WRITING MONSTERS: And How to Make Them For Horror

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  • เผยแพร่เมื่อ 22 ธ.ค. 2024

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  • @King_Midas66
    @King_Midas66 2 วันที่ผ่านมา +8

    when did Pirate software make a second channel?

    • @J-Bat
      @J-Bat  2 วันที่ผ่านมา +3

      Well you see, when he worked for the government he actually signed up for a cloning program, and so he made a clone who would do writing videos. I dunno why, but I'm here now

    • @Dmgladiator2642
      @Dmgladiator2642 2 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      ​@@J-Bat that tracks

  • @gibdos_rupees1374
    @gibdos_rupees1374 5 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    I build monsters for my dnd campaign and its really cool seeing the different types you covered vs what I've made. Monster as predator isn't easy to implement but it is easily my favorite kind to make!

  • @letsnotgetstressed8552
    @letsnotgetstressed8552 6 วันที่ผ่านมา +5

    Yay, new video :) also, your voice is so pleasant to listen to :)

    • @J-Bat
      @J-Bat  6 วันที่ผ่านมา +3

      Thank you! That means a lot, I've always wondered what people thought of my voice lol.

  • @williamerickson520
    @williamerickson520 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    It always a good time for scary monsters.

  • @letsnotgetstressed8552
    @letsnotgetstressed8552 6 วันที่ผ่านมา +7

    9:13 Ocean man! Take me to the land!

    • @J-Bat
      @J-Bat  6 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

      Lead me to the land, that you understand!

  • @igoldenknight2169
    @igoldenknight2169 6 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    Bro… found your channel a couple days ago and I’m SO glad. You talk about all the things I want to talk about and want to know more about.

  • @the_selchies
    @the_selchies 2 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    Excellent video dude! Keep it up and I’m sure your channels gonna grow in no time😎

    • @J-Bat
      @J-Bat  2 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Thank you!

  • @jaredjohnson6391
    @jaredjohnson6391 6 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    Love the content! Exactly what I've been looking for. I've been trying to prep to write a horror story and this has been exactly what I've been needing.

  • @Raurie4
    @Raurie4 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    I made what would be considered a predator monster for my d&d game. it's biggest strength is also it's biggest weakness.
    It's basically a Ambush predator that uses shadows to attack, both physically and figuratively. It will attack from shows usually by teleporting into someones shadow and attacking them from behind, trying to trip them and gore them with it's horns. while in shadows it's also semi tangible (mechanics wise there is a 50%chance an attack on it will just go threw it). if it feels it might be in danger it will teleport to some other shadow and wait for a chance to attack again.
    the reason this is also it's weakness is because if it's forced into an area of bright light it can't more around as well, not being able to teleport, it's not longer stealth and basically a tall thin, horned humanoid that doesn't have eye

    • @J-Bat
      @J-Bat  วันที่ผ่านมา

      Sounds like a pretty solid design!

  • @DargorV
    @DargorV 6 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    Love your content! Thanks!

  • @rthompson7182
    @rthompson7182 6 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    Ah, my old enemy The Terror…
    I for one think the real monsters are the friends we made along the way.

  • @techpriest6962
    @techpriest6962 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    A lot of people due to D&D use and see monsters as mere obstacles rather than creatures that fill a role in a setting / world.
    All creatures in a setting should exist for a reason, and so long as you have a reason you'll be off to a good start when creating monsters.

    • @techpriest6962
      @techpriest6962 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

      People too often forget the *role* in role playing games.

  • @harmonlanager2670
    @harmonlanager2670 3 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    Was the thumbnail a Hell Knight from Trench Crusade?

    • @J-Bat
      @J-Bat  3 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Yes it was!

  • @Gnomleif
    @Gnomleif วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    "British football hooligans" 😆

  • @CofekDaGod
    @CofekDaGod 6 วันที่ผ่านมา +10

    Whenever you have a monster problem call a Witcher

    • @J-Bat
      @J-Bat  6 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

      Can't go wrong with that!

  • @ilovecheese3339
    @ilovecheese3339 4 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    Gnome power !

  • @StarlasAiko
    @StarlasAiko 6 วันที่ผ่านมา +7

    Humans are the true Monsters.

    • @quentinschenck9418
      @quentinschenck9418 4 วันที่ผ่านมา +4

      Yes, but they are also the only heros

    • @mayorathfoglaltvolt
      @mayorathfoglaltvolt 2 วันที่ผ่านมา

      @@quentinschenck9418 Heroes are the biggest monsters of all...

  • @legueu
    @legueu 6 วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    Interesting point. I would also like to add:
    I wanna be the very best
    Like no one ever was
    To catch them is my real test
    To train them is my cause
    I will travel across the land
    Searching far and wide
    Teach Pokémon to understand
    The power that's inside
    (Pokémon
    Gotta catch 'em all)
    It's you and me
    I know it's my destiny (Pokémon)
    Oh, you're my best friend
    In a world we must defend (Pokémon
    Gotta catch 'em all) A heart so true
    Our courage will pull us through
    You teach me and I'll teach you (Ooh, ooh)
    Pokémon! (Gotta catch 'em all)
    Gotta catch 'em all
    Yeah
    Every challenge along the way
    With courage, I will face
    I will battle every day
    To claim my rightful place
    Come with me, the time is right
    There's no better team
    Arm in arm, we'll win the fight
    It's always been our dream
    (Pokémon
    Gotta catch 'em all) It's you and me
    I know it's my destiny (Pokémon)
    Oh, you're my best friend
    In a world we must defend (Pokémon
    Gotta catch 'em all) A heart so true
    Our courage will pull us through
    You teach me and I'll teach you (Ooh, ooh)
    Pokémon! (Gotta catch 'em all)
    Gotta catch 'em all
    Gotta catch 'em all
    Gotta catch 'em all
    Gotta catch 'em all
    Yeah
    (Pokémon
    Gotta catch 'em all) It's you and me
    I know it's my destiny (Pokémon)
    Oh, you're my best friend
    In a world we must defend (Pokémon
    Gotta catch 'em all) A heart so true
    Our courage will pull us through
    You teach me and I'll teach you (Ooh, ooh)
    Pokémon! (Gotta catch 'em all)
    Gotta catch 'em all (Pokémon)

  • @ChaseHendersonWV
    @ChaseHendersonWV วันที่ผ่านมา

    Why do you keep using Trench Crusade minis when you never mention it?

    • @J-Bat
      @J-Bat  วันที่ผ่านมา

      None of the mins shown or content of the video otherwise involves Trench Crusade, I only used it for the thumbnail. I also credit the artist in the description. I'm not sure what you mean otherwise.

  • @pgabrielrr
    @pgabrielrr วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    warhammer fantasy mentioned raaaaah wtf is a broad fandom
    edit: I meant in a way that this is the first time I'm seeing someone bringing up warhammer fantasy in worldbuilding, it feels like I'm talking to a friend because I have all the 2nd edition supplements and I've lost count of how many times I read those books to get some inspiration

    • @J-Bat
      @J-Bat  วันที่ผ่านมา

      It's such a good setting to draw examples from because it's done so many things, and with a lot more consideration than one might expect!

  • @multidinero
    @multidinero วันที่ผ่านมา

    “Rehabilitated” … wow.

  • @MarkLewis...
    @MarkLewis... วันที่ผ่านมา +2

    Critique... This is an interesting and entertaining video, but not titularly, or opening claim- fulfilling. This is not a video on HOW to make monsters scary, nor is it applicable to any medium desired, such as for a novel or D&D campaign, etc. This isn't about worldbuilding either. "How to" videos (and such) are a step-by-step process to achieve a specific goal, not siting a laundry-list of previous topical examples. Examples are a "what" that reenforce the "how", not the how itself. Again, this is an entertaining and well-made video, but not a video that fulfills its claim. Maybe if you restructured it, then it may have been, but as is... it fails at its claims.
    Good luck with the channel.

    • @J-Bat
      @J-Bat  วันที่ผ่านมา

      I see where you're coming from, but I disagree on step-by-step processes being the desired structure for a video on writing. It might be a little difficult to explain what I mean, but I find relying on step-by-step processes results in poor imitations rather than one developing their own ideas. I'd rather talk in examples and concepts relative to certain points (design as an example here) where in seeing something that works, the viewer might consider why it works, and thus have a better outcome than just having a series of steps to follow.
      I can't swear to whether it is more or less effective, but the step by step method never did much for me.
      Thank you for the input though. Even if I don't necessarily share your view on the subject, you've still given me something to think about.

    • @MarkLewis...
      @MarkLewis... วันที่ผ่านมา

      @@J-Bat Respectfully.... everything you've learned was accomplished by a "how to" method, (reading, writing, science, etc.) then reenforced by example. You believe in the example more so, because that's when the step-by-step instructions took hold. Step-by-step instructions and examples by themselves are weak but together are much more graspable. Tell someone, then show someone and they grasp it much quicker than just either one of them. But... you do you. Thanks for the response.