[And then there were none] - A 3rd Life Poem
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Poem by Omegathekid on Reddit. They let me make art to their amazing comic so send them some love over there!
If you guys have been following the community posts or our Instagram @tales_of_everen then you’ll have already seen this comic getting released bit by bit. But I still wanted to have the whole comic in one piece somewhere and thought of no better way than to do a dramatic reading of it for a video :)
Sorry about the picture quality in some of the frames. I had to do some intense zooming to get the frame I wanted. But anyhoo this was a really fun drawing and editing project, where I could try something new. Hope you guys enjoyed!
Have a good rest of your day!
~Katy
"the hand still alive, he follows his king"
"he fell from the grief, and then there were none"
My favorite lines
those are ma fav to XD
“he fell from the grief” I absolutely love this line
Literal CHILLS from this! Following along with the progress was such an awesome experience, but wow does the recieting of the poem really enhance it. The artwork is so beautiful! It feels very medieval-ish with the way it's outlined, but with a modern twist!
Thank you so much! I totally see the medievalness of it! Didn't think of it that way until now!
First came the chills, then came the tears... WOW, this is good!
🎶 sometimes, when I'm lonely, I sit and think about them, and it hurts to remember the good times 🎶
What song is this?
@@DawnOfWonder868abba - angel eyes
With scar
@@DawnOfWonder868 angeleyes by abba. It’s originally on the vouz les vouz album but I think it’s also on more abba gold :)
Amen
14 little Minecrafters
Unseen threads connect themselves
The Canary calls
His rancher falls
And then there were 12
12 little Minecrafters
A Box of secrets well hidden
The dog dies
A Secret Soulmate lies
And then there were 10
10 little Minecrafters
Their odds were almost great
He fell to the warden
He fell in the open
And then there were 8
8 little Minecrafters
The ship was a good mix
It burned
They burned
And then there were 6
6 little Minecrafters
Homewreckers couldn’t make it anymore
Found together
Soloed by the Moon
And then there were 4
4 little Minecrafters
Their intense animosity grew
Found by the Moon
The exes were doomed
And then there were 2
2 little Minecrafters
Both filled with shock and stun
A sacrifice was made
For a moment there was one
This 1 little Minecrafter
The Moon moments from being done
Repents for her mistakes
And then there were none
I absolutely love this. How long did it take you to make this?
@@applepieguy6456 Not Gonna Lie
About maybe 10-20 minutes
@@PTUBE101_honestly that’s really impressive. for this quality it would probably take me hours and i still wouldn’t even come close to
That is AMAZING
@@davidtran9455 I was basically just brainstorming on the spot LOL
I also made one for Last Life if you check my other comment on the video Not sure if I’m gonna make one on Limited or Secret Life though🤷♂️
This was wonderful. It was paced slowly but over quickly, it displayed events accurately, the formation of the drawings and how they were presented reminds me of a comic that accurately displays the sessions and events of the series. All of these things correlate into a very good representation in f the 3rd Life series.
Thanks my dude! :)
Could you post a link to the comic you mentioned?
“His dogs can’t protect him. Then there were ten”
OMG Why is it so sad. So good though
I love the Watcher Symbolism with Grian's final departure. Every line was beautiful, the art was great, it was phenomenal!
This is good I hardly know what to say!
"He burned like his tree," hit me especially in the feels! Beautiful art, thank you for making it for us!
Same about the tree!
*I HAVE NO WORDS TO DESCRIBE WHAT IM FEELING AFTER THIS (to good to be true)* D:
I like actually cried what the fuck this hurt so bad I haven’t even watched Ren’s pov yet but the “He followed his king, and then there were five” HURT
this hits so hard, i love this poem
THE FLOWER HUSBANDS ONE BROKE MY HEART-
This gave me chills, well done!
Text version:
"14 little minecrafters, like you've never seen.
Two were found in the desert,
and then there's 13.
13 little minecrafters, in madness they delve.
She aims for the kill,
and then there were 12.
12 little minecrafters, two now rest in heaven;
Bloodlust consumes him,
and then there's 11.
11 little minecrafters, the last day begins.
His dogs can't protect him,
and then there were 10.
10 little minecrafters, hunting down the line;
Killed twice, reunited,
and then there were 9.
9 little minecrafters, they go over the gate,
He burns like his tree,
and then there were 8.
8 little minecrafters, a kingdom no longer leaven;
A flipflop of thorns,
and then there were 7.
7 little minecrafters, Dogwarts reduced to bricks;
The king has now fallen,
and then there were 6.
6 little minecrafters, the hand still alive,
He follows his king,
and then there were 5.
5 little minecrafters, no longer at war;
A clock spells betrayal,
and then there were 4.
4 little minecrafters, a search for bigb;
A pass is revoked,
and then there were 3
3 little minecrafters, unsure what to do;
Old loyalty's prevail,
so then there were 2.
2 little minecrafters, fend alone in the sun;
Friendship is broken,
and then there was 1.
1 little minecrafter, the day he has won,
he fell from the grief,
and then there were none."
Explanation:
The first death was SolidarityGaming, him and Grian died during the Battle for Red Desert (although only SolidarityGaming lost his last life)
The second death was ZombieCleo, who tried to kill Renthedog but failed, as InTheLittleWood and Skizzleman attacked her.
The third death was Skizzleman, who Leeroy Jenkinsed himself into the Crastle, hoping to get the red winter axe, this obviously went wrong as he died during this, killing nobody.
The fourth death was Smallishbeans, who had a whole lot of dogs, whom couldn't protect him.
The fifth death was Smajor1995, who was finally reunited with SolidarityGaming, his husband in 3rd life
The sixth death was Etho, who burned while fighting impulse in Dogwarts, I don't know anything about his tree though (the one that burned in the village?), I just know it burned and he was mad ever since
The seventh death was Tango, who just was murdered. Literally nothing else about it.
The eighth death was Renthedog, who was the king of Dogwarts.
The ninth death was InTheLittleWood, who was the hand of Renthedog.
The tenth death was Impulse, who was killed by Bdubs, his ally, after being ordered to do so by GoodTimeWithScar.
The eleventh death was BigB, who just like Impulse, was killed by Bdubs, their ally, despite having a no kill pass.
The twelfth death was Bdubs, who was knocked into a pit of water with GoodTimeWithScar, and GoodTimeWithScar finished him off, despite also having a no kill pass.
The thirteenth death was GoodTimeWithScar, who was eventually killed in a 1v1 fist fight in the desert by Grian, his ally.
The fourteenth death was Grian, who jumped off Pizza's grave to bring an end to the series.
The 8 little mincrafters section is actually "a flip-flopper falls, and then there were seven."
this was really well made! The atmosphere was really well done, as well as the art. Keep up the amazing work!
Woah the absolute chills the voice acting, the poem with the rhythming, and art, it's so done beautifully. I love how it's slowly counts down the members who died it's so good, fantastic job.
By the way it the narrator you if so fantastic job!
Yeah it's my (Katy's) voice :) and thank you!
This poem was amazing and the visuals did wonders to help. I really liked it
I need to go rewatch it because there’s so many awesome animatics and I only half understand them ;-;
why is no one talking about the line "the clock spells betrayal"? ITS SO GOOD
This really reminds me of the game What Remain of Edith Finch. It wonderfully captures the sad melancholy of reading stories about the dead.
1. This is a great poem, it perfectly summarises how the end of the series goes while still having a nice touch to it.
2. Reminds me of the 10 little soldiers poem from "And Then There Were None." Maybe that was the inspiration for this poem?
14 little minecrafters
Time grasped through their screen
The canary will fall
And then there were 13
13 little minecrafters
His hours were shelved
Gave his team the axe
And then there were 12
12 little minecrafters
Minutes fueled his aggression
The last looked in shock
And then there were 11
11 little minecrafters
With his family again
TNT strikes the clock
And then there were 10
10 little minecrafters
A chase caused decline
The ground caused a fall
And then there were 9
9 little minecrafters
He put trust in his fate
Backstabbed by the desert
And then there were 8
8 little minecrafters
Another killed in succession
Her bloodline was out
And then there were 7
7 little minecrafters
Out of enderpearl tricks
An arrow through his head
And then there were 6
6 little minecrafters
In his stumble he dived
No more bad remaining
And then there were 5
5 little minecrafters
His fireworks roar
He fell from the mansion
And then there were 4
4 little minecrafters
Nosy to a degree
Were soulmates no longer
And then there were 3
3 little minecrafters
And as anger brewed
A betrayal among teams
And then there were 2
2 little minecrafters
He tried hard to run
His tie slashed apart
And then there was 1
1 little minecrafter
The countdown had rung
In eternal void he was watched
And then there were none
17 little minecrafters
Books and quills given are unseen
Always a loner in the end
And then there were sixteen
16 little minecrafters
A curse was now clean
Yet the canary now falls second
And then there were fifteen
15 little minecrafters
He had tried to flee
His fencepost stopped him from escape
And then there were fourteen
14 little minecrafters
Fired up on a planet so green
A block broke beneath him
And then there were thirteen
13 little minecrafters
Gave hearts and raised health
A pit dropped his own
And then there were twelve
12 little minecrafters
Had a panicked expression
Dishwasher out of its misery
And then there were eleven
11 little minecrafters
An enderpearl had been sent
But eyes of time now mean nothing
And then there were ten
Ten little minecrafters
Rooms mysterious yet divine
A broken heart now left shattered
And then there were nine
9 little minecrafters
Chose the wrong son to call great
A fragmented bloodline now in ash
And the there were eight
8 little minecrafters
A tnt filled aggression
Three against the last roommate
And then there were seven
7 little minecrafters
A bow hidden in bricks
An arrow impaled his back
And then there were six
6 little minecrafters
His world no longer alive
A body knocked upside down
And then there were five
5 little minecrafters
Mounds of dirt at the core
Reduced to gravel and rubble
And then there were 4
4 little minecrafters
Made himself a nominee
Sacrificed thrice for others
And then there were three
3 little minecrafters
Hearts still remained few
A band’s last member split up
And then there were two
2 little minecrafters
Through the moon and the sun
Fell down a ravine
And then there was one
1 little minecrafter
“She’s dead Scar, you won…”
Succeeded his task
And then there were none
This more serious tone really gives the deaths weight. The 3rd Life series is pure fun and they're all friends, but they are still competing with ench other, and only one can claim victory, but at the cost of those friends no longer being around. It's a cold, hollow, melancholy victory. The fun is done, so why keep playing? Time to end it all and start anew.
I am at a loss for words...
That was phenomenal!
Now ima go cry for a bit, cya.
For those who don't know this was based a reddit post on r/thirdlifesmp by someone named omegathekid.
The person already have made multiple poems one for last life and two for double life
“the day he has won” was my fav
The 7 to 5, ie the fall of dogwarts, is chilling yet oddly poetic (yes I know it's a poem lol). The hand follows his king, even to the grave
i cant tell if im getting goosebumps because its cold or because of how amazing this is
This makes me want to rewatch the series.
Things like this don’t usually make me sad, but this genuinely almost made me cry.
Wow.
CHILLS- I just checked, 3rd life was 2 years ago- I REMEMBER IT LIKE YESTERDAY BRO! OML I feel old ;-;
This is great. I really liked the reference to Agatha Christie’s ‘And Then There Were None’ and how well it works with this!
wow! the way you presented that made it so much more dramatic than it already was. good job!
I feel like this piece isn't talked/ loved as much as others, but it should, so much depth in this and it really shows how much death happened and how quickly they all fell.
This was so cool! and i'm glad you decided to read it yourself, you did it really well! and the sound effects were great!
Thanks so much! I was really back and forth on whether I should read it and I had such a good time adding the sound effects!
Literally cried. So powerful, even though it's about a Minecraft smp. Wow.
AND TODAYS OSCAR GOES TTTTTOOOOOOOO EVEREN!!!!!!! (and Omegathekid)
This poem was absolutely amazing I bet if any of the members see it they would love it
``killed twice then reunited ``WA SO HOLESOME FOR FLOWER HUSBANDS LOVE IT
i fall asleep to this, but wake up with nightmares... i love it..
14 little Minecrafters
24 hours, all green
The Bad Boy fails
The Curse prevails
And then there’s 13
13 little Minecrafters
The T.I.E.S. enjoyed themselves
Then the S. made a sacrifice
And then there were 12
12 little Minecrafters
Another Bad Boy no longer livin’
With that, the Nose grows
And then there’s 11
11 little Minecrafters
He was fighting for his family and friends
Blown up by the i.
And then there were 10
10 little Minecrafters
The T. had his life on the line
He tripped, ran out of time
And then there were 9
9 little Minecrafters
His mom was too late
Witnessed the death of her son
And then there were 8
8 little Minecrafters
Mom tried to stay livin’
She joined her 2 sons
And then there were 7
7 little Minecrafters
A neighbor trapped in the mix
Shot in the chaos
And then there were 6
6 little Minecrafters
The now neighborly Bad Boy made friends to survive
He slipped off his own creation
And then there were 5
5 little Minecrafters
The E. fought for more
Engaged in battle, fell to the Gills
And then there were 4
4 little Minecrafters
Wanting to win for BigB
She tries to kill the Gill
And then there were 3
3 little Minecrafters
A final fight with few
A betrayal took place
The i. saw his face
And then there were… 1?
1 little Minecrafter
A outcome of shock and stun
Time ticked down
And then there were finally none
This is so good
Amazing. This is amazing
@@Acerz_JL My favorite part is using the abbreviation letters for Team T.i.E.S and especially the lowercase i. for impulse
How many talented people does this Community have? To be able to draw so well, and then to come up with a poem like that? DUDE! All of you Guys, Gals, Demons, Ghouls, and Multi-Fandom Fiends never cease to amaze and impress me! Keep Up the Good Work!
This is the darkest yet coolest minecraft poem I have ever heard
I wish I could like videos more than once. Every time I see this-
It is illegal that this wonderful poem is not more popular this was so good
For those curious, the original poem “The Little Soldier Boys” is by Frank Green and is a great poem. Gives me chills anytime I read it. Lovely adaptation of the work, love the art style and the poem’s theme suits the series so well!
this is the most underated thing in the universe
Oh my gosh I loved it!!! I was expecting a big timelapse of working on it and was very pleasantly surprised by this!
Reading it myself was great but the voice over makes it 100 times better
The 3rd line made me tesr up.its so sad to hear thst
*His dogs cant protect him*
WHAT! that is so cool! I love how you can turn something as simple as third life into something as sad, and as beautiful as this. Well done Everen, well done. =D
Crazy how this and your DL Running up that hill videos have become two of my favorite comfort videos.
not me crying at the dogwarts part 😢 i love their duo ❤
This was SO COOL!
My favorite line was probably when etho died.
This is so dark I love it
I feel like it sums up what happened very well and very ominously while leaving enough out to make you want to watch the series to get all the details and names
The dread in the music, the wisdom of disaster in the voice, and the chaos and emotions in the art style... This is soooo good!
This was amazing ! the only thing i didn't understand was why Grian is depicted as slipping of the edge in stead of a clear will of jumping.
But overall it's still great !
How does this not have more views, incredible. Got the same chills as if it were Dan Stevens narrating this one
Watched it again right now, and still got goosebumps, I love your works
Ohhh. Oh My.
The art, the solemnity, the music and effects…. A Beautifully composed and Poignant piece designed to break us…. I Love It!💔💖
thia is really cool. makes me wish I had watched third life more recently and could remember it better but about halfway through I started getting it better.
I love how the watcher lore sews into this❤
This was beautiful, gave me chills
Fuck, And Then There Were None is legit my fav book so this is awesome
How? Just how do you do it? This was so magical, and enchanting. I cried. It's insane!
2:42 THE EVO SERVER SYMBOL THINGY AHHH I LOVE THIS
OH WOW! This was so good! Love the art, and the poem was so good.
I have watched this over 100 times I am being serious
Oooh, this tickles my Agatha Christie chills so much
CHILLS. This is absolutely amazing! Great job both of you!!!
Wow- that's litterally all I can say just WOW. I personally struggle with any sort of poem and this- well this is simply a masterpiece! As soon as I finished I actually was like "Welp, time to make several accounts and watch, like and subscribe multiple times!" Sadly I do not know how to make multiple accounts. But if I could I would! I applaud you. This was beautiful!
Someone get this to Marty’s and Jimmy ASAP
This is incredible! I have literal chills
this is absolutely brilliant!
Well done!
Are you planning to do one for Last Life as well? Because this here was amazing!
She wasn't the original creator.This was creates by someone in reddit named omega the kid.And this wasn't the only poem he did.He also made one for last and double life
Here was last life:
Seventeen Little Minecrafters, Days before Halloween.
He’s out first again? And then there’s sixteen.
Sixteen Little Minecrafters, Crystals so pristine.
But plans will backfire, and then there’s fifteen.
Fifteen Little Minecrafters, Things are getting mean.
The BEST leader has fallen, and then there’s fourteen.
Fourteen Little Minecrafters, The Wither is now seen.
But the reds fail to flee, and then there’s thirteen.
Thirteen Little Minecrafters, Red grudges they shelve.
She thought she was safe, but then there were twelve.
Twelve Little Minecrafters, A deal promised salvation.
Hopes to be reunited, but then there’s eleven.
Eleven Little Minecrafters, All desperate to win.
The Trap Master faced disaster, and then there were ten.
Ten Little Minecrafters, He once crossed the line.
But revenge has been had! And then there were nine
Nine Little Minecrafters, The magic came too late.
The crystals have failed him, and then there were eight
Eight Little Minecrafters, She used her aggression.
Revenge’s fire goes out, and then there were seven.
Seven Little Minecrafters, The clock further ticks.
The old victor has fallen, and then there were six.
Six Little Minecrafters, They all once did thrive.
He refound his little friend, and then there were five.
Five Little Minecrafters, The first Red, fought the war.
Now he’s finally gone, and then there were four.
Four Little Minecrafters, Already down one G.
Girlboss follows Gaslight, and then there were three.
Three Little Minecrafters, Friendships no longer true.
Consumed by his master, and then there were two.
Two Little Minecrafters, The shadow or the sun?
Is it the Hound, or Gatekeep? And then there was one.
One Little Minecrafter, The Light shines, the day won.
His friends lost behind him, and then there were none.
Here was double life:
Seven Pairs of Minecrafters, See them match and mix, The Canary goes silent, and then there were six.
Six Pairs of Minecrafters, For survival they strive, The box falls on its father, and then there were five.
Five Pairs of Minecrafters, In the dark they explore, The Desert falls again, and then there were four.
Four Pairs of Minecrafters, Red is all they see, The ship burns, they burn, and then there were three.
Three Pairs of Minecrafters, The divorcees hold true, The Homewreckers get wrecked, and then there were two.
Two Pairs of Minecrafters, All of them on the run, The Witch claims her last victim, and then there was one.
Two Little Minecrafters, Light's anger is done, He asks for forgiveness, and then there was one.
One Little Minecrafter, Her curse is overcome, She finds herself peace, and then there were none.
@@JohnGisMe Has he done Limited Life yet?
@@natorgator4969
14 hours on the clock, Time ticks away from green,
The Canary falls as it always does, and then there were thirteen
13 hours on the clock, His kindness was his wealth,
But he lacks the skill to reach the end, and then there were twelve
12 hours on the clock, A bird’s fall leaves the them weakened,
Three Boys to two, and then to one, and then there were eleven
11 hours on the clock, The beginning of the end,
The original Clocker’s time runs out, and then there were ten
10 hours on the clock, Watch the TIE fall and unwind,
He falls in pursuit of a lone brother, and then there were nine
9 hours on the clock, They all crack beneath the weight,
The lone brother falls to a desert backstab, and then were eight
8 hours on the clock, Revenge is her best weapon,
And soon she’ll see her sons again, so then there were seven
7 hours on the clock, With each death the clock will tick,
A nosy neighbor’s leapfrog fails, and then there were six
6 hours on the clock, At the end they’ll soon arrive,
A gifted sword cannot save him, and then there were five
5 hours on the clock, And a family he tried to ignore,
Without their warmth he dies alone, and then there were four
4 hours on the clock, Victory is no guarantee,
A soulmate slays a long gone friend, and then there were three
3 hours on the clock, A duel promised, brave and true,
But the lines are gone, he seeks an end, and then there were two
2 hours on the clock, No more hiding, nowhere to run,
The Shadow’s Hand grips ever tighter, and then there was one
1 hour on the clock, The Hand has sees the weave they’ve spun,
There are those who watch, and those who listen, and then there were none
The fact that you can take the phrase "little minecrafters" and make it eerie,,, props to you.
Ah... Ahm... Wow... Considering how much Life series fan content i have consumed since the start of the series i am so surprised i never saw this one
YOOO that’s just so grim and epic???? And the reading helps it so so much as well!
Just... EPIC.... first time commenting in years on a video... it gave me some Game of Thrones vibes ....AWESOME!!!
... That was incredible...
This...this is incredible!
I haven't even finished the video yet, still only at 30 seconds in and I have to stop and write a comment.
The style of the poem, the stark visuals, the way the poem is presented, the background music, all of it combines to form one of the best, in my opinion, pieces of artwork in the 3rd Life fandom!
Edit: crying over Scott rn, brb
Ooooo this is so good! It's haunting.
“Hunted, then reunited”
“Then there are 9”
Me: NOOOO MY HEARTTTT
I LOVE THIS I WATCHED TO POINT OF MEMORIZATION AT THIS POINT PLZ MAKE MORE
I saw this poem on reddit a while ago, im glad that there is an animation to go along with it now!
BRO CHILLS LITERAL CHILLS
This is the first time that i like a poem
Ok I've read a few dark poems but this takes it
eeeeeee this is so good
I am blown away. The writing, the voice and the artwork were all incredible. I love the Life Series and everything about this video was absolutely incredible. what a beautiful sum up of the first season.
This is so good! I want to see one for each season, now!
Last year my highschool put on the play and then there were none. Basically it's a murder mystery that follows a poem with a similar name. This was really cool!
Wasn’t sure what to expect. Since I’m not really a poetry person, I wasn’t sure if I would like it, but you won me over! This is great!
Bro this is so good it sounds like it was made from a well known poet
I have no word for how amazing this is
THIS IS 2 YEARS OLD ALREADY?
17 little minecrafters
A story yet untold
But one little minecrafter
Lost her life to the void
16 little minecrafters
A shriek is all it takes
For the little canary
To hit on the brakes
15 little minecrafters
A warden takes more then 1
The ones that watch smile
The deaths have only just begun
14 little minecrafters
One good time is all it takes
For the villain
to douse his flames
13 little minecrafters
Something so small
Yet with a sword
Stabbed through the heart
Open deaths door
12 little minecrafters
Scars on his face
Didn't save him
From meeting the 14's fate
11 little minecrafters
The sun shines too bright
Icarus falls
By shining light
10 litle minecrafters
Slayed by the blessed
Atleast for now
He's layed to rest
9 little minecrafters
Going 3 for 3
The good times slayed again
Watched near the willow tree
8 little minecrafters
Then the sun falls
As icarus came too close
Forgot to build up his wall's
7 little minecrafters
Inpulsiveness alive
Killed by the wind
Or was it the tide
6 little mincrafters
Remain alive
Double the B's
Killed by the widow's pride
Until there were only 5
5 little minecrafters
Small side by side
Beans take the pride
Gay come inside
4 little minecrafters
A long game
Comes to an end
Killed by a potential ally
Killed by a friend
3 little minecrafters
4 kills into one game
Everyone that dies
Ends up in the same place
2 little mincrafters
A chase that ensues
Dead before it's realised
He thought he would lose
1 little minecrafter
Left all on his own
The same task over and over
When does he go home...
Wow good job! Can you please explain your poem?
@@romanneonick2449 It's about secret life.
Lizzie fell in the void
Jimmy was killed by a Warden
And so on.
There's also a small reference to the Watchers.
People referenced are
Canary = Jimmy (Canarycurse)
Villain = Scar
Icarus = Martyn (Killed by Grian AKA the Icaruscurse)
The blessed = Scott (Ally blessing)
The sun = Grian (Icaruscurse)
Widow = Scott once again (Widow curse)
Omg, you wanna know how good your poem is? With each verse I could name who was killed off as the number counted down.
WELL DONE