I think I fell asleep, for all these stories of alien romance they certainly take far too long to get to the "romance" - he is essentially ignored until a chance encounter in a garden late at night, and suddenly they are in love. But there is no real bonding. She barely even touches him with her hand. How many romances you know of where the "loving couple" basically never talk, and their only interaction is a bare essence of a conversation with only one single hand-touch to "cement" the romance? I keep hoping for more than. "we had a late-night chat, and now we're fighting side by side in a war, and we're in love." Clearly the AI doesn't understand what romance is all about. But I do admit I was intrigued and hoping for more of the story, when suddenly it seemed it was over before it had really begun.
Queen with 1770’s crown, 1870’s corset, and 1970’s skirt length, accented by Star Trek Vulcan ears. FINALLY, THEY REACHED THE THRONE ROOM. Good thing the visual was in caps, because the auditory did not even hint at a change in importance. Looks like Caps lock was left on by accident.
Not a a bad story but... did the author not consider making Eathan a former Military Pilot with training and experience that would be valuable to the Queen and part of the reason he was chosen?
26:03 - Her hair, dark as the void between stars …. Ahem, did the queen color her hair between her night’s walk, and the time the picture was snapped in the throne room? The queen may also be afflicted with black cataracts, as her eyes were black as the space between galaxies!
Lack of Synchrony between subtitles, and auditory stimulus, are not devastating, as the subtitles can be ignored. That may present a problem for readers whose hearing loss is not well compensated by their hearing aid. The first word of each line of text is not highlighted by the moving black contrast.
It's a shame that you dragged me along on a pretty good story then threw up a wall at the end. I have a bitter taste in my mouth for you doing this. It is like many Science Fiction Masterpieces that would end similar to the way you ended this story, but the Reader already knew the story was spread over several books. You killed the story. For that reason, I am Unsubscribing.
oooooo Care to explain ? I may not bother if its as bad as you say. I want to write my own stories. I am retired now and will be moving in a few months and once I get set up at a new place I will look at it. I grew up in the golden age of sf when people like Isaac Asimov and Arthur C Clarke were alive and I have some story ideas of my own.
Beautiful. Thank you for sharing. Best regards.
Anyone got the URL for that job board? I want to find a queen with legs like that ;)
I hope there is part 2 to this story. I was really enjoying this and all of sudden it's over
I think I fell asleep, for all these stories of alien romance they certainly take far too long to get to the "romance" - he is essentially ignored until a chance encounter in a garden late at night, and suddenly they are in love. But there is no real bonding. She barely even touches him with her hand. How many romances you know of where the "loving couple" basically never talk, and their only interaction is a bare essence of a conversation with only one single hand-touch to "cement" the romance? I keep hoping for more than. "we had a late-night chat, and now we're fighting side by side in a war, and we're in love." Clearly the AI doesn't understand what romance is all about. But I do admit I was intrigued and hoping for more of the story, when suddenly it seemed it was over before it had really begun.
Queen with 1770’s crown, 1870’s corset, and 1970’s skirt length, accented by Star Trek Vulcan ears. FINALLY, THEY REACHED THE THRONE ROOM. Good thing the visual was in caps, because the auditory did not even hint at a change in importance. Looks like Caps lock was left on by accident.
Not a a bad story but... did the author not consider making Eathan a former Military Pilot with training and experience that would be valuable to the Queen and part of the reason he was chosen?
well that's....a nice picture of the alien queen. Beautiful and regal,.
26:03 - Her hair, dark as the void between stars …. Ahem, did the queen color her hair between her night’s walk, and the time the picture was snapped in the throne room? The queen may also be afflicted with black cataracts, as her eyes were black as the space between galaxies!
BONUS!! THE QUEEN IS BRUNETTE!
Except when she is in the throne room.
A weak human, not a warrior.
Why change the thumbnail picture????¿????
Cannot deal with the text being out of sync!
Lack of Synchrony between subtitles, and auditory stimulus, are not devastating, as the subtitles can be ignored. That may present a problem for readers whose hearing loss is not well compensated by their hearing aid.
The first word of each line of text is not highlighted by the moving black contrast.
You need to work on your audio / text syncing - at least! Or I won't be back
The words and audio are out of sync
It's a shame that you dragged me along on a pretty good story then threw up a wall at the end. I have a bitter taste in my mouth for you doing this. It is like many Science Fiction Masterpieces that would end similar to the way you ended this story, but the Reader already knew the story was spread over several books. You killed the story. For that reason, I am Unsubscribing.
oooooo Care to explain ? I may not bother if its as bad as you say.
I want to write my own stories. I am retired now and will be moving in a few months and once I get set up at a new place I will look at it.
I grew up in the golden age of sf when people like Isaac Asimov and Arthur C Clarke were alive and I have some story ideas of my own.
@@ANGRYWOLVERINE2060-ft2nc and what were these two like?
Words and Video OUT OF SYNC !