You should consider telling the story in front of the camera! You have a great voice but it comes across a bit scripted! You can still do the script but maybe tell the story mostly from memory using the script to keep you on track! It's okay to make mistakes and think of it like telling the story to one of your guys friends! I think the scooter portion was perfect discussing why and how in front of the camera! I don't mean to sound nit picky as I loved the video but just wanted to give some tips! Keep up the good work guys an inspiration to all want to be sailors!
Compared to numerous TH-cam 'drama', you tell an honest and sincere story of true life ups and downs. Do not change a thing!
Thanks so much!
Great production. Nice video. Well done!
Great channel. Have fun.
GO TO COLOMBIA OR FRENCH GUAYANA FOR HURACAN SEASON IS NICE OVER THERE, I WOULD GET A SECOND FORE STAGE WITH A YANKEE ON CHANKS , SALUDOS
You should consider telling the story in front of the camera! You have a great voice but it comes across a bit scripted! You can still do the script but maybe tell the story mostly from memory using the script to keep you on track! It's okay to make mistakes and think of it like telling the story to one of your guys friends! I think the scooter portion was perfect discussing why and how in front of the camera! I don't mean to sound nit picky as I loved the video but just wanted to give some tips! Keep up the good work guys an inspiration to all want to be sailors!
Thanks! I do want to improve on the narration and I appreciate your feedback. Good tips.