Was hoping zombies were gonna be on the carousel...still hoping they'll end up in the Elsinore Theater or in Deep Wood Estate Mansion😂loving this story,Bush PasPark 5 blocks away. I buried my pet tarantula, Amelie-Rose, i had her for 10 yrs and she's buried in BPP Rose garden, under a variety of hybrid tea called Falling in Love, near the gazebo and art barn😅
So weird, so quickly developing, no explanation whatsoever, whether I stay with Alex or run by myself ,don't know what's worse I enjoyed the reading throughly
Well that killed off jason quick with no explination from we're going to get through this to alex watched his work pal and friend turn... in a chapter turn 😅 lesson 1 dont hang out with alex
I noticed that, too. Zombies keep finding the MCs' new location for no apparent reason. Same with the enemy wanting to be king 💩 and has an army ready to go in days or less, not months later. As for ideas. Just study old zombies. Specifically, what kind of zombie/infected you're using. Use logic and military tactics as tools to mold your characters and plots.
Whatever. The towns keep changing, zombies r zombies, all they ever want is your fresh juucy brain- but now we're in the small city i currently live in, Salem😅its always fun to hear familiar streets, k live a block off Comm. St😅 im gonna listen to MAC next (McMinneville❤) I like all the stories, i just like to be read to☺️i love the fake survivor radio broadcasts, china invades was awesome😅
Maybe I can suggest an idea. How about far far in the future when there are only very few or no zombies around and it's more about the few remaining humans trying to trust each other and survive with very little food or supplies left at that point. At that point the humans aren't in groups and they only bump into each other occasionally as one person meeting one or two other people. Everything's destroyed so it's more about their mental state and what they are going through trying to do more than just survive. I suggest that because the beginning of most post-apocalyptic, post-apocalypse, zombie novels is it really that interesting and has been done many many times by many many different authors, and you've already covered the middle ground time frame when they're fighting the swarms of zombies so take it to the end of the line and start the story there. That said, I thank you for all the stories you've given us so far.
Nothing like a good zombie story
Glad you enjoyed it
I throughly enjoyed listening.
Thank you ❤❤❤❤❤
Was hoping zombies were gonna be on the carousel...still hoping they'll end up in the Elsinore Theater or in Deep Wood Estate Mansion😂loving this story,Bush PasPark 5 blocks away. I buried my pet tarantula, Amelie-Rose, i had her for 10 yrs and she's buried in BPP Rose garden, under a variety of hybrid tea called Falling in Love, near the gazebo and art barn😅
So weird, so quickly developing, no explanation whatsoever, whether I stay with Alex or run by myself ,don't know what's worse
I enjoyed the reading throughly
@@ftislandprimadonna4054 thank
You for the feedback, I appreciate it
I don’t know what’s worse, zombies or camping😅 I must run away from the terrible flesh eaters and go to the No shower area😅
This AI story seems off somehow. Not very well told. Especially the so called zombies.
Well that killed off jason quick with no explination from we're going to get through this to alex watched his work pal and friend turn... in a chapter turn 😅 lesson 1 dont hang out with alex
alex will knock you down to get eaten, so he can live another day.
So what happened to Jason??
This author repeats the same idea over and over.
@@xenomorph236 give me some ideas for the chronicles series that takes place in a city. I’ll be here waiting………..
I noticed that, too. Zombies keep finding the MCs' new location for no apparent reason. Same with the enemy wanting to be king 💩 and has an army ready to go in days or less, not months later. As for ideas. Just study old zombies. Specifically, what kind of zombie/infected you're using. Use logic and military tactics as tools to mold your characters and plots.
Whatever. The towns keep changing, zombies r zombies, all they ever want is your fresh juucy brain- but now we're in the small city i currently live in, Salem😅its always fun to hear familiar streets, k live a block off Comm. St😅 im gonna listen to MAC next (McMinneville❤)
I like all the stories, i just like to be read to☺️i love the fake survivor radio broadcasts, china invades was awesome😅
Maybe I can suggest an idea. How about far far in the future when there are only very few or no zombies around and it's more about the few remaining humans trying to trust each other and survive with very little food or supplies left at that point. At that point the humans aren't in groups and they only bump into each other occasionally as one person meeting one or two other people. Everything's destroyed so it's more about their mental state and what they are going through trying to do more than just survive.
I suggest that because the beginning of most post-apocalyptic, post-apocalypse, zombie novels is it really that interesting and has been done many many times by many many different authors, and you've already covered the middle ground time frame when they're fighting the swarms of zombies so take it to the end of the line and start the story there.
That said, I thank you for all the stories you've given us so far.