Hey guys! Hope you enjoy this tale! I've had a few people comment about my mention of the 'xx' legion when referencing the mortifactors. When I was doing the research this is what I found... "The Mortifactors are the ghoulish sons of Arpaza, the XX Legion of the grand Legiones Astartes." I'm sorry if I have made a mistake as this is also the number of the alpha legion... If someone could clear that up I would be grateful! Hope you still enjoyed the story! Vox
Yea mortifactors not good guys abandoned the lamenters and a entire planet to be destoyed by a tyranid hive fleet bunch of near feral savge basic asterdes chapter not far off the loyalists version of the night lords...
I so need to see more mirror-universe Dornian Heresy fic now. Guilleman as man-eating swamp lord turned lunatic traitor primarch. Hunted down by the noble Conrad Kurze and brought to justice at last.
Slaanesh will always be the scariest chaos god. Because it’s not the god of sex, drugs and rock and roll from memes. It’s the dark chaotic god of taking things way too far.
Yeah, at least with Khorne or Nurgle there is a somewhat code of ethics and religion. Hell even with Tzeench there is an eternal moral code. Slaanesh? Nope, all bets are off.
Somewhere out there is an Emperor’s Child with a cheese addiction. It started out small with extra ration of cheddar… now he’s milking everyone he knows and loves. Beware ‘Popa Nurple.’
"Thrill in the noise that breaks the skin and ravages the mind! Savour the shuddering, shaking screams that shiver the spine and shatter the skull! Let sensation wash over you, through you, claim you and cast you aside!" --Bellerophid, Scarlet Marquis of the Emperor's Children
That's what I'm saying though! Look, I've earned a very good living as a copywriter in the advertising industry for two decades but I admire and am sooooo jealous of this man's ability with images and words!
There was a few times Agonialus' voice sounded like Doug Bradley (Pinhead) which just fit so well with the pain/pleasure feel of the story. So well done Vox!
Brilliant stuff, you get across their twisted perception of reality perfectly. I love how wretched and desperate you're able to make Antigones feel, I could feel his constant hunger for stimulation. Well done!
Love the noise marines, especially Ramos the bull from the Fabius Bile trilogy, ripping puny Eldari to pieces. It's such a creative idea to use sound as a weapon and fits the 3rd legion perfectly. Nice choice @A Vox in the void. Cant wait to listen to what you do next, whatever it is. Grandfather Nurgle is pleased with your work.
Exceptionally high quality of the text and narration aside, it's so awesome to find someone who can write slaaneshy stuff just the RIGHT way Honestly, this is simply better than most of BL's works on the topic
An absolutely piece of fiction, Vox. The writing is top notch and is enhanced even with your vocals and choice of music. I will be thinking about this one for quite some time. Thank you for making this, I'll be looking forward to the next part!!
Brilliant!!! I'm at work listening to The infinite and the Divine. I just saw this was on. My personal fav of your channel in The Servator one. So graphic and that smiling thing on a track. Bone-chilling stuff. Love this channel I will toss you a coin when I get paid :)
Oooh that was a good one, gotta love some fantastic action scenes! Great way of describing the absolute and unique physical devastation that only Noise Marine weaponry can produce. Putting actual classical music in the background was a great touch as well. I am addicted! Can't wait for part 2!
YESSSS the (Noise) Boys are back in town. This was literally PERFECTION! I love the deep descriptions of Slaaneshi stories the adjectives and synonyms are just so Intriguing, especially with your voice Vox, it’s always a grandiose pleasure to hear from you again
Really enjoyed your (first ?) self-written Story. Looking forward to the second Part. ;) Wish you and everyone reading a good day/evening (depending where you are).
These grim dark stories keep me returning to hear more and more of these amazing stories!! Well done Vox!! Spend my sundays doing chores and listening to these is a perfect way to spend the day!!
Yet another cracking piece Vox, thank you! I’m with a few others in the comments who can’t believe you don’t have more subscribers. Your work is so personal and refreshingly varied in the factions you cover (little too much Imperial love elsewhere sometimes!)
A fine start to could be a great story. What struck me, particularly at the beginning, is how much simular the Noise Marine is to the Lamenter in 'Shame' - even though the two Astartes occupy the opposite ends of the morality/loyalty spectrum, both of them are miserable, isolated, and unfulfilled individuals who are burdened by desires that will never be satisfied. The Noise Marine will forever be searching for newer, more extreme forms of sensation while the Lamenter(s) is forever striving to make the galaxy a better place in the face of extreme adversity and pain. Neither will ever know true contentment or peace. It's really quite tragic when you think about it. Anyhow, good story once again. Also I really liked the music Also, not to be a lore snob, but the Mortifactors are a Ultramarine Sucessor Chapter that recrutes its members from a night word full of feral cannibilistic tribes
Finally got the chance to catch up with all the void-y goodness, and my word, do these Slaanesh adjacent stories go hard. This, and Savant take me waaay back to your work on "All the Gods are dead" trilogy, all of which do a horrific job at portraying just how insidiously malicious slaanesh is.
I’m proud I created a noisemarine so coked out of his mind,so hedonistic, so stark raving gazonkers that he’s in a never ending high. A level of excess so intense that everything is pain, pleasure, and that Hellraiser spectrum in between. A guy who can’t come down and uses this new found state of existence to just ROCK.
Always a great day when VoxintheVoid drops something new. Thank you. I’ve been playing with writing my own fan fiction the last year. Finally brave enough to offer to share a short story with you if you’d be interested. Ben
im sorry im so late but god damn that was awesome!!!!!!!!! Noise Marines are my favorite and you did them justice. also those names for the characters where hilarious
Man I'm so sorry I got to this so late 😢. Who are these guys ?? I thought Night Lords and World Eaters were absolute evil. This chaos legion is pure chaos 😂 Loved it Vox. Thanks again
vox this is a masterpiece =D i always knew that the slaneshi boys are the worst, yet i allways tought anything but the plague blobs. the true horror of the noise marines is often overlooked by their garrish appearance but boy did you bring it to life x_X amazing work i love it =D
Ah a delightful romp in the swamp with a merry band of musicians, alas it seems after a bout with some ruffians than one of the parade has waylaid himself! Let us see in the weeks and months to come how his story unfolds.
Consider the particulars of this combat scenario, a fight in a swamp is all dirty and you've got to deal with the water and muck. Now imagine trying to do that with an enemy that can rock the entire landscape with sonic weapons? Water, muck, rocks and probably more than a few fish go flying everywhere, the whole time your own body is being racked with violent kinetic forces.
Hey guys! Hope you enjoy this tale! I've had a few people comment about my mention of the 'xx' legion when referencing the mortifactors. When I was doing the research this is what I found...
"The Mortifactors are the ghoulish sons of Arpaza, the XX Legion of the grand Legiones Astartes."
I'm sorry if I have made a mistake as this is also the number of the alpha legion...
If someone could clear that up I would be grateful!
Hope you still enjoyed the story!
Vox
I'm pretty sure the original members were of the 20th company of the 13th legion, cause the mortifactors are ultramarine successors (crazy ik)
@@ericbarber4297 thanks for clearing that up!
Thank you for addressing that, made me very confused whilst listening at the time.
Yea mortifactors not good guys abandoned the lamenters and a entire planet to be destoyed by a tyranid hive fleet bunch of near feral savge basic asterdes chapter not far off the loyalists version of the night lords...
This can only mean one thing….
The Mortifactors are secretly Alpharius.
I just want to remind everyone that the cannibalistic tribal savages known as the _Mortifactors_ are *Ultramarine* successors.
I so need to see more mirror-universe Dornian Heresy fic now. Guilleman as man-eating swamp lord turned lunatic traitor primarch. Hunted down by the noble Conrad Kurze and brought to justice at last.
Reality probably son's of the 2nd or 11th. It may be a clue to the lost primarchs.
Rather less likely,@@rogerbrownreacts8528. The II & XI are "your headcanon goes here" slots. Mine is 'the felinid and female legions'.
While celebrated by some and shunned by others, all space marines are cannibalistic by design.
@@rogerbrownreacts8528nah, they are just derranged smurfs
Enjoyed the reference to "All the Gods are Dead" with the burning keeper of secrets.
Glad someone got the call back!
@@AVoxintheVoidcould never forget that story, one of the best i ever heard
I adored that story. I'm SO glad Slaanesh is being explored more, and I bet she is as well.
Slaanesh will always be the scariest chaos god.
Because it’s not the god of sex, drugs and rock and roll from memes.
It’s the dark chaotic god of taking things way too far.
It’s terrifying how few “fans” actually get that.
Slaanesh, that's just a no, nope no effing way, khorne, tzeetch and last nurgle. Never slaanesh anyone but slaanesh.
Yeah, at least with Khorne or Nurgle there is a somewhat code of ethics and religion. Hell even with Tzeench there is an eternal moral code.
Slaanesh? Nope, all bets are off.
Somewhere out there is an Emperor’s Child with a cheese addiction. It started out small with extra ration of cheddar… now he’s milking everyone he knows and loves. Beware ‘Popa Nurple.’
@@leovalenzuela8368no quotes necessary unless they’re the weirdos use 40k as a cover
How in the hell does this channel not have a million subscribers!!!!! Damn the ruinous powers........BRING ON THE NOISE!!! Rock on VOX!
Truly appreciated sentiment my brother!!
Faygo 🫤
Actually he should be a black library reader
"Thrill in the noise that breaks the skin and ravages the mind! Savour the shuddering, shaking screams that shiver the spine and shatter the skull! Let sensation wash over you, through you, claim you and cast you aside!" --Bellerophid, Scarlet Marquis of the Emperor's Children
That's what I'm saying though! Look, I've earned a very good living as a copywriter in the advertising industry for two decades but I admire and am sooooo jealous of this man's ability with images and words!
Hearing these stories from you makes the 10-12 hour shift days a little easier
Glad I can be some help!!
THIS PLEASES SLAANESH!!!!!FEEL THE NOISE BROTHERS!!!
I've been waiting awhile for this one thanks vox your awesome content always hits perfectly
There was a few times Agonialus' voice sounded like Doug Bradley (Pinhead) which just fit so well with the pain/pleasure feel of the story. So well done Vox!
Was going for that vibe! Can't imagine slaanesh not being somehow related to hell raiser and that lore... Thank you so much for the kind comment!
now that i think about, your right. Good catch.
The effort that goes into every story is phenomenal. The background effects and music bring the story to life.
Thank you so much for the lovely message. I am trying to improve my craft video by video and I'm glad you enjoy all of the aspects of the story! Vox
I can’t wait! Feel the noise brothers! Blessed slaanesh! Love you Vox for doing one of the gloriously debauched factions
Oh Fock 😅
Wait, shouldn't Vox prolong the premiere instead? The denial of this to our senses, the pain of waiting, all are most pleasing to Slaanesh 😈😈😈😈
Missed a trick there...next time ill edge you all by postponing the premiere 5 minutes at a time!
BURN HERETIC
@@AVoxintheVoidA Interaction for the Interaction God, a Comment for the Comment Throne, for the Almighty Algorithm
@AVoxintheVoid
Ignore this heretic, Administrator. Please carry on your sacred cycle of frequent data releases. For the Emperor.
Shut up faygo
I LOVE chaos stories where the worshipper of the dark gods shows no remorse and regret (too many of those) well done
The Loremaster speaks! Gather round brothers.
I feel the warp overtaking me, it is a good pain!
Brilliant stuff, you get across their twisted perception of reality perfectly. I love how wretched and desperate you're able to make Antigones feel, I could feel his constant hunger for stimulation.
Well done!
These videos are absurdly well made, it makes me feel like I’m almost watching a professionally made show. Absolutely amazing.
I'll take that as a huge compliment!
I have only heard short snippets about the noise marines before this piece. Thank you for exploring them in such a visceral way.
Yet another absolute amazing story. How you haven't been hired by Black Library yet, quite genuinely perplexes me.
I hope they never do..... we'll never hear from him as regularly and he can't do unofficial stories anymore
This is how you do it!!! What a story teller. Cant wait for part 2
Thank you kindly! I'm getting back to the writing board! 👍
Your voice will forever be THE voice for WH40k in my head-canon
Thank you so much 🙏
Yep
Agree 110%
Can't wait for the next act! This was awesome! Seriously Vox, you gotta send GW some of your writing!
Love the noise marines, especially Ramos the bull from the Fabius Bile trilogy, ripping puny Eldari to pieces. It's such a creative idea to use sound as a weapon and fits the 3rd legion perfectly. Nice choice @A Vox in the void. Cant wait to listen to what you do next, whatever it is. Grandfather Nurgle is pleased with your work.
Exceptionally high quality of the text and narration aside, it's so awesome to find someone who can write slaaneshy stuff just the RIGHT way
Honestly, this is simply better than most of BL's works on the topic
An absolutely piece of fiction, Vox. The writing is top notch and is enhanced even with your vocals and choice of music. I will be thinking about this one for quite some time. Thank you for making this, I'll be looking forward to the next part!!
Brilliant!!! I'm at work listening to The infinite and the Divine. I just saw this was on.
My personal fav of your channel in The Servator one. So graphic and that smiling thing on a track. Bone-chilling stuff.
Love this channel I will toss you a coin when I get paid :)
I can’t wait bring it out sooner
Renaissance man Vox shredds the night with another sonic wave of total destruction crafted by his own voice and hand.✍
Oooh that was a good one, gotta love some fantastic action scenes! Great way of describing the absolute and unique physical devastation that only Noise Marine weaponry can produce. Putting actual classical music in the background was a great touch as well. I am addicted! Can't wait for part 2!
Dude, can't wait! You're the best, Vox!!
I have been waiting for this for all my life.
And it’s just act one.
My heart is TUMESCENT with joy.
YESSSS the (Noise) Boys are back in town. This was literally PERFECTION! I love the deep descriptions of Slaaneshi stories the adjectives and synonyms are just so Intriguing, especially with your voice Vox, it’s always a grandiose pleasure to hear from you again
Wow dude this is your best to date imo
That's great to read that you enjoyed it that much! Gives me the confidence to get stuck into part two!
The visuals in this one are fantastic.
I swear this is the third noise marine story ive seen for premier and then never shows
Not for me boss. I've only just uploaded it today
I recently discovered you channel, now I can’t get enough of it, for painting bus rides and to help me sleep keep up the good work
Great job you are one hell of a story tell
The music complemented the battle SO WELL in this one.
Outstanding work, as always!
Thank you so much for the uploads. Your work is superb!
Thank you so much for the kind message!
Really enjoyed your (first ?) self-written Story.
Looking forward to the second Part. ;)
Wish you and everyone reading a good day/evening (depending where you are).
Thanks boss! I've written the 'all the gods are dead' trilogy and skull takers.
This'll make my afternoon
I hope so my friend!
You are incredibly talented and put so much work and love into your videos seldom seen elsewhere. Thank you Vox
Wow! This is such a nice message to read. Thank you so much for your kind words 🙏
Yet another absolute masterpiece, really looking forward to the continuation!
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS.
this is the sound perfection
These grim dark stories keep me returning to hear more and more of these amazing stories!!
Well done Vox!!
Spend my sundays doing chores and listening to these is a perfect way to spend the day!!
I'm certain this will be great
Yet another cracking piece Vox, thank you!
I’m with a few others in the comments who can’t believe you don’t have more subscribers. Your work is so personal and refreshingly varied in the factions you cover (little too much Imperial love elsewhere sometimes!)
Looking forward to part 2.❤
Wonderfully done, Vox!
Incredible mate, as always.
Absolutely fantastic!
Thank you.
What can I say other than
!!!!!!!!!!A VOX IN THE VOID!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And all I can say is
!!!!!!!!!!! L U !!!!!!!!!!!!
well done buddy, very well done, looking forward to part 2
Thanks jc! I'm getting back to the writing board now!
A fine start to could be a great story. What struck me, particularly at the beginning, is how much simular the Noise Marine is to the Lamenter in 'Shame' - even though the two Astartes occupy the opposite ends of the morality/loyalty spectrum, both of them are miserable, isolated, and unfulfilled individuals who are burdened by desires that will never be satisfied. The Noise Marine will forever be searching for newer, more extreme forms of sensation while the Lamenter(s) is forever striving to make the galaxy a better place in the face of extreme adversity and pain. Neither will ever know true contentment or peace. It's really quite tragic when you think about it. Anyhow, good story once again. Also I really liked the music
Also, not to be a lore snob, but the Mortifactors are a Ultramarine Sucessor Chapter that recrutes its members from a night word full of feral cannibilistic tribes
FOR THE PRINCE OF EXCESS
ALL LOVE SLAANESH ALL WORSHIP SLAANESH ALL SERVE SLAANESH
If the Noise Marines had your talent & command of language, they would have breached Holy Terra by now.
Finally got the chance to catch up with all the void-y goodness, and my word, do these Slaanesh adjacent stories go hard. This, and Savant take me waaay back to your work on "All the Gods are dead" trilogy, all of which do a horrific job at portraying just how insidiously malicious slaanesh is.
YES IVE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS ONE
Not long to wait now. Its live on rumble if you have that platform
I hope you enjoyed!
I’m proud I created a noisemarine so coked out of his mind,so hedonistic, so stark raving gazonkers that he’s in a never ending high. A level of excess so intense that everything is pain, pleasure, and that Hellraiser spectrum in between. A guy who can’t come down and uses this new found state of existence to just ROCK.
Always a great day when VoxintheVoid drops something new. Thank you.
I’ve been playing with writing my own fan fiction the last year. Finally brave enough to offer to share a short story with you if you’d be interested.
Ben
Was pretty good can't wait for act 2
Always a pleasure to see more stories, vox! I also loved that little Arvum reference
Glad you caught it!
*2 minutes to midnight starts up*
Midnight The Hour of the Daemon!
One of your best pieces yet my friend
Please more. I need to hear more of the Mortifactors suffering
im sorry im so late but god damn that was awesome!!!!!!!!! Noise Marines are my favorite and you did them justice. also those names for the characters where hilarious
listening this right after listening "a proppa krumpin'" stories are a real roller coaster of emotions and atmosphere.
love it.
You have some of the best Warhammer content for sure
Damn I got excited when I saw this but I have to wait 14 more hours :(
I look forward to the adventures of Aleksander Vinter, Noise Marine
Bravo that was excellent I wonder what he heard maybe a psychic call from clone fulgrime
Brilliant writing and narration!
I have been waiting so long for this
This has some pretty brutal fatalities. Amazing work!
Cheers Ian!!
Bro just made my weekend
The Dark Prince is pleased!
Thank you Joseph!
Man I'm so sorry I got to this so late 😢. Who are these guys ?? I thought Night Lords and World Eaters were absolute evil. This chaos legion is pure chaos 😂 Loved it Vox. Thanks again
DEATH IS UPON YOU, BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD. id love another khorn video
Love the story. Cant wait for the next part.
Holy shit! On my birthday too??!! (Think this is the one time I’ll admit it’s my birthday lol)
Happy birthday my friend!
Happy birthday!
🎈🎈🎉🎊🎂🎊🎉🎈🎈
This is really good
Thank you kindly my friend!
This writing is truly wonderful
Bloody Hell, that was good! The only downside is that, being part 1 means we’ll have to wait for more. Oh the exquisite torment of anticipation.
Embrace the torment my brother
Can I ever sleep again? Just wow!
Glad you enjoyed it boss!
Damnit man you are my favorite channel. Please do more 40k stuff man.
It's pretty much all I do! 😂 don't worry plenty more to come
Perfect for painting my Emperor's Children, Possessed.
Have fun!
Shred their sanity with our song!
That little eagle claw on that poor marines head... adorable
vox this is a masterpiece =D i always knew that the slaneshi boys are the worst, yet i allways tought anything but the plague blobs. the true horror of the noise marines is often overlooked by their garrish appearance but boy did you bring it to life x_X amazing work i love it =D
Prince of Excess welcomes this offering.
This was truly a sinfully good experience...Wait why is "Slaanesh" calling me?...
Keep this up man, these are amazing.
Ah a delightful romp in the swamp with a merry band of musicians, alas it seems after a bout with some ruffians than one of the parade has waylaid himself!
Let us see in the weeks and months to come how his story unfolds.
Haha! Love it!
Most excellent!
Consider the particulars of this combat scenario, a fight in a swamp is all dirty and you've got to deal with the water and muck. Now imagine trying to do that with an enemy that can rock the entire landscape with sonic weapons? Water, muck, rocks and probably more than a few fish go flying everywhere, the whole time your own body is being racked with violent kinetic forces.
Another master piece
What is this feeling.. this encroaching, unquenchable, clawing ,desire and blooming rapturous obsession ! VOX, what have you done? =D
Fantastic story!
Another great video ❤
Thank you my friend!
Dark gods be praised i need the second part.