TOEFL Independent Writing - Multiple Choice Essay

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  • @juva
    @juva  3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

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    TOEFL Independent Writing Practice
    I scored 30/30 in TOEFL Writing and I show you how to write a multiple choice essay that gets you a high independent writing score. I tell you tips and tricks to improve your score quickly and significantly. Getting a high score in TOEFL independent writing is no magic guys, you can absolutely do this!
    TIMESTAMPS
    0:00 TOEFL Independent Writing - Multiple Choice Essay
    00:27 - Multiple Choice Question
    01:05 - Notes
    02:07 - Introduction
    04:03 - Body
    11:25 - Conclusion
    12:47 - Score Booster

    • @nazmul4508
      @nazmul4508 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Juva, Can you make a video of reading section? Especially saving time and attempt to solve different questions.

    • @juva
      @juva  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@nazmul4508 I noted your wish :)

  • @sunidhijindal8223
    @sunidhijindal8223 3 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    Hi Juva. I got 29 in speaking. Thanks to ur videos

    • @juva
      @juva  3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Congratulations Sunidhi! That's an amazing score, you can be so proud of yourself! I'm so glad I could help :)

    • @sunidhijindal8223
      @sunidhijindal8223 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@juva thank you so much Juva

    • @juva
      @juva  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@sunidhijindal8223 You're so welcome!

  • @santiagosierrab
    @santiagosierrab 3 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Hi Juva, I got 29 in writing and 28 in reading thanks to your videos. I was able to get a 100 score and fulfill the requirements to get admitted to my master!
    Thanks a lot.

    • @juva
      @juva  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Congratulations! That's so amazing, you can be so proud of yourself! I'm so glad I could help :)

  • @tunahancalkoglu6675
    @tunahancalkoglu6675 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I've been waiting to make this comment for almost 2 weeks now and finally I got my toefl ibt score. I got 28 in writing (109 overall) thanks to your templates and tricks I learned while I was watching your videos! Thank you so much, love from Turkey

    • @juva
      @juva  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Congratulations! Your scores are amazing, you can be so proud of yourself. I'm so glad I could help. Lots of love from Oxford :).

  • @fedormikhailov666
    @fedormikhailov666 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Thank you very much!!! I have seen a lot of videos , but yours are the best🥰 lnformation presenting is at the highest level. I hope these tips will help me to get 100+... Nowadays, universities are very demanding)))

    • @juva
      @juva  3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Wow, thank you! I'm so glad the videos are helpful to you :). You can do this!

    • @fedormikhailov666
      @fedormikhailov666 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@juva I will do my best☺️

  • @neelshah2855
    @neelshah2855 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Juva, you're the best.

    • @juva
      @juva  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Thank you so much Neel! I'm flattered :).

  • @elianavaldez67
    @elianavaldez67 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you very much Juva!!
    For all your work. I am taking the TOEFL in one week and you help me a lot not just with the extremely clear video, but also with th explanation you write on the description :)
    Greetings!

    • @juva
      @juva  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      You're most welcome Eliana! I'm so glad it's helpful to you ! I wish you all the best for your TOEFL preparation :)

  • @abhaykapoor13090
    @abhaykapoor13090 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Hey there Juva ! I thoroughly enjoyed your lectures on youtube and they were a massive help but I just have one suggestion that you should try accepting payments for your course via more routes which are accessible for indian students

    • @juva
      @juva  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Hey 😀 Please drop me an email at contacting.juva@gmail.com. I would love to hear from you.

  • @brookesobsessionwithbooks6691
    @brookesobsessionwithbooks6691 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hi Juva,
    It's me again! Just wanted to let you know that these writing section practices are extremely helpful and I feel much better prepared for my exam tomorrow. Thank you so much! Certainly, they really have improved my understanding of the test format and benefitted my overall English. Whatever score I might get on tomorrow's exam, I am already eternally grateful for your advice! Lots of love (and please keep up the good work!) :)

    • @juva
      @juva  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Hi Brookes, I'm so glad they are helpful to you! I wish you all the best for your TOEFL! I'd love to know your score once you have it, so if you like, tell me about it :)

    • @brookesobsessionwithbooks6691
      @brookesobsessionwithbooks6691 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@juva Hey, just took my test and I am soooooo grateful for your advice! My unofficial sores where R 24 and L 28. The reading section could have been better, but the texts were so different from the practice ones that I was just glad I scored above 10😂 Thank you so much once again. I will keep you updated! One last question : is it normal that my ets account still has not updated? The test is still described as "upcoming"... It's making me a bit anxious, tbh😅
      I will definitely recommend your channel! You are wonderful!

    • @juva
      @juva  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@brookesobsessionwithbooks6691 Hi :) That's amazing, congratulations! TOEFL Reading is really hard, don't worry, 24 is a fantastic score! I'm so glad the channel was helpful to you :). On my ETS account it said "to be scheduled" until I received my scores, so don't worry about that. I'd love to know your overall score once you know it :)

  • @englishinenglish3473
    @englishinenglish3473 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    You are a god of writing, I wish I could be like you :)

    • @juva
      @juva  3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Thank you so much 😀

  • @chikosoluefearinze-offor6743
    @chikosoluefearinze-offor6743 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you so much Juva. Please i have some questions. 1) The 'Evidently and consequently' are they written on separate paragraphs after the introduction. 2) Do one give double or single spacing for each paragraph or it doesn't matter. 3) what kind of spacing is required when typing your answers or is not needed.
    Thank you

    • @juva
      @juva  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I'm so glad you like the video :). 1) Yes, you have to leave a blank line after the introduction to indicate a new paragraph. 2) I left one blank line between paragraphs and it was fine. 3) You will type your answer in the answer box, no formatting is required. Hope this helps :)

    • @chikosoluefearinze-offor6743
      @chikosoluefearinze-offor6743 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@juva Thanks Juva. I'm grateful

  • @strongjas97
    @strongjas97 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Hi Juva. Thank you so much for the amazing videos and I am taking exam tomorrow.
    Just a quick question: If we have three reasons, should we still write conclusion as "because...., because... and because"? It seems lengthy but breaking apart also seems unnecessary. Thank you!

    • @juva
      @juva  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Hi Jasmine, I'm so glad you like the videos :). That's an excellent question! I wouldn't express it in this way because it sounds repetitive. Just choose another way to express it. I wish you all the best for your TOEFL, you can do it!

  • @ayushshukla731
    @ayushshukla731 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Hi Juva, greetings from India. First of all, I would like to thank you for making such amazing videos which really helped me to prepare for TOEFL. I just got done with my iBT Home Edition test and got unofficial scores of 25 and 30 in reading and listening respectively. My speaking test was okayish and writing one was pretty good. I would provide update to my final score as soon as I get them. To be honest, I only did 2-3 days of preparation for this test and mainly utilized your videos for guidance. Certainly, they helped me quite a bit, especially the templates and I'm glad I came across this channel. My target was to score just enough to apply to the universities I've short listed, hence, such minimum effort was put in. Cheers and thank you once again.

    • @juva
      @juva  3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Hi Ayush, Congratulations! Your scores are amazing, you can be so proud of yourself! I'm so glad I could help. I'd love to know your scores once you get them :)

    • @ayushshukla731
      @ayushshukla731 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@juva Update : I scored 101 in my test. Super happy given my prep time, once again thank you so much ^_^

    • @juva
      @juva  3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@ayushshukla731 Congratulations Ayush! That's such a great score, you can be so proud of yourself! I'm so glad I could help :)

    • @juva
      @juva  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Hi Ayush, I'd love to ask you a few questions about your TOEFL experience. If you are interested in that, please drop me an email at contacting.juva@gmail.com . I'd love to hear from you :)

    • @ayushshukla731
      @ayushshukla731 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@juva For sure, I'll mail you the details in sometime ^_^

  • @Grad_venture
    @Grad_venture 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Hey thanks for your explanation. Is it better to write just about one of the options in the whole essay or we should compare choices together? I mean do we need to say that : i chose A because B and C are not that effective. Or we can say I choose A bcuz of two reasons.

    • @juva
      @juva  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Hey, I'm so glad you like it :). I'd recommend writing about one option and stating your reasons regarding this option.

  • @azizisalem1055
    @azizisalem1055 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Hi juva , Thank u so much for your videos . I'm struggling with the speaking section could u make videos about this section , especially Q2 ,Q3 with answers .

    • @juva
      @juva  3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Hi Azizi, you're most welcome! I noted your wish :)

    • @azizisalem1055
      @azizisalem1055 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@juva Thanks again ❤ u are the best

    • @juva
      @juva  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@azizisalem1055 Thank you

  • @perlakhattar4595
    @perlakhattar4595 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hello Juva, thank you so much for your video.
    Do you think it would be a great idea to have three body paragraphs as such:
    Parag 1: state why presentations and essays are not enough
    Parag 2: state A1 for exams
    Parag 3: state A2 for exams
    thanks again!:)

    • @juva
      @juva  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Hello Perla, I'm so glad you like the video 😀. You can write three body paragraphs, however, each of them should contain an argument for your opinion, so you should state why exams are better in each.

  • @ingridvelasco9241
    @ingridvelasco9241 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you Juva :D

    • @juva
      @juva  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      You're so welcome Ingrid! :)

  • @sanskarisailor
    @sanskarisailor 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    hello!!
    suppose there's a agree/disagree question and we r disagree...
    so my que is..
    for start hook sentance can be in support of question and further more in thesis and transition we can disagree with the statement...??
    in short to create a hook we need to choose one side on which our essay will be or we can oppose in hook and favour in thesis?

    • @sanskarisailor
      @sanskarisailor 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      😓

    • @juva
      @juva  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      The hook is a sentence that introduces the topic and catches the reader's attention. In your thesis you state whether you agree or disagree. Hope this helps :).

    • @sanskarisailor
      @sanskarisailor 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@juva okk means hook can be on agree / disagree or neutral aswell

    • @juva
      @juva  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@sanskarisailor The hook should introduce the topic, it should not state whether you agree or disagree. Hope this helps :).

  • @Shega2016
    @Shega2016 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Salute from Ethiopia; 'the place where every thing is started'. I have been practicing for my TOEFL test scheduled on coming July 3. Thanks for your comments there are a lot of improvements seen on my speaking and writing. However; I want you to check some of my writings for questions I found on TOEFL bank. Thus can you help me around? I hope you do that. Let me know. Have a nice time.

    • @juva
      @juva  3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Hi Robel, I'm so glad the channel is helpful to you. I'm afraid I don't offer such feedback at the moment. However, if you have any questions, put them in the comments, I'll be happy to answer them. Hope this helps :)

  • @ashmeetbhamrah8733
    @ashmeetbhamrah8733 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Hi Juva.. wanted to ask.. in writing it doesn't matter whatever reasons n examples we mention? Rather, the focus is just on the structure, organization, and development of the essay? Is that true?

    • @juva
      @juva  3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Hi Ashmeet, it doesn't matter what kind of reasons you provide, but they must be relevant to the question. You have to write a clearly structured essay that shows that you can deal with complex grammar and vocabulary and that answers the question. Hope this helps :).

  • @putrialda_
    @putrialda_ ปีที่แล้ว +1

    How if I replace the word of "obviously" or "evidently" with idioms, for instance, it goes without saying that.....?

    • @juva
      @juva  ปีที่แล้ว

      You can do this, but you must make sure that you get the idiom right, otherwise you will lose points.

  • @KavilJain514
    @KavilJain514 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Hi Juva, what if I have 3 body paragraphs, and for restating my reasons in conclusion.. should I use comma or "and because" twice. Or is there any other efficient way?

    • @juva
      @juva  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Hi Kavil, I wouldn't use 'and because' twice because it seems quite repetitive. A comma is fine. You could also use something like 'as well as due to the fact that'... - this way you don't use 'and' and 'because' twice. Hope this helps!

  • @하루-m8h9y
    @하루-m8h9y 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I have a question, does it not matter if the second paragraph do not contain anything about essay or giving a presentation??

    • @juva
      @juva  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Excellent question! The prompt asks you which assignment you think is best. So you have to choose one and you must give reasons and examples for your opinion. For example, if you think exams are the best method, then you just need to state two reasons in favour of that, you don't need to talk about the other options. Hope this helps :).

  • @aklogtefera7624
    @aklogtefera7624 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    It was helpful thanks for you're videos

    • @juva
      @juva  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Glad it was helpful!

    • @aklogtefera7624
      @aklogtefera7624 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@juva Absolutely it was...
      I mean i don't have any base to take tofel exam but thanks for you're videos and my dedication i well do it as soon as possible when i was much enough for the exam.young people just like me in africa need this kind of help to chang there life.
      Again i would like to say thanks from the bottom of my heart.

    • @juva
      @juva  3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@aklogtefera7624 You're most welcome Aklog! I'm so glad to hear that it's useful to you :)

  • @aisamesl
    @aisamesl 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    💗❤️Thanks for your hard work

    • @juva
      @juva  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      My pleasure 😊

  • @mhmmdsaralov
    @mhmmdsaralov ปีที่แล้ว +1

    can we get high score if we choose 2 options ?

    • @juva
      @juva  ปีที่แล้ว

      That's a great question! Your TOEFL Writing score will go down if you do this because the question asks you which option you prefer. If you pick two, the TOEFL examiner will think that you have not understood the question.

    • @mhmmdsaralov
      @mhmmdsaralov ปีที่แล้ว

      i got, thanks Juva. I struggling withthe writing section. u know we have to finish 20 and 30 minutes, butIi finish at least 45,50 minutes. What canIi do forboostingt my writing section. Als,o i not able to finish the article during 3 minutes. I have 2 months. what would you recommend to me

  • @kezangdema4706
    @kezangdema4706 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Can we use same writing strategy for all types of Question styles?

    • @juva
      @juva  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      You should write an introduction, two body paragraphs, and a conclusion in the independent essay, independent of the question type. However, you should adapt your writing to the question type. Have a look at my playlist for TOEFL Writing, you can find several independent essays there and I explain how you should write depending on the question type. Hope this helps :).

    • @kezangdema4706
      @kezangdema4706 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Thank you so much!
      I am learning a lot from you :)

    • @juva
      @juva  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@kezangdema4706 You're very welcome! I'm glad to hear this :).

  • @nssrnssr9414
    @nssrnssr9414 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    hi juva, i see in a toefl book other sort of independent question such as: compare and contrast / discuss the advantage and the disadvantages of .... / do you have any tips for me?

    • @juva
      @juva  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      I'm not sure whether this kind of question is still used in TOEFL Writing. Is this a new edition?

  • @minaabdolmaleki9703
    @minaabdolmaleki9703 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Juva, Hi.... this video doesn't have pdf??? I cannot read the paragraphs well !:(

    • @juva
      @juva  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Hi Mina, I'll see what I can do. Hope the video is nevertheless helpful to you :).

    • @minaabdolmaleki9703
      @minaabdolmaleki9703 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@juva It was so helpful. But with its pdf is better

    • @juva
      @juva  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@minaabdolmaleki9703 I'm glad it was helpful. I understand, I'll see what I can do. :)

  • @gathang763
    @gathang763 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you :)

    • @juva
      @juva  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      You're so welcome! :)

  • @wellness6558
    @wellness6558 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    thank u

    • @juva
      @juva  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      You're welcome!

  • @amilton1015
    @amilton1015 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hello juva. Good day.

    • @juva
      @juva  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Hello :) Great to have you here!

  • @marwakhateeb3721
    @marwakhateeb3721 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    i think i'm on the verge of get advanced i won't exaggerate hhhhhh .thank you juva as always sharp witted person with all due respect
    #Palestine for us.
    #pray for our sisters and brothers in westbank and Gaza strip plz.

    • @juva
      @juva  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Congratulations Marwa! That's so amazing! :)

    • @marwakhateeb3721
      @marwakhateeb3721 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@juva hi juva, good morning, could you tell me how i can use (would ) cuz I have heard some people use as(when I was a child i would set with my friend around fire stove ..) even though it is a model verb so is it referring to the past ? How can i use it probably?

    • @juva
      @juva  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@marwakhateeb3721 Good morning Marwa! You're right, people sometimes use 'would' when talking about something they did in the past. You can use it exactly as shown in your example. Hope this helps :)

    • @marwakhateeb3721
      @marwakhateeb3721 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@juva Personally, i see the achievers across the world has what so colled( competitive edge ) they have unfair advantages over us , there are lots of factors that play a big role in their live which lead them to there.
      To me if you were born with silver spoon in your mouth and you had rich perants and you had attended to private high school and you was going to school with cool Richer stuff and you had a wide rang network of people and ones loved and then ,after you had graduated from high school your parents insisted that you should have get into appropriate uni due to your socioeconomic status and you are from upper class ,imagine you have all of these advantages ،how far the validity of your rank is ? In anthor word ,it is that affordable or available to every one of us ?? Intuitionally NO no one of us has every aspect of life fully that is totally normal since we are humans being, we have variances,we don't own the same midest or neither the same thinking nor the same finance affairs that exactly what might create and generate the different types of people in every scale or class or aspect of life or work or even of relationship so we all have a completely different various ability or potential in order to face our issues or dilemmas.
      SOMETIMES i thought i would have the same thing that anyone has own ,for example when i had graduated i did not find neither way to get into uni I didn't know way ,it is because my ability or am i idiot or it is jut like lottery? ! But back in the day i was committed to studying ,i literally was making progress by self i have had intelligent mind but why even though i have had all the mindest ability to complete my path i have not found any solutions for that, well .
      Hi juva ,i miss you so much. Currently i have updates i wanna to catch them up In shorter with you ,i have been reading several books and improving my vocabulary more and more. now when i listen to any video i understand more than 80 % apart from one word or two, you know juva i want to he high score in the toefl Test cuz i feel it is as a big challenge between me and my self , my dream that travel abroad for studying has been ruined . So now i should have to accept my real live and adopt with the idea th a i will never be able to getting into uni at all btw , In your opinion, how do you find my writing recently?

    • @juva
      @juva  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@marwakhateeb3721 Hi Marwa, you are improving so fast, that's amazing! So great that you are reading English books, that's definitely a good idea. Don't give up your dreams, you must believe in yourself, you can do it!