Music - Entertainment or for society? - IELTS writing task 2 - Essay ideas
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Also music was used before any war at the past to encourage soldiers and of course in weddings there is music to celebrate this happy moments.
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There is something wrong though, your idea that it plays an important role and is entertainment does not stand between the two given opinions. Because the first side does not ignore the second side yet the second side by saying "SIMPLY ENTERTAINMENT" ignores the first part. So if you believe what you said you believe you are taking the first side and your not somewhere in the middle.
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Since the ancestries music is one of the most important mode of communication to embrace people and recognise moments and memories. My own point of view is that I definitely agree with the both sides of the context where music is an important role in society and for entertainment. On this essay will be possible to explain the two sides of the magnific power that music has to change everything.
To start with, it is first important to acknowledge that there are, indeed, a wide range of benefits that music do in our lives in terms of entertainment. A brief example is to imagine a movie with absolutely no sound apart of the people talking for example ? Or how could a couple get married in silence ? None of these experiences would make any sense if would be no music to either celebrate or mark an absolutely important moment. Music relief stress and definitely help the time pass quicker also.
In another hand, therefore, characterize a nationality of a country that has your own song to describe their passion for the nation, as well encourage the soldiers back in the past where was no war to be worried about. I believe that music is extremely beneficial when it comes to represent a country, a unique moment that without those lyrics and melodies would absolutely make not a such sense.
To conclude this, I had the pleasure to witnessed my mother's favourite song, sang by my father before she took her last breath, however, It is more than obvious that music can move mountains as people say, as has the power to make any moment unforgivable.
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Music is the common thing that people could find possibly. Almost all activities in this world involve it. Most people have different perceptions of music among people. Some people have given their opinion that music is crucial to play a role in society. On the other hand, music is entertainment for each people has claimed.
First of all, some people believe that music is vital to execute some necessary things in the environment. Music is easily and dramatically change people's points of view through the lyrics, the rhythms and, the melodies. Music has persuaded some people to do what it has mentioned before. Moreover, music is quite beneficial. People usually use music to hold the ceremony, the big event, or an important tradition. For instance, when a wedding party gets in the day, many people often provide music to bring an atmosphere, such as to ease boredness and we can imagine if music is no longer need in some events, it will be strange and not marvelous as it could be. Furthermore, some traditions have used music to communicate to their Lord and express their desire for who created them.
Secondly, music uses to represent the identities of people and accompany them as a comforter. When people get bored, they usually do not know what they should do, and they have decided to play some music to fill their spare time. Some people, especially adolescents, love to listen to music when they got trouble in the day, and often music could bring the feelings or the sense either can change their mood. To illustrate, young people got a bad day while studying at university, when they back home, they could do their passions such us playing some instruments or create some songs as their hobbies, and it has reduced their stress and pressure. Also, women have broken because of their partner the motivating music was listened by them during this particular time, and suddenly they became motivated.
To conclude, music is vital, whether in society or for individuals, because music has brought impact and advantages. Music plays a role in society to do a plethora of formal events, which is crucial and needed. On the other hand, music could be our comforter to entertain and give motivation through it massages and express people's desire.
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Thank you both for such amazing video!!!! Absolutely!!!! Music plays a crucial role in society as it connects people to their culture, tradition and identity.And yeah, we still til now listening to ancient songs and who doesn't like listening to his or her country's national anthem especially during football game, it wakes up our patriotic spirit. Also music is a form of joy and it's a good way for entertainment after a hardworking day.
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One would think that all people would say that music plays an vital role in society, however there are many people who insists on the idea that music is merely an entartainment with no ends or goals. It would be easy to say that music is entartainment but this is only for some or for sometimes. Even it is easier to state that without realising that entartainment is actually just a mean for some ends important for the well being of a human, or without caring to think about things in an other level. If I want to just have some fun then I would not be looking the the whole picture.
Music has deep roots in culture, and through history it could be noted that every place and time had its own type of music-- indeed this could be overlooked so easil in times of globalism where place does not matter any more. Music thus is an instrument of self expression individually or collectively. it also connects people and bring them together, metaphorically in a unit of society or literally in a concert or hall.
But it also has its own toxiccity, doing the opposite by dividing people into groups and also by conveying subconcsious messages that would affect theideology, mentality, and psychy and increases hate and primal behaviour especially when it is used for millatary means. Nevertheless, in my opinion, music could always be channelled for the good as the case for every double edged sword: it was used once in such a great way during the golden age of islamic civilisation as a form of therapy for example.
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can you take this one : Essay topics: Media portrays young people as lazy and disrespectful.Do u think this true?Are young people today worse than their parents or does ,every new generation get criticized by older people?
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Where is your simple answer? I didn’t find any music related question.
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Everyone has different opinions when it comes to music and I feel they're both correct and that it actually depends on the situation you're in!
Some people listen to music when they're down and that sums up to music being an important role as it helps in boosting the energy or releases serotonin that helps relax the brain or stay focused and in some situations music is used as a tradition by being played in functions and festivals and is also connected to culture. It also helps in bonding and when a particular country's national anthem is played everyone feels proud (about their country) and connected.
On the other hand, it could just be an entertainment for some people. As you've said some of them listen to music just to overcome boredom and in some cases music helps people fall asleep! It is also most preferred for entertainment at parties, weddings or after a busy day.
I hope you look into my essay and guide me, I feel it's too short but this is all I could come up with.