Borrasca Pt.2 | Creep Cast
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- เผยแพร่เมื่อ 18 ก.ย. 2024
- Author: Rebecca Klingel
Story Link: / borrasca
Wendigoon and MeatCanyon discuss the second half of one of the internets best horror stories.
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Going from Jeff the killer to borrasca is like going from dr Seuss to blood meridian
Accurate.
perfect analogy, i want to throw up
couldn't have said it much better 😂
Perfect 👌
No, Dr. Seuss was always way more well thought out that Jeff the Killer. Going from Jeff the Killer to Borrasca is like going from "Everyone Poops" to "Blood Meridian".
None of you gonna mention how Kyle's little brother who "didnt look anything like kyle" is named "p"arker?
I noticed that too, the attention to detail/foreshadowing after rereading this story is crazy
Also notice how Prescott and Parker were both mentioned to have eyes that were “different”. Parker had “little eyes” and I think Prescott’s eyes were yellow. This could be a stretch but maybe that was a small connection/foreshadow that Prescott was his dad.
Well yeah, that much is obvious. K yle, P arker. They don't look that alike, etc etc.
I’m more bothered by the fact that Kimber’s parents become hostile to Kyle after they start dating because the parents know that they’re siblings…
Also the main character's last name started with a W, Whitney's baby gets named William, meaning the father definitely saw Whitney after she disappeared..
I came in to this story blind. Never more have I wanted a horror story to be about eldritch monsters and demons.
Same!!!!
Woulda been nice
An eldritch monster would be a lot more comforting honestly
pense que lo era y ahora tengo asco
I'm at 1:13:00 and the second I heard she was happy made something click, and my thought process rn is that they kidnap children to turn them into this powder, I don't know the method, for some sort of mystical healing properties which is why she is no longer infertile, and why Kimber was able to be born in the first place since her mother was also infertile. I have no idea how close or far from the plot I am but I feel like it's pretty damn close.
I thought borrasca was a slow burn. Turns out, that slow burn was just the fuse on a stick of dynamite.
Yep. I was expecting it to be like a stranger things type thing, but i've heard whispers about it being fucked, and i was like "This isn't so bad". Its very bad
@@ricedbroccoli This was way more fucked than Blood Meridian. I could see Blood Meridian as a movie, yet people say it's too messed up to be one... I do not want to see this as a show or movie... that is how fucked this is.
I really think the worst part (worst in a good way, in a sense of portraying the depravity) of borrasca is the implications of Sam's father being the one to impregnate Whitney routinely. Her babies being "shit" is a result of the inbreeding. It vividly mentions how Sam is built and looks like his father and she flinches when she sees Sam because she sees her father and is aware of the routine.
read part V
@zeelara-paredes2337 what in the actual fresh fuck. It's almost impressive that it was able to get worse.
What happens @abigailfleetwood
@@abigailfleetwoodikr, so bad
Not to mention Prescott saying Whitney will give birth in a week or two then 10 days later William is born.!!
SPOILERS....
I just realized the reason Kimber's mom didn't want Kimber and Kyle to date is because she knows they're half-siblings.
That's how my first relationship went
Also, Sam’s dad is the one to impregnate Whitney, and it’s implied he is the only one to “use” her for the entire time she is at Borrasca.
@@sockit6584 I'm sorry W H A T
I was literally just coming back to this to post that exact comment.
I hope you guys fo Part V, for some closure for my own sanity I had to look it up and skim through it.
& Whitney was due in 1-2 weeks. Mira “had a baby 10 days later” named William. The dad sold Whitney and she was his “horse” 🤢🤢🤢🤢
"i love your sister more than you will ever know"
literally stomach churning once all the pieces come together
I figured that Sam's dad sold Whitney to secure his position as sheriff. Please tell me he didn't rape her. T_T
@@MrBuns-yi2hk well... the ketter says they name the babies after the sherrifs and sames last name has a w and the baby that may be whitneys was william..
@@v0idsc0rpse12 that's nasty
@@v0idsc0rpse12 i was starting to feel better and now my heart's breaking all over again. gonna go throw up and cry now
also prescott said she wasnt his, and the comment of her "making sh*t babies" even more heavily implies what you said. her being so broken after a decade of torture was terrible enough without it possibly coming from someone that's meant to protect her
Could be why she wouldn't look at Sam, if he resembles his father...
The image of the children of the women up the mountain, playing in a treehouse talking of skinned men with their mothers so close by is incredibly haunting. And more considering the poem they recite.
“Underneath the triple tree there’s a man who rates for me and should I go or should I stay my fate the same either way”
The man is the Prescott obviously there’s other men involved, but they are the head and no matter if they were to stay at skinned men or not it probably came from skinned men. It’s still entwined in their fate.
Okay i’m rewatching this for the 8th time reading comments to hopefully put more pieces together and THIS. THIS GAVE ME FULL BODY GOOSEBUMPS. OH NO.
Yea that is unbelievably fucked up they song a poem about a family kidnapping and tourchering potentially hundreds
When the story took the dramatic turn that it does near the end and you finally get everything revealed to you, the very thing commented here is what made me so distraught and genuinely terrified by this story it's not the subject matter that is so terrifying by itself but the fact that it's happening so close to someone without their knowledge but yet still happening is like just the epitome of horrifying in my opinion
I envy my past self laughing at Kyle at the funeral.
frr i was dying laughing and now i’m dead inside
I was giggling so hard and I have had a truly fucked up life. Way worse than what a lot of people today go through and I am still in tears for the first time in a long time.
@@NAT20Ashes this story really makes you just think
@@potato-enjoyerabout throwing up 🔥🔥 I wish the story had skinned men instead
@@ibillisticsheep3264 same I'm NEVER trusting Wendigoon with a creepy pasta recommendation
going from giggling of ‘funereal kyle’ to ‘the stables’ was an insane emotional whiplash
One minute i was laughing then the other i was going to vomit
just wowowow
Same, like I was dying at the Kyle funeral then this hit me like a train from hell
@@AgentWashington28 ‘hit me like a train from hell’ is a phrase i am definitely going to start using
Bro Jesus
Okay, I genuinely thought this was just going to be some "the town has been feeding people to the devil" story. I was wrong. _I was horribly, horribly wrong._ I need a shower.
Yeah I thought it was gonna be a stranger things type beat but ended up more serbian film. I didn’t like how dark it got tbh, lil too much to be entertainment IMO
Were you wrong though?
You know a story is fucked when feeding people to skinned men is far better than the actual story
It’s true if by devil you mean prescott and the shitty sheriffs
I know a creepypasta with the “town has been feeding people to the devil” premise but with a mob family and personally think it’s a really good story. It’s called “I’m a mob hitman with a unique method of body disposal”, I recommend The Dark Somnium video on it since the music, voice acting, and audio are great.
The adjective “sallow” means yellowed in a sickly and almost jaundice like way. In literature it’s used to convey a very deep and distressing kind of nausea, hence why it is as used to describe the character’s face in the context.
Thanks for being that guy, I really wanted to post this as well
@@ronaldfarber589 what can I say, I’m just that guy. I’m him.
Lol I commented the same thing. Silly gooses.
@@santsi7306 ☝️🤓 I believe you mean GEESE
😂 I have literally just commented the same thing. That should teach me to read the comments before posting 😂
The fact that Prescott has been keeping his eye on Kimber since she was 10-9 now is so much disturbing to me
Hoooooly shit, I didn't think about that. He really did just see her as a calf.
@@zoeadkins9095it’s wild though bc In part 5 it was actually sams dad
ew ew ew ew ew ew ew ew ew aaaaaaAAAAAAA
and also the fact that her dad sold her at her own mother's funeral
@@miavujacic4853I don't think he did.
It's implied that they took Kimber and put her father in the shiny gentelman
Just the subtlety of Kyle’s suit not fitting because he’s not actually his fathers child is fucking superb this genuinely deserves an adaptation but the kind where they don’t fuck it up
I remember thinking at one point "there's a lot of red heads in this story", Kyle and Kimber are both red heads and their names start with K
They would fuck it up. I watched the qcode production and I think they definitely fucked it up. To much network TV drama.
Son of a! I didn’t even catch that!
@@walrusArmageddon yeah same that's what I was thinking too
There are just so many little Easter eggs in there, but the suit one got past me. I don't think anything will beat the NoSleep Podcast version for me. It just hit all the right notes in all the right places. I think sometimes I want an adaptation, but I just can't envision going into that with the knowledge that I have from the original story and being satisfied.
It started with me hoping it's not some monster with super powers that takes kids, now i'm wishing from the bottom of my heart that it would just have been a supernatural monster.
Yeah I didn't finish it because it was too real.
jesus christ same
Well, me too. But we wouldn't remember Borrasca if it weren't for that twist ending.
I hate the satanic cult trope but I wish it had just been a cartoonishly stupid cult, instead of... that. Wonderfully made story, but I'm still shaking
From the jump I had a feeling that there was nothing supernatural going on, but I assumed otherwise purely because it was posted on No Sleep.
"Black and Yellow, Black and Yellow- wait, haha black and yellow like the caution tape that they put up at the hospital where your mom jumped!"- Kyle at his gf's moms funeral.
this audibly made me cackle 😂
That is almost as fucked up as this story
The fact that this all could've been solved with a really good water filter is WILD.
Or just like... making it volunteer "work" Or something I don't know! Just not the FUCKING "STABLES"
Fertility clinics that type of stuff wtf man...
No spoilers but part V makes it clear it was always the plan to make the “business”
Or just, moving to another town. There's no reason to keep living there if you know the water is poisoning you.
@@colby1398 ah yes cause it’s so easy to move, especially since the whole town is so broke
Kimber and Kyle being related and Kyle initially “dying for the girl he loved” and then dying for his sister is so interesting because both Sam and Kyle were trying to save their sisters in the end.
I'm glad someone else noticed this. Not too many commenters mentioned/noticed that both names start with 'K' and therfore share the former sheriff as their father.
... also explains why Kimber's family didn't like Kyle
@@sidekickz2180and why the author slyly included the fact that Kimber and Kyle hadn’t had sex yet, thankfully.
That's probably also why Kimber's parents were so adamant that they not be together, despite Kyle never really doing anything to warrant the hate. They knew they were related
I don't really think it's the related thing they where again bc id imagine there is a lot of that in this town considering everyone is infertile but I was thinking the mother was against the relationship bc it continues the cycle
Or worse they wanted Virgins
Meat canyon apologizing for derailing the video and then immediately going on a 20 minute routine joking about the funeral is probably the best part about this video imo
Was the last time i smiled during this since the latter half gets heavy.
I think the only way that could've been better is if his graphic tee was a tuxedo graphic tee, which is what I thought they said at first.
Funeral Kyle is definitely the way I will choose to remember this
i want to go back to when i was crying laughing to that, and not sick at the ending LOL
I'm glad he brought some humor to it though. That ending was some soul crushing shit.
Rebecca the writer has got some insanely good wordplay and phraseology, the way she describes midday as ‘the sun teetered on the apex of the day’ that’s insanely good, she is very gifted
SPOILERSSSSSSSSSSS
2:00:30 Get ready to be MORE BROKEN!
The Daly's kid, William, is Whitney's last baby she delivered 10 days after Sam found her, and the last Shiny Gentleman grinding Sam talks about was Whitney, just like Prescott said. William is Sheriff Walker's kid. Whitney's babies were "low-quality." Sheriff Walker said "I love your sister more than you can imagine. She's my daughter, Sammy. And I will never give her up." Prescott wasn't allowed to touch her since she "wasn't one of his" to violate.
*Whitney was being bred by her dad, and ONLY her dad, for the past 10 years,* and thus why she couldn't even LOOK at Sam, who looked more like their dad when he got older.
She even winces and recoiled at his touch. In her drug induced broken state she probably didn't even see sam just their dad
thanks! i’m about to hysterically cry and vomit!!!!!
Don't type fucking "bred" jesus christ, have some decency.
@@CodeeXD when you reread the story, the line about him “not only having his father’s face, but his build too” feels like a punch to the gut.
I didn't notice that the first time I read and when i heard his name was William I felt like I was going to die. I didn't even put it together with her not being able to look at sam and Sam looking exactly like his dad when he wears his clothes to the funeral
Victims of trafficking are usually trafficked by people they know and trust. This story takes this really serious and real issue and pushes it to extremes. I think that’s why it’s so terrifying
Yeah I've never felt so deeply disturbed from a story before. Makes me think how in a weird way, (deleted because I forgot the internet sees all.) These sort of stories are incredibly unnerving
@@ActuallyAShrimp I share your sentiment as well. This story makes my insides shiver.
The true horror is the one we know it's real and already happen.
I disagree. It takes it to silly extremes and undermines the real issue. This story spent ages building up to some issue, and then it became some stupid r4p3 dungeon story. It reads like a fetish fanfic. I am honestly disappointed by the end of this story because it is genuinely so absurd.
We have real trafficking issues/surrogacy and this story does nothing but turn it into borderline creep h3nta1. Its offensive not because of it being shocking, its offensive for being insanely dumb.
@@pucktoad It does definitely seem heavily shock factor-esque, but at the same time I still think its a good way to make people think about the fact these issues still exist in a way
Realizing now that the sandwich shop that only sells 6 sandwiches is 1000% how they launder some of the money
The details that just keep piling up…
And I bet the reason nobody eats there is because they know it's related to Borrasca
They literally said that at the end of part 1.
I'm thinking that prescott was manipulating meera, meaning that he may have told everyone to not eat there, so that he would have to keep the business on float, but always making meera feel bad about it, like he didnt let het put up publicity or anything like that, so that plus the infertility he's just pushing her into the adoption thing, she was also obsessed with the lineage thing so maybe she was constantly rejecting prescotts baby, and he was trying to get her on board because she could be a liability, but if she take the baby that would make her an accomplice so she would be under control
I'll have to check
That reveal just takes what Thomas said and added so much weight to it: “You kids have no respect. It’s Jimmy that *made* you that way.”
That’s the thing about horror. It’s worse when the monsters are just people.
I love that Hunter took over, noticing that Isaiah was having trouble censoring the material and that Isaiah was visibly uncomfortable. “You go for it baby girl..” Was such a real response of disgust from Isaiah.
Such a good friend to take over when he doesn't mind cursing and knows Isaiah does❤
It was so sweet of Hunter. These dudes are my favorite.
@@MrIanMatthew Can’t argue with that
@@TameUrDemons I didn’t even realize he had a problem with it until seeing him interact with Hunter because I noticed how good Hunter was at covering it for him. I fully agree with you!
His name is Nathan
"Touching grass isn't enough. I need HORRIBLE things to happen to POWERFUL PEOPLE."
The fact that this came out at the same time as the red thread epstein episode puts into perspective how the real Prescotts, are running the world
This is slowly becoming my fucking mantra throughout life as I grow up.
@@Theguineachannel irl it wouldn't have this flavor imo.
real life sexual abuse is very one sided. and as far as I can tell, transactional. it wouldn't be about babies or anything, just pure sex.
and while the baby part was the most shocking, yes, it's flavor town fluff and quite a cute little horrific tidbit to make the story pop.
@@HungPham-qq6me i think the baby stuff was because the author needed a reason for the town to acsept what was happening. I know that irl its different
@@Theguineachannel I would agree. real life sex trafficking is different. I would argue it's a lot more sadistic and twisted than what is shown here, but with a lot less shock factors.
I feel like there are two eras of my life: my life pre-Borrasca and my life post-Borrasca
honestly why is this so real
That's exactly what I am feeling right now. I think no story had this impact in my life like this one
Eh...
Same feel like I just started a new phase of my life defined by pre and post reading borrasca.
Kinda weak honestly. Don't know what the drama is about. It's a good thing that nobody here knows what hentai is...
8 months pregnant and this just broke my heart. I was in tears listening to this.
This story is haunting. But to change the subject hopefully to something happier, how is your baby coming along?
Saw your comment about a month after you posted it. Hope you are feeling well and the baby is healthy and happy!
@@MetaFanWinglittle man is doing great! He's coming any day now. 💗
@@Guy61440 He's a stubborn boy and still waiting for him to come. 💗 Thanks for asking ☺️
@@HavenGal
That’s great! I hope you and he are happy and healthy!
“Funeral Kyle” is officially the best character from this podcast so far, nearly beating out the Frat cave diver 😂😂
I WAS CRY LAUGHING
Frat group formation
Nah, Jeff the feeling still the peak, he got a feeling that he felt after all
Hunter making Wendigoon giggle is my favourite part of every episode, lol
I was DYING 💀💀💀💀💀
Wendi sitting there, slumped, saying that he needed to go hug his wife really was the whole mood at the end.
💯
i just wish meat would have said he needs to hug his wife too, would have lightened the mood
@@stewinjo2861 why should he go hug Wendygoons wife?!
@@mjm5899 Because it's a joke.
@@mjm5899Meat is married too. Last time I checked.
The detail of how often characters having red hair is mentioned is so subtle and genius. Killian is a redhead. Kimber, Kyle, and a few others are mentioned to be redhead
I saw another comment that since red hair is a recessive gene trait, it's possible Kyle and Kimber were full siblings.
At the beginning of the story, during Sam's first day at school, a girl asks him if he's Kimberly's brother. When he says no, the girl responds with something like "I thought so, since you aren't a redhead". A trail of bread crumbs.
This is one of the many details I didn't catch until I read/heard the story for a second time.
@aldranzam3456 It’s not out of the question that two people with the same hair color can be unrelated, I know a streamer who’s a redhead and his wife is also a redhead, he’s French Canadian and she’s American with idk maybe Irish or Scottish heritage lol, but yeah in the context of this story recognizing that trait, oof really fucked up that they were dating. Also doesn’t Kim get raped by Sam’s dad and she becomes infertile? I fucking hate this story lol.
@@derpstick5467 there are several ethnicities that have a red hair gene. There's one from Spain, and there's one that may be shared in the British Isles, I'm pretty sure you'll find one in other areas as well,but I know those two for sure. And it's not as if everyone in those areas is closely related. There may be some connection in the deep past...but that's a research question I'm not up to tonight.
I feel so fucking sad for Kimberly btw, Kyle lost his body but she also suffered similarly, fucking hate how she suffered, course she’s strong not to let the rape ruin her but not being able to have kids anymore, having that choice taken away from her, it just sucks. I got a fondness for redheads too so yeah what she goes through makes me even more sad for her. @@ladykoiwolfe
Never have felt such a visceral desire to murder fictional characters. It honestly goes to show how incredible of an author the creator is that they're able to create such vitriol for people who aren't (technically, because terrible people in real life exist) real. But the descriptions of their abhorrent actions and equally disgusting character are so well crafted, you're able to feel incredibly invested in their lives and almost even feel like you're there too. It's genuinely fantastic and I feel like I'm writing this extra thesis to try and get something good out of this story because god this story takes a nosedive straight into depravity and the best take I can get out of it is how well it's written. As i said, never before have i had such a genuine desire to hurt, punish, torture, fictional characters to the point where it feels like they've gotten their karmic justice. I both applaud the writer for doing so well, but also curse the writer for bringing this work into existence. (And myself and my morbid curiosity for wanting to hear this. Fuck you, me!)
this is the same reaction I had and I'm kinda surprised I don't see more of it
more people reacting this way I mean
I have never wanted to burn a town down quite so much as I do after listening to this story....
I just realized something. Sam’s dad said “I love your sister more than you could ever know” and not only that Jimmy said that she was “making shit babies” it wasn’t because of the years of abuse. It was because her kids were her dads :(
Oh fuck...
came here to say this ALSO, thats why Whitney wouldnt look at Sam and went "submissive". There's a part earlier in the story where Sam talks about how much he looks like his dad. Through years and the sedatives, Whitney probaly thought Sam was her father and not her brother.
Yuuuup, the baby is named William too, as in Walker. Because of the first initials of the other kids... It verifies that.
I made this realization too and wanted to throw up
@@sinimonroll4302 Dude, same.
I like when Hunter detects that he's got Isaiah by the funny bone, and starts mauling it like a rabid dog
This comment pulled me out of the depression from the absolute depravity of this story thank you
@@Ezekiel360get back there *stables*
That's the best pair in any friend group to be honest. A friend that's easy to laugh, and a really funny friend. You've basically got your own Creep Cast right in front of your eyes.
The comment Kimber made about how Prescott has been staring at her since she was in the 5th grade, just the idea of him already looking forward to what he gets to do to the girls from when they were like 9 years old is so extra eughhhh
oh no I FORGOT ABOUT THAT PART… man that’s just so much worse….
That was in the back of my mind throughout the end of the story...
god....
i didn’t even think about that…oh my god
And the prescotts and sheriffs know there’s a better way they just chose the one where they get to have the most fun. Volunteering or artificial insemination are options but they know damn well what they’re doing, they like their method more. They know drugs are another option for money. And Jimmy may just think it’s normal, he may have been able to just do whatever to them since his balls started dropping while his dad just encouraged it
Damn I wasn’t even thinking of that. Wow.
Sam's dad did sell his daughter to become sheriff and if you recall he says "She's my daughter, Sammy. And I will never give her up." and they said she "produces shit babies" that's because all her babies are inbred, the last thing that solidifies this is that William is her baby, and their family name is Walker, so it's Sheriff Walker's baby.
"I love your sister more than you will ever know."
Another detail was the first girl sam finds at the "stables" with Prescott was one of the snobby girls in his class that supposedly ran away with a college guy.
THANK YOU I TOTALLY FORGOR WHO SHE WAS BUT STILL GOT FUCKED UP LISTENING TO THAT
Yeah, the moment they casually mention her having "run off with some guy from college" I f***ing knew that she was taken
Bro wtf i hate this story
Holy fuck nice catch dude that's insane
i completely forgot why i recognized that name when it was mentioned good god
Sallow is, in fact, a word. Sallow means unhealthy in appearance - often yellow in color - and is almost invariably used to describe someone's complexion. Ex: His smile was as engaging as ever, but from his sallow complexion, I knew he was sick.
Thank you - this bugged me a little!
Good- someone has already them 😂 means I can rest peacefully.
When English speakers don't even know their own language.
@@Domuratrue but also I’ve never heard sallow in my life before this point
Yeah I came here to say that.
Kimbers dad getting so mad about her and Kyle dating makes so much sense. He’s like ew no, but can’t say anything.
Yeah but if you think about it, when the majority of the town’s children are created by the same Ps and Ks, at a certain point doesn’t this become unavoidable? Still extremely ew
Man i never thought of that
@chomiya8831 of course it is. But they know what they did is so fucked they can't actually tell their kids, don't marry that person because they will wonder why afterwards.
@@chomiya8831 Well, it says later in the story that other men could also impregnate the girls, so I guess that's how they diversify the gene pool.
it might also have to do with the note. kimber mentions that her parents had been fighting, and in the note her mom says to not let her dad read the note. i believe that they had been arguing about kimber being sent to borrasca, and her mom killed herself because of that guilt
I just wanna say it’s really nice to see two guys act with empathy and decency. They understand how vile this is, they don’t make jokes, they support each other when it got too much. Yallre some the only guys I can imagine handling this story with the gravity it’s worth.
Even as a guy this story is heavy and you gotta have no empathy to not feel the weight of it.
Well yeah, not all of us a sociopaths like the incel who wrote this trash and decided to post their wet dream/manifesto under the guise of a creepypasta.
The marking inside the tree house saying Gateway to Hell, Mile Marker 1 was crazy foreshadowing since that's where the women are handed over
My first thought was the lone mattress in the corner and the piles of torn clothing made me think the treehouse was the first "stable". Or at least the closest to town.
@@zoeadkins9095It's where it began, but then went to the mine when demand grew higher.
Probably why the place was noted as having real curtains too. Got to protect those paying customers' privacy after all!
Parker and the other kids coming down the mountain around the time Kimber and her dad would be taken up has me wondering what they saw too.
and the torn clothing when they were taken away
Remember the poem from the start? "Underneath the triple tree there's a man who waits for me and should I go or should I stay my fates the same either way." Absolutely heartbreaking
OMFS SHUT UP I WAS LITERALLY THINKING ABOUT IT TOO 😭😭
oh my god and the "entrance to hell" mile marker
I haven’t seen anybody mention this but *spoilsrs for the last two books of the Grishaverse series* but I’m wondering if Leigha Burdugo took inspiration from Borasca at the end Rule of Wolves. Similarly, young women are going missing around the world, particularly disadvantaged young women, to be collected and r@ped, so they become pregnant with experimental babies. It’s interesting seeing it from the perspective of a young girl figuring it all out rather than Sam, a young boy. She even touched on Nina, the girl who finds all the young women, hearing the cries of all these young women, past who have died and those still stuck there, calling to her and begging her to free them. The weight of generations of human suffering screaming in her brain before she knew what it was. Rule of Wolves is newer so I’m pretty sure Borasca came out first. It was pretty shocking to read in a book that was otherwise, not a horror story
Yeah I still never really got the poem, even after reading it all
@@seanmadson1327 Yup. The first part clearly works, with the whole "deposit the goods there to be picked up", but the second part makes no sense. "Should I go"? Yes, it'd absolutely change your fate if you went away. Teenagers can elope.
Same thing with the "carve your name to be safe" thing, which is purely there for horror cliches and then misinterpreted in the story itself, by the very kids that established it as "good" in the first place.
HOLY SHIT THE REASON KIMBERS MOM DIDN"T LIKE KYLE DATING KIMBER WAS BECAUSE SHE KNEW THEY WERE RELATED BY BOTH BEING CHILDREN OF THE SHERIF
Wonderful you have finished me off.
I am now dead.
Why did I open the comments section
No. I hate you for making me realize this
I'm glad I watched most of this before opening the comments lol
I think theres a mention of Kyle have red hair in this part and we know Kimber has red hair from part 1
Im 22, I’ve had two partners in life, both of whom had experienced EXTREME levels of sexual abuse and mental torture in their lives. I have never had a story, other than POSSIBLY Berserk, give me the same feeling of dread, nausea, and just generally extremely upset emotions as when those women I loved tell me about what happened to them. This brought me back to sitting there with my face buried in my hands as they bluntly, flatly, told me what happened. Those eyes described in the book, the dead, broken eyes of those women, felt exactly the same way in my mind as the voices of my previous partners. I hate this, so fucking much I can’t express it properly. Kudos to the author, she did fucking phenomenally. People need to read this, and people need to hate it.
This is such a phenomenal take, and you are a wonderful partner to perceive this in such a way.
It sounds like you try to be the best partner you can to these people who have gone through so much and it just warms my heart ❤
I appreciate that MeatCanyon took over when he knew it was hard for Wendigo to continue to read in part 4
Yeah I love wendigoon but him moaning like a baby was really annoying
@@JackSigma7872 You love Wendigoon how, for what then? He has always been sensitive and had a very strong moral compass, that is his known character.
@@happyclam1266 not all content he does is horror. He did the funny little Apochrypha video and such stuff ig
yeah that was really nice of him
They were both so gracious to eachother in sharing the road
I love how midway through the story, Sam goes from calling his dad “ dad” to “ the Sheriff “ to show the distrust that has grown between his father… they mighta touched on this 🤷♂️
I noticed that during their fight at the police station, I thought it was very subtle but pactful. You see Sam slowly lose faith in his so called "dad"
pactful? you're a joke@@honeysugar906
extremely good catch. props to you for pointing this out
Haven't finished yet, but I am in tears over the Funeral Kyle imagery
Edit: And now I'm in tears over Kyle
pain
I just wanna give Kyle a hug man
"Yo, her eyes look all buggy, it's weird Kimber. What the hell's going on with you though" had me DYING
You two are so funny together
The part of the funeral for kimbers mom being so empty also makes so much sense. No one from the town could stomach going to the funeral of kimbers mom because they all know why she was so depressed and why she killed herself and to pay any repects to the woman who could no longer carry those burdens would mean having to face their own sins and recognize their own part in the atrocity
Good catch, I didn’t even think about that after finishing the story
That makes so much sense, thank you for spelling it out 😅
Holy shitttt
The foreshadowing is crazy. Even looking back at Jimmy saying he’d met with Sam’s dad and then Whitney just so happens to disappear shortly after, or when Kimber mentions that Jimmy had been eyeing her since she was young- it’s all so depraved but this is so well written
I think that's why I hate it so much. But in a good way.
If the story was written like Jeff the Killer, we would've been somewhat disturbed but we can laughed it off. But because it's so well written that I feel like I've known these characters for years, it wrenches my gut and twist it. My goodness.
Uhh maybe you should have a lil spoiler warning. I’m very anticipating soemthing w/jimmy now and also feel like the story has been spoiled to a degree
@@kawaiicake8038 uhhhhhh maybe dont read the comments before you finished the video.
@@seapackgaming4316 i agree one should avoid reading comments because shitty people spoil without warnings.
But also it's very easy to not be shitty and put a spoiler warning.
@@deadzoneternity The comment section is there to discuss the video.... It's not spoilers, it's discussion about the video. Like i said, don't read the comments while watching it.
I just realised... the tree house... it all started there... its too well constructed to be just something kids made. These were older people. They built treehouse as a base before Thomas Prescott... before Borrasca... the room, the matress, the clothes, the 1st mile marker to hell... the 1st step to the town's revival... the 1st step to their path into hell. Someone has started a trafficking ring before it became a necessity. Someone brought it as the solution to their problems.
i was looking for this comment!! this makes so much sense.
Damn it!
I knew the treehouse had a connection to the grander scheme but I couldn't put it together. this makes perfect sense and also explains the smell
@@mrswhiddleberry and the clothes.
I'm also willing to bet I that it started in the Prescotts' house, but the guy got greedy and wanted more money, but couldny do it in front of the Prescotts, so he built a new meeting spot so he could charge triple. Hence why it's called the triple tree.
Borrasca is a really special story. It is absolutely horrifying and never feels edgy. It never feels like things happen to be shocking. Shocking awful things happen, but the author writes them in a very respectful way.
The first time I read it it kept me up at night, but listening to you guys read it I just cried. Horrifyingly sad story
1:42:28 I had to pause here and reflect on a second, realizing Meera’s husband wasn’t trying to convince her to do IVF, but to adopt a child from the stables. God. I feel sick.
It still bothers me that there were so many things to do aside from sex trafficking and the Meera and her husband still decided to do it. The family could have adopted, did IVF, surrogacy, so many other options and they did the worst possible option.
And what hurts me the most is that they bought an inbred baby. The baby is named William, and Kimber and Sam's dad's last name is Walker.
W.
Walker.
Walker.
William.
@grimsladeleviathan3958 if you listen to the secund story. When they do back 10 years later. That's exactly what happend. Sam sees the kid
Jimmy said to Sam that Whitney was due in the next couple weeks and that she would be put through the grinder after because she was putting out "shit babies". Meera and her husband received their baby 10 days later and Sam heard the Machine the next day. They received Whitney's baby. And to make it even more sickening, her father likely raped her because the baby had a "W" name. Absolutely vile.
@@grimsladeleviathan3958 noooooo 😭 I just made that connection.
Sam’s dad literally gave away his son/grandson, killed his own daughter, and disowned and gaslit his son into homelessness in the same like 48 hours
I audibly said, "Fuck this guy" when I put all the pieces together.
And if you read Part V you'll find out he did some even worse stuff.
Yeah it's not a very good story
@@pucktoadNo, it's a good story, it's just that horrible things happen in it.
No, it's really not. It reads like a fetish fanfiction. It doesn't take any of the ending material seriously at all and the plot twist of weird breeding and incest doesn't make any sense.
I believed this was supernatural up until Kimber was kidnapped. The 3rd female victim, with no known male disappearances. That can really only mean one thing, and I hate that my expectations weren't subverted
I also hate that I had the same realization which was confirmed by that
I hate that I thought of anything even remotely close. And disgusted that it was even worse somehow
3rd? There was the sister who was kidnapped, then the mother who killed herself. Two incidents unless I missed something
@@0730bcorm Which sister are you referring to; Whitney or Paige? Regardless, I was referring to Paige, Whitney, and Kimber
And they almost never mention it. They mention disappearances. But no one ever mentions "huh weird that it's all girls huh". Bc they know. They all know. Fuck that's disgusting
The reveal on the meanings of the children's names combined with that throwaway line about Kimber's mom only disliking Kyle AFTER they started dating 😬
I can't believe the glossed over when Sam was told that he looks just like his father in his funeral attire... And that's why Whitney wanted nothing to do with Sam when she saw him again.
I missed so many details 😅
To quote Markiplier; "That painted a very vivid picture of something exceptionally fucked!"
Hahaha which video is this from?? I can absolutely hear his voice saying this but I can't remember where
Absolutely sounds like him lol
Where's my milk 🥛
@@DFTBA221Bit was during the fnaf sister location playthrough after baby explains what she did to Elizabeth
Took the words out of my mouth dude 😭 I’m like wow the writing is so good!! O-oh. Okay. I wish it’d. Stop being so good and detailed
The “you go for it baby girl I’m just gonna throw up” just shows how hard this story is hitting Wendi
What timestamp is this at? I keep trying to go back and find it and im lost ☠️
@@chief6102 @1:45:00
@@chief61021:45:02
@@chief6102 he says it at 1:44:57 after Meat offers to take over
The most beautiful part abt this for me is that it starts with them as kids, urban legends and carving their names into the tree so they don’t disappear, making us think this is something supernatural the entire time, and then they grow up, and realize the monster isn’t supernatural. It’s very real. That twist alone makes this creepy pasta the best of them all, the fact it makes you think it’s about some kind of magical entity, when it’s not. And the author made us think that while the main cast were children, which is when most people believe in supernatural monsters. It’s amazing
Going back through the story again, hearing the lines of Sam's dad, "I love your sister more than you can imagine, she’s my daughter, Sammy. And I will never give her up." are now so haunting and fill me with rage and disgust.
Even worse is it seems like the behavior had been going on for awhile. The dad was fired from his law last law enforcement gig for unknown reasons, Whitney was distant and upset from the beginning, and the mom was depressed and absent from the beginning as well.
And the fact that
(spoiler for part V)
He, the father, later kills the ex-Sheriff for having Whitney put through the Shiny Gentleman (due to her 'poor quality' incest babies) implies he was planning to keep her alive for longer as his tied up sex slave. Truly, twistedly obsessed with his own daughter. That poor girl. Death was a mercy.
@@D3niz3n”death was a mercy” is right. i wasn’t surprised that whitney didn’t seem concerned about sam saying she was going to be killed, i think that’s what she had been hoping for at that point
💀🤮
Yeaaaaah.
Going from laughing at the funeral to hearing them describe the absolute sickening depravity of the stables was no where near the direction i thought this would go.
"gee kimber whats wrong lol" to....😭
one of the worst things for me that i only realized on the second time around is that some of the parents sometimes sell their daughters back, but kimberly's dad didn't want her to be taken. he guarded the letter from kimberly and the prescotts because he knew that if they knew kimberly read the letter, they would take her. so he guarded it, but couldnt stop kimberly from getting to it, and they took her to borrasca to cover it up, then when the father fought against it, he was killed.
Exactly...that man, who found out the truth only after his wife died. It explains why he was so resentful at the funeral, too.
Wait so he didn’t know the child was his??
@@D3niz3nI am pretty sure that Kimberly’s father knew. It wasn’t a stated directly in the text. But my guess is he knew
@@liberpolo5540 He had to know, but if we assume what the first comment said was true. He still loved her as a daughter he raised so he would still have that protective fatherly stuff.
THEY HEARD THE MACHINE IN BORRASCA SHRED DAYS AFTER THEY DISAPPEARED. THAT WAS THE FATHER.
"Baby what's wrong? You haven't touched your mother's coffin."
the most stomach-turning part of this story is when sam’s dad tells him that he loves whitney more than sam can ever know, and that he’ll never let her go
What’s even more so is the name of that kid is William and their last names start with ‘W’. 😢
And his sister was due any day so it makes it even worse
I need a drink
@carsonofson2347 I'm so sorry man I read this in like 7th grade
@@carsonofson2347 I don't think any drinks will help at this point, mate.
The heaviest realization isnt that Whitney was very close to giving birth, and then the dailies get a child a few weeks later. It’s the realization that if “William” is really Sam’s dad’s baby, that means *he did that to his own daughter*. That’s what she flinched when she saw Sam. It wasn’t a foreign concept to her. Heart breaking.
Amazing video, good coverage of a difficult subject. Love you guys
Sam's dad also mentioned to Sam at one point that he can't imagine how much he loved his daughter, which is pretty sickening if you connect the dots.
For further context the direct quote is: "I love your sister more than you can imagine, she’s my daughter, Sammy. And I will never give her up."
@@vorayne its absolutely vile
I literally put this together just now and came back to comment. It's so absolutely fucked especially when Prescott says that she isn't his and that she's been putting out bad babies recently, the bad babies are likely a result of that atrocity.
I don’t remember if it was Part 2 but somewhere there is a kind of reveal that Whitney was “kept” for Walker. No one else was allowed to have their way with her. . . So yeah.
yeah cuz its pointed out how sam looks almost identical to his dad, so she flinches when she sees him. so fucked
28:28 - 36:35 Meat making fun of Kyle at the funeral compared to part 4 is the highest contrast of emotion I've ever seen in one video.
Hilarious stuff!
Read this comment before getting to part 4. Wtf lol
I was crying laughing at the "funeral kyle" bit and after finishing the whole episode I wanted to destroy something. jfc, this story
I hate the whole unalive verbage. As someone who was once suicidal talking about it to someone was the only thing that saved me. With platforms pushing the word as this taboo word just makes it feel like you can't talk about it if you are going through it, which is the worst way for someone in that position to feel.
It feels so disrespectful... Sure, don't say "suicide" if the video is gonna get demonitized or whatever, but why not "ended things"? even just saying died, or "did it" would be better
I absolutely agree, it really takes away from the seriousness of what it is. It feels like we’ve gotten to this point where society doesn’t let you talk about suicide or suicidal thoughts, and that’s not fixing the problem in the slightest
Kyle at the funeral was like watching a meat canyon animation be written in real time. Absolutely had me dying
First thing papa makes after he comes back from his hiatus on MeatCanyon is a parody of Kyle at the funeral 💯
@@asleepyb0i400I hope he does
Nothing would make me laugh harder. It would be a deep cut for those who don’t know the story or the podcast.
My small town (about 10,000 people) had a massive human trafficking scandal involving over 50 young girls trafficked through the church. The man who took most of the fallout for the situation ended up unaliveing before he faced justice. This story is horrifying because of how possible this is in any city.
Damn that is awful. Got a news story on that?
Borrasca has one of the MOST REAL endings of all the classic creeppypastas of that time.
@@joeyjojoshabbadoo8153 hard to give a news story without doxxing myself, but given the info it’s not terribly hard to find
Out the name of that town so no one ever goes there, jfc…
Still waiting for sauce on this claim.
The kids stopping on the playground in a dead silence at the sound, not even knowing it's one of their mothers' deaths. Growing up the entire time hearing one of their mothers dying and not even knowing. Playing and running around yelling about the horrors that brought them into the world, thinking it's just a scary story about skinned men. Their "parents" knowing at every toll of the grind that it could have been their child's actual mother.
We can assume they all realized it later in life as they learned about what goes on
I wonder if Kimber and Kyle (the only ones who seem to actually be against the stables) think of the fact their mothers probably hated them, Kimber mentions her “mom” and not anything about the woman who birthed her so probably not
1:40:10 I agree that ages plays a massive part when it comes to processing information but I would also like to take into account gender. The difference between a young man and a young women reading this is they will interpret this in drastically different ways, a young man reading this will be scared but they are scared of the impossible, while women are scared of the possibility of this. Because tragically this is a possible reality for women, and this is probably a reality for more women than we realize. Love hearing both of your thoughts and opinions on this story! What a terrifying yet compelling read.
This is what I thought too, any men I’ve heard and if I remember correctly either of them even said they thought of it happening to their sisters or close female friends.. then I wondered why wouldn’t they think of it happening to themselves first?
the true horror was that this is an everyday passing thought that women have, one turn down the wrong alley and you end up like that. life is scary
When i noticed it was only women disappearing i thought it might be something like sx trafficking but it didnt fully make sense with theme of the story to me. I do think women are more likely to consider that than men.
@@Lenlon703 I guess because the vast majority of men are cisgender, and can't relate to the extra torture of forced pregnancy. It's just not something that could happen.
figuring out that the last time sam heard the machine was his sister being killed after his boss got her baby is devastating
His boss is his dad. The baby's name starts with W. For Sheriff Walker. God this story is horrifying
@@rue6914maybe that’s coincidence considering they moved to this town somewhat recently….unless maybe he lived there as a child or something and moved back. Tbh, why move from St. Louis MISSOURI just to go to the backwoods of Missouri? But I’m just speculating
@@JanieBee I'm not really sure where your confusion lies.
The idea is that we only know one of the "recent" babies names starts with a W. It's been 6 years since the "disappearance". There was no reason for protag to check on this earlier.
But the reality is that his father "sired" the child with her and then she was thrown in the meat grinder afterwards. There's even the throwaway line about "shit babies" (although genetic defects don't work like that, really) to hint at this more. There are probably like 6 or 7 other kids starting with W in Kindergarten as Sam leaves in the end.
@JanieBee you find out the reason they moved there in the next part
I missed this part :/ what is the time code ?
I love the subtle detail of how sam begins referring to their dad as the sheriff later on
His
@@geoffreywright3153Their. Plural.
His and his sister's dad.
Yeah I noticed that… as well
It shows how much he distrusts and starts to dislike the sheriff it’s such a spilt from the start of the first part
The fact that Kyle’s parents used borasca twice is crazy
there are definitely more that aren't mentioned by name in the story
Right ? Fellas mustve been LOADED to afford it twice
I was thinking “these probably aren’t good parents” when she said his six year old brother should go with him even to an Exorcist movie marathon. I didn’t know how right I was.
3* kyle, kimber and parker
@@Perception47kyle and kimber aren't full siblings. kimber is not related to kyle's family. even though she is kyle's half-sister, neither of them know that for most of the story and kimber is the only one between them who ever learns that
This story makes me so angry as a survivor of SA. I’m not saying it’s bad or gratuitous. But it definitely brought back a lot of very angry very helpless feelings. Going through this story with both of you bringing levity in the right spots and the open disgust and heartbreak at the end has been very helpful in digesting this story. I appreciate y’all providing a space, even if not intended, to process these emotions along with you and come out with an appreciation for it as a controversial art piece. This podcast series definitely has a new dedicated fan.
Likewise.
I hate this story and how exploitative it feels.
@@sterlingdavis8244 yeah they're saying that they don't think it was gratuitous, so you're actually disagreeing with them lol
@@violet7773 I get the sentiment. I think without the right framing from the podcast I would dislike it a lot more and dismiss it because I don’t really like these kinds of horror stories. Also I didn’t read any of the extended stuff so my framing is just what they read here. But I’m appreciative that they got me to step outside myself for this one and see it from a different angle. The writer is definitely good. The content is repelling for me (even tho it was good it’s just not a theme I can enjoy objectively) but the podcast made it an overall enjoyable experience. I see why they’re so popular.
I was so engrossed in the story. The whole first two parts I was just waiting for some skinned creature to be in the mountain. It’s crazy the reader spends the entire story waiting for the monster, only to find that the monster is human the whole time, and yet it’s entirely more terrifying than what you were expecting because it’s the furthest thing from what humanity should be. My goodness. I need a hug.
I was honestly expecting the mine to be sentient and having the monster be the mine. Nevertheless, great story. It was really hard to sit through
exactly dude
Honestly, same. I enjoyed listening to the 1st part a lot, because it was very nicely written, it made you care for the main characters. I did not expect it to end this way, not only the revelation was so disturbing and sad, but the unresolved ending and the feeling of helplessness was really depressing. Incredibly good story but my day is kinda ruined now lol
@@pygmalion5361 I KNOW I wanted the good ending :( I found Mr Creepypasta’s part V reading.. I’m almost finished with it, but it isn’t looking like it’s gonna be the good ending lol more of a continuation but still soooo well written.
I know why she did it but the twist makes the intro line "The truth is worse than monsters or men" so dumb considering it was fundamently men.
Holy shit, the extended bit about Kyle being the worst funeral guest ever and Wendigoon increasingly losing it as it went on was amazing, 10/10.
Completely derailed the video and I'm currently loving every minute of it 😂
My husband asked me why I was cracking up.
I said I am listening to a horror story but the readers are MST3K on it.
The way papa meat can take a nothing line like " what's wrong Kimber? " And turn it into a full 20 minute comedy sketch is genius
@@FloridasYesteryear omfg, that made me chuckle. 100% true
My favorite part of any Creep Cast episodes is Hunter making Wendigoon pee his pants laughing. Always love seeing friends mess about with each other and making them laugh.
“Sallow” refers to someone’s skin having an unhealthy yellow or paled cast to it; sallow was definitely the right word
This is the comment I was looking for 🙏
all I came to say ty
I came here to say the same, it's been bothering me since I heard it last night
Beat me to it.
@@jennifermccauley5465it’s quite amusing since they used the term jaundice previously themselves
Can’t remember if it was in this part or part 1
Why would anyone stay in the town with the water supply that makes you infertile and why would anyone move there?
Power and money hungry people see an affluent town and want a piece
@@scramblemindjumble the affluent town ran out of ore and resources. Also Why would the whole entire town decide that letting their daughters get taken away and raped and drugged for years until they were disposed of by evicerating their bodies in a machine that is so loud it rings around in the town as the best option instead of idk moving away to the next town over?
They don't know. The information is obviously being suppressed. It's all a part of the scheme.
so that a dumb story can happen
@@scramblemindjumble its not abour the elites, its about literal dumbass residents
Y'all don't know how desperately I was waiting for this
Got in an accident 15 minutes ago so creep cast is my therapist
Legit jumped for joy......not my proudest moment
Edit: holy shit what the fuck I can’t believe I was happy 2 hours and 30 minutes ago
sameeeeeeee
Same lol
Omg same 😂😂😂
Wendigoon part 1:
“This is such a great story I’m so excited”
Wendigoon part 2:
“I’m never taking a suggestion from you guys again”
The embodiment of the incredibles man meme
As a mid-20s woman, I don't think I've ever encountered such a distinctly feminine horror story as this.
this is what I've been telling people to get them to watch these episodes of creepcast, there's something about it that I think only a woman could have written
Im a 16 yr old guy but this story has made me wish i was unable to understand English. Horror and disturbing stories dont affect me very often but this truley horrified me
It's true. This is the kind of story that reminds me that we miss such a richness of stories from people who don't get a chance to create art from their unique points of view to get, god help me, masterpieces like this.
its not just feminine. TRUST ME
@@hujjwal7682 Speaking at least for myself, my comment and understanding of the rest of this little comment thread was not to exclude the effects upon anyone else, any possible writer, etc. For me, the horror feels specifically targeted at people who can become pregnant, possibly from the point of view of an author who can become pregnant, which I now feel remiss to have equated so quickly to femininity. All of that said, I think it's a very powerful piece of horror writing focused in large part on a group of people who are used for their ability to get pregnant (or not) and their "value" being tied to that.
The s.a. portion is a potentially universal experience of course as well, and I don't want to diminish that aspect of it at all, but I'm incredibly grateful to not be able to speak to personally that aspect from the position of the author, the in-story narrators, the real life podcasters narrating and commenting on it as they go, etc.
I think it's also incredible that we are seeing the immediate story and the story as being relayed to us by people whose value is not based on their ability to become pregnant and see their visceral reactions to it in real time. I thought it was also really interesting in Wendigoon (I swear I'll remember their actually names soon) having had such different reactions to it when he was a teenager versus a full adult with a much richer life experience. From what I can tell, it went from a vaguely unsettling creepypasta to something so much more powerful, intense and personal as he matured, giving me another "interesting" rabbit hole to want to consider and analyze with respect to this piece.
I kinda figured out what the shiny gentleman would be and kinda what the prescotts' were profiting from before we got there, but I'm really annoyed and frustrated that Sam was able to just leave with knowing that's up there. Like how could you not go back with a weapon/weapons and raid the place, kill jimmy, burn the buildings down, etc? He might not be successful in his attempt but holy crap how could you not at least try???? I would be down to my dying breath trying to stop something that horrendous that was so close both physically and personally to me. Also the tidbit about Whitney having her child, it being the result of her dad r**ing her, and then her being executed is really horrible. The dad really is the worst part of this with him not only selling his daughter into this breeding operation, but also being the one to "breed" her. Awful.
Nice story 10/10 :)
On a positive note, the part about Kyle at the funeral was some of the hardest I've laughed in a while.
Well you'd love part 5 since it's basically a revenge story. A good enough consolation after that disturbfest
@@HankGreenburgit’s not her dad who did it is the old sheriff not the dad
I have re listened and I was incorrect. fuck all of you who recommend this story.
@@TheBlueCray0nIsBlue Whitneys baby is named William. All the other children are named after the first letter of the father's last names. Sams family, his dad, is a Whitinger. W for William
Kyle is the type of guy to set his drink down on the casket
*spills drink* "WOAH DUDE!! clean up on Isle.. YOUR MOM!!"
Thank you for the funny comment among all the terrible ones 😰 I needed this so much
Without a coaster. 😂
While leaning against the casket and trying to flirt with Kimber.
He the type of guy to get stomped
The fact that Kyle went from "joke" to "hero" I just love it. Waiting for the next part
Joke, hero, vegetable
@@aliveandwellinisrael2507 Kyle's three stages
I think why Sam’s sister almost resisted him trying to help is because the author stated sam not only had the same build but looked like his father. So I think when she saw Sam she only recognized her father, the man who had been abusing her, not her brother coming to help her
oh GOD
No your totally right and I’m pretty sure the William kid is implied to be Sam’s sisters kid which also has the starting letter of the dad. It also might explain why it’s said her children are frail or whatever because they are literally inbreed.
yeah i came to the comments to say this too
@@lawrenceviolette1715 my thoughts exactly
Prescott also said she’s not mine to Sam so if she’s not his or killians then it must be the dad
I'M ACTUALLY BEGGING FOR BORRASCA V PLEASE BRO
there is, just google it. some people don't like it though.
When the librarian said “have fun up there” she didn’t mean the hike…
Omg I didn’t catch that. Her name starts with a K also and her suspicions were eased as soon as Sam mentioned that they were going with his Dad.
@@Sheena000 yup…i have a love hate relationship with this story
Oh fuck
OH FUCK
Oh shoost, didn't catch that, feck thats....ew
Whitney was almost ready to have a child, then be killed. And then, 10 days later, William was born. Witch makes Sam's dad the true devil
Yeah I'm surprised not more ppl pick up on that... Prescot also says "she isn't owned by me" and the baby's name shows us it wasn't the retired sheriff either so...
It's just. Ugh.
How’s the child was born normal 💀
@@supercelllover7695 pretty sure it wasn't. Prescott tells that her babies are low-quality, that's why they should get rid of her.
And the fact that he said that her babies aren’t good just drives the nail in the coffin to that being true, how horrifying
@watson_top And, why would they be low quality? Maybe, just maybe because they are her dad's children?
With all due respect to other writers, this is beyond a creepypasta. It's a masterfully crafted horror story.
Little surprise the author went on to write for full-length horror media like Haunting of Hill House and Fall of the House of Usher
It's a decent one. It has nothing on actual published works, but it is much better than the trash that most these online writers release. But it's important in writing (and in all works) to clearly denote what the genre of said work is. Borrasca is less of a normal horror story and more a full on horrible, disgusting story. There are horrifying elements, but it is written to be 'realistic' to a degree, despite being placed by the writer in the same genre as blatantly unrealistic tales such as Jeff the Killer and the Russian Sleep Experiment. This is part of why I believe it has stuck around in the minds of so many, since this level of disgust isn't uncommon in its actual genre. (extreme horror - which makes borrasca look relatively light in comparison.)
In this case, Borrasca being primarily advertised in the same genre and group as creepypastas, one would expect all of it to lead to supernatural stuff, and not just.... a formulaic kidnapping group who abducts girls for sexual reasons, which is something that, even when Borrasca was released, had been done to death.
Yes, the writer is absolutely amazing.
@@Alino- Nice "um actually" moment. You must be fun at parties.
@@Alino-"Wahhh, writers are too disturbed by this real life atrocity to not let it impact their work, I wanted this to be Pet Sematary"
Gruesome and well-written. I think my favorite thing about it that really sets it apart from other stories like it would be how the character's assumptions are consistently wrong, even little things like Kimber thinking her mom's funeral will bring in "half of the town" only for barely anyone to show up. Most stories will have the characters guess right or just say "I don't know", but having the characters be wrong at just about every turn does a lot to keep the reader guessing right up until the reveal.
As a survivor I really, really appreciate the little break around 1:35:00 to just sit and talk about the themes for a moment. It felt really nice to have 2 people I really like and respect treat the subject so seriously and with so much respect. I'm struggling with finding a way to express just how much it means to me, but thank you
Same
Agreed, I went into this having been spoiled about the human trafficking plot twist, but I didn't know the extent. As a survivor of SA it was extremely intense for me to read on my own after having listened to part 1 of this podcast episode. Revisiting it after a week, I'm also very appreciative that Hunter and Isaiah took breaks to sit with the information and themes. I'm still horrified and anxious reading this, but it made me feel less alone.
@@halcyon17 Yeah, that feeling of being seen is almost indescribable isn't it? It also helps that they keep breaking off and turning Kyle into an oblivious beanbag of a frat bro to break the tension every now and then
@@thelorp5186Now why would you reply that under a comment about SA?
Borrasca is a story you hear/read once and then pray to god you are gifted with forgetting it
YES. I was saying earlier today that I missed the days before I learned what happened at Borrasca
"I have no mouth and I must scream" left a similar taste in my mouth, but I always said "That story ruined my day, I could not feel joy for the rest of it and I had a nightmare that day. That story scarred me, it was amazing, everyone should read it once"
Borrasca, I just say "I read a creepypasta that legit traumatized me. It was amazing" but I try to not mention the name so that other people don't suffer like me. Still 10/10, but damn I wasn't ready.
@@misteraskman3668I agree with you, “I Have No Mouth and I Must Scream” is very traumatizing but at least in the video game you can get the good endings lol
@@etwon1408 screw the good endings, I need the cold heartless facts of life (which, yes, while the ending of IHNMAIMS isn’t very realistic my point still stands)
That’s also why I’m going to refrain from looking into part 5 of Borrasca bc apparently it leaves more of an optimistic note than 4. Sometimes in life you don’t get to see a happy ending, there isn’t that happily ever after where they fall in love and frolic the flower field. Like real s*x tr*fficking rings that are still up and running right now with plenty of people stuck there just like Whitney. It’s hard to think about and even harder to understand that you can’t really do anything about it, but it doesn’t change anything to ignore it.
His sister was a close to giving birth, a few days later the birth announcement. The baby's name started with a W. Whitney flinched away from her brother. Whitney's babies werent coming out right. Sam's father loved her so much.
I am trying to supress that. God.
Oh my god-
Oh god……
I wasn't the only one who caught that. It's awful
Jesus christ I so want this to not be true
When he gave the content warning I wasn’t ready. I’ve been jumping around content and even watched the Tommy Taffy ep. I knew this was gonna be rough. I don’t know if I can finish this vid. Good content guys but damn.
It’s the world we live in people like that exist.
@nrg6245 That's why it's so rough. I also can't finish this video. Remember not only do people like the depraved men exist, victims exist and survive as well, and have to live with it. Some of us don't need to hear it described to know.
@@Xuromikuromi well it’s fiction tho bro
Two things are really standing out to me about the ending:
1. Sam doesn't even seem to tell or question his dad about Whitney while in the car. On some level, does he already know about his involvement?
2. His dad was SO quick with the whole "you beat your best friend up" bit. That's not regular evil. That's practiced, instinctual evil, to me.
It's comical evil.
It's not the real ending of the story. The father's touched on much more in part 5, which they don't plan to cover for--
some reason?
But needless to say yeah, you're right, because he *is* practiced in this exact type of evil.
@@pucktoad To some extent the depravity of Deputy Walker, Jimmy Bastard (I forgot his last name) and the Sheriff guy could be seen as so cruel and senseless that it comes off as absurd, but I think that might be a way to lessen the impact of what is being described. Child Trafficking and Sex Trafficking are very real evils that represent some of the darkest depths that humanity can go to. The antagonists of Borrasca are pure, unadulterated evil, and in my opinion could be in the ranking for the most despicable villains in a story. So I have to agree with you that the ringleaders are overcharged with malice and so far from feeling sympathy to others that they can come off as comically evil. But, I would have to say that in a way I am grateful for that. If the evil of the ringleaders was toned down, if they were more human and less evil, then I think the story would be more like a true crime documentary, just bleak and depressing. The sociopathy of the ringleaders provides one element of fantasy beyond the made up names and locations that can help the reader to disconnect the horror of Borrasca from their daily life. Something to anchor against the tide of depression the story induces.
Tl;Dr: “Imaginary evil is romantic and varied; real evil is gloomy, monotonous, barren, boring. Imaginary good is boring; real good is always new, marvelous, intoxicating.”
--Simone Weil
it's so disturbing he already went along with a cover story against his OWN SON less than a day after it happened AFTER it was suggested he impregnated his own daughter AHHHsbyshe
Also keep in mind he sold Whitney like a year into moving his family there. I wonder when he learned the situation, cause it seems he knew before moving them or got adjusted very quickly. Both options are insane.
the most unsettling thing about this story for me is not even the ending itself but rather the fact that I expected it to be a paranormal story with monsters and stuff, just like main characters . That wake up to reality was just terrible lol
The worst monsters are mundane.
Yeah, agreed. The fact that it's not supernatural and crazy but realistic and logical in it's twisted way instead makes it so much worse. Give me demons, aliens, evil clowns, or something else. *Anything* else but this...
Yeah, throughout the entire story it just felt like a continuously darker cryptid story, then it's just way fucking worse
@@Blue4Skies1 Yeah, it's always more disturbing when the monsters are real, things that could actually happen. Perhaps not to this extent, but real enough.
Yeah, it's a terribly shlocky and exploitative ending clearly catering to the author's incel fantasies.
Something I noticed, when Kimber went missing, her dad was very against the idea of giving her away, and then that same night they hear the metal shrieking form Borrasca, which everyone thinks meant Kimber died. But then it's revealed that Kimber didn't die, so that probably meant that Prescott took both Kimber and her dad, and had her dad killed.
It was not that night, they searched for days before they heard it. But yes, that's correct
I think it was more that he knew that if she read the letter they would take her. He wanted to keep her from learning the truth and be spared.
Oh crap. And he was pissed at the mom, screaming and raving about publicity cos she dragged Kimber into this and set the crosshairs of Killian and Prescott onto her.
The dad was useless to Borrasca
@@bakugokatsuki2302 While I see your point, he might have been viewed as a risk to exposing everything going on
I don’t usually get nauseous or even very upset at these stories, I have mild hallucinations so I am used to asserting to myself that things aren’t real and can’t bother me, and once I got that down it’s subconscious and stories don’t affect me much anymore unless it’s super emotional. This one made me physically ill, and once I heard there was a part 5 I had to go read it and I am so so so glad I did. The absolute sigh of relief I sighed and the genuine tears I felt coming up because of the ending was so cathartic after this absolute shock of a story. It’s written so well and in such a beautiful style even with the atrocities in it. Before part 5 I had genuinely never wished more that the mysterious disappearances were supernatural.