Few things are as disturbing as a random, creature's body part entering a room. Specifically, a thigh. I went wait wtf? Turned out to be his name. 10:46
Haha, I can totally see how that would be a “wait, what?!” moment! Sometimes these little twists catch us off guard in the best (and weirdest) way. Thanks for sharing your reaction-it gave me a good chuckle!
I appreciate your honesty and feedback! Repetition can definitely weaken pacing and impact, so it’s something I’ll keep a sharper eye on moving forward. The goal is always to keep the tension and flow engaging without overstating the obvious. I’ll work on tightening things up so the story hits harder without the echoes. Thanks for calling it out-I value readers like you who help me improve!
@@StellarHFY5 A suggestion, you may want to have someone who either dislikes Sci-Fi or doesn't read or hear it alot as their more likely to notice the repetitiveness when it occurs. The author is always the last to notice such things and if there is no one else available, upon completion, let it sit for a few days before editing as then you're more likely to notice the flaws. But otherwise a good story with a logical plotline, features often missed within these stories
Ah, what a compliment! If the Federation would be proud, then the story must have struck the right balance of bravery, strategy, and unity. Here's to tales that honor the spirit of exploration, resilience, and standing strong against overwhelming odds. Thank you for the encouragement-long live the ideals of the Federation!
Thanks for bringing up the Crystalline Entity-such an iconic part of Star Trek lore! I always find its story fascinating and thought-provoking, especially when it comes to the moral dilemmas surrounding its fate. I'm so glad to see fellow Star Trek fans engaging with the channel.
Thank you for pointing that out! I’ll make sure to thoroughly review the audio for any repetitive sections and eliminate them to ensure the flow is smooth and engaging. Your feedback is invaluable, and I truly appreciate your support in helping me improve. I’ll get on this right away to make the content even better for you!
Thanks for sharing your thoughts! I’ll take a closer look at the pacing and delivery to make it feel more natural and immersive. I’m always looking to improve, so I appreciate your honesty.
You're really striking a decent balance between adjectives to paint pictures and storytelling. I enjoyed this one. Thank you.
I appreciate that!
Great story.
Thanks for listening
Really enjoyed this different story ❤🎉
Glad you enjoyed it!
Ahhh..i see..Chen is on leave i suppose. :)
Hahaha yeah, he is back to China!
Few things are as disturbing as a random, creature's body part entering a room. Specifically, a thigh. I went wait wtf?
Turned out to be his name. 10:46
Haha, I can totally see how that would be a “wait, what?!” moment! Sometimes these little twists catch us off guard in the best (and weirdest) way. Thanks for sharing your reaction-it gave me a good chuckle!
Wow! No Chen or Rodriguez!
Or Patel 😂😂😂
No lie. Those mfers are everywhere.😅
Probably retired or dead they have probably done about 1000 missions at this point
Done already propagated. @@Joehoss1987
Yes, I noticed that flaw too.
Nice story
Thanks for watching
Finally, some different characters
Thank you so much for noticing! I’m thrilled you’re enjoying the variety of characters we’re introducing
With all due respect!!!!!!
Decent premise, but as always told with the propensity for relentless repetiton.
I appreciate your honesty and feedback! Repetition can definitely weaken pacing and impact, so it’s something I’ll keep a sharper eye on moving forward. The goal is always to keep the tension and flow engaging without overstating the obvious. I’ll work on tightening things up so the story hits harder without the echoes. Thanks for calling it out-I value readers like you who help me improve!
@@StellarHFY5 A suggestion, you may want to have someone who either dislikes Sci-Fi or doesn't read or hear it alot as their more likely to notice the repetitiveness when it occurs. The author is always the last to notice such things and if there is no one else available, upon completion, let it sit for a few days before editing as then you're more likely to notice the flaws. But otherwise a good story with a logical plotline, features often missed within these stories
The Federation would be proud
Ah, what a compliment! If the Federation would be proud, then the story must have struck the right balance of bravery, strategy, and unity. Here's to tales that honor the spirit of exploration, resilience, and standing strong against overwhelming odds. Thank you for the encouragement-long live the ideals of the Federation!
Star Trek fans may remember the Crystalline entity and its ultimate fate.
Thanks for bringing up the Crystalline Entity-such an iconic part of Star Trek lore! I always find its story fascinating and thought-provoking, especially when it comes to the moral dilemmas surrounding its fate. I'm so glad to see fellow Star Trek fans engaging with the channel.
Please "proof-hear" for repetitive sections".
Thank you for pointing that out! I’ll make sure to thoroughly review the audio for any repetitive sections and eliminate them to ensure the flow is smooth and engaging.
Your feedback is invaluable, and I truly appreciate your support in helping me improve. I’ll get on this right away to make the content even better for you!
@StellarHFY5 listen to your own story one time......even grade schoolers have to proof read before expecting a good mark.
Need a better reader... This is two mechanical
Thanks for sharing your thoughts! I’ll take a closer look at the pacing and delivery to make it feel more natural and immersive. I’m always looking to improve, so I appreciate your honesty.
Please add an organic reader. The expense would possibly be more. Although I think that it would bring more value to the storyline.