There are many things that I don't like about this but I'll simplify it *The bass is way too strong and doesn't fit with the vibe you are going for. * the beat is way too off key, I don't know the reason why it is off key but I can guess that you either played the drums manually using the keyboard or your beat is at the incorrect tempo It's hard for me to complain about the overall structure of the song cos that's all up to how you want the song to be structured I really appreciate you sampling the Super Mario World game over screen for your hook. I hope this advice helps you in the long run and I hope to see you improve and have a good day!❤
We're getting copyrighted by Nintendo for being to good with this one 🔥🔥🔥🔥
I like the style
cool song
this is awesome i love it so much u won a subscribe :)
Mario is gonna be listening to this 24/7
It feels a little off, but it sounds pretty decent! I like it I think it severely underrated! This is pretty good!✨🔥
thanks man
This more like a luigi beat tbh
actually i think its more of a wario beat
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there's too much stuff happening between 0:28 - 0:53
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There are many things that I don't like about this but I'll simplify it
*The bass is way too strong and doesn't fit with the vibe you are going for.
* the beat is way too off key, I don't know the reason why it is off key but I can guess that you either played the drums manually using the keyboard or your beat is at the incorrect tempo
It's hard for me to complain about the overall structure of the song cos that's all up to how you want the song to be structured
I really appreciate you sampling the Super Mario World game over screen for your hook.
I hope this advice helps you in the long run and I hope to see you improve and have a good day!❤
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kinda offbeat
still sounds good