A lot of work went into this. Comments in no particular order: Good camera work, believable wardrobe and props (terrific duster!), nice editing, skilled sound and score that drew me in. Great opening scene--hearing only the audio of the panic of those early moments of whatever happened was quite powerful. You artfully avoided many of the over-done post-apocalyptic tropes: no eating from a tin can, no AR-15, no map with big black X's, no drinking the last drop from a canteen, no sitting by the campfire staring at a worn photo of a loved one. Well done! The acting was enjoyable. I loved the scene where he got frustrated trying to split the log the wrong way and decided he was going to make it happen anyway. I totally did not buy that he would not shoot the deer. At that point in his journey, survival would have been extremely hard, food scarce, and every calorie would be life changing. And I didn't get why he left that invaluable survival and defense tool--the rifle--behind. I thought maybe he was eschewing firearms altogether, but then I saw that he kept his pistol, so I was like, "Dude, I bet you'll wish you had the rifle if you have to shoot something at a distance." The story was not quite cohesive. I get that each of the main characters had to face their own conflicts--hers was physical, his was emotional--but there wasn't enough development for me to find their attraction to each other believable. The imagined conversation with his dead wife by the seashore was askew, in my opinion. Overall, a solid and creative post-apo short. I'm interested to see what happens next.
Thanks for the feedback, it was a lot of hard work to pull off with such a small budget. Regarding some of the inconsistent plot points and scenes, that was ultimately due to some things in script not translating to screen how we quite imagined. If we were to find enough funding we would likely start from the beginning again and tell a story which connects better, and character arcs which aren't as rushed (no dead lover visions😅) We really appreciate the comment. We are currently developing a very in depth show bible in the hopes of pitching to executives. Is there something you haven't seen in a post-apo series which you'd like to see on screen?
@@talismanproductions For what my opinion is worth, I didn't think the dead lover vision was out of place, just not handled quite right. When one has been alone for along time, one is prone to all sorts of imaginings, especially of those we love. When my grandfather died, I dreamed often of him for the next several years. Daydreams and visions are made of the same stuff, so I thought the scene was appropriate. However, in movies when one is faced with a conflict, and a loved one appears to them in a vision, usually the loved one's words reflect what the character himself thinks but is afraid to face. The survivor's driving urge is to walk into the ocean and be at peace with his dead wife. His wife appears, and her purpose should be to speak back to him his own deeper, scarier thoughts, the ones that represent hard work, truth, and hope, to help him make the right decision. However, in this case your main character voiced both narratives--the foolish impulsive one and then the deeper, wiser one--while the vision of his dead wife acted more like a siren, calling him to his death. He kept saying, "If you were here, I know you'd say.." and I kept thinking, this is where the writer should have her say it, because she's actually supposed to be there as a vehicle for exposing his own unwelcome thoughts. I'm not explaining this well. It felt jumbled to me. Regarding what I'd like to see, I feel like you're on track. Most post-apo stories place the apocalypse front and center. They're more about the environment and less about the characters. You seem to be avoiding that trap. The apocalypse should be the backdrop, but not the story. If there's an open tin can, it should be barely visible in the background somewhere. If he's running out of water, you must find a way to communicate that without having him hold the canteen above his gaping mouth and waiting for that last drop. If there's bad guys or zombies, they should be few and infrequent unless they are central to the story. Even then, one bad guy or zombie that continually haunts the character's footsteps is far more effective than constant attacks by raiders or hordes of undead. Otherwise, you run the risk of being same-same with all the others out there. If I made a post-apo movie, I'd focus on the simple stuff, build and release tension in relatable ways. You did that well with the batteries.
@@factcheck1776 From what you've said, I think you'll like what we have in store for our planned series. Hopefully we will be able to make it in the near future. Thanks
@@talismanproductions If you've never seen it, check out Goodbye World. It's one of the best post-apocalyptic movies out there, and perfectly encapsulates what I'm talking about. It's not a story about the apocalypse. It's a story about a bunch of complex characters in the apocalypse.
Alot of people saying that the dude wouldve ended it all a long time ago are half right. Not all people who suffer from PSTD end it all, one of my closests friends being one of them, he has issues but keeps it movin. But i can see there perspective on it. All in all though this film is incredible. The part where the dude freaked the fuck out after losing his touch to his family was way to real. It was a coping mechanism and when it was gone he was brought back to the dark nightmare he wants to escape from. In the end he did, he forgave his past, said goodbye to those he loved, and found peace with it all. You guys deserve more than what yall have gotten so far for this film cause everything was gritty and realistic.
That's really heartwarming to hear! Hopefully we can create more. Would you be interested in seeing where this story continues, or see other smaller stories within the same world?
It’s a little hard to believe that a guy who lost his marbles would have survived that long by himself or wouldn’t have ate a bullet. Overall it wasn’t bad compared to other apocalyptic shorts but a bit sappy for me
That's basically my reaction when my playstation, poof, broke. 😅 He'll get over it ... I think. Not going to spoil too much, but the whole fighting scene was a pleasant surprise. I wasn't expecting that. Anyway, good job. I really liked watching it.
I liked it, someone else started, and I agree, you avoided a lot of bad PA tropes. Actors, production and story overall very good imo. Would love to see more! My biggest problem is I couldn't figure her interest in this damaged guy with zero ambition. But I guess in this situation the pickings are slim. 😄 He hit the jackpot; she was clearly a keeper.
What happens when the batteries die?...... Reality kicks in, that's what.
Awesome, emotionally-charged short film
Cleanest equipment I ever seen and the freshest of the haircut. Can’t deal with that.
No problem, thanks for the view and comment!! 😁
My biggest issue is that no one in this type or any other situation would walk away from a yellowboy and leave it like that...
Excellent in all aspects. Thought provoking. Gritty. Real.
Thanks so much for those kind words.
A lot of work went into this. Comments in no particular order: Good camera work, believable wardrobe and props (terrific duster!), nice editing, skilled sound and score that drew me in. Great opening scene--hearing only the audio of the panic of those early moments of whatever happened was quite powerful. You artfully avoided many of the over-done post-apocalyptic tropes: no eating from a tin can, no AR-15, no map with big black X's, no drinking the last drop from a canteen, no sitting by the campfire staring at a worn photo of a loved one. Well done! The acting was enjoyable. I loved the scene where he got frustrated trying to split the log the wrong way and decided he was going to make it happen anyway. I totally did not buy that he would not shoot the deer. At that point in his journey, survival would have been extremely hard, food scarce, and every calorie would be life changing. And I didn't get why he left that invaluable survival and defense tool--the rifle--behind. I thought maybe he was eschewing firearms altogether, but then I saw that he kept his pistol, so I was like, "Dude, I bet you'll wish you had the rifle if you have to shoot something at a distance." The story was not quite cohesive. I get that each of the main characters had to face their own conflicts--hers was physical, his was emotional--but there wasn't enough development for me to find their attraction to each other believable. The imagined conversation with his dead wife by the seashore was askew, in my opinion. Overall, a solid and creative post-apo short. I'm interested to see what happens next.
Thanks for the feedback, it was a lot of hard work to pull off with such a small budget. Regarding some of the inconsistent plot points and scenes, that was ultimately due to some things in script not translating to screen how we quite imagined. If we were to find enough funding we would likely start from the beginning again and tell a story which connects better, and character arcs which aren't as rushed (no dead lover visions😅) We really appreciate the comment. We are currently developing a very in depth show bible in the hopes of pitching to executives. Is there something you haven't seen in a post-apo series which you'd like to see on screen?
@@talismanproductions For what my opinion is worth, I didn't think the dead lover vision was out of place, just not handled quite right. When one has been alone for along time, one is prone to all sorts of imaginings, especially of those we love. When my grandfather died, I dreamed often of him for the next several years. Daydreams and visions are made of the same stuff, so I thought the scene was appropriate. However, in movies when one is faced with a conflict, and a loved one appears to them in a vision, usually the loved one's words reflect what the character himself thinks but is afraid to face. The survivor's driving urge is to walk into the ocean and be at peace with his dead wife. His wife appears, and her purpose should be to speak back to him his own deeper, scarier thoughts, the ones that represent hard work, truth, and hope, to help him make the right decision. However, in this case your main character voiced both narratives--the foolish impulsive one and then the deeper, wiser one--while the vision of his dead wife acted more like a siren, calling him to his death. He kept saying, "If you were here, I know you'd say.." and I kept thinking, this is where the writer should have her say it, because she's actually supposed to be there as a vehicle for exposing his own unwelcome thoughts. I'm not explaining this well. It felt jumbled to me.
Regarding what I'd like to see, I feel like you're on track. Most post-apo stories place the apocalypse front and center. They're more about the environment and less about the characters. You seem to be avoiding that trap. The apocalypse should be the backdrop, but not the story. If there's an open tin can, it should be barely visible in the background somewhere. If he's running out of water, you must find a way to communicate that without having him hold the canteen above his gaping mouth and waiting for that last drop. If there's bad guys or zombies, they should be few and infrequent unless they are central to the story. Even then, one bad guy or zombie that continually haunts the character's footsteps is far more effective than constant attacks by raiders or hordes of undead. Otherwise, you run the risk of being same-same with all the others out there. If I made a post-apo movie, I'd focus on the simple stuff, build and release tension in relatable ways. You did that well with the batteries.
@@factcheck1776 From what you've said, I think you'll like what we have in store for our planned series. Hopefully we will be able to make it in the near future. Thanks
@@talismanproductions If you've never seen it, check out Goodbye World. It's one of the best post-apocalyptic movies out there, and perfectly encapsulates what I'm talking about. It's not a story about the apocalypse. It's a story about a bunch of complex characters in the apocalypse.
@@factcheck1776 Thanks, will check it out!
Beautifully done!!
Excellent!! ❤❤😊
good short film. actors, story line, all very good. well worth the watch. thank you for this
Thank you! The support we've had so far is really inspiring us to continue the development of this world and the stories within it.
Alot of people saying that the dude wouldve ended it all a long time ago are half right. Not all people who suffer from PSTD end it all, one of my closests friends being one of them, he has issues but keeps it movin. But i can see there perspective on it. All in all though this film is incredible. The part where the dude freaked the fuck out after losing his touch to his family was way to real. It was a coping mechanism and when it was gone he was brought back to the dark nightmare he wants to escape from. In the end he did, he forgave his past, said goodbye to those he loved, and found peace with it all. You guys deserve more than what yall have gotten so far for this film cause everything was gritty and realistic.
Thanks so much! We are currently working on some new projects that we hope to share soon.
Very well done given the complexity of the storyline involved. I could watch more of this!
That's really heartwarming to hear! Hopefully we can create more. Would you be interested in seeing where this story continues, or see other smaller stories within the same world?
We have no choice but to let bygones be bygones and consider how much they matter in the long run when we give up so much good for such a little bad.
Too many of these post-apocalyptic films assume the survivors are still somewhat sane.
Good thing in this film the characters are definitely not sane.
My boy found shrooms in the forest he's always hallucinating 😂
It’s a little hard to believe that a guy who lost his marbles would have survived that long by himself or wouldn’t have ate a bullet. Overall it wasn’t bad compared to other apocalyptic shorts but a bit sappy for me
A good film with a beginning, a middle and an end.
nice work. Very interesting.
Thank you very much!
El mensaje es muy bonito. Me ha gustado mucho. Thank you.
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.
Very good, nice work!
Well done.
Amazing job...Peace
Thanks so much!
Good movie, only thing I don't understand, is why he left the rifle.
Guess Arthur isn't as mentally sound as we might think.
That's basically my reaction when my playstation, poof, broke. 😅 He'll get over it ... I think.
Not going to spoil too much, but the whole fighting scene was a pleasant surprise. I wasn't expecting that.
Anyway, good job. I really liked watching it.
🤣 That's great! We hope you have a playstation replacement now.
Very talented actors
Thanks, you can see Emma Jenkins Purro in the 2022 horror film "Pearl" alongside Mia Goth.
@@talismanproductions is it on youtube ?
I liked it, someone else started, and I agree, you avoided a lot of bad PA tropes. Actors, production and story overall very good imo. Would love to see more! My biggest problem is I couldn't figure her interest in this damaged guy with zero ambition. But I guess in this situation the pickings are slim. 😄 He hit the jackpot; she was clearly a keeper.
We would love to delve more into the backstory of Nora in the future and further reveal her personal interests.
sweet film
Okay 👌
His hairline at the back is wsy too perfect. Attention to detail would make it more realistic guys
Yeah, we made this in film school back in 2019, we've definitely learnt a lot since then.
Film çok güzel ama İngilizce 😢
We are currently working on translations. What subtitles would you like?
2 is better than 1
How about 3?
my initial thot was ‘batteries’
And then your second thought was "Outstanding"