READING THE ESSAYS THAT GOT ME INTO DARTMOUTH

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  • ‪@HannahLikes‬
    So what prompt(s) did you respond to for your essay(s)?
    I hope this video was helpful to anyone finishing up or just working on their applications :D
    Any other specific questions? Comment below and I'll try my best to answer ASAP
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  • @HannahLikes
    @HannahLikes  6 ปีที่แล้ว +112

    HEYY dartmouth’s regular decision deadline has been extended to January 5th so if you were thinking about applying and didn’t this is a sign you should apply js

  • @nabilasafira6412
    @nabilasafira6412 6 ปีที่แล้ว +188

    “If u cry while you’re writing an essay, that’s a good sign.”
    :”>

    • @smarikasharma2287
      @smarikasharma2287 5 ปีที่แล้ว +50

      unless you cry because your essay is so bad and you only have five days to submit it :(((

    • @parajulisugam
      @parajulisugam 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@smarikasharma2287 when feel bore writing the essay that's due 2 hours from now.

  • @JoshBeasley
    @JoshBeasley 6 ปีที่แล้ว +128

    Hey thanks for the shoutout! One of my subscribers pointed me towards this video. It's great to see other students sharing their experiences! Keep it up Hannah!

    • @HannahLikes
      @HannahLikes  6 ปีที่แล้ว +13

      Hey thanks Josh! Your videos are dope haha

  • @dunnolol7630
    @dunnolol7630 6 ปีที่แล้ว +102

    I really dislike science, I'm actually more of English lover myself. But what you wrote was exceptional and captivating. Never did I think someone could write about science and genuinely interest me, but you did. Your passion for science is unbeknownst to me but so great and personal. So glad you got accepted into Dartmouth, good luck there!

    • @HannahLikes
      @HannahLikes  6 ปีที่แล้ว +7

      dunno lol thank you! 💚

    • @VinOnline
      @VinOnline 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      The key is to write so well about something, that even someone uninterested by the subject is moved and intrigued. Excellent job, Hannah!

  • @slmx.mohamudd1146
    @slmx.mohamudd1146 6 ปีที่แล้ว +97

    This is literally the best essay I’ve ever heard omg no wonder you got into such a great school ! You’re so passionate and intelligent. I want to write about science (physics) in my college essay too but I’m in 8th grade so that’s kinda a long time away lol

    • @whatifthiswaslove
      @whatifthiswaslove 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      you should be a senior now! now did it go?

    • @adeenahtabani963
      @adeenahtabani963 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@whatifthiswaslove this comment is so cute i hope she replies

  • @PatrickCormier
    @PatrickCormier 6 ปีที่แล้ว +65

    Okay so like I am LIVING for this flood of 10/10 material for Dartmouth Admission!! I sent in my application yesterday!!!!

    • @CAI.DREAMS
      @CAI.DREAMS 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      Patrick Cormier how did it go?

  • @evang19810
    @evang19810 4 ปีที่แล้ว +37

    So I think what I’ve gathered... is this girl seems to like science

  • @GiaCrupi
    @GiaCrupi 6 ปีที่แล้ว +26

    This gives me anxiety because i could never write something as well as that WOW. That essay was amazing i wish i could think up something like that

  • @anniegao
    @anniegao 6 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    the passion that you have for science just makes me love you so much more than i already love your unique and the funny and sincere personality
    you have

  • @connerpettit4384
    @connerpettit4384 6 ปีที่แล้ว +18

    This has been soooo helpful!!!! I love how you commented on the Harvard vs. Yale video. I thought it was funny Harvard lost especially since they were so confident they would have won. I'm a junior, and definitely considering Dartmouth more now

    • @HannahLikes
      @HannahLikes  6 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Conner Pettit i’m so glad to hear that!!

  • @HannahLikes
    @HannahLikes  6 ปีที่แล้ว +22

    This seemed to be the most requested topic from the comments on my last video so here ya go! I'll make most of the other requested videos eventually but this seemed like the right one to upload before the RD deadline :D Wishing the best of luck to everyone applying to schools in the coming days!

  • @benjaminli9853
    @benjaminli9853 6 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Listening to this as a second-year uni student, I honestly think I’ve been slacking since getting in. But it seems your passion is quite contagious! Grazie, Hannah!

  • @ragenmackenzie1201
    @ragenmackenzie1201 6 ปีที่แล้ว +37

    randomly clicked on this video and today is February 11th

  • @goeunlee02
    @goeunlee02 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    wow your essay IS SO BEAUTIFUL im in love with it ! thank you for sharing ☺️

  • @anacedeno2104
    @anacedeno2104 5 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    I am impressed by your writing abilities. You are a model for me ever since I found your channel. I hope that I can achieve such abilities some day. I feel like I have a lot to learn before my senior year, so I can get into an Ivy League college. Keep up the good work.
    I wanted to ask; how many classes do you recommend to take each semester in college?

  • @sheilapaucar7067
    @sheilapaucar7067 6 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    I fell in love with your essay, your vocabulary is amazing and no wonder you got into that school. It's October 11 and still didn t write my essay yet.

    • @sheilapaucar7067
      @sheilapaucar7067 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@sanjeevpal8076 University of Hartford, now a sophomore.

    • @lalabest1aj
      @lalabest1aj 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Why is that me now💀💀💀💀

  • @irfaan4822
    @irfaan4822 6 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Your essays are so beautifully written!
    Good Luck at Dartmouth! x

  • @diyamandot9172
    @diyamandot9172 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    literally so beautiful! loved it

  • @criseldareganion
    @criseldareganion 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    Your Common App essay is so wonderful huhu I really love it. Thank you for sharing!

  • @CAI.DREAMS
    @CAI.DREAMS 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    Best TH-cam channel! You are really encouraging me, thank you.

  • @stonejohnson4980
    @stonejohnson4980 6 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    I know that my "why Dartmouth" essay for next year is still in progress but is this good?
    As I stepped foot onto the ground that accommodated Dartmouth, I immediately fell infatuated with the campus' infinite astounding features. From the library to the biology labs, I quickly realized that I hadn’t felt this connection to another university. As the tour guide showed us around, I couldn’t find any contradictions in the way that I perceived the architecture, education, and the culture that surrounded the Dartmouth community. I love Dartmouth and know that this is where I belong and desire to spend the next four magnificent years of my life.

    • @stonejohnson4980
      @stonejohnson4980 6 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      By the way, it has to be less than 100 words.

    • @HannahLikes
      @HannahLikes  6 ปีที่แล้ว +11

      Stone Johnson it’s a good start! i would recommend losing a few of the adjectives (ones like infinite, magnificent, even astounding) it makes it sound kinda gimmicky and the broadness of those words is impersonal in this context. I would recommend focusing on a few very specific things that made you fall in love with the campus as opposed to the more broad college as a whole. hope this helps!

    • @HannahLikes
      @HannahLikes  6 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      love the part about the connections and lack of contradictions :)

    • @stonejohnson4980
      @stonejohnson4980 6 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Thank you!

    • @stonejohnson4980
      @stonejohnson4980 6 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      OMG, I just reread it and realized that it honestly has a TON of work that needs to be done still.

  • @jamiec7376
    @jamiec7376 6 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    Please do an interview tips/your experience video! I've got my interview for Dartmouth on January 10th!

  • @nicolehu6979
    @nicolehu6979 5 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    anybody get rattled when that banner thing moved at 2:12

  • @nailahhuq1238
    @nailahhuq1238 6 ปีที่แล้ว +12

    Not the most creative Common App essay I've heard, and I was hesitant after you started with a date, but by the end I could sense your passion :) Thanks for sharing! (I also modeled my activities after Josh Beasley's lmao)

  • @StayingRad
    @StayingRad 6 ปีที่แล้ว +33

    Wow, what a coincidence; I chose the same prompt and wrote about my passion for science as well. That's crazy, either way best of luck to you!

    • @HannahLikes
      @HannahLikes  6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Kao I have a friend who did as well! seems to be a popular choice haha

    • @StayingRad
      @StayingRad 6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I'm not sure if you said answered this in another video, but, what are you planning on majoring in? I'm geared towards astrophysics

    • @HannahLikes
      @HannahLikes  6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Kao astrophysics is dope, that’s what I was gearing towards for a few years. i’m most likely going to major in neuroscience or biology w/ a genetics focus (possibility of bioengineering, but we’ll see!)

    • @StayingRad
      @StayingRad 6 ปีที่แล้ว

      what's the reason behind going into neuroscience/bio-engineering, is there something specific you plan on doing, or is it something else driving you towards that?

    • @HannahLikes
      @HannahLikes  6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Kao I took a lot of bio-based classes in high school and have written a few research papers that have gotten me really interested in genetic engineering/improving gene therapy accessibility and functionality. + neuroscience is just something that has always intrigued me because of its mystery, intricacies, applications, and focuses on statistics and behavior (+ dartmouth has a really solid neuroscience program). I love all sciences, but i’m attracted to how the work that I could pursue in these biological fields could have a direct impact on people

  • @ashtonlewis4814
    @ashtonlewis4814 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    I love this video SO MUCH
    First off, can’t wait to be (hopefully) on campus at Dartmouth this fall (I am an accepted member of the Class of ‘25)!!
    Second, I am obsessed with volcanoes and before that astronomy, so your common app essay makes me so happy...

  • @phylpeng3682
    @phylpeng3682 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you! Your essay is very inspiring!

  • @piercerichardson326
    @piercerichardson326 6 ปีที่แล้ว +21

    Test scores?

  • @juancamilomillan7558
    @juancamilomillan7558 6 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Really awesome essay!!!!!!

  • @bthhme
    @bthhme 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    amazing essay💞

  • @jennflprofileupdated8931
    @jennflprofileupdated8931 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    Love these too!!!

  • @sophiaquast588
    @sophiaquast588 6 ปีที่แล้ว +10

    Thank you for this! Did you include a peer recommendation with your application?

    • @HannahLikes
      @HannahLikes  6 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      Sophia Quast I did! A wonderful friend of mine wrote it ☺️

  • @connerpettit4384
    @connerpettit4384 5 ปีที่แล้ว +10

    How did you deal with college admissions anxiety before the ED decision came out? I applied ED to Brown and am so nervous. I know the decision doesn't define me but I keep on thinking about it. Thoughts?

    • @anshumanmullick3894
      @anshumanmullick3894 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Did you get in?

    • @michellefoley8438
      @michellefoley8438 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      where did you end up?

    • @connerpettit4384
      @connerpettit4384 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@anshumanmullick3894 no, got into UPenn though!

    • @connerpettit4384
      @connerpettit4384 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@michellefoley8438 UPenn!

    • @anshumanmullick3894
      @anshumanmullick3894 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@connerpettit4384 congratulations!!! I hope you have a great time there and may you be really successful in life!

  • @ximenaescalante6946
    @ximenaescalante6946 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    is it okay if I include ur name in my essay and stuff because u really inspire me Hannah. It was YOU that inspired to become a Dartmouth member and it was YOU that also made me realize the burning passion and affection I have for science and medicine. And for that I thank you the most babe💘

  • @Simsrockslol
    @Simsrockslol 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    i’m moved i’m not surprised you got in.

  • @jennflprofileupdated8931
    @jennflprofileupdated8931 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    Loves!!!

  • @Samahandtahnia
    @Samahandtahnia 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Who wrote your peer recommendation?

  • @TSCtheTHC
    @TSCtheTHC 6 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    I clean the place. Your welcome !

    • @HannahLikes
      @HannahLikes  6 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      RaNdoM- -ThoUghTs lol yes thank you!

    • @TSCtheTHC
      @TSCtheTHC 6 ปีที่แล้ว

      Hannah Likes Science [Hannah Burd] I'm sorry if that came off as rude. I actually didn't expect you to respond.
      I just saw you and the first Dartmouth TH-camr.
      I've worked in almost every building and dorm.
      I love the diversity at Dartmouth. And everybody I've met is so nice.
      Not sure if it's different being a student.
      But I love Dartmouth. It pays my bills. Gives huge benefits. And takes me across the world !

  • @isaackorchenko9609
    @isaackorchenko9609 6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Did you just apply to Dartmouth because you knew it was for you or did you consider any backup schools?

    • @HannahLikes
      @HannahLikes  6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Isaac Korchenko I applied to dartmouth ed because I think that even if I got into all the other schools that I liked, I would still choose dartmouth. I only applied to dartmouth and two state schools early (mostly bc all the other schools I was gonna apply to were only ed or scea)

    • @isaackorchenko9609
      @isaackorchenko9609 6 ปีที่แล้ว

      Hannah Likes Science [Hannah Burd] I believe I asked you this question already awhile ago lol, but thanks again for answering.

  • @jennflprofileupdated8931
    @jennflprofileupdated8931 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    Can you read many other essays that you wrote too?! Oxx!

  • @judithaltier7338
    @judithaltier7338 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Would you email copies of your essays???

  • @s.barasa
    @s.barasa 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    Should you have a topic for the personal essay?????

  • @marywana4755
    @marywana4755 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hey can I know what were your extra curriculars-??!!

  • @jennflprofileupdated8931
    @jennflprofileupdated8931 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    Please read poems you like!!!

  • @JuliaJiggs
    @JuliaJiggs 6 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    Only girl in your physics class??

    • @HannahLikes
      @HannahLikes  6 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      Julia Jiggs yup! for two years-in honors and ap physics :/

    • @JuliaJiggs
      @JuliaJiggs 6 ปีที่แล้ว

      Hannah Likes Science [Hannah Burd] That's crazy.

  • @yowisarias1433
    @yowisarias1433 6 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Damn.

  • @nayerayassin9594
    @nayerayassin9594 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    Just wondering, what are you majoring in? And congrats!

  • @mallikabhat7421
    @mallikabhat7421 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    I have a question...do the middle school high school credit courses count as a big deal? Thanks!

    • @HannahLikes
      @HannahLikes  6 ปีที่แล้ว

      Mallika B middle school courses do not matter, but the rigor of high school courses definitely plays a significant role in admissions :)

  • @nobelkingjk2146
    @nobelkingjk2146 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    यदि आप पापी है तो आपको मुक्तिदाता की जरूरत है ।
    प्रभु यीशु मसीह ने कहा जगत की ज्योती मैं ही हूँ जो मेरे पीछे-पीछे चलेगा वह कभी अन्धेरे में नहीं चलेगा ।
    प्रभु यीशु मसीह ने कहा मार्ग सच्चाई और जीवन मैं ही हूँ

  • @mehularora1813
    @mehularora1813 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hannah, you look like Anne Frank!