Really good story. The reader has such a great tone and a beautiful reading voice. Smooth and even so the listener can focus. Great details too. Humanising the main character through small details is so welcome and usually missing. Ten out of ten!
I had been looking forward to this, which I'd missed hearing, till a previous respondent gave the end away, for me - not a kind action - tho, i'll enjoy the story nno doubt.
As both a Smith and a lover of Warhammer stuff I have to say this character is a bit more competent than we normally would be. 😂 One plot flaw though. If I was listening correctly (I was working while this was playing so maybe I missed something). Smith and the group he comes across and joins- they go out to find supplies for the rest of the group. Then get sidetracked dealing with zombies and other survivors. Then suddenly the four of them are heading to the safe area. What happened to the group they were getting supplies for?
Thank you for your feedback, I appreciate it and will change the descriptions in the next book, or at least not use the same wording in every chapter. The Zombie Chronicles is written with a similar format, so people in the city I'm writing about can feel some immersion as they listen, I am writing a story now, from the viewpoint of our military and public service people. But it's taking a bit of time, due to the brutality of the story and I don't want TH-cam to kick me off the platform. I can only improve moving forward and thank you for listening
Really good story. The reader has such a great tone and a beautiful reading voice. Smooth and even so the listener can focus. Great details too. Humanising the main character through small details is so welcome and usually missing. Ten out of ten!
Thank you so much!
Woohoo 🎉 I'm impressed only just listening 😁 thanks
Thank you for listening, I appreciate you
Another great one!!!
Thank you! Cheers!
I live near there lol 😂 have these got to be listened to in order ?
Glad you made it out Sharon lol
@ lol 😂 thank you 🤩
I had been looking forward to this, which I'd missed hearing, till a previous respondent gave the end away, for me - not a kind action - tho, i'll enjoy the story nno doubt.
On a Warhammer store,i love it. Now i just need a story of Zombie Apocalypse in my city
As both a Smith and a lover of Warhammer stuff I have to say this character is a bit more competent than we normally would be. 😂
One plot flaw though. If I was listening correctly (I was working while this was playing so maybe I missed something). Smith and the group he comes across and joins- they go out to find supplies for the rest of the group. Then get sidetracked dealing with zombies and other survivors. Then suddenly the four of them are heading to the safe area. What happened to the group they were getting supplies for?
Finally, a UK zombie apocalypse!
😂😂😂 so confused . I am n the UK and this is up the road from me but a non UK accent 🤔😂😜
That was quite good. I'd like to read more 😊
More to come!
I’m willing to read these stories for you. No ai needed.
@@benjamindavid6733 are you offering to
Be a proof reader?
@@storystream10009 yes. 100 %
@@storystream10009 make a few changes here and there so there isn’t so many repeat phrases.
I actually kinda like this voice though ngl
Primark sells energy bars? xD
@@Greentea-i3h just trying to tell a story, it I can only guess they sell something similar
@@storystream10009 Primark only sells clothes in the UK. 😂
30:00 this MC weak will just ruined the book for me. I already see how he going to repeatedly cower his way through this apocalypse. Hard pass.
jerky and un natural seems to be a favorite phrase expand your AI vocab also these just seem to be the same story with a diff place name
Thank you for your feedback, I appreciate it and will change the descriptions in the next book, or at least not use the same wording in every chapter. The Zombie Chronicles is written with a similar format, so people in the city I'm writing about can feel some immersion as they listen, I am writing a story now, from the viewpoint of our military and public service people. But it's taking a bit of time, due to the brutality of the story and I don't want TH-cam to kick me off the platform. I can only improve moving forward and thank you for listening
@@storystream10009 keep it up tho as your stories are enjoyable
So after they left the church to get supplies they never went back?
They changed direction and went elsewhere. Like Brad Says in World War Z, " Movement is Life"
@@storystream10009 but they left the people they promised to help after convincing them to help. Stupid story.....
do you always spoil a story, for someone who has not heard it yet?
@@storystream10009 that movie was garbage should've never been named after the book.
@@neilkendrick4976 if it's poorly written and left with open plot holes yes.