I Love You- Spoken Word
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- เผยแพร่เมื่อ 13 ต.ค. 2024
- The first time I let you go,
I let your leaf fall from my tree.
I let your soul seep from my veins.
I let your heart break me.
Yeah, I knew you'd been talking to her.
I knew you fancied her.
I knew she was older than me,
More experienced than me,
Prettier than me,
Thinner than me.
I knew you wanter her more than you ever wanted me.
So I let you go.
I drove by your house with our song drowning out the sound of the engine,
But I let you go.
I whispered your name in my sleep because you were the only one that I ever dreamed of,
But I let you go.
I saw you around town and maybe I followed your ghost around,
But I let you go.
I thought of you, but never admitted it because I let you go.
When my friends asked me who I liked I had to bite off my tongue and swallow it so I wouldn't scream your name because I let you go.
And when we started talking again I still tore the wallpaper from the walls of my wrists, but I was happy.
I waited for your messages, I healed my breath until the next time I saw your smile.
But We were just friends.
I led you around town and we read old post cards at the antique store and every romantic note reminded me of you.
But we were just friends.
We sat in my car listening to music while I drew prisms and rainbows in the condensation on the windshield because I was afraid that if I drew hearts it would be too obvious.
We were just friends.
And Then there was that boy who tried his luck with me, but decided that he liked boys more.
You were my friend then.
And that girl you kissed in the bowling alley had no idea that you'd break her heart
Even though we were just friends.
When I was too afraid to put the bullet through my skull I thought that there must be a reason my finger breaks every time I pull the trigger,
But we were just friends.
The next day I met you at the ice rink because you always had an ear and a cold heart for my pain.
We went back to your place and drowned until there were no thoughts flowing through our heads.
And you said "I Love You." and I said "I love you too."
When I broke down in tears I knew it was true.
You held me closer than my ribs hold my lungs.
Your breath was mine, the smoke in my throat erased.
And when we kissed my mind went out. I could think of nothing other than how I wanted to be your ocean.
I wanted you too dive into my veins.
I wanted you to slay my demons.
I wanted you to travel my railroad spine.
I wanted you to be my ship's lighthouse.
I wanted you and I finally had you.
If only it would _acually_ end this way. You literally described my story down to the smallest detail... Except the end.
Lilly Champion same
Me too. The ending is different from mine.
Maybe your story isn’t over yet. For me it took 6 years to get back with my ex
I feel the same. How’s it going for you now?
My, God! So, beautiful! 💜
I just had a broke up and this video just came up in my recommendations. I wanted to say almost everything in this video is so alike to what I've been living and it broke my heart how I'm not the only feeling this way, and there's a lot other people experiencing this. I'm not sure if my comment will be seen by anybody, but if does, and if you relate to this, I want you to think you're not alone either. I'm not gonna speak unrealistically and say that everything will be fine so soon, cause some of the times it doesn't. But I believe, with no doubts, that nobody is capable of making you feel better but yourself. You decided to love, and now it's also your turn to decide to let go live. This is how life goes on, like a river that you can't stop it from going, that's a music that you only are to dance to. As Alan Watts always says: "Let go and enjoy the dance."
Wow....happy ending, something i wish i had
Hope too☹☺
Me too.
beautiful love conquers all
“I wanted you and I finally have you” a boy said this to me. His friend said to me “what he wanted was you, Layla, and he thought it will never be. Now y’all are dating. Now y’all like each other. He hugs you every day. He smiles because of you. Layla, don’t hurt him, please don’t”. We were friends. I went to a dance knowing he’ll be there. He asked me out and everything except my mind, the negative parts of it, said yes. So... I said yes. I get lost in his eyes. I am found with him on my mind. All I want is to make him happy, but he asked me about the numerous kids I hang out with, the numerous kids that asked me out. He tells people to leave me alone. He tells people that I’m his and he’s mine. But even when I’m right next to him the thought of him not seeing me makes him sad and quiet. That thought makes him miss me. I really like him but I’m always empty. He calls me beautiful and amazing all the time. He’s almost perfect. People are hating on me for dating him. I don’t care tho. I like him. What would you do in this situation?
Laylabugs Warman dont listen you your friends. Do what your heart tells you, if you really like him, then no one else’s opinion should matter. It’s your heart not theirs
Don't let him go I used to be this way that you described but my heart has been broken by the love of my life my beautiful wife we have kids together and one day she woke up and decided I wasn't enough and left me with our 4 boys I'm 26yro
I'm in this situation right now but I've left him 3 times and regretted it and I'm still with him and it's been almost a year
Cried. I needed to hear this. Amazing. I wish the ending would happen for me, but I Absolutely have to let him go.😢💔
Didn't expect that happy ending
If you wake up early you get to find out feeling you never knew existed. If you stay up late you get those same feelings but the bad version of them.
That's the way I feel about my husband. I need to play this for him. You are extremely good own these pomes keep it up girl you have found your talent you are extraordinary on me and also many of them hits so close to home to me.💚🧡😋❤️💜
That's so beautiful... Cute... touching message ....sweet heart.... I'm also finally got you...love you ...miss you ... 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘💕💕💕💕💘💘🌷
"We were just friends"💔
This is wonderful dear poetess. How did you make the beautiful lyrics video
Sadly that word doesn't exist in my vocabulary at this present time- sad but true.
if only i had the courage to send this to him....
I can totally relate to this, it is so beautiful and romantic, what a lovely poem!
I wish this was true.. I went through the same thing . then he told me it was all a dream . when I new it was real.
Sometimes you just got to let them go. Do what’s best for you and never look back. Good job :-)
The worst feeling is when you’re in love with someone who loves you back but they don’t have the courage to cave in.
Update: he said I love you, I didn’t say it back😞
Gabriela Santana cave in?? What u on about?
@@TheWendable hey,what a emotional & realistic fanstistic poem was written by writer absolute, best of, no changes l knew god heard our's prayer,here no one is alone , father shows his greace full mercy, that's why they met in that praydice unknowingly such a good combination everything is same never never bulgeiye......
i felt this.
This is absolutely deep and beautiful
This is really beautiful
I love you 💙
This is just so beautiful, I Could relate to a lot. I'm inlove with it, keep writing :)
This is really good work 👍 Passionate & honest writing, the best kind there is.
😮 That’s so Touching!!😘 I have totally felt like that!💙 There’s this guy I know I have known since we were both young he’s always had a place in my heart ❤️ I love him dearly and I will till the day I die!! I call him my handsome 🤴 king/Prince Charming he’s been my best friend for years! Maybe one day our dream can come true!😘 he knows we are strong together and 🔐nothing can break our love ❤️ I’ll forever love you the most💋🎶💙💜 don’t forget your #1queen loves you the most till her last breath!! Her love 💕 is true!! 🤴👸🔐💜💙💑 I ❤️U!! 😘 I hope he never forgets who I am!💕👸💋💑
now amd forever
@@beverlykovach8098 😔
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I wouldn't believe him at all, after everything fook off lol
keep writing. you have so much talent
I love you
God bless you
#enigmawork
I want you forever and need you bye my side I love you 🧎♀️
Beautiful Video
Please don't let me go
No you're more than that to me you were my love my life and you still are we weren't just friends to me to me it was more
We were just friends.....
Love.
Dearest soulmate I think I understand now I'm meant for you I love your my everything love yours forever
Good
Amazing😊
Fuck I'm emotional
Well from today on I accept you forever. I love you so much, my lovely my darling.Are you love me?
loving you totally my king
😔
@@beverlykovach8098 😔
I wish a happy ending for this story.
Wow@!
That's some deep shit
But the won't ever...leave you..
This sounding a lot luke Drivers License by Olivia Rodrigo
if j i love the most no is beautiful than you i am inside you just inside your heart
0:12-0:26 💔
Relate so much 💔
why why jst way i love you s
I'm sorry, I don't even know right. Babe remembers tomorrow night that I wrote it because all the distractions couldn't go in.
i cried
Impressive
This is so awesome
But can you invest some emotions nyana
What’s your Instagram I have a question I found this very strong and I want to talk to you about making another thing out of this
Who told you this
She made 😉
11:11s mine..✊👍✊👍
Hi I hope all is well
Still Video.
Exit
wowww this is something amazing...would you like giving me reviews on my firsst spoken word poem..i would love it if you do so😊
Ok
how come you did not stop,,baby your talking crazy,,you must be talking about somebody else,,
Wow
My leaf my tree my yard . Step off . I hope someday down the road I'll b able to pass u on the street and b left with a smile but I believe that should find her today I would do shit that I wouldn't approve of afterwards . I don't want to
Best her but I'm so angry with myself for bringing her neamy family for almost losing some real friends when I took her side .all's I know is that she fucking played me and my family and that
Is cold considering my family thought of her as family . If she thinks playing my parents is cool well that is not cool to me . Anyways congratulations and I pray I don't ever c u again
Good riddance
Idont car
sayang nasa yo na sya pinakawalan mo pa di naman kayo bagay nong isa me iba pa dyan ingat ka na lang
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Bsj
Your voice kinda reminds me of Sansa Stark 😝