Waffle less next time it reads like ChatGPT or worse - Stephen King - too many filler words and padding. It feels like you were writing to impress redditors or meet a word count.
thanks for the feedback! I take that as a compliment. I enjoy the works of Stephen King. Read many of his books. His style, among others, is a considerable inspiration for me.
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You did a great job writing this! I would love to read (or listen to) more! Very well done!
I listen to a lot of stories from 40k and other universes, this was definitely one of the best written, narrated and produced. I hope part 2 will be out soon!
@@toinowarner4517 high praise indeed! Many thanks and we will endeavour to get it out asap. In the meantime feel free to have a look at some of our other videos!
Listened to the first 10 minutes and i'am amazed. Cant wait to listen to the rest during the holy rite of laying in bed and doomscrolling until brain shutdown.
@@H0lyT0ast3r time well spent! We hope you enjoy🙌🏻
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really well read and written! These are the sort of stories I think 40k needs more of. Sure the Stories about the Emperors Avenging Angels are great and always fun, but takes about the people living their day to day lives in the Imperium are really cool. Some of my favorite Leutin09 videos are the ones like "the worst jobs in the Imperium" or the one where he talks about Traveling in Time to 40k. This was a really great story!
Thank you so much! I am working to trim down the fluff somewhat, lol. But my aim is for stories about the 'smaller' factions in the Imperium of Man. In most stories, we hear about the larger than life heroes or the galaxy ending threats to mankind. We rarely hear stories about the 'everyday' citizen of the Imperium. It's why I love Imperial Guard stories. I prefer them over stories of the Adeptus Astartes. We need more of the stories of the people that make it so the Imperium functions. And that's the direction I try to go with my work.
It also helps that Marchand (The voice of Altered State Adventures) does so well narrating them. Without his voice, it wouldn't have been brought to life so well.
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@@devonjones5241 It was really great all the way around! I look forward to more of them as they come out. I 100% agree, Stories about the God Emperors Avenging Angels are great and I love to listen to them, but I think we need more stories about the day-to-day life of hive workers and even people who get drawn into chaos cults. The lives of the People that make up the Imperium. Kreig is one of my favorite Black Library Books so far, because it focuses on the Guard (or those who will become the guard later) and because it's just people not crazy tough Astarte warrior in Ceramite armor. Don't get me wrong I love stories about the Astartes but there are so many of them already it was cool getting a story about a hive worker.
This is awesomely good! It's super crazy that this is the second story from the POV of a tiny cog in a manufactorium I've heard in two days. And they're just as good!
Excellent story All the basics to end up in hell or someones lunch "feelings" that society has / is abusing you "feelings" of friendship / sexual attraction "logic" telling you to get away , this is NOT right for my survival but "feelings" hold you to the path you're on
I've always found it curious that lower level city dwellers are even educated enough to know what clean water, sky, or better living even exists. I'd figure the they'd just only know their world and nothing beyond, so they can't complain or feel neglected.
@@donovan5656 I would imagine there's enough knowledge around for them to have a basic grasp of the society they live in, and their place in it. After all they understand what the Imperium is and they would know how their work contributions factor into the overall plan and war machine.
GENESTEALER CULTS! Fuck yeah dude🤘 those are my Bois, I main that faction and they are a ton of fun. Hell yeah dude, you should work with a vox in the void
@@devonjones5241 Good work, part two edged way too hard for my taste. This was a well paced video, I will be checking out the rest of your content for sure!
Part 2 now live!
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Amazing! I am honored to have my work brought to life in this way. Thank you so much for the work that went into this!
9 years, have a sub. Keep up the work of the Emperor
Waffle less next time it reads like ChatGPT or worse - Stephen King - too many filler words and padding. It feels like you were writing to impress redditors or meet a word count.
thanks for the feedback! I take that as a compliment. I enjoy the works of Stephen King. Read many of his books. His style, among others, is a considerable inspiration for me.
You did a great job writing this! I would love to read (or listen to) more! Very well done!
+1 sub, great story, great narrator. I had a feeling it was gonna be a genestealer cult or chaos cult. Can't wait to hear more. Cheers
I listen to a lot of stories from 40k and other universes, this was definitely one of the best written, narrated and produced. I hope part 2 will be out soon!
@@toinowarner4517 high praise indeed! Many thanks and we will endeavour to get it out asap. In the meantime feel free to have a look at some of our other videos!
Oh my 😳 I need part two quick.
10/10 love it
If you haven’t seen it yet. Came out 6 days ago, I’m not sure I’m happy that I started to get invested before it was all out
Listened to the first 10 minutes and i'am amazed. Cant wait to listen to the rest during the holy rite of laying in bed and doomscrolling until brain shutdown.
@@H0lyT0ast3r time well spent! We hope you enjoy🙌🏻
really well read and written! These are the sort of stories I think 40k needs more of. Sure the Stories about the Emperors Avenging Angels are great and always fun, but takes about the people living their day to day lives in the Imperium are really cool. Some of my favorite Leutin09 videos are the ones like "the worst jobs in the Imperium" or the one where he talks about Traveling in Time to 40k. This was a really great story!
Thank you so much! I am working to trim down the fluff somewhat, lol. But my aim is for stories about the 'smaller' factions in the Imperium of Man. In most stories, we hear about the larger than life heroes or the galaxy ending threats to mankind. We rarely hear stories about the 'everyday' citizen of the Imperium. It's why I love Imperial Guard stories. I prefer them over stories of the Adeptus Astartes. We need more of the stories of the people that make it so the Imperium functions. And that's the direction I try to go with my work.
It also helps that Marchand (The voice of Altered State Adventures) does so well narrating them. Without his voice, it wouldn't have been brought to life so well.
@@devonjones5241 It was really great all the way around! I look forward to more of them as they come out. I 100% agree, Stories about the God Emperors Avenging Angels are great and I love to listen to them, but I think we need more stories about the day-to-day life of hive workers and even people who get drawn into chaos cults. The lives of the People that make up the Imperium. Kreig is one of my favorite Black Library Books so far, because it focuses on the Guard (or those who will become the guard later) and because it's just people not crazy tough Astarte warrior in Ceramite armor. Don't get me wrong I love stories about the Astartes but there are so many of them already it was cool getting a story about a hive worker.
@@devonjones5241the setting is about hopeless victory in war so I think these stories are actually more grimdark and engrossing
Very well done! You can fell the walls of the Hive around you and the restlessness to get out and wanting more.
This is awesomely good!
It's super crazy that this is the second story from the POV of a tiny cog in a manufactorium I've heard in two days. And they're just as good!
@@Overanalyse_This very happy that you enjoyed it!
What a cracking story/narration!
Thank you for taking the time to put it together for all of us to enjoy 👌
@@anthonywilkes8630 our pleasure and glad you enjoyed it! :)
One of the best readings I’ve heard in awhile
This is well written, a fine detour from the AI garbage that is everywhere these days. Good Job to the writer.
The irony of using AI for Warhammer lore is not lost on me
@@commissaryarrick9670 I've been thinking the same thing recently.
I knew right from the get go that this was a Genestealer tale and I love it.
Not a lot of those out there xD
What a great story and narration. More like this would be appreciated❤❤
I'm really glad I found a fantastic reading of a fantastic story. Can't wait for part 2!
That was astonishing. Loved it all the way through.
I know it's gonna be good when this channel pops up on my feed!
This was great, definitely need more of this
Great story and top narrator.
Wonderful narration! Im excited to see how this story unfolds.
This is really well done ! 👍 well written, beautifully performed and the background effects were nice. Really painting the picture
@@joedominguez8064 very glad you enjoyed it 🙌🏻
This makes me even more excited for our collab! 😍
@@writingraven2503 we are so excited for that!!
Awesome absolutely Awesome mate 👌
❤ Subbing just because of the quality and immersion 😊
Man this is incredible! I just came across your channel! Instant sub! Keep up the great work friend!
@@VALERIAN19899 many thanks for the kind words!!
This is brilliant keep up the good work
Excellent story
All the basics to end up in hell or someones lunch
"feelings" that society has / is abusing you
"feelings" of friendship / sexual attraction
"logic" telling you to get away , this is NOT right for my survival
but "feelings" hold you to the path you're on
WOW this is great!!!! Instant sub 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼
@@briharrisWarhmmer40kfan welcome!
Nice one ^^ this is really cool mate
You get real woodchips in the nutrients gruel ? You lucky bastard
@@thorshammer8033 😂😂
Damn good story@@AlteredStateAdventures
I was worried it would go this way. And it did
@@trava4156 it's so fun diving right in!
Good stuff!
Badass man keep it up!
@@someweeb4110 thank you sir. Part 2 will be up in a few hours
@ by the Emperor I feel lucky!
I've always found it curious that lower level city dwellers are even educated enough to know what clean water, sky, or better living even exists. I'd figure the they'd just only know their world and nothing beyond, so they can't complain or feel neglected.
@@donovan5656 I would imagine there's enough knowledge around for them to have a basic grasp of the society they live in, and their place in it. After all they understand what the Imperium is and they would know how their work contributions factor into the overall plan and war machine.
Thanks for this hive story o7.
Great story!
This voice ❤️
Great stuff, you have a new subscriber for sure.
@@be_quiet_and_drive 🙌🏻
GENESTEALER CULTS! Fuck yeah dude🤘 those are my Bois, I main that faction and they are a ton of fun. Hell yeah dude, you should work with a vox in the void
good shit
Exterminatus! The emperor protect (sign of the Aquila)
This is pretty much "If you think it is bad now. It surely can get worse" type of story.
Had to make sure I didn't accidentally click on the blog of a factory worker from Leeds 😂
@@ConnorHudson-rk8qi 😂 😂😂
Finally a well voiced 40k video. If it is AI it is at least a good one.
@@JediMaster-Javon no AI here my friend!
No AI here my friend. Just my writing and a very talented reader :)
@@devonjones5241 Good work, part two edged way too hard for my taste. This was a well paced video, I will be checking out the rest of your content for sure!
Amazing stuff! I'm halfway between thinking you should and shouldn't read bedtime stories.
@@BadSongGuyChannel haha wonder if there's a range of 40k children's books 😂🤔
@@AlteredStateAdventures "The Hungry, Hungry Tyranid", or the Inquisitor Seuss classic "Green Eggs and Starch"
@@BadSongGuyChannel these desperately need to be written !!
Who says I'm not using this to fall asleep to 😅
@@WhyNotKevin maybe I'm missing my true calling 🤣
Is there a part 2? I thoroughly enjoyed this
@@tjking9969 soon to be in production! 🙌🏻
Fantastic job, friend! Subscribed and can’t wait for more
Comment for algoritm : )
This is excellent on all fronts. The writing and both male and female (excellent seductress vibe BTW) are superb. Subbed with a vengeance.
@@pspicer777 thank you!!
He just like me frfr
I for one welcome our new alien /lizard overlords
If this was my life...yea all hail the great lizard.
is there a part 2 cuz that wld be amazing
@@michaeletheredge7920 part 2 will be live Friday!
Please tell me there are more parts, I want more~!!!
@@LegoM007 there are indeed! 5 parts in total :)
@@AlteredStateAdventures Excellent, question is there a way I could get involved, maybe do some readings?
@@LegoM007 if you join our discord we can have a chat! It's on our pages bio thingy
(4)1984…. Very Winston and Julia
Believe it or not, when I wrote this, I never once heard of or read that book 😆
Literally 19840k
So is part 2 coming any time soon??
@@Overanalyse_This it's currently being refined by the writer so should hopefully be up in a few weeks!
@@AlteredStateAdventures can't wait!
Warhammer story by iliden stormrage 😮 I'm blind not deaf
im not sure i understand this comment?
I'm not sure I get is comment, but is that a WoW character my writing is being compared to? 😆
Where do I read the whole story?
@@sonic4ever6 part 2 will be live tomorrow! The author is currently working on the rest!
Man thinks it's synthetic meat ha.
Who's having kids in the 40k universe?
Everyone