The best Teacher i have ever seen!!Thank you sir.i must say i am very unlucky to join for his paid course as i have a baby and not able to go for the live classes,anyway thank you Jay for uploading such great videos which is really helpful for people like me.Expecting more!!
Edema is a result of renal insufficiency (kidney failure) not necessarily obesity . Sorry but you said to correct you if you’re wrong .Thanks for the video !
Thank you Jay for your wonderful videos! I just got my results yesterday and got all B in the subtest! Thank you very much Jay and E2 Language :) God bless
Thank you for seeing above patient , a 72-year-old gentleman,Mr Robert who lives by himself and has a history of multiple chronic ailments.i am referring him to your agency to provide appropriate home care.
Hi jay! Is it okay of im not specific on his medical condition and focus on what he can only perform at home? I am writing to refer Mr. Murray who suffers from leg infection, heart and renal diseases and obesity . He is medically stable but will require home assistance from your agency. Although Mr. Murray suffers from different medical issues, he is coherent and can independently mobilize with a walker. However, bladder and bowel incontinece is noted at times and he is on a low sodium diet with fair appetite. Also, i reminded him yesterday to always wear his personal emergency response gear for emergencies. Socially, Mr. Murray lives alone and drives his car every summer. He can idependently perform grocery shopping, laundry, administration of his maintenance drugs and can manage his medical appointments. Given the above, it would be greatly appreciated if you could provide a personel who can provide assistance 6 hours every week to perform house chores and washing of his lower extremities.
I want to ask how comes the introduction only talks on the reason for the referral ,and was silent on the main medical issue but went on to give the medical issues in details which is against the example you gave.
Mr Jay can I replace this sentence(he is incontinent of both bowel and bladder) and write(he has infrequent bladder and bowel incontinence). thanks alot.
patient was hypertensive ,which was the main reason behind the recommendation of low sodium diet.Furthermore ,the relevance of personal emergency system is highly uncorrelated with cellulitis ,which was considered to be the main issue suffered by patient.To a great extent , emergency system is beneficial to fathom the blood pressure but it got nothing to do with cellulitis .washing the legs adequatly and avoid making contact with the belongings of other people should be recommended .owning a car is somewhat relevant because a patient with cellulitis and odema on both legs cannot walk at ease
I agree with you, he is reducing on salt due to HTN and the other thing I thought mentioning sleeping on hospital bed for easy getting in & out bed was relevant especially that he has edema of both legs. The other thing him being able to drive & do his shopping errands is worth mentioning.
Hi Jay, how can you say its an ongoing home care or you are referring the person for the first time to homecare.. i wrote it as if like referring for the first time.
celulitis is a bacterial infection NOT a result of obesity , however, why should I take the risk by adding information which is not mentioned in the notes ??
Oh so writing exam is literally writing? it would be nice if its done on computer, it would be easy to edit it especially that there is time constraint
Hi jay, i would like to commend on how you concise and making it more clearer to me the simplest form of approaching this case notes. It would really help me a lot while i am still preparing myself in taking oet. Thankyou!!
Good afternoon, I would like to ask if we can keep the question paper of writing task throughout the 45 minutes or will it be collected by the examiner after 5 mins of reading ? Please reply
Dear Sir/Madam I am writing regarding Mr.Robert Murray 72-years old,162kg wt . He lives alone using a hospital bed and wearing glasses for reading and history of bilateral lower extremity edema and cellulitis . His past medical history that he is having renal insufficiency with obesity but he is alert and self directed ,sometimes has incontinence of bowel or bladder .. he ambulate and transfer independently with walker. advised for healthy and low sodium diet . on 13/6/2018 presented for check up and his personal emergency response was checked and it was little slow but it seems that he is not wearing the bottom ,so advised to do that .
I am writing to refer me R.Murray a 72year old who lives alone. He ambulates with a walking aid and does house chores but will need assistance in the bathroom. He is being referred for continuity of care thank you
is it okay to use present form of verbs/adjectives when you are referring to a medical history. i noticed in the sample that you wrote ' In terms of medical history, Robert experiences...' but medical history is pointing to the past? is it okay to assume that the patient is still experiencing the illness at present?
Hi is this correct? “ i am writing this letter to refer our patient, (name), who is diagnosed...” is “is diagnosed” correct? Patient is currently admitted. Ill wait for your reply. Thank you.
Hi jay , iam a doctor, never did oet befor but had pet 4 times with maximum score of 6.3/9, my oet exam is in August, my question is can i have intensive course during this time frome your website ? When I checked the websit of e2 language it said that the courses are for nurses! Any especial courses for doctors plz ??
oet are very disappointing people who failed in releasing result at d right time, dey lie Lot,keep prosponing release of result, MOST UNORGANIZED PEOPLE. REGRET WRITING THEIR XAM
Hello jay ! On 12 june was my OET results and I have cleared all the modules with grade B. A big thanks to E2language!!
manjusha mahesh can you please help me to write oet and clear my exam
Vijay Moses how can i help you?
Hi mahesh -
How did you prepare for writing test ..please share
Hi Manjusha, congratulations to you.. May I please ask if you can help me a bit with writing too? Thank you.
manjusha mahesh would you help me in writing ? I’m having troubles with transform 😢😢
the most and highly intelligent tutor and expertise I have ever seen , a fantastic and clear video I have seen . Thanks Jay
The best Teacher i have ever seen!!Thank you sir.i must say i am very unlucky to join for his paid course as i have a baby and not able to go for the live classes,anyway thank you Jay for uploading such great videos which is really helpful for people like me.Expecting more!!
Ann ...
I m Aizaz from india 🇮🇳. My profesional English speaking writing is poor... r u sure that jay sir video improves me???
Edema is a result of renal insufficiency (kidney failure) not necessarily obesity . Sorry but you said to correct you if you’re wrong .Thanks for the video !
I think obesity is more of a risk factor . Please correct me if I’m wrong
OMG Jay! I'm giving exam this Saturday and I hadn't practiced this kind of letter before. Thank you so much for uploading this video.
hi, would u mind telling me where is your centre ?? :)
Are you from Nepal? We just have one centre in Kathmandu.
Dr.Gagan Shrestha m from Nepal but currently m living in uk ,, by the way how was the test ??? Was it difficult ??
How was d test and results
Thank you Jay for your wonderful videos! I just got my results yesterday and got all B in the subtest! Thank you very much Jay and E2 Language :) God bless
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@@jeanelynnadera963 Hello po.. Did you enroll in one of their classes? Or just from videos they are uploading here? Thank u. Godbless
Diannekris Abonita Hey! I just watched all his videos for each subtests. :)
He called this simple. What a time to be alive
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Thank you for seeing above patient , a 72-year-old gentleman,Mr Robert who lives by himself and has a history of multiple chronic ailments.i am referring him to your agency to provide appropriate home care.
Thankyou Jay... I have cleared OET exam...ur classes were really helpful...
70% correct i have been written. ☑️☑️ Being a physiotherapist
Hi jay! Is it okay of im not specific on his medical condition and focus on what he can only perform at home?
I am writing to refer Mr. Murray who suffers from leg infection, heart and renal diseases and obesity . He is medically stable but will require home assistance from your agency.
Although Mr. Murray suffers from different medical issues, he is coherent and can independently mobilize with a walker. However, bladder and bowel incontinece is noted at times and he is on a low sodium diet with fair appetite. Also, i reminded him yesterday to always wear his personal emergency response gear for emergencies.
Socially, Mr. Murray lives alone and drives his car every summer. He can idependently perform grocery shopping, laundry, administration of his maintenance drugs and can manage his medical appointments.
Given the above, it would be greatly appreciated if you could provide a personel who can provide assistance 6 hours every week to perform house chores and washing of his lower extremities.
More mini mock tests please!
Thank jayjay, just started but it's been interesting
Tnq jaiii....this videos are very helpfull for those who prepare Oet...
Thanks so much will be taking my exam soonest
Therefore its is requested for 6 hours per week home care service that include house hold chores and washing of the lower extremities
I want to ask how comes the introduction only talks on the reason for the referral ,and was silent on the main medical issue but went on to give the medical issues in details which is against the example you gave.
I love you so much the way you teach ...others Amazon and so clear
Hi Jay!
According to this case notes, why can we say it is an ongoing home care or management? Thanks.
Mr Jay can I replace this sentence(he is incontinent of both bowel and bladder) and write(he has infrequent bladder and bowel incontinence). thanks alot.
Really u r a great trainer jay
Hello Jay,how much is a month course on all the 4 parts of oet lectures
Thanks JAY
Hay jay. u are the best techer
thank you for your valuable teaching.
this is a premium training !
patient was hypertensive ,which was the main reason behind the recommendation of low sodium diet.Furthermore ,the relevance of personal emergency system is highly uncorrelated with cellulitis ,which was considered to be the main issue suffered by patient.To a great extent , emergency system is beneficial to fathom the blood pressure but it got nothing to do with cellulitis .washing the legs adequatly and avoid making contact with the belongings of other people should be recommended .owning a car is somewhat relevant because a patient with cellulitis and odema on both legs cannot walk at ease
I agree with you, he is reducing on salt due to HTN and the other thing I thought mentioning sleeping on hospital bed for easy getting in & out bed was relevant especially that he has edema of both legs. The other thing him being able to drive & do his shopping errands is worth mentioning.
Hi Jay, how can you say its an ongoing home care or you are referring the person for the first time to homecare.. i wrote it as if like referring for the first time.
Just finished the exams. Waiting game now
celulitis is a bacterial infection NOT a result of obesity , however, why should I take the risk by adding information which is not mentioned in the notes ??
Yeah it’s like assumption that can’t be right
Love to Jay
I am writing to refer Robert Murray for further care.
Thank allot Mr joy
Oh so writing exam is literally writing?
it would be nice if its done on computer, it would be easy to edit it especially that there is time constraint
Cold you please prepare some writing tasks for pharmacists.
Can we read once again that case note while writing letter....?
Hi jay, i would like to commend on how you concise and making it more clearer to me the simplest form of approaching this case notes. It would really help me a lot while i am still preparing myself in taking oet. Thankyou!!
Josue, I've just uploaded something you might find useful for your OET writing skills: th-cam.com/video/adpi2CYZeNA/w-d-xo.html
Good luck in the exam!
Good afternoon,
I would like to ask if we can keep the question paper of writing task throughout the 45 minutes or will it be collected by the examiner after 5 mins of reading ? Please reply
Yes sir, the booklet will be with you throughout the test. you can even make marks on it. :) hope this helps.
thanks a lot
Hi Jay, you are doing an amazing job. Can I send you my model answer for this task? If possible mark it.
Thanks from uk
Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing regarding Mr.Robert Murray 72-years old,162kg wt .
He lives alone using a hospital bed and wearing glasses for reading and history of bilateral lower extremity edema and cellulitis .
His past medical history that he is having renal insufficiency with obesity but he is alert and self directed ,sometimes has incontinence of bowel or bladder ..
he ambulate and transfer independently with walker.
advised for healthy and low sodium diet .
on 13/6/2018 presented for check up and his personal emergency response was checked and it was little slow but it seems that he is not wearing the bottom ,so advised to do that .
you're superb!
Hi Jay,with writing do we really have to leave a line and start with the next paragraph?
I am writing to refer me R.Murray a 72year old who lives alone. He ambulates with a walking aid and does house chores but will need assistance in the bathroom. He is being referred for continuity of care thank you
Mr murray has bowel and bladder incontinent occasionally, can chew well with fair appetite and on low sodium to control his high blood pressure.
Plzzz post a video of reading part A Tricks
Thanks a lot for your valuable videos. May I ask you how to get my letters (writing test practice) checked ?
no replies even after 1 week ... any suggestions please ?
Could you plz download videos specifically for physios.thanks
do you decide on which of the topics you are writing? only doctors write doctor letter ect ect?
Thank you sir
is it okay to use present form of verbs/adjectives when you are referring to a medical history. i noticed in the sample that you wrote ' In terms of medical history, Robert experiences...' but medical history is pointing to the past? is it okay to assume that the patient is still experiencing the illness at present?
Pls which site should I use to join the mini mock test and how do I register
Thank you for receiving a 72-year-old, Mr. Murray into your facility who needs a home care nurse for his care. He is being discharged today.
I want to attend online classes, please reply
Thank you for your patience😂
Is this updated one or not(oet2.0).plz give me a reply
sir i cannot get enough words to in writing part what i will do
Jay... just a brief question pls... when is it best to take OET? is it before or after the UPDATES... thank you
jay would you answer me plss
Incredible
Hello jay ,i would like to join the course
I have a question, using the last name of the doctor, instead using the patient one, it is disqualify the letter, meaning it will be a fail fore sure?
Sorry guys for this such a question.
Hi is this correct? “ i am writing this letter to refer our patient, (name), who is diagnosed...” is “is diagnosed” correct? Patient is currently admitted. Ill wait for your reply. Thank you.
I feel there is a mix up here, it should be written his skin is intact despite him being incontinent. Chewing & appetite have nothing to dothe skin
I think skin intact can be linked to cellulities of lower extremities
You have written that his stasis etc are because of his obesity. Will that be counted as being judgmental about patient??
Need help, got a c in writing
Please how can I get Oet writing past questions
Great
hi....how do I join to online class.
Hi iam stella
Sir my exam is on March 19,i need a mock test
Do we penalize if write more than 200 words?
Pls,I do I join the live class,pls
why you are using first name in this letter.
Hi Jay sir I would like to write Oet online class with you. I am from India.. Please kindly let me know for online class with you. Thanking you
Nice teacher
The case notes are too tiny. Can't read it 😭
Hi jay , iam a doctor, never did oet befor but had pet 4 times with maximum score of 6.3/9, my oet exam is in August, my question is can i have intensive course during this time frome your website ? When I checked the websit of e2 language it said that the courses are for nurses! Any especial courses for doctors plz ??
We cover medicine too. Yes :)
E2 OET what package do you suggest for me???
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Hi are you preparing for oet
This draft not clear
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its not the result of obesity
Is this Draco Malfoy?
Hi
oet are very disappointing people who failed in releasing result at d right time, dey lie Lot,keep prosponing release of result, MOST UNORGANIZED PEOPLE. REGRET WRITING THEIR XAM
I need clarity , I thought him staying alone & doing his shopping errands by himself was worth mentioning . Kindly respond