anew. Do you feel it too?
Go 'round and 'round, I'm your moon.
Instead of my heart there is just a void,
the endless call of your voice.
Just like a Doughnut,
I'm never whole but I'm stuck inside a loop.
I run in circles, always back to you.
I can't break our love loop.
Can't break our love loop. (Yeah, yeah, yeah...)
[ Verse 2 ]
Every single day,
I feel the crush, sugar-rush like candy.
And every minute and second I dream of you.
I'm still falling like the snow.
Sweet reveries keep on messing with my head.
Memories keep me up. Got me thinking we should break the ice.
[ Pre-Chorus ]
(I, I, I ...)
know I tore our broken ties.
But I'll still try to turn back time.
[ Chorus ]
I wanna start anew. Do you feel it too?
Go 'round and 'round, I'm your moon.
Instead of my heart there is just a void,
the endless call of your voice.
Just like a Doughnut,
I'm never whole but I'm stuck inside a loop.
I run in circles, always back to you.
I can't break our love loop.
Can't break our love loop. (Yeah, yeah, yeah...)
[ Bridge ]
So deep, so empty, I need thee.
So deep, so empty, I need thee.
Can't get over all of those feelings.
Keep me close, keep the cold away.
Keep me close 'till we forget the hurt, the pain, the things we said.
I know that my heart is right~
Come fill this empty space.
[ Chorus ]
A sprinkle of my love,
sugar powder snow.
How clear, how bright the stars glow.
Honey berry fluff,
chocolate cookie dough.
I take a bite and time slows.
Just like a Doughnut,
savor every moment. It feels so true.
Don't mind the winter if you're with me too.
(There is a place for you.)
I wanna start anew. Do you feel it too?
Go 'round and 'round, I'm your moon.
(Oh~ You make me feel so amazing…)
Instead of my heart there is just a void,
the endless call of your voice.
Just like a Doughnut,
I'm never whole but I'm stuck inside a loop.
I run in circles, always back to you.
I can't break our love loop.
Can't break our love loop. (Yeah, yeah, yeah...)
could you do rose blossom or crown jewel by h1-key?? thank you, I love your lyrics 💗💗💗
PLSS RETURN AND DO SUPERNOVA ENGLISH REWRITE
Can you do an izone song it would be so pretty
OMG YOUR STILL HEARING I THOUGHT YOU LEFT 💕💕🎉
Can you do IVE - Either Way :'>
How do you make your layout?
Can you do party o clock by nmixx
WHERE U?!?
YOU NEED TO TRY SUPERNOVA BY AESPA NOW!!!!! 🎉🎉🎉
Can you pls do Lovesick Girls by Blackpink? Take your time :)
Hi can you do better me by g😊friend
Hi! I hope you're doing well! I was just thinking about you and your videos! I would love it if you did post new videos, but I don't want you to feel guilty about not posting. It is not something that should be a burden or anything because it should be a fun thing. So I hope you won't be stressed out by my comment and if this medium isn't fun anymore, you can totally ignore me lol. But if you ever did want to come back, even if it's with different types of content, I'll be happy to see it! I just wanted to mention this other TH-camr called @psalmon, who has been popping off producing sample albums in the style of different K-pop groups! I thought it might be fun for you to write lyrics for those songs because you'd have even more creative freedom and it would be something similar to what you do but with a fresh twist? I just thought of you right away after hearing those songs lol. Anyway it's just an idea, do what makes you happy! and even if you aren't interested in doing lyrics, I'd suggest listening to their samples anyway because they're really good!! SO, yea I hope life is treating you well! Whatever you're doing I wish you good luck and am rooting for you! :)
Sorry this comment is super long LOL