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how to describe a manufacturing cycle - ielts writing task 1 process diagram
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IELTS Writing Task 1 process diagrams are hard to write about because we may not know what a diagram is trying to express. Don't worry! In this video, I give you a super detailed guide to writing a manufacturing cycle. To learn how to write a life cycle, watch this video: • how to describe a life...
Here's the process diagram used in this video:
The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.
0:00 Overview Paragraph
02:16 Details Paragraph 1
05:19 Details Paragraph 2
07:32 Entire Essay
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The diagram gives information about how plastic bottles are recyled.
Overall, the process consists of 9 stages and it starts with people throwing plactic bottles into containers and it ends with manufacturing the end products.
First, people throw their plastic bottles into containers. The bottles are then ready to be collected with lorries. The next stage is that, the collected plastic bottles are eliminated by workers by hand. After that, the bottles which are convenient to be compressed into blocks are moving to the next stage. Next part is the crushing stage. In this stage the blocks of plastics are put into two rotating gears to diminish the plastic bottle dimensions. This stage also covers washing the plastics. In the next stage, these tiny plastics are put into a machine which allows plastics to transform into plastic pellets. After that, these pellets are ready to be heated in order to form raw material. In the last stage of the process, the raw material is then manufactured into different kind of end products such things as t-shirts, plastic bottles, and recyling bags.
this gets 6.5?
use and reuse instance end.
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Hi Lilie, I just practiced this task this afternoon then find this your video. If you don't mind, you may check this out and give me any advise please. Thanks! :D
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The picture illustrates the recycling system of plastic bottles. It is apparent to note that this process is divided into manual and machinery operations.
It is clear that littering rubbish is conducted on a daily basis by the community. They throw in the garbage container which is proposed to recycle. Next, the garbage truck will come to take them and bring them to the recycling center for sorting. Transportation and sorting are conducted by humans. Furthermore, it is continued with the machinery step, where the sorted bottles are compressed into blocks, and then are crushed by certain gears. The small parts of the crushed bottles are washed to remove dirt or potential contaminations, then are processed into a machine that produces plastic pellets. The last step of the recycling process is heating the pellets to shape the raw material that can be utilized to create plastic end products such as stationaries, recycled shopping plastic bags, clothes, as well as plastic lunch boxes and beverage plastic bottles. (166 words)
The diagram illustrates how plastic is extracted and recycled from plastic bottles.
The process starts with used plastic bottles being collected from recycle bins. A recycling truck collects the bottles from bins placed around the city and transport them to the recycling facility. Where the bottles are sorted out by hand and then sent to a hydraulic compressor which compresses them into blocks.
These blocks then go to a crusher, which breaks them into smaller scrapes of plastic. After getting crushed, the scrapes are sent for a wash. Next, these scrapes are fed to a machine which process them down further and turn them into small pellets, finally these pellets are heated up to form raw materials, which are then shipped out and used to make various products such as bottles, containers, bags etc.
Overall, the recycling process consists of nine steps, which includes collecting and sorting of bottles, Compressing and crushing followed by turning them into pellets for raw materials. Products from raw materials are made and the cycle continues.
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Can I write like this in the overall: "Overall, it comprises two stages: transforming used bottles into plastic pieces and turning them into new products." ?
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The given process illustrates how plastic bottles are recycled after human use.
Overall, it is a cyclical process that consists of ten steps of different lengths and purposes. Starting from the usage of bottles, to the transportation of plastic waste, sorting, compressing, crushing, washing, producing plastic pellets, and heating them in order to form the raw material , which can be used to produce several items so that people reuse them.
First of all, humans dispose plastic bottles after using them in particular bins for recyclable products, which are transported to the recycling factory using lorries. Next, sorting takes place, where workers separate bottles based on different criteria into the right container. In the subsequent step, the selected bottles are accumulated into blocks, which have the shape of a cup.
Blocks are broken down using a sharp machine into small pieces in order to wash them. The coming step involves another gadget that is responsible for producing plastic pellets from the washed particles. After that, pellets are heated for a specific period to produce raw material, which is used at the end for the manufacturing of many recyclable goods, such as bottles, lunchboxes, pencils, and clothes. After these products are utilized, they go through the recycling process all over again.
this is my essay after editing it based on your advice and help!
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Hi, good overall. But the overall is way too long. "Human" sounds very unnatural in this context. I suggest using the passive voice instead.
@@LilieIELTS but in another test, the examiner said you need to mention everything in the overall( all the steps).
But mentioning all the steps doesn't equal writing a long overview.
@@LilieIELTS thank you I will take your advice
The diagram illustrates the detailed process of plastic bottle recycling and reuse.
Overall, the cyclic process of plastic reuse involves four major steps: collection, transportation, segregation, and production. It is amazing to notice that products other than bottles, such as dresses, pencils, and shopping bags, can also be made using recycled plastic.
The first major step of the process is the collection. Plastic bottles are collected from the disposal bins, where they are discarded after usage, using trucks, and then they are transported to a recycling center. Once there, segregation is done for separating them from non-plastic and non-reusable plastic waste. The sorted ones are then compressed into blocks by applying high pressure which enables them to crush easily into small pieces using the high-speed rotating vanes of a crushing machine. The crushed pieces are then thoroughly washed in order to remove any residue or impurities.
Further, plastic pellets are produced by pouring crushed pieces into a machine. However, the raw material cannot be produced without heating these pellets further at high temperatures. These raw materials can be remolded and reshaped into different products which are later collected after their lifetime for repeating the cycle.
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There is no first major step? It's a cycle... all processes are major ..
Disposal bins where they're discarded after usage, disposals are used for discarding... why explaining something that's too basic I believe.
6 or 6.5 I would give. Not 7
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The diagram illustrates how plastic bottles are recycled throughout the periods.
Overall, the recycling process of plastic bottles involve nine distinct stages, which helps to regain plastic in lots of new forms
The first step of process is to people threw bottles into the recycle bins . Then, the bottles are collected by recycling cars and sent to recycling centre, which is sorted plastic materials by workers. In the next process is to plastics are pressed all together into blocks and then whole plastics are crushed by crushing machine, after that those are washed in cabin piece by piece.
The sixth step of process is to washed plastics were used to producing plastic pellets by a machine. In the next phase is to pellets are heated to turn into shape of raw material. In eighth step is to obtain raw material from heated pellets. Lastly, raw materials are used to acquire end products such as plastic bottles, containers, t-shirts and bags at the end of the stage.
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Hi Lilie, I'm wondering if you think that using "pallet production" is ok. I don't think I can come up with the word palletizing during the test :))
you forget the introduction line but overall its great
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Watch it more clearly, the first line at 7:38
You have skipped the introductory line.
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hello there, does anyone know if these types of writings (Line Graph, Bar Chart, Pie Chart, Table Chart, Process Diagram and Map Diagram) are for general training or just Academic?
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Bp1 the process begin when plastic bottles are collected in a dustbin . After reaching to next point collected material is sent through the public transport then, plastic bottles are sorted so that they can suitable ones which can be recycled. Before being crushed plastic bottles are comprised into block and washed. After that, the pieces of plastic are poured into machine so that raw Material can be gained. Finally, there are numerous goods are made by recycling such as shirt, bag, pencils, containers and so on
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Simply use your common sense to determine which stages YOU believe are the most important.😊
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can you suggest a good sentence to use when talking about a natural cyclical process, pllease? which can be used everywhere.
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how to do lili if don't get filler words can't add
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tnx for yr endeavour presenting explanation but words are short of word limit of 150........
It's 155 words. You can read it here: www.ieltsessaybank.com/process-for-recycling-plastic-bottles/
It was a great one helped a lot to understand task 1 but what about the word count as I see there are around 143 words in there ?
Hi, it's 155 words. You can read it here: www.ieltsessaybank.com/process-for-recycling-plastic-bottles/
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This topic cover introduction overview body and conclusion?
Hi, you don't need a conclusion for a task 1 essay.
Is it ok to use future tense in this writing test
No, I think the present simple is the most suitable tense here.
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Mam can you please explain that thing you said about the cycle isn't complete and do we need to put use and reuse there?
Are you talking about the overview? Yes, we do need to mention use and reuse.
@@LilieIELTS but mam what I meant was, do we always have to write Use and Reuse in a cycle process ?
@@raiyanrahman7201 You use them when a cycle shows use and reuse.
Pelletizing??? Are you sure it is a word? I couldn't find it in the dictionary 🤷♀
sorry, but I don't understand the word "once there" which is situated in the detailed paragraph 1 clearly, could anyone help me?😓🥺
Hi, "there" refers to the recycling plant so "once there" means "once the bottles arrive at the recycling plant".
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This question was a disaster for me... I couldn't write an appropriate overview, because of that I was stuck and nervous and I couldn't even finish the whole writing.
Yes, process diagrams are hard. Hope the video helps.
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I was wondering why you used the word 'use instead of' using' in the overview paragraph.
My exam is in two days and I really need your help...
Hi, this is because "use" is already a noun. And good luck on your exam.✊
@@LilieIELTS thanks for your reply!!
but I think there is a should be a balanced series of ing words :parallelism
"Using" has to be followed by an object: using *it* .
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is introduction not necessary for process diag?
It's necessary. You can read the whole essay here: www.ieltsessaybank.com/process-for-recycling-plastic-bottles/
but these are not 150 words am I right?
Hi, it's 155 words. You can read the essay here: www.ieltsessaybank.com/process-for-recycling-plastic-bottles/
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It's not so bad, it's so bad at all.
Rather they , these would be a better pronoun for non living things.