You gotta love it. The AVERY AKA. THE THE EMPIRE ( on earth aka : avavarians or birds ) . ARE FIGHTING WITH EARTH AND THE AVORY (which to me sounds suspiciously to me sounds a lot like birds but that’s just me) .
You’ve got a sharp eye for patterns! It does seem like there’s a bird theme going on with the names-completely unintentional, I promise! The Avery and the Avory are definitely locked in a galactic struggle, but maybe they’re bird-inspired allies or rivals? Who knows-might make for an interesting plot twist! Appreciate your comment and your sense of humor.
Glad you were looking forward to that moment! While "Chen" made an impression, we’ve decided to retire that name and explore fresh directions for future characters. Hope you enjoyed the story and stay tuned for what’s coming next-it’s going to be exciting!
Thank you for sharing your thoughts! I’ve taken feedback like yours to heart and have stopped “rocking” the videos. I’m refining my style, and I think you’ll love the upcoming content-it’s all about delivering great stories in a more thoughtful way. I hope you’ll give it a chance and let me know what you think! 😊
The character associated with the Eclipse device in the story is General Zara, a loyalist to the Empire, not an Avori leader. General Zara was introduced as a high-ranking Empire officer who advocated for deploying Project Eclipse as a desperate measure to crush the rebellion. Her actions were entirely aligned with the Empire’s oppressive agenda. On the contrary, Chancellor Xyra of the Avori, a key ally of humanity, consistently supported the alliance and worked to unite the galaxy against the Empire. There is no betrayal from the Avori in the story; their role is steadfast in opposing the Empire and advancing the alliance’s goals.
nice story. 1 question though; why are there only woman in position of power? (admiral, captain etc..) it's getting pretty anoying and very un-realistic. how may admiral's do you kow who are woman? i'm not sayig it's impossible. but all of them in 1 story? that's just dumb...
The movement of the pictures is making me nauseous. I also find that the shadow around the subtitle text reduces readability. The story feels stretched and overly wordy. A more compact writing style would enhance the story and would reduce the length of the story significantly.
I understand how moving visuals and shadowed text can affect the reading experience. I’ll ensure that future presentations or adaptations minimize distracting visual effects and prioritize clarity in text styling. Also the story’s depth and detail aim to immerse the reader in an expansive narrative, but I understand your point about conciseness. A more compact writing style could better maintain pacing and engagement. I'll explore ways to streamline the content while preserving the story’s essence in future revisions.
Can we please check our spelling. For a supposedly advanced race we are obviously advanced race we have an issue with our spelling at the first grade level and obviously need help with it to be understood now.
Thank you for pointing that out! We truly appreciate your feedback and are working on refining every aspect of our storytelling, including spelling and grammar. Communication is key, and we want to ensure that our content is clear and enjoyable for everyone. Thanks for your patience as we strive to improve! 😊
Thanks for the feedback! I’ll make sure to balance the storytelling and keep the focus on the narrative in future videos. I appreciate you pointing that out-it helps me improve the content for you all. Stay tuned for the next story!
You gotta love it. The AVERY AKA. THE THE EMPIRE ( on earth aka : avavarians or birds ) . ARE FIGHTING WITH EARTH AND THE AVORY (which to me sounds suspiciously to me sounds a lot like birds but that’s just me) .
You’ve got a sharp eye for patterns! It does seem like there’s a bird theme going on with the names-completely unintentional, I promise! The Avery and the Avory are definitely locked in a galactic struggle, but maybe they’re bird-inspired allies or rivals?
Who knows-might make for an interesting plot twist! Appreciate your comment and your sense of humor.
I was waiting for a Chen to show and roughly 21 minutes in there she was.
Glad you were looking forward to that moment! While "Chen" made an impression, we’ve decided to retire that name and explore fresh directions for future characters. Hope you enjoyed the story and stay tuned for what’s coming next-it’s going to be exciting!
Rocking your vids is sick-making and why I won't subscribe, nor up-check your vids.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts! I’ve taken feedback like yours to heart and have stopped “rocking” the videos. I’m refining my style, and I think you’ll love the upcoming content-it’s all about delivering great stories in a more thoughtful way. I hope you’ll give it a chance and let me know what you think! 😊
Did Zara/Zero/0 of the Avery suddenly betray her people and try to defend the Eclipse device? Check the story at 51:00. That's a major issue
The character associated with the Eclipse device in the story is General Zara, a loyalist to the Empire, not an Avori leader. General Zara was introduced as a high-ranking Empire officer who advocated for deploying Project Eclipse as a desperate measure to crush the rebellion. Her actions were entirely aligned with the Empire’s oppressive agenda.
On the contrary, Chancellor Xyra of the Avori, a key ally of humanity, consistently supported the alliance and worked to unite the galaxy against the Empire. There is no betrayal from the Avori in the story; their role is steadfast in opposing the Empire and advancing the alliance’s goals.
nice story.
1 question though; why are there only woman in position of power? (admiral, captain etc..) it's getting pretty anoying and very un-realistic. how may admiral's do you kow who are woman? i'm not sayig it's impossible. but all of them in 1 story? that's just dumb...
We understand your concern, which is why we’ve decided to maintain a balanced mix moving forward. Our upcoming stories will reflect this approach.
The movement of the pictures is making me nauseous. I also find that the shadow around the subtitle text reduces readability. The story feels stretched and overly wordy. A more compact writing style would enhance the story and would reduce the length of the story significantly.
I understand how moving visuals and shadowed text can affect the reading experience. I’ll ensure that future presentations or adaptations minimize distracting visual effects and prioritize clarity in text styling.
Also the story’s depth and detail aim to immerse the reader in an expansive narrative, but I understand your point about conciseness. A more compact writing style could better maintain pacing and engagement. I'll explore ways to streamline the content while preserving the story’s essence in future revisions.
Can we please check our spelling. For a supposedly advanced race we are obviously advanced race we have an issue with our spelling at the first grade level and obviously need help with it to be understood now.
Thank you for pointing that out! We truly appreciate your feedback and are working on refining every aspect of our storytelling, including spelling and grammar. Communication is key, and we want to ensure that our content is clear and enjoyable for everyone. Thanks for your patience as we strive to improve! 😊
Another wiggler. Ugh!!! Going to stop even trying to watch videos made by you.
Hey Carol, we have just stopped wiggling our videos and we promise this will never happen again.
@@StellarHFY5why would you add it in the first place?
Way too much preaching, not enough story.
Thanks for the feedback! I’ll make sure to balance the storytelling and keep the focus on the narrative in future videos. I appreciate you pointing that out-it helps me improve the content for you all. Stay tuned for the next story!