@stevenww3560 ahh I see. idk I'm bad at explaining but it's like somebody treated you like a cow or yk meat meant to be slaughtered but they spoiled it or it went bad and now they're feeling guilty.
the guitar is sorta out of tune (sounds like it's maybe only the b string?). also i'd appreciate this more without any explanation at the beginning. the song should speak for itself. i actually do really like the songwriting, it's weird in the best way. idk why this popped up in my algorithm but keep doing you, this was cool. i hope this comment isn't discouraging, you have a real seed of talent that can flourish with more work
@fronhank thank you! I only explained because people have complained that I should talk in the beginning of the song and I was worried some would be confused
@@meloohdee that makes sense. you could always include some context in the description or a pinned comment if it seems appropriate. imo part of the fun of listening to original stuff is interpretation, so i personally like having the option to not hear it explained for me.
Your lyricism is so witty and creative, this song reminds me of guts album by Olivia Rodrigo. The hints of Rock infused inside.
@rokeeblyn1428 aww thank you that's so sweet
Honestly not sure what I think about this 1 ! You deliver it wonderfully 🎉🎉
@stevenww3560 honestly not sure what I think about this comment but thank you!
@meloohdee I'm jist saying you done great as usual jist not sure of I get the song so it's on me not you lol
@stevenww3560 ahh I see. idk I'm bad at explaining but it's like somebody treated you like a cow or yk meat meant to be slaughtered but they spoiled it or it went bad and now they're feeling guilty.
@meloohdee I get it better now ! With your talents you will be a big success 🙌
the guitar is sorta out of tune (sounds like it's maybe only the b string?). also i'd appreciate this more without any explanation at the beginning. the song should speak for itself. i actually do really like the songwriting, it's weird in the best way. idk why this popped up in my algorithm but keep doing you, this was cool. i hope this comment isn't discouraging, you have a real seed of talent that can flourish with more work
@fronhank thank you! I only explained because people have complained that I should talk in the beginning of the song and I was worried some would be confused
@@meloohdee that makes sense. you could always include some context in the description or a pinned comment if it seems appropriate. imo part of the fun of listening to original stuff is interpretation, so i personally like having the option to not hear it explained for me.
@@fronhank me too! I just say the title and artist usually