IELTS Task 2 Discussion Essay Band 9 Structure
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Yesterday I struck with strange writing question in Cambridge IETLS 4:
Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of following as media for communiting information. State which you consider to be the most effective.
*Comics
*Books
*Radio
*Television
*Film
*Theatre
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It was really difficult to answer and if I had struck with such a writing question in real IELTS exam, I definitely wouldn't have known what to do whatsoever!
Specially, I wouldn't have known how to paraphrase the question in introduction 🤷♂️
I wish you explained it in one of your videos.I think it would be interesting for other subscribers too.
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Assalam alaikum! Thank you for such a useful information, and of course , clear explanation. I NOW understand what is this😍🙏👍👍
It is sometimes concurred that freedom of speech is a basic human right that should not be regulated because expression is a part of checks and balances. However, I agree that censorship is needed because allowing unlimited speech to all can create hate speech.
On the one hand, it is argued that every human should be free to announce any opinion because it will contribute to check and balances of the community and government. In a sense, the moral compass of what is right and wrong can’t be decided by one view and people should be allowed their opinion to open a further discussion. For example, slavery was once seen as a standard practice without allowing the opinions of the opposed. Further advocacy allowed the government’s moral compass to act more reasonably and started to consider to opinions of the enslaved. In certain issues, the right to freedom of speech can be seen as vital.
On the other hand, censorship can be perceived as necessary to avoid discriminating and inappropriate language. When we allow full freedom of speech, we are also allowing racism, discrimination, and hateful words. This would cause the most harm for certain minority groups because the speech of one racist can create an army and even can escalate to physical attacks. In the 21st century, our general government’s moral compass is assumed to be more logical. Thus, I fully agree that some censorship is needed to regulate people freedom of speech in order to avoid hate crimes.
To conclude, although freedom of speech is a basic need to keep everyone’s morality in check-regulating hurtful topics that target minority groups through discrimination is needed to hinder any terrorist actions. I believe that enforcing a level of censorship to people’s speech is for the greater good.
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There should not be a comma after Although but there is after the Although clause to differentiate it from the principal clause
This video is a little bit difficult for me because I think you take an example rather than mention viewpoints 1 or 2. This will be more clear for understanding. Thanks
I have watched this video more than 5 times and had the same problem with it.I wish Chris had written a full text, not just an structural sample.
True
Watch other videos created before this then would be easier
Same thing,I experienced too
exactly my thought
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Amazing explanation in a very short amount of time.
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This was my task 2 question type today, I'm glad I watched this video last night! I will come back in 13 days to testify
Best of luck!
My result is out and I made a band 7 in writing, it wouldn't have been possible without you🎉 Thank you so much for the tips.
First time writing and I got an overall of 7.0 which is good enough for my applications
Sir, you are such a great tutor. Thanks for the valuable tips
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Hi Chris, thank you for sorting out the most confusing essay type. in the introduction stage, are we stating that we disagree with a certain view or is it enough only to mention that we agree with a view.
Hi Kanushka, you should check this article on our website titled 'IELTS Writing: Agree or Disagree Lesson with Sample Answer'. I'm sure you'll find it helpful. If you have any further questions or need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.
i'm going to write a discussion essay tomorrow. Thanks
It is crystal clear.
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Thank you so much chris sir with your help ...😊
Absolutely Amazing technic. Thank You Teacher.
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Hi Chris..highly recommending you to create new video of every types of task 2 questions just like discussion and double questions essay, Please.
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Appreciated 👍🏻 I learn from your video
Thanku for such an informative video.pls provide similar type of video on advantages and disadvantages type of essay
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Hi, Chris! On your website, it is written that we should explain why we disagree and why we agree with viewpoints. But you said in your video that we should write just why we agree with the viewpoint that we defend. Could you please clarify?
Hi Chris, great explanation but can u also explain how to write task 1 tables?
thank you for this! Very helpful and informative! saved my time
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As a 38-year-old, I really can't see what is so difficult about following the plan you lay out here naturally, without being walked through it. I mean, the task clearly and concisely says "Discuss both views and give your opinion". Well, discuss view #1, discuss view #2, then give your opinion, it's plain as day.
One thing I've also noticed is that students will replace the thing the task requires them to write about with an idea that's close but not the same. For instance, for your topic, they must think of why free speech is good and why censorship is good; but students might write why free speech is good and why it's bad, which isn't exactly the same.
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You are awesome and your lessons are awesome as well. I have been reading more sample essays from "Simon" just to get some ideas and learn some writing techniques with which Iam really fond of nowadays
Do you think Simon's essays are worth to read?
I got 6 for writing but 9 for reading, 8.5 listening, 7 speaking overall 7.5. I should thanks Cris. I am never good at expressing myself and this must be my downfall and I know how much I try this will let me down. I know all the tips and tricks. I studied myself. I watched lot of your videos. I really feel unhappy. I need 7 from each.
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Hi chris ..thanks for a wonderful explanation ..but can you please share the full answer of this discussion essay as i did understand all the things but i'm confused in do we have to write a whole other paragraph regarding our view point or we just have to add 1 line in the end of MBP2 as "I agree with this view" ?
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Hello, Chris.
I wish you discussed different types of ielts writing task 2 questions and how to deal with them in one video.🙏
Great suggestion! I'll look into it. In the meantime, we have many helpful Writing Task 2 videos available on our channel. Please check it out here: th-cam.com/play/PLWWR_9t3vo3PpGvGoD8CNpzpyrsJ133DF.html.
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Amazing explanation
could you bring like this explanation on advantages outweigh disadvantages also in opinion questions?
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Thank you so much for an excellent class
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Thanks for useful video
Thank you very much, please can you give me access for the free class on body building for writing task 2
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Please tell me in discussion essay should we give opinion in introduction or in conclusion?
Hi. Thanks for the great insight you're providing. I have a question: There's an article on IDP website that emphasizes writing 3 body paragraphs for discussion essay (1st body, 2nd body, and your opinion in a separate paragraph). I would appreciate your stance on this. Thank you in advance
You may state your opinion in a separate paragraph, and this paragraph is optional.
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Hello,do i have to maintain the sequence of main body paragraph? Like i have to write the one which i agree later???
Hello Chris, I'm just joining you today, pls I need to build my writing for the easy. I will be glad to get a reply. My exam is next month pls help me out. Thanks
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This is simple and straight forward, but is it alright to conclude every paragraph e.g putting a conclusion on introduction and the rest of the paragraphs?
No actually there should only one conclusion at last
Hi Chris Pell, I've got a question. Can I start the second body paragraph with my view in discussion essay?
Hey chris! I would like to ask about my problme which I have been suffered for a month.
If we do not know a one word meaning in writing ,so can we ask to the inspection's? Please let me know about it beacuse I am going to book my exam in up coming month.
And I also try to explain a question which makes me confused.
1) Many people feel that media covrage has significently biased today.
I do not about biased and my whole essay has gone irrelevant.could you please help me!!!
Can you please share an example or sample with this strategy?
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It is a great lesson. But is it OK if I only discuss views in main body parts and give my personal opinion in conclusion?
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Hi i just have one doubt, lets say i have the following task -
"The idea of having a single career has become an old fashioned one. Multiple careers are in demand because of increasing growth opportunities and higher earning prospects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.". Here, it looks like it's a discuss and give your opinion type question. But, it feels like the second sentence is like giving the back up or answering the sentence 1. Can you help me understand this. As at this point it looks somewhat confusing like what are we supposed to do here.
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you are genius
thanks a lot
Sir, could you give me a sample of this discussion essay following this instruction?
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Sir it is different from the structure that you have provided on your website.
Can you write an introduction for the following topic your website. Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences.
Let me attempt to answer your question. The introduction for your above Essay will look something like
"While some people think that the introduction of computer into our educational system has negative effects, I agree with those who believe that technology has more positve impact as it provides the student with more information and facility in the same place and at the same time"
Pls Chris, kindly critic the introduction I wrote here
Chris, I have one question for you. In the MBP 2, after writing view 1, explanation, example and you said that we should write ''I agree with this view''.
So do we just need to write just 1 sentence ''i agree with this view'' to end the MBP 2 or the sentence ''I agree with this view'' means that we need to explain more? Since you don not have a sample essay, I do not really understand that.
Hi there, you should check this article on our website titled 'Writing Task 2 Discuss Both Views Essay Lesson'. I'm sure it can help answer your question. If you have any further questions or need our team of IELTS teachers to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.
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Hey Chris,
I'm learning a lot from your lessons, thank you so much for creating authentic content for free.
Can you please refer to a sample of 'discuss both the views' essay.
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Is it compulsory to write about the view 2 in the beginning?
In introduction part we were supposed to write paraphrase statement and thesis statement right instead of giving both views? If I am wrong please correct me...
For this u get low mark
Hi Chris. I’ve noticed a lot of people only talk about benefits of “having the right to free speech”, they don’t write what makes some people believe that way. Is this wrong?
Could you please make a sample answer of this question??
hi Chris) first of all thank you for you videos they really help. but i cant join ielts advatage web site, it is not allowed in my location so access is denied 😭 but i want to give some ques to clarify one thing. i always been given suggestion to write 2 ideas for MBP each: 2 ideas with supportive statement and example to MBP1 and the same to MBP2. but you always in your videos say one idea with good explanation in enough for one MBP. so i am confused what guidance and tactic i should follow to get 7< in ielts writing?
and if there anyone who got 7-9 in writing please share your experience.
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What's the need of furnishing a 'why' reason in the introduction ,as u did in the second sentence , cos the reasons are to be mentioned in the body paragrahs..
If I'm restating my opinions from intro back in conclusion, there seems to be a high chance of re-stating the same sentence in different manner(paraphrasing the line), will this effect my score? As of now, I know that restating same opinion twice or thrice results in in negative/ poor marking? TIA
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Could you please tell me the structure if I agree with view 2?
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Hey. Is it necessary to write main body para 3 for opinion? I have seen idp suggesting 3 body paras in total for discussion essay
no need
Plz make a new video on discussion essay I don't understand
Hi Chris, your lecture has been helpful but I can't access the website anymore, I keep getting access denied.
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Pls Chris, I need to know how to get ideas in writing
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Sir i wrote 2 paragraph for 1st view and 3rd paragraph for 2nd opinion and in conclusion I wrote my opinion. Is it right?
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The problem is that 40 minutes it's not enough...
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Yes sir , i want to know about how to build a essay please help me .
I'm Michael gill from India .
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Can't we agree on both views
Pls, are you now saying we are to discuss view 2 before discussing view 1 and pls, y not view 1 first, so that we won’t get stucked on along the line…
Not like that. He's saying,
First, talk about the view you DON'T support.
Then, talk about the view you support and finish the paragraph saying you support this view.
This is to improve the coherence, logical organisation of your essay.
@@kave012 ok, thanks…
Is okay to have 5 paragraphs because I could see it's coming 5 para
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How many paragraph write to this essay? 4 or 5 ?
5
I have a question on the opinion essay that states, " xxx should limit A and do B instead."
Is it okay if my opinion is about (I agree with the statement, let's say) :
1. what happens if we do not limit A
2. The benefit of doing B
Or the specific question is addressed to the benefit of B, so I should write two benefits of B?
Thank you
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Very complicated...
Greetings.
I am confused about the agree/disagree when I want to partially agree or give a balanced opinion.
I understand that I need to state both sides when I write this. But should I still emphasize on one side?
For example
Thesis: "Although, I think ~~(disagree), I fundementally believe that ~~(agree)" So here, I emphasized that I agree but also stated other side.
Body 1 : disagree and why
Body 2 : agree and why
Conclusion: "In conclusion, although ~~(disagree), I am in favour of ~~(agree)" Here again, I emphasized on the agreement while I also mentioned the other side.
Is this a correct way to write? Or can I just write the partially agree essay without emphasizing on one side? (I need band 7+)
Has a positive/negative development essay to be written in the same way as the agree/disagree essay like above?
Thank you!
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Greatings from India Chris. I have booked date for 26 FEB but i am getting only 20 and even low in reading i only have 6 days should i go for it or postpond the date. PLEASE HELP me out🙏
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It isn't one of your best videos, not very clear once you started writing, I am a fan of your channel thank you
Take your sour ass somewhere else.Who are you to judge ?
I got 8 from writing watching this video.
Confusing
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Hey chris, is it compulsory or very much necessary to state and explain out points in the INTRO part? Like for adv/disad mention the ad disav in intro, rather than just writing This essay will …. Merits and demerits??
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don't write with that pen pleaseeee.the sound distracts and irritates soo muchh(((
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thank you
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