It would be inappropriate if I dont thank you, for how much I have learnt from you. I passed my OET in the first attempt. Watched almost all of your videos, made notes, watched videos all over again and again, even before the day of exam. Cant thank you enough! Thanks a lot.
Why is it that in the introduction he hasn't stated "and requires shelter ", right after he has stated she is a victim of domestic abuse. That's the complete purpose. Not simply stating victim of domestic abuse.
Yes sir, you got a point here. But he has mentioned that she is a "Korean woman", who is living in Australia according to her present address. It is the contracted gist of that particular case note. But no worries, you can obviously put that in your letter.
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Thank you so much sir for this wonderful letter....and have a humble request sir,please put more videos in TH-cam.so that everyone can access it easily...at least one more letter...also tips for part b reading
Great job, thanks! However : 1)why the nationality is relevant in this letter? 2)isn't it more polite, thus formal = more appropriate to use Ms Kim instead of Ashley? (I was taught on e2 language OET course to use names just for children's and titles + surnames for > 16-year-old.) 3) isn't there a comma missing in the sentence " She was working as........ (missing comma?) and Brad has been unemployed.....- since there are 2 independent clauses which should be separated? could You share Your thoughts about that?
Thank you for this nice lecture. I just have an enquiry abouth the purpose in the introduction. It's not mentioned. Am I right? And if so, does it matter?
Why is it important to write the patients date of birth in a referral letter as opposed to just stating the patient's age? Is that not supposed to be confidential?
thank you for this comperhensive explanation. I just want to ask about the first paragraph; is it right to write a paragraph contains only one sentence? thank you, sir.
Hi steve, could I ask you for clarification? Why in the letter you wrote ( she was working not she works ), ( had been employed not has been employed). Please, if you have time, leave a comment. Thanks in advance 🌹
It would be inappropriate if I dont thank you, for how much I have learnt from you. I passed my OET in the first attempt. Watched almost all of your videos, made notes, watched videos all over again and again, even before the day of exam. Cant thank you enough! Thanks a lot.
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it's a very comprehensive letter.
how would it be,if you are writting to a Medical Officer or Community nurse the same patient. ?
Why is it that in the introduction he hasn't stated "and requires shelter ", right after he has stated she is a victim of domestic abuse. That's the complete purpose. Not simply stating victim of domestic abuse.
I agree with you, the introduction is hanging not complete
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Thanks a million. Please continue your teachings.
Sir please upload more videos we would looking forward to learn more from you.. you explaind so good . It would be appreciated..
very pleased with this letter, speaker's words are cleared that you have nothing to worry about. Thank so mmuch
Thank you Sir Steve,the technique you shared is really helpful.
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Shouldnt there be mention about Ashley's parents that they are in Korea. This is also a reason for the referral as she has no social/family support.
Yes sir, you got a point here. But he has mentioned that she is a "Korean woman", who is living in Australia according to her present address. It is the contracted gist of that particular case note. But no worries, you can obviously put that in your letter.
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Informative and helpful video. Thank you for sharing.
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Informative video,excellent explanation,hoping to pass my exam soon,thank you sir.
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Thank you, sir.. That was very well explained indeed!
Thank you so much sir, please upload more videos
Sir what if we use has been presented instead of has presented
Thank you so much sir for this wonderful letter....and have a humble request sir,please put more videos in TH-cam.so that everyone can access it easily...at least one more letter...also tips for part b reading
Really helpfull Mr Steve, Thankyou so much. Lets go to practice a lot.
Thank you for the precise and detailed video!
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Great job, thanks!
However :
1)why the nationality is relevant in this letter?
2)isn't it more polite, thus formal = more appropriate to use Ms Kim instead of Ashley? (I was taught on e2 language OET course to use names just for children's and titles + surnames for > 16-year-old.)
3) isn't there a comma missing in the sentence " She was working as........ (missing comma?) and Brad has been unemployed.....- since there are 2 independent clauses which should be separated?
could You share Your thoughts about that?
1) its not
2) You don't have to use titles unless they are professional
3) no
Learned a lot from this video. Thank you sir!
Wow.. that was really well done, sir. 👍🏽
perfect. u are amazing sir! this is so helpful
Thank you!😊
Sir.should we add purpose in introduction?
Korean woman or korean women(plural)????
Wow such a great help to me! Thank you sir!
Thank you kindly, very helpful, keep up the good work.
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This is really well explained ! Thank you Steve.
Thanku Sir... it's very very helpful
Please make some more
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Sir...Korean woman
Thank you so much for this letter, well explained
Great content
Thanks
Thank you sir
Great teacher
God bless you, Sir.Very nice class
Thank you sir, very effective class.
Nice
Good sir
Very supportive for students
Excellent
i feel sad for ashley.
In the Re: line, do we need to put a comma after Name of patient ?
a 25-year-old Korean women or woman. Which one is correct ?
Yes, that was a typo, should be woman, and an amendment is at the end of the video. A space between patient name and DOB is all that is required.
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Great analysis . Thanks.
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Sir could you please mention can we use" patient"in oet letters
Hello. Does word count matters? Is it strict to 200 approx?
Thank you for this nice lecture. I just have an enquiry abouth the purpose in the introduction. It's not mentioned. Am I right? And if so, does it matter?
Thank u sir .God bless u
It was very helpful, thanks a lot
Why did you assume she is Korean? there was no mentioning of what ethnicity she is. I'm confused.
really nice
thank you ,sir
Thank you sir
Done
Why is it important to write the patients date of birth in a referral letter as opposed to just stating the patient's age? Is that not supposed to be confidential?
excellent! thank you
regarding oet@home can I highlight or underline case notes ?I mean like in this video to select the relevant and non relevant notes??
thank you for this comperhensive explanation. I just want to ask about the first paragraph; is it right to write a paragraph contains only one sentence? thank you, sir.
Doesn’t her son also need mention in first paragraph
Sir... just a brief question pls... when is it best to take OET? is it before or after the UPDATES... thank you
I have one confusion , do we have to refer only Ms Ashley or both Ms Ashley and her son
Why do doctors use very pleasant to describe the patient
Sir, in the introductory sentence, shouldn't there be "a 25 year old Korean womAn" instead of "a 25 year old Korean women?"
Thank you, Sir 😃
please make some more !
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Is it okay to have a separate paragraph for the intro and the background details like where the pt lives, his job, etc.?
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From my experience, most women of GBV still go back to their husbands, here it's assumption in use, am not sure which one is correct
Sir instead of writing their full name shall we write their second name
Hi steve, could I ask you for clarification?
Why in the letter you wrote ( she was working not she works ), ( had been employed not has been employed). Please, if you have time, leave a comment. Thanks in advance 🌹
Sorry, has been unemployed
a 25 year old korean woman and not women (as its single woman).Am I correct
Correct and well spotted. Just a typo.
@@OETOnline yes Sir.Obviously Typo only.We learn a lot from you Mr. Steve. Thank you for your Teachings.
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Is the conclusion counted or not ( the last sentence) ? Thanks in advance
Sir do u take onlin classes ??
Why it’s in the first paragraph? Brad had been unemployed for 18 month.
It is part of the social background of Ashley which is prior but relevant to the current situation.
Hi sir. In your writing alone course how many letter get corrected?
very nice information
korean woman or women?
hi how i can contact you for online course