[And then there were none] - A 3rd Life Poem

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  • Like and Subscribe if you liked it. There may be some more Third Life-esque content on the horizon ;) Guys I’m so hyped for season three you have no idea!
    Poem by Omegathekid on Reddit. They let me make art to their amazing comic so send them some love over there!
    If you guys have been following the community posts or our Instagram @tales_of_everen then you’ll have already seen this comic getting released bit by bit. But I still wanted to have the whole comic in one piece somewhere and thought of no better way than to do a dramatic reading of it for a video :)
    Sorry about the picture quality in some of the frames. I had to do some intense zooming to get the frame I wanted. But anyhoo this was a really fun drawing and editing project, where I could try something new. Hope you guys enjoyed!
    Have a good rest of your day!
    ~Katy

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  • @evihippogrief772
    @evihippogrief772 ปีที่แล้ว +288

    "the hand still alive, he follows his king"
    "he fell from the grief, and then there were none"
    My favorite lines

  • @sweetann9338
    @sweetann9338 2 ปีที่แล้ว +389

    “he fell from the grief” I absolutely love this line

  • @KeganLeavess
    @KeganLeavess 2 ปีที่แล้ว +869

    Literal CHILLS from this! Following along with the progress was such an awesome experience, but wow does the recieting of the poem really enhance it. The artwork is so beautiful! It feels very medieval-ish with the way it's outlined, but with a modern twist!

    • @EverenArt
      @EverenArt  2 ปีที่แล้ว +74

      Thank you so much! I totally see the medievalness of it! Didn't think of it that way until now!

    • @danielkaser1408
      @danielkaser1408 2 ปีที่แล้ว +18

      First came the chills, then came the tears... WOW, this is good!

  • @daisyrobinson4326
    @daisyrobinson4326 2 ปีที่แล้ว +613

    🎶 sometimes, when I'm lonely, I sit and think about them, and it hurts to remember the good times 🎶

    • @DawnOfWonder868
      @DawnOfWonder868 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      What song is this?

    • @marcusbeach1762
      @marcusbeach1762 2 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      @@DawnOfWonder868abba - angel eyes

    • @runedoom
      @runedoom ปีที่แล้ว +10

      With scar

    • @its-a-me_Ari
      @its-a-me_Ari ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@DawnOfWonder868 angeleyes by abba. It’s originally on the vouz les vouz album but I think it’s also on more abba gold :)

    • @BrandonCatalano-wq4sm
      @BrandonCatalano-wq4sm ปีที่แล้ว

      Amen

  • @PTUBE101_
    @PTUBE101_ 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +288

    14 little Minecrafters
    Unseen threads connect themselves
    The Canary calls
    His rancher falls
    And then there were 12
    12 little Minecrafters
    A Box of secrets well hidden
    The dog dies
    A Secret Soulmate lies
    And then there were 10
    10 little Minecrafters
    Their odds were almost great
    He fell to the warden
    He fell in the open
    And then there were 8
    8 little Minecrafters
    The ship was a good mix
    It burned
    They burned
    And then there were 6
    6 little Minecrafters
    Homewreckers couldn’t make it anymore
    Found together
    Soloed by the Moon
    And then there were 4
    4 little Minecrafters
    Their intense animosity grew
    Found by the Moon
    The exes were doomed
    And then there were 2
    2 little Minecrafters
    Both filled with shock and stun
    A sacrifice was made
    For a moment there was one
    This 1 little Minecrafter
    The Moon moments from being done
    Repents for her mistakes
    And then there were none

    • @applepieguy6456
      @applepieguy6456 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +19

      I absolutely love this. How long did it take you to make this?

    • @PTUBE101_
      @PTUBE101_ 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +16

      @@applepieguy6456 Not Gonna Lie
      About maybe 10-20 minutes

    • @davidtran9455
      @davidtran9455 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +13

      @@PTUBE101_honestly that’s really impressive. for this quality it would probably take me hours and i still wouldn’t even come close to

    • @YourTypicalHuman
      @YourTypicalHuman 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

      That is AMAZING

    • @PTUBE101_
      @PTUBE101_ 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

      @@davidtran9455 I was basically just brainstorming on the spot LOL
      I also made one for Last Life if you check my other comment on the video Not sure if I’m gonna make one on Limited or Secret Life though🤷‍♂️

  • @dylanwoodcock8620
    @dylanwoodcock8620 2 ปีที่แล้ว +529

    This was wonderful. It was paced slowly but over quickly, it displayed events accurately, the formation of the drawings and how they were presented reminds me of a comic that accurately displays the sessions and events of the series. All of these things correlate into a very good representation in f the 3rd Life series.

    • @EverenArt
      @EverenArt  2 ปีที่แล้ว +25

      Thanks my dude! :)

    • @ShayerSUtsho
      @ShayerSUtsho 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      Could you post a link to the comic you mentioned?

  • @Acerz_JL
    @Acerz_JL 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +18

    “His dogs can’t protect him. Then there were ten”
    OMG Why is it so sad. So good though

  • @shadowdragon2730
    @shadowdragon2730 2 ปีที่แล้ว +145

    I love the Watcher Symbolism with Grian's final departure. Every line was beautiful, the art was great, it was phenomenal!

  • @jacquemat5944
    @jacquemat5944 2 ปีที่แล้ว +116

    This is good I hardly know what to say!
    "He burned like his tree," hit me especially in the feels! Beautiful art, thank you for making it for us!

    • @addy9764
      @addy9764 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Same about the tree!

  • @unavailable_leDog
    @unavailable_leDog 2 ปีที่แล้ว +190

    *I HAVE NO WORDS TO DESCRIBE WHAT IM FEELING AFTER THIS (to good to be true)* D:

  • @th3.f0r3st
    @th3.f0r3st 2 ปีที่แล้ว +26

    I like actually cried what the fuck this hurt so bad I haven’t even watched Ren’s pov yet but the “He followed his king, and then there were five” HURT

  • @poggerlicious
    @poggerlicious 2 ปีที่แล้ว +88

    this hits so hard, i love this poem

  • @floweringmantis198
    @floweringmantis198 2 ปีที่แล้ว +9

    THE FLOWER HUSBANDS ONE BROKE MY HEART-

  • @siriusyo7344
    @siriusyo7344 2 ปีที่แล้ว +82

    This gave me chills, well done!

  • @RubyPiec
    @RubyPiec ปีที่แล้ว +32

    Text version:
    "14 little minecrafters, like you've never seen.
    Two were found in the desert,
    and then there's 13.
    13 little minecrafters, in madness they delve.
    She aims for the kill,
    and then there were 12.
    12 little minecrafters, two now rest in heaven;
    Bloodlust consumes him,
    and then there's 11.
    11 little minecrafters, the last day begins.
    His dogs can't protect him,
    and then there were 10.
    10 little minecrafters, hunting down the line;
    Killed twice, reunited,
    and then there were 9.
    9 little minecrafters, they go over the gate,
    He burns like his tree,
    and then there were 8.
    8 little minecrafters, a kingdom no longer leaven;
    A flipflop of thorns,
    and then there were 7.
    7 little minecrafters, Dogwarts reduced to bricks;
    The king has now fallen,
    and then there were 6.
    6 little minecrafters, the hand still alive,
    He follows his king,
    and then there were 5.
    5 little minecrafters, no longer at war;
    A clock spells betrayal,
    and then there were 4.
    4 little minecrafters, a search for bigb;
    A pass is revoked,
    and then there were 3
    3 little minecrafters, unsure what to do;
    Old loyalty's prevail,
    so then there were 2.
    2 little minecrafters, fend alone in the sun;
    Friendship is broken,
    and then there was 1.
    1 little minecrafter, the day he has won,
    he fell from the grief,
    and then there were none."
    Explanation:
    The first death was SolidarityGaming, him and Grian died during the Battle for Red Desert (although only SolidarityGaming lost his last life)
    The second death was ZombieCleo, who tried to kill Renthedog but failed, as InTheLittleWood and Skizzleman attacked her.
    The third death was Skizzleman, who Leeroy Jenkinsed himself into the Crastle, hoping to get the red winter axe, this obviously went wrong as he died during this, killing nobody.
    The fourth death was Smallishbeans, who had a whole lot of dogs, whom couldn't protect him.
    The fifth death was Smajor1995, who was finally reunited with SolidarityGaming, his husband in 3rd life
    The sixth death was Etho, who burned while fighting impulse in Dogwarts, I don't know anything about his tree though (the one that burned in the village?), I just know it burned and he was mad ever since
    The seventh death was Tango, who just was murdered. Literally nothing else about it.
    The eighth death was Renthedog, who was the king of Dogwarts.
    The ninth death was InTheLittleWood, who was the hand of Renthedog.
    The tenth death was Impulse, who was killed by Bdubs, his ally, after being ordered to do so by GoodTimeWithScar.
    The eleventh death was BigB, who just like Impulse, was killed by Bdubs, their ally, despite having a no kill pass.
    The twelfth death was Bdubs, who was knocked into a pit of water with GoodTimeWithScar, and GoodTimeWithScar finished him off, despite also having a no kill pass.
    The thirteenth death was GoodTimeWithScar, who was eventually killed in a 1v1 fist fight in the desert by Grian, his ally.
    The fourteenth death was Grian, who jumped off Pizza's grave to bring an end to the series.

    • @red5_skywalker
      @red5_skywalker 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

      The 8 little mincrafters section is actually "a flip-flopper falls, and then there were seven."

  • @Ashyiar
    @Ashyiar 2 ปีที่แล้ว +101

    this was really well made! The atmosphere was really well done, as well as the art. Keep up the amazing work!

  • @llamaberry5091
    @llamaberry5091 2 ปีที่แล้ว +29

    Woah the absolute chills the voice acting, the poem with the rhythming, and art, it's so done beautifully. I love how it's slowly counts down the members who died it's so good, fantastic job.
    By the way it the narrator you if so fantastic job!

    • @EverenArt
      @EverenArt  2 ปีที่แล้ว +7

      Yeah it's my (Katy's) voice :) and thank you!

  • @CaptainKillroy
    @CaptainKillroy 2 ปีที่แล้ว +60

    This poem was amazing and the visuals did wonders to help. I really liked it

  • @zyrandomness197
    @zyrandomness197 2 ปีที่แล้ว +19

    I need to go rewatch it because there’s so many awesome animatics and I only half understand them ;-;

  • @zatheraththeiii805
    @zatheraththeiii805 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    why is no one talking about the line "the clock spells betrayal"? ITS SO GOOD

  • @Octopipeline
    @Octopipeline 2 ปีที่แล้ว +10

    This really reminds me of the game What Remain of Edith Finch. It wonderfully captures the sad melancholy of reading stories about the dead.

  • @Just_One_0
    @Just_One_0 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    1. This is a great poem, it perfectly summarises how the end of the series goes while still having a nice touch to it.
    2. Reminds me of the 10 little soldiers poem from "And Then There Were None." Maybe that was the inspiration for this poem?

  • @aquaticalyang483
    @aquaticalyang483 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    14 little minecrafters
    Time grasped through their screen
    The canary will fall
    And then there were 13
    13 little minecrafters
    His hours were shelved
    Gave his team the axe
    And then there were 12
    12 little minecrafters
    Minutes fueled his aggression
    The last looked in shock
    And then there were 11
    11 little minecrafters
    With his family again
    TNT strikes the clock
    And then there were 10
    10 little minecrafters
    A chase caused decline
    The ground caused a fall
    And then there were 9
    9 little minecrafters
    He put trust in his fate
    Backstabbed by the desert
    And then there were 8
    8 little minecrafters
    Another killed in succession
    Her bloodline was out
    And then there were 7
    7 little minecrafters
    Out of enderpearl tricks
    An arrow through his head
    And then there were 6
    6 little minecrafters
    In his stumble he dived
    No more bad remaining
    And then there were 5
    5 little minecrafters
    His fireworks roar
    He fell from the mansion
    And then there were 4
    4 little minecrafters
    Nosy to a degree
    Were soulmates no longer
    And then there were 3
    3 little minecrafters
    And as anger brewed
    A betrayal among teams
    And then there were 2
    2 little minecrafters
    He tried hard to run
    His tie slashed apart
    And then there was 1
    1 little minecrafter
    The countdown had rung
    In eternal void he was watched
    And then there were none

    • @aquaticalyang483
      @aquaticalyang483 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      17 little minecrafters
      Books and quills given are unseen
      Always a loner in the end
      And then there were sixteen
      16 little minecrafters
      A curse was now clean
      Yet the canary now falls second
      And then there were fifteen
      15 little minecrafters
      He had tried to flee
      His fencepost stopped him from escape
      And then there were fourteen
      14 little minecrafters
      Fired up on a planet so green
      A block broke beneath him
      And then there were thirteen
      13 little minecrafters
      Gave hearts and raised health
      A pit dropped his own
      And then there were twelve
      12 little minecrafters
      Had a panicked expression
      Dishwasher out of its misery
      And then there were eleven
      11 little minecrafters
      An enderpearl had been sent
      But eyes of time now mean nothing
      And then there were ten
      Ten little minecrafters
      Rooms mysterious yet divine
      A broken heart now left shattered
      And then there were nine
      9 little minecrafters
      Chose the wrong son to call great
      A fragmented bloodline now in ash
      And the there were eight
      8 little minecrafters
      A tnt filled aggression
      Three against the last roommate
      And then there were seven
      7 little minecrafters
      A bow hidden in bricks
      An arrow impaled his back
      And then there were six
      6 little minecrafters
      His world no longer alive
      A body knocked upside down
      And then there were five
      5 little minecrafters
      Mounds of dirt at the core
      Reduced to gravel and rubble
      And then there were 4
      4 little minecrafters
      Made himself a nominee
      Sacrificed thrice for others
      And then there were three
      3 little minecrafters
      Hearts still remained few
      A band’s last member split up
      And then there were two
      2 little minecrafters
      Through the moon and the sun
      Fell down a ravine
      And then there was one
      1 little minecrafter
      “She’s dead Scar, you won…”
      Succeeded his task
      And then there were none

  • @timwoods2852
    @timwoods2852 2 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    This more serious tone really gives the deaths weight. The 3rd Life series is pure fun and they're all friends, but they are still competing with ench other, and only one can claim victory, but at the cost of those friends no longer being around. It's a cold, hollow, melancholy victory. The fun is done, so why keep playing? Time to end it all and start anew.

  • @TheJadedDragonArts
    @TheJadedDragonArts 2 ปีที่แล้ว +33

    I am at a loss for words...
    That was phenomenal!
    Now ima go cry for a bit, cya.

  • @stuckerfan2563
    @stuckerfan2563 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    For those who don't know this was based a reddit post on r/thirdlifesmp by someone named omegathekid.
    The person already have made multiple poems one for last life and two for double life

  • @Jkimnotlolll
    @Jkimnotlolll ปีที่แล้ว +2

    “the day he has won” was my fav

  • @chris2thejmedia
    @chris2thejmedia ปีที่แล้ว +3

    The 7 to 5, ie the fall of dogwarts, is chilling yet oddly poetic (yes I know it's a poem lol). The hand follows his king, even to the grave

  • @robowyatt398
    @robowyatt398 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    i cant tell if im getting goosebumps because its cold or because of how amazing this is

  • @athyrsonmr
    @athyrsonmr 2 ปีที่แล้ว +9

    This makes me want to rewatch the series.

  • @akitty8481
    @akitty8481 2 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Things like this don’t usually make me sad, but this genuinely almost made me cry.
    Wow.

  • @ThePosionousViper
    @ThePosionousViper ปีที่แล้ว +4

    CHILLS- I just checked, 3rd life was 2 years ago- I REMEMBER IT LIKE YESTERDAY BRO! OML I feel old ;-;

  • @acerniss
    @acerniss 2 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    This is great. I really liked the reference to Agatha Christie’s ‘And Then There Were None’ and how well it works with this!

  • @Void1350
    @Void1350 2 ปีที่แล้ว +17

    wow! the way you presented that made it so much more dramatic than it already was. good job!

  • @sydneydenny7491
    @sydneydenny7491 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    I feel like this piece isn't talked/ loved as much as others, but it should, so much depth in this and it really shows how much death happened and how quickly they all fell.

  • @Lord_Ildra
    @Lord_Ildra 2 ปีที่แล้ว +22

    This was so cool! and i'm glad you decided to read it yourself, you did it really well! and the sound effects were great!

    • @EverenArt
      @EverenArt  2 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      Thanks so much! I was really back and forth on whether I should read it and I had such a good time adding the sound effects!

  • @Estherdavey9
    @Estherdavey9 2 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Literally cried. So powerful, even though it's about a Minecraft smp. Wow.

  • @Piper_Allen
    @Piper_Allen 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    AND TODAYS OSCAR GOES TTTTTOOOOOOOO EVEREN!!!!!!! (and Omegathekid)

  • @ninga3533
    @ninga3533 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    This poem was absolutely amazing I bet if any of the members see it they would love it

  • @FinCrestProductions
    @FinCrestProductions ปีที่แล้ว +2

    ``killed twice then reunited ``WA SO HOLESOME FOR FLOWER HUSBANDS LOVE IT

  • @janestorm5737
    @janestorm5737 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    i fall asleep to this, but wake up with nightmares... i love it..

  • @PTUBE101_
    @PTUBE101_ 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    14 little Minecrafters
    24 hours, all green
    The Bad Boy fails
    The Curse prevails
    And then there’s 13
    13 little Minecrafters
    The T.I.E.S. enjoyed themselves
    Then the S. made a sacrifice
    And then there were 12
    12 little Minecrafters
    Another Bad Boy no longer livin’
    With that, the Nose grows
    And then there’s 11
    11 little Minecrafters
    He was fighting for his family and friends
    Blown up by the i.
    And then there were 10
    10 little Minecrafters
    The T. had his life on the line
    He tripped, ran out of time
    And then there were 9
    9 little Minecrafters
    His mom was too late
    Witnessed the death of her son
    And then there were 8
    8 little Minecrafters
    Mom tried to stay livin’
    She joined her 2 sons
    And then there were 7
    7 little Minecrafters
    A neighbor trapped in the mix
    Shot in the chaos
    And then there were 6
    6 little Minecrafters
    The now neighborly Bad Boy made friends to survive
    He slipped off his own creation
    And then there were 5
    5 little Minecrafters
    The E. fought for more
    Engaged in battle, fell to the Gills
    And then there were 4
    4 little Minecrafters
    Wanting to win for BigB
    She tries to kill the Gill
    And then there were 3
    3 little Minecrafters
    A final fight with few
    A betrayal took place
    The i. saw his face
    And then there were… 1?
    1 little Minecrafter
    A outcome of shock and stun
    Time ticked down
    And then there were finally none

    • @piratecharzilla5900
      @piratecharzilla5900 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      This is so good

    • @Acerz_JL
      @Acerz_JL 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Amazing. This is amazing

    • @PTUBE101_
      @PTUBE101_ 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      @@Acerz_JL My favorite part is using the abbreviation letters for Team T.i.E.S and especially the lowercase i. for impulse

  • @LilDevyl17
    @LilDevyl17 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    How many talented people does this Community have? To be able to draw so well, and then to come up with a poem like that? DUDE! All of you Guys, Gals, Demons, Ghouls, and Multi-Fandom Fiends never cease to amaze and impress me! Keep Up the Good Work!

  • @littlelucas553
    @littlelucas553 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    This is the darkest yet coolest minecraft poem I have ever heard

  • @StarAxolotl
    @StarAxolotl 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    I wish I could like videos more than once. Every time I see this-

  • @pancake21709
    @pancake21709 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    It is illegal that this wonderful poem is not more popular this was so good

  • @Angelo609
    @Angelo609 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    For those curious, the original poem “The Little Soldier Boys” is by Frank Green and is a great poem. Gives me chills anytime I read it. Lovely adaptation of the work, love the art style and the poem’s theme suits the series so well!

  • @creastalunga7199
    @creastalunga7199 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    this is the most underated thing in the universe

  • @DawnOfWonder868
    @DawnOfWonder868 2 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    Oh my gosh I loved it!!! I was expecting a big timelapse of working on it and was very pleasantly surprised by this!

  • @2placename
    @2placename 2 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    Reading it myself was great but the voice over makes it 100 times better

  • @Godzilllayscool
    @Godzilllayscool ปีที่แล้ว +4

    The 3rd line made me tesr up.its so sad to hear thst
    *His dogs cant protect him*

  • @ambermeredith112
    @ambermeredith112 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    WHAT! that is so cool! I love how you can turn something as simple as third life into something as sad, and as beautiful as this. Well done Everen, well done. =D

  • @scaringthecrow
    @scaringthecrow ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Crazy how this and your DL Running up that hill videos have become two of my favorite comfort videos.

  • @Expriexp
    @Expriexp ปีที่แล้ว +2

    not me crying at the dogwarts part 😢 i love their duo ❤

  • @dragonartz3207
    @dragonartz3207 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    This was SO COOL!
    My favorite line was probably when etho died.

  • @flower7747
    @flower7747 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    This is so dark I love it
    I feel like it sums up what happened very well and very ominously while leaving enough out to make you want to watch the series to get all the details and names

  • @ShayerSUtsho
    @ShayerSUtsho 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    The dread in the music, the wisdom of disaster in the voice, and the chaos and emotions in the art style... This is soooo good!

  • @bluelightning2681
    @bluelightning2681 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    This was amazing ! the only thing i didn't understand was why Grian is depicted as slipping of the edge in stead of a clear will of jumping.
    But overall it's still great !

  • @ak6ll
    @ak6ll ปีที่แล้ว +1

    How does this not have more views, incredible. Got the same chills as if it were Dan Stevens narrating this one

  • @einhornsarah8
    @einhornsarah8 6 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Watched it again right now, and still got goosebumps, I love your works

  • @lisa_wistfulone7957
    @lisa_wistfulone7957 2 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    Ohhh. Oh My.
    The art, the solemnity, the music and effects…. A Beautifully composed and Poignant piece designed to break us…. I Love It!💔💖

  • @bobvelwest
    @bobvelwest 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    thia is really cool. makes me wish I had watched third life more recently and could remember it better but about halfway through I started getting it better.

  • @Ghostpepper.creates
    @Ghostpepper.creates 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    I love how the watcher lore sews into this❤

  • @emberhawk14
    @emberhawk14 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    This was beautiful, gave me chills

  • @LilyTheSmol
    @LilyTheSmol 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Fuck, And Then There Were None is legit my fav book so this is awesome

  • @Cindersss24
    @Cindersss24 หลายเดือนก่อน

    How? Just how do you do it? This was so magical, and enchanting. I cried. It's insane!

  • @chloebees-
    @chloebees- 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    2:42 THE EVO SERVER SYMBOL THINGY AHHH I LOVE THIS

  • @avux_
    @avux_ 2 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    OH WOW! This was so good! Love the art, and the poem was so good.

  • @zandertroidl698
    @zandertroidl698 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I have watched this over 100 times I am being serious

  • @luminoustarisma
    @luminoustarisma ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Oooh, this tickles my Agatha Christie chills so much

  • @littlewrengaming
    @littlewrengaming 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    CHILLS. This is absolutely amazing! Great job both of you!!!

  • @mako_1135
    @mako_1135 2 ปีที่แล้ว +13

    Wow- that's litterally all I can say just WOW. I personally struggle with any sort of poem and this- well this is simply a masterpiece! As soon as I finished I actually was like "Welp, time to make several accounts and watch, like and subscribe multiple times!" Sadly I do not know how to make multiple accounts. But if I could I would! I applaud you. This was beautiful!

  • @sydnamon5986
    @sydnamon5986 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Someone get this to Marty’s and Jimmy ASAP

  • @MistressHela
    @MistressHela 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    This is incredible! I have literal chills

  • @violent-backed-starling
    @violent-backed-starling 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    this is absolutely brilliant!

  • @mr_lemonade4230
    @mr_lemonade4230 2 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    Well done!

  • @Real21Gamer
    @Real21Gamer 2 ปีที่แล้ว +49

    Are you planning to do one for Last Life as well? Because this here was amazing!

    • @stuckerfan2563
      @stuckerfan2563 2 ปีที่แล้ว +7

      She wasn't the original creator.This was creates by someone in reddit named omega the kid.And this wasn't the only poem he did.He also made one for last and double life

    • @JohnGisMe
      @JohnGisMe 2 ปีที่แล้ว +30

      Here was last life:
      Seventeen Little Minecrafters, Days before Halloween.
      He’s out first again? And then there’s sixteen.
      Sixteen Little Minecrafters, Crystals so pristine.
      But plans will backfire, and then there’s fifteen.
      Fifteen Little Minecrafters, Things are getting mean.
      The BEST leader has fallen, and then there’s fourteen.
      Fourteen Little Minecrafters, The Wither is now seen.
      But the reds fail to flee, and then there’s thirteen.
      Thirteen Little Minecrafters, Red grudges they shelve.
      She thought she was safe, but then there were twelve.
      Twelve Little Minecrafters, A deal promised salvation.
      Hopes to be reunited, but then there’s eleven.
      Eleven Little Minecrafters, All desperate to win.
      The Trap Master faced disaster, and then there were ten.
      Ten Little Minecrafters, He once crossed the line.
      But revenge has been had! And then there were nine
      Nine Little Minecrafters, The magic came too late.
      The crystals have failed him, and then there were eight
      Eight Little Minecrafters, She used her aggression.
      Revenge’s fire goes out, and then there were seven.
      Seven Little Minecrafters, The clock further ticks.
      The old victor has fallen, and then there were six.
      Six Little Minecrafters, They all once did thrive.
      He refound his little friend, and then there were five.
      Five Little Minecrafters, The first Red, fought the war.
      Now he’s finally gone, and then there were four.
      Four Little Minecrafters, Already down one G.
      Girlboss follows Gaslight, and then there were three.
      Three Little Minecrafters, Friendships no longer true.
      Consumed by his master, and then there were two.
      Two Little Minecrafters, The shadow or the sun?
      Is it the Hound, or Gatekeep? And then there was one.
      One Little Minecrafter, The Light shines, the day won.
      His friends lost behind him, and then there were none.

    • @JohnGisMe
      @JohnGisMe 2 ปีที่แล้ว +29

      Here was double life:
      Seven Pairs of Minecrafters, See them match and mix, The Canary goes silent, and then there were six.
      Six Pairs of Minecrafters, For survival they strive, The box falls on its father, and then there were five.
      Five Pairs of Minecrafters, In the dark they explore, The Desert falls again, and then there were four.
      Four Pairs of Minecrafters, Red is all they see, The ship burns, they burn, and then there were three.
      Three Pairs of Minecrafters, The divorcees hold true, The Homewreckers get wrecked, and then there were two.
      Two Pairs of Minecrafters, All of them on the run, The Witch claims her last victim, and then there was one.
      Two Little Minecrafters, Light's anger is done, He asks for forgiveness, and then there was one.
      One Little Minecrafter, Her curse is overcome, She finds herself peace, and then there were none.

    • @natorgator4969
      @natorgator4969 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@JohnGisMe Has he done Limited Life yet?

    • @JohnGisMe
      @JohnGisMe ปีที่แล้ว +14

      @@natorgator4969
      14 hours on the clock, Time ticks away from green,
      The Canary falls as it always does, and then there were thirteen
      13 hours on the clock, His kindness was his wealth,
      But he lacks the skill to reach the end, and then there were twelve
      12 hours on the clock, A bird’s fall leaves the them weakened,
      Three Boys to two, and then to one, and then there were eleven
      11 hours on the clock, The beginning of the end,
      The original Clocker’s time runs out, and then there were ten
      10 hours on the clock, Watch the TIE fall and unwind,
      He falls in pursuit of a lone brother, and then there were nine
      9 hours on the clock, They all crack beneath the weight,
      The lone brother falls to a desert backstab, and then were eight
      8 hours on the clock, Revenge is her best weapon,
      And soon she’ll see her sons again, so then there were seven
      7 hours on the clock, With each death the clock will tick,
      A nosy neighbor’s leapfrog fails, and then there were six
      6 hours on the clock, At the end they’ll soon arrive,
      A gifted sword cannot save him, and then there were five
      5 hours on the clock, And a family he tried to ignore,
      Without their warmth he dies alone, and then there were four
      4 hours on the clock, Victory is no guarantee,
      A soulmate slays a long gone friend, and then there were three
      3 hours on the clock, A duel promised, brave and true,
      But the lines are gone, he seeks an end, and then there were two
      2 hours on the clock, No more hiding, nowhere to run,
      The Shadow’s Hand grips ever tighter, and then there was one
      1 hour on the clock, The Hand has sees the weave they’ve spun,
      There are those who watch, and those who listen, and then there were none

  • @carterlove7293
    @carterlove7293 ปีที่แล้ว

    The fact that you can take the phrase "little minecrafters" and make it eerie,,, props to you.

  • @craz2580
    @craz2580 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Ah... Ahm... Wow... Considering how much Life series fan content i have consumed since the start of the series i am so surprised i never saw this one

  • @GoingSwimmingly
    @GoingSwimmingly 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    YOOO that’s just so grim and epic???? And the reading helps it so so much as well!

  • @buzemihai7372
    @buzemihai7372 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Just... EPIC.... first time commenting in years on a video... it gave me some Game of Thrones vibes ....AWESOME!!!

  • @StarAxolotl
    @StarAxolotl 7 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    ... That was incredible...

  • @Azerick_
    @Azerick_ 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    This...this is incredible!
    I haven't even finished the video yet, still only at 30 seconds in and I have to stop and write a comment.
    The style of the poem, the stark visuals, the way the poem is presented, the background music, all of it combines to form one of the best, in my opinion, pieces of artwork in the 3rd Life fandom!
    Edit: crying over Scott rn, brb

  • @HyloRxse
    @HyloRxse 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Ooooo this is so good! It's haunting.

  • @kayserivt
    @kayserivt 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    “Hunted, then reunited”
    “Then there are 9”
    Me: NOOOO MY HEARTTTT

  • @Veevanilla2134
    @Veevanilla2134 11 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    I LOVE THIS I WATCHED TO POINT OF MEMORIZATION AT THIS POINT PLZ MAKE MORE

  • @Savannah_831
    @Savannah_831 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I saw this poem on reddit a while ago, im glad that there is an animation to go along with it now!

  • @tommyconrad5305
    @tommyconrad5305 ปีที่แล้ว

    BRO CHILLS LITERAL CHILLS

  • @Tempofloww
    @Tempofloww ปีที่แล้ว

    This is the first time that i like a poem

  • @samuelgarcia32312
    @samuelgarcia32312 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Ok I've read a few dark poems but this takes it

  • @dawnbelleini8036
    @dawnbelleini8036 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    eeeeeee this is so good

  • @ryancampbell4456
    @ryancampbell4456 ปีที่แล้ว

    I am blown away. The writing, the voice and the artwork were all incredible. I love the Life Series and everything about this video was absolutely incredible. what a beautiful sum up of the first season.

  • @imjang2430
    @imjang2430 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    This is so good! I want to see one for each season, now!

  • @dragongal9714
    @dragongal9714 ปีที่แล้ว

    Last year my highschool put on the play and then there were none. Basically it's a murder mystery that follows a poem with a similar name. This was really cool!

  • @gabrielleandsamuel4073
    @gabrielleandsamuel4073 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Wasn’t sure what to expect. Since I’m not really a poetry person, I wasn’t sure if I would like it, but you won me over! This is great!

  • @Bodewastaken
    @Bodewastaken 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Bro this is so good it sounds like it was made from a well known poet

  • @Horridcupid
    @Horridcupid 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I have no word for how amazing this is

  • @Aqua._.
    @Aqua._. 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    THIS IS 2 YEARS OLD ALREADY?

  • @Aureus_Snow
    @Aureus_Snow 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    17 little minecrafters
    A story yet untold
    But one little minecrafter
    Lost her life to the void
    16 little minecrafters
    A shriek is all it takes
    For the little canary
    To hit on the brakes
    15 little minecrafters
    A warden takes more then 1
    The ones that watch smile
    The deaths have only just begun
    14 little minecrafters
    One good time is all it takes
    For the villain
    to douse his flames
    13 little minecrafters
    Something so small
    Yet with a sword
    Stabbed through the heart
    Open deaths door
    12 little minecrafters
    Scars on his face
    Didn't save him
    From meeting the 14's fate
    11 little minecrafters
    The sun shines too bright
    Icarus falls
    By shining light
    10 litle minecrafters
    Slayed by the blessed
    Atleast for now
    He's layed to rest
    9 little minecrafters
    Going 3 for 3
    The good times slayed again
    Watched near the willow tree
    8 little minecrafters
    Then the sun falls
    As icarus came too close
    Forgot to build up his wall's
    7 little minecrafters
    Inpulsiveness alive
    Killed by the wind
    Or was it the tide
    6 little mincrafters
    Remain alive
    Double the B's
    Killed by the widow's pride
    Until there were only 5
    5 little minecrafters
    Small side by side
    Beans take the pride
    Gay come inside
    4 little minecrafters
    A long game
    Comes to an end
    Killed by a potential ally
    Killed by a friend
    3 little minecrafters
    4 kills into one game
    Everyone that dies
    Ends up in the same place
    2 little mincrafters
    A chase that ensues
    Dead before it's realised
    He thought he would lose
    1 little minecrafter
    Left all on his own
    The same task over and over
    When does he go home...

    • @romanneonick2449
      @romanneonick2449 3 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Wow good job! Can you please explain your poem?

    • @Aureus_Snow
      @Aureus_Snow 3 วันที่ผ่านมา

      @@romanneonick2449 It's about secret life.
      Lizzie fell in the void
      Jimmy was killed by a Warden
      And so on.
      There's also a small reference to the Watchers.
      People referenced are
      Canary = Jimmy (Canarycurse)
      Villain = Scar
      Icarus = Martyn (Killed by Grian AKA the Icaruscurse)
      The blessed = Scott (Ally blessing)
      The sun = Grian (Icaruscurse)
      Widow = Scott once again (Widow curse)

  • @teddykatdurpstepper
    @teddykatdurpstepper 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Omg, you wanna know how good your poem is? With each verse I could name who was killed off as the number counted down.
    WELL DONE