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An interesting, compelling story, but a bit ambiguous. Who was the father of her child? How did she become pregnant? Was she a hermaphrodite? it is also remarkable that Daniel and Lina (Liona?) never seemed to form any sort of warm relationship, and she remains a single mother. There are many unanswered questions. There needs to be a part 2 to answer these questions and fill in the blanks, don't you agree?

We're either missing a part of the story, or she'll have to name her child Jesus 😂

At around 7 minutes there was no mention of her leaving the shack to use a latrine. The narrator said she didn't leave the shack. Did she hold in her poop and piss for a week or just go on the floor or in a chamber pot?

Yes this one whas the best ever made me emotional..

Who’s the father?

This was a good story but clearly not complete because it ended just as it action against the bad guys was just getting started. Hopefully there will be a part 2 soon.

I would love to hear the rest of the story ❤❤❤❤❤❤

Great story!!! NEED a part #2!!! ❤

Please make this a movie

This story is almost unreadable (Arms crossed).

This is one of the better stories I listened too. Thank you.

As a writer, I would have them have children uniting their peoples and evolving to a higher level.

Good story but the subtitles are in need of proofreading . Ivaras name was spelled 4 different ways. 😢

Took a whole 2:56 till the first "bioluminescence".

Is there a part 2 somewhere?

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More pictures would be nice

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TbN pharesee vs I me self alive 🚽 TbN Betrayals

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Great story but you need a better narrator, this one is too monotone. Inflection makes a big difference.

I love these stories. Great artist. Got more pictures???

this is crazzy. it repeated 3 time. should listen to it before you post it

when is Alex and Liana getting married and be fruitful and multiply. Have fun

Wonderful story!!! Waiting for part #2!!@ ❤

Thank you for bringing such an amazing video! The scene at 4:45 was so noteworthy! 🥳"

Captain Simp to the rescue !

I suppose this is just AI but more back story to fill in the unknowns. Like what year it was. What race kiara is and why she is being persued.

Cpt. Savahoe in space

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Very nice. The narrator's tone needs to end on an up note

Born handicaped but better than in years?

Some serious gaps leave the listener wondering what he missed: the first attack, introductions, when Luke & Cara broke the language barrier, etc. It was confusing, but the story was engrossing enough to continue listening anyway. Look forward to future stories as you polish your technique! Would like to have seen Laura pick up a few words, too; would make her more endearing. Luke's name would've been significant, with his acknowledgment of her by name, as well. Just a thought.

Enjoyable to listen to 👍...

You edited out the first attack!!!!

vocabular could use some work as well as pucuation and her name kept changing

Too bad the voices of the women aren't asw sultry and sweet as the dialog of the story.

Out of all the weird stories I've read (or listened to,) this one stands out as a new beginning, Too bad it's like clickbait and has no middle or ending. If there is such a thing, I would be very interested. lots of possibilities...

Hell no, brothas say no to single moms, it doesn,t matter if alien or not lol

Always the same, a strange understanding of life. Typical american

Thanks for a very well written and delivered story.

Off the beaten path, very nice. Thank you❤

I enjoy stories like this but there are some discrepancies in all of them. There are only obviously minor differences between the humans and aliens no different races

Stepped out into the snow with no coat, boots, etc.. weird..

These stories are all the same. Needy alien doubts human character but ends up being convinced men are not so awful after all. Usually, they end up in love!

I would love to hear or read the full story. This rendering is a piece of sh.... you know the word. It reeks of big chunks missing.... taken away in order to make it into a novel, but it completely ruined the story! 👎 from me