Warrior Cats is bad at this
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- เผยแพร่เมื่อ 15 พ.ย. 2019
- Warrior Cats protagonists sometimes lack the emotion that I wish they had. Here's how I would change the Silent Thaw protagonists to be better.
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Erin Hunter: Ight, we need to create a character who can make Bramblestars issue known
Rootpaw: Now this *doesnt* look like a job for me
Shadowpaw: *uhmh uhmmhm put him in snow*
I feel that Dawn of the clans does the best with love and sadness. The suntrail alone I cried when fluttering bird died, bright stream and her kits being carried or by a hawk, shadded moss dying..... But at the same time clearsky and brightstream showed an undoubtedly beautiful love making brightstreams death even more heartbreaking. Turtletail and grey wings relashionship makes you want to root for them to get together. Then greywing and jagged peak's relashionship as a parallel to greywing and clearsky. It was a heartbreaking arc and makes people so invested.
Brianna Myers You know what you're so right! :0
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Yeah, the first four Dawn of Clan books were pretty good with emotions, and I'd say A Vision of Shadows 2 & 3 are pretty good too in terms of Twig & Violet.
@@BrightGuardianAkira I agree. I truley enjoyed thunder and shadow as well shattered sky. I personally was a little disappointed that darktail didn't come back because he was a really good villain but overall I would agree those two were pretty suspenseful. And the idea of a ton of riverclan warriors being axed off like that while would have been more heart jerking if they were more developed was heart wrenching all the same.
Yes I fully agree @BriannaMyers My heart stopped beating when Quiet Rain told Grey Wing to find his brother. It was just a rollercoaster of emotions and it was a really fun ride!
Honestly, the silent thaw was one of the better books in recent times imo
"Silent That"
I totally agree, and this is just the one thing that I thought it could do better.
I want Shadowsight to wake up from being attacked and be stuck in the limbo ghost purge place with Antfur and he has to deal with the fact that he partially caused Antfur’s death.
Who’s Antfur?
Shoot I think I might have skipped a few chapters-
Antfur is a Shadowclan warrior who was originally from Tigerheart’s Shadow. In The Silent Thaw he dies from a wound that could’ve been preventable if Shadowsight was more focused. It’s been a minute since I’ve read The Silent Thaw so I apologize if this is incorrect!
"The Silent Flaw"
Lol I do love this book actually, it's one of my favorites and much better in MY opinion than Lost Stars
Do you mean thaw?
@@rambowderpzd3567 No, it's meant to be a joke.
@Catty Animations Yeeeeeeeee
@Monster_Under_Your_Bed Oof
Thaw*
Yeah I feel like more emotion is needed
If you fall of a cliff, when you hit the ground you automatically teleport back to the top...
Lol
I wish that is how it works in real life
@@Samylight me to lol
Ivypool watching Bristle get close to the impostor like "guess it runs in the family."
When you finish the video and realize you've ran into a spoiler
Honestly, Rootpaw is my favourite protagonist for the broken code. He’s sort of “relatable” somehow, but he’s the kind of character that makes you go: “c’mon! Just do it! Tell her the truth! Tree isn’t a bad father, you wouldn’t be weird if you revealed your secret power!”
Bristlefrost is sorta blandish, or well, she was really bland in the first book, but she’s gotten a little better. Still not my favourite, though.
Shadowsight is also sort of bland. He’s like a more cowardly Alderheart in a way. He as interesting in the first book, but in Silent thaw he wasn’t very interesting or important.
I somewhat enjoyed Shadowsight’s chapters as they were a little breath of fresh air and he was our look into the medicine cats, but I can see if it gets kind of boring. Also, I agree that Rootpaw was “relatable” and that Bristlefrost was kind of bland, but her chapters got better at the end of the book.
In my opinion rootpaw has to be the best out of shadow paw and bristlefrost.
Bristlefrost is an okay character and I agree that she’s a bit bland. The only thing I thought was interesting in bristlefrost’s perspectives is when her crush rejects her and she fails her first assessment because that’s the first for me. But the cos about bristlefrost, like Akira said, she needs to have more reactions to stuff like stem leaf rejecting her, she was over that in like why three days?
For ShadowSight I think he’s also an okay character. I think that ShadowSight could have many improvements. Another reason he’s an okay character in my eyes is that he’s a little over rated. I don’t like the fact that he can sort of see the future in visions.
I like Shadowsight the most he was very interesting, I like how they bought back the future seeing thing, because that went *s* wrong with Goosefeather
The WatermelomMaster I don’t like that feature I’d ShadowSight, that’s why he is ranking so low on my list is that future seeing power. I think adding powers to the series, especially to a unique character, sort of ruins it. Like I hated the power of three due to their powers when I actually really liked their characters. Powers just ruin the characters for me.
@@alyssavonhollen1898 why not it's interesting it happend the same with goose feather and that made her one of the most interesting characters. He also doesn't really see the future the only time he saw the future was the tribe otherwise he was just a used inexperienced worried character also the three lost their powers they weren't permanent. Sorry I just never hear people who doesn't like cats having powers cause jayfeather was blind and basically his power made up for that and he was the perfect cat to have the power. Lionblaze eh his power is overpowered and he probably would have survived in the great battle without it, Dovewing helped a lot with her powers and it was hard for her after she lost it. Also tree's power was something that was really needed in the broken code cause he was able to pass that on and he rarely uses his power. Plus shadowsight basically never had a power except knowing where the lake was and the tribe. Even though the cats had powers their personality was more. Also for me the story would be boring without characters with powers. Broken Code and omen of the stars wouldnt be as good as they are now without powers. Plus isn't the book all about powers? Medicine cats can see Starclan cats more often and Firestar was spoken to by Starclan cats a lot and the leaders has 9 lives. Sorry this was long. You can still believe what you believe I'm just trying to cause a debate.
*By The Power Of StarClan I Curse Whoever Disliked!*
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YASS
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In book 3, I would like to see an all-out war within ThunderClan at the end. I would like to see ThunderClan divided by the Possessed-Bramblestar followers and the Rebellion, and Bristlefrost would fight for Bramblestar’s side. I would like for the Bramblestar side to win, and Bramblestar to drive out all the cats that went against him. When Bristlefrost watches all these cats, including Stemleaf, leave, she would realize her mistake.
In book 4, she would have to go against the odds to bring them back and to win against Bramblestar. She would have to convince a few cats on the Bramblestar side to come with her but be reluctant to do so in fear that she will be revealed. She might decide not to get help in ThunderClan for this reason, and go to SkyClan. When she explains to SkyClan the whole problem, and nobody believes her, Rootpaw finally decides to stand up for her and reveal his secret. Tree stands up for him as well, because he is proud of his son for finally gaining the confidence to speak out. Shadowsight could have a vision or something and goes with them, bringing a few ShadowClan cats with him, that parts debatable.
Bristlefrost, Rootpaw, Tree, and a few other SkyClan, and maybe ShadowClan cats go out and search for the remaining ThunderClan cats. When they finally find him, Bristlefrost admits to her mistake and promises that she will help to drive Bramblestar out.
In book 5, they have to all convince all of RiverClan and WindClan to help them, but the Bramblestar Rebellion still has to stay outside of the lake territories in fear of them being found. I feel like one of the Clan, probably WindClan will disagree at first, and they will fight. But then Harestar loses a life or something and WindClan, mainly out of fear, agrees to help.
In book 6 (beware, this one's pretty long), Bristlefrost and a few others have to one-by-one attempt to gain the trust of every ThunderClan cat, but it is tough and terrifying. No cat wants to get caught, but they have to be safe. They end up winning over a few cat’s trusts. However, by the smallest odds, Bramblestar finds out. He attacks Bristlefrost while she is alone, or so it seems. Stemleaf happened to be close by. Bramblestar is shocked to see one of the cats he banished back on his territory and confronts him, but while Bramblestar is distracted, Stemleaf signals for Bristlefrost to run and get help. She runs to SkyClan, who sends cats to ShadowClan to get a few cats while she carries a few other cats to help Bristlefrost. Rootpaw runs to ThunderClan while Tree runs to WindClan. But Rootpaw is confronted by the Bramblestar followers, and he has to fight them, but they figure out the situation and run to Bramblestar. When Rootpaw runs to stop the other cats, he sees Bramblestar fighting Stemleaf, but the Bramblestar followers come and attack Rootpaw and Stemleaf. At the last moment, cats from SkyClan, ShadowClan, WindClan, and RiverClan rush in, along with Bristlefrost. Bristlefrost has to face her mistakes and fight Bramblestar. She gets the help of a few other cats and ends up winning the fight, and Bramblestar dies. When Shadowsight comes to heal everybody, he notices, shocked, that Tree is dead. He reluctantly goes up to Rootpaw to tell him this, and he is overcome with absolute grief. When the followers say everyone here is disloyal to the warrior code and needs to be punished, the ThunderClan rebellion tries to convince everybody that he was evil. SkyClan says that they have proof. Every SkyClan cat and a few other cats urge Rootpaw to show them and that he can grieve later. If he does this, Tree would be proud. So he, very reluctantly and still shaky from grief, uses his power to bring the actual ghost who possessed Bramblestar to light. The spirit is outraged and tries to retake control, until every cat, even the followers (though very reluctantly and guilty) says he has to go. The actual Bramblestar ghost also arrives, to further prove their point. (If the ghost ends up being Ashfur, we can have a whole Squirrelflight, Bramblestar, and Ashfur drama moment.) The spirit runs away, though he promises revenge.
This still has a lot of holes in plot development, but this could add some interesting new plots. It wouldn't make the most dramatic book the third, as Akira already wanted to happen in book 3 so the 6th book would be the most climatic. It would add a big moment of forgiveness and realizing you did something wrong and having to make up for it, as this video explained. It would add a big moment of sadness when Tree died but triumph when Rootpaw overcame this grief and found confidence to reveal his power to every other cat to help them out. I think it would make for some decent remaining books.
Good job, you made it to the bottom.
“Bristlefrost doesn’t make you feel things.”
...but who else can relate to Broken Code Bristlefrost?
Who's that?
Me
Wowie Zowie yes I do.
@Wowie Zowie I think they mean Broken Code cause she's in that arc
@Wowie Zowie I have no idea how to explain :^
Akira: But I want full on scolding!
Darkness Within: ಠ_ಠ
Hahaha...
I seriously agree with this, I havent read the Silent Thaw, but my friend has, apparently the emotions lack a lot and could be more.
I have not read the Silent Thaw yet. Like if you have not also. Oh wow 133 people
Olivia Schneider
No.
Stop begging for likes.
I’m only on Sunset.....
HUSH person. BAD person. READ the STINKING BOOK person.
Karis Roberts they don’t want to be spoiled
I'm on Crowfeather's Trial. It's my sister's fault that she read this series without telling me. Now I'm starting late
I guess you could say rootpaw is an Alderheart clone amiright
end me
I honestly feel we could have kept the characters from the Vision of Shadows, just added Shadowpaw(sight) to the mix because he added a different perspective/power. Tree could have been the one to see Bramblestar's ghost. Imagine all this happening in Alderheart's point of view. What does he think is happening to his father?
that would be good tbh
Excuse me I am a Ravenpaw clone.
I LOVED The Silent Thaw, it's probably one of my favorite books in the whole series. The flaws don't really bother me at all, but I would have loved Bristlefrost to think Bramblestar was a good cat for much longer. That would have been interesting. BTW, my favorite cat is Rootpaw too!
When side characters have more personality than the protagonists
Oo the Alderheart Effect
5th? nah i’m not like those kids
i’m just here cause i ain’t got nothing to do
Huuuu????
Same
First, to say they are just here and admit they aren't early
Honestly I dont have a favorite protagonist. I feel like I wierdly dont care about the protagonist in this book, it's all about the plot, not the characters. Thats why it lacks emotion and character development in my opinion
This book in particular, or warrior cats in general(didn't read arc 6 and 7)
You just replied two of my comments on completely different videos
i feel the same way as well. Except if I really had to choose it would be bristlefrost but that's just cause I have to have a favorite to enjoy a book.
7:55 IDK WHY BUT I HAVE NEVER LAUGHED THIS HARD AT A SCENE IDK WHY SHADOWSIGHT FALLING OFF A HILL WAS SO FUNNY TO ME
This video is so true. I used to love Warriors but the new books have ruined it.
Ravenclaw Girl true, I hated omen of the stars and vision of shadows, but this new series might turn it around after this good book.
The older series had their problems, but the newer ones just keep compounding on the flaws, so they are more noticeable/unforgivable.
The older books already sucked.
Bristlefrost can’t always react though because almost every single time something bad has happened bramblestar was around to watch her, and she didn’t want him to get suspicious of her
The real hardest questions
Ashfur or Brambleclaw?
Bumblestripe or Tigerheart
Brokenstar or tigerstar(claw)
Squirrelflight or leafpool
Feathertail or leafpool
Ivypool or dovewing
AND MY PERSONAL HARDEST ONE
jayfeather or gray wing
In meh opinion....... Ashfur,Tigerheart, Tigerstar(claw), Squirrelflight, Leafpool, Dovewing, and Jayfeather :3
I’d probably choose
Bramblestar, Tigerheart, tigerstar, squirrelflight, leafpool, Ivypool and gray wing 🙂🙃
i saw “warrior cats is bad at this” and my mind immediately went to “writing”
And world building. It makes no sense, is inconsitent(how many characters change color or were wrongly named because the editors don't do their work) and is boring(the clan went from caricature to just literally no differences. I wonder what is better).
When you see wings of fire it just makes it all the more pathetic.
how many warrior cat books are there. i always thought that there should have only been 3
(the very first 3)
I'm not sure If The broken code is released in Finland yet so I cant read The silent thaw or any other on The broken code book :( (im Finnish)
Noh ei se tuu olee pitkää aikaa :D mut jos haluut lukee enkuks nii tos on ilmane linkki :D >>>>>drive.google.com/file/d/13jIk5y6VsiprgkYg24mXR-BtSh0lkZLo/view?usp=drivesdk
Who else thinks that they should write a super edition about ravenpaw?
Hey i've been watching ur vids and I really like them. But I have a question. Do you have to get permission by the artist who did the art in the vid or do you just credit. Thanks!
When are the amino visions coming out?
I can't find any free pdf downloads for any of the broken code books and its driving me crazy because I'm a broke boy. I read all the other books on pdf because I just read them once really then delete them ahhhh
The false bramblestar you draw really creeps me out
So Great job!
*Me being a warriors OG
"I dont recognize any of these names"
Spoiler alert:
In The Veil of Shadows when Stemleaf died, Bristlefrost didn’t seem to care too much.
Actually this book DID give me some emotion: it was certainly...well, it gave me an eerie vibe. I loved it!
I totally agree that there should have been some desclipline for shadow sight. How is he really supposed to learn and grow if his parents are so loyal to him. I know his clanmates were against him but it would have made much more of an impact if his kin or mentor would have taken the time to have a talk with and really tell him what a mistake that was
Honestly I was horrified when I read the part where he threw Squirrelflight down a hill of rocks and the way he was talking to her, I hope they keep that up
Me:Early-
Most ppl:WHO CARES
Me:My early clan
Ashlyn Paige Studios XD
Yeah i Have to Agree with You Akira.
By The Way, When is The Cute Cats Challenge Result coming? Im Really Exited to see Some Cute Warriors :3
*breaks down window* yes
“These books don’t make you feel sad-“
Bristlefrost: *dies*
I now have depression
*cries slowly*
Solo Animates sad :(
I think the cat that possessed Bramblestar is Ashfur ... just think about it
Sally Love this is what I think!
That's what everyone and their grandmother thinks too, you know?
Honestly Ashfur doesn't need to come back imo, and the whole possession thing is somewhat nonsensical but at least there's an interesting conflict going on.
Dominika Jaskulska I agree
Recycling some old conflict would be such a Erin hunter thing to do...
This is why I gave up on the most recent Warrior Cats books. I can't connect with the characters because their arcs are so inconsistent. There's still really good moments and arcs in the books, but not enough to justify the money I'm spending on them.
Yeah. I'm not sure if I want to buy the complete arc 6. Sure, it will cost a lot less than if I had done one book at a time, but like...
This isn’t just a Warriors problem, we see it all throughout media. Heck, Steven Universe and SVTFOE are EXTREME examples of how unresolved emotional problems can twist a protagonist’s motives by accident.
"Bristlefrost doesn't really make you feel things"
A Light In The Mist: I'm about to ruin this sentances whole career
Early!
Amazing video!
last time i was this early redtail was still alive
Do you your amino
I haven't read any main series books since Darkest Night, and I'm watching this stuff
I’m miserable because The Broken Code books arent released in Australia yet
Or maybe they are and just not where I live
Yep, there is a lack of emotional impact throughout the recent series. Just scenes (some great) that leave no effect on the characters or their actions. The authors are just hitting the outline points, not letting the plot and characters create the story for us to enjoy.
Not new. The last hope felt like a checklist of epic fight.
The Broken Code, a gem in the trashcan of sequels
I dident know that tree was a cat... I thought he was a tree
Not gonna lie, I hate it when characters DONT MOVE ON WITH THE STORY. Rootpaw admitting it was good. I get annoyed when cats keep a secret too long.
I agree with everything you said. Not only would taking the time to have more character moments, struggles, and emotion make the book more enjoyable, but it'll make it feel less rushed. We all know about the problem Warriors has with making the main conflict die down by about the 3rd book, so maybe if they don't rush through it and stretch the books out with some good character moments and development, it'll save the climax for the end.
The third and fourth arc were quite the opposite... They streched the conflit over 12 book! Still better than "chevaliers d'émeraude". It's the most popular book serie in Quebec and that is just embarassing...
@@legrandliseurtri7495 That's true. But AVoS and DotC didn't do a very good job at making sure the conflict lasted throughout all the books.
I was whispering to the kid next to me telling him shadowsight died 🤭 and he kept saying what and I never told him who I was talking about
how do you know how the cats look?
It's an artist interpretation. Plus there's the book description.
When are you going to do the #warriorscute???
I like rootpaw the best he’s kinda relatable in a ways and I’m interested in seeing more
character development in him....
Bristlefrost is a little...bland but she is getting better...
Shadowpaw (I won’t say his new name) is trying to please starclan a little to much and there’s a lot of pressure on him I kinda feel bad...
Btw small warrior cats TH-camr here...I sub back :)
Just tell me if you sub :)
*how to make the ending of lost stars really good in my opinion, also kinda rushed*
A war against the ghost cats possesing dead cats + their henchmen + the remaining darkforest cats, posseded bramble'star leading the attack vs the clan cats with starclan and the ghost cats. Rootpaw gains his confidence in the past books, talks to bramlestar's ghost and bramblestar is let into starclan and rootpaw tells squirrelflight to possibly get bramblestar back hid body needs to be killed again for bramblestar to reposses it, The war begins, starclan cats are killed (yellowfang, some other unimportant cats, _and someone else, oo who could it be??_ ) henchmen and posessed cats are killed (bumblestripe, antfur) The thunderclan elders are killed in this battle (Bye bye greystripe). Squirrelflight gets to the possesed bramblestar, on his last life. Squirrelflight leaps at the possesed bramblestar. jayfeather and lionblaze (plus dead starclan hollyleaf show up to help her take down the possesed cat, bramblestar knocks off squirrelflight, injured. suddenly, a storm starts. A blast of lighting sets nearby wood on fire, quickly spreading. We get a recreation of the fire scence. Instead of revealing squirrelflight's secret. It is reavealed that ashfur is the one possesing bramblestar with a line like this, "I used to love you, but now I only wish you to be dead, nothing but charred crowfood. Don't you remember me? It's me ashfur and I came to destroy everything you love, but that pesky bramblestar got in the way..."
Squirrelflight didn't care. She attacked him again now with her adopted kits joining, pushing ashfur dangerously close to the fire, squirrelflight bites at the possesed bramblestar's neck and rips out a good chunk of it, killing bramblestar's body and forcing ashfur out, ashfur flees.
It turns out bramblestar's starclan spirit was killed in the battle. Therefore he can't repossess his body. the rain after the lightning quickly extinguished the fire. A group of cats (rootpaw, shadowsight and bristlefrost approach the 4 cats (plus the dead corpse) saying that bramblestar's starclan spirit was killed. The cats break down crying, esspecially squirrelflight, but squirrelflight is now leader. days later, Squirrelflight goes to the moonpool to become squirrelstar, still sad she makes ivypool deputy.
*(the reason i didn't kill berrynose in this is because i want him to apologise to lionblaze)*
Could you list some OC names? I would like to see how you think...ok...this is just weird...still plz do it...;-;
I have a few more...:heaven cloud / smoke fang / gem eye / water splash / bubble paw / wild fang . Nothing more.
I love these books and characters I just wish they would be written better
Early squad! :D I love more reviews!
When will he post the next challenge?
*•Emma Animates•* maybe a few weeks? Idk
I’m exited for that, I hope my fanart of Tigerstar with a teddy bear makes it in.
Scooter Mcpeanuts same I hope my scourge is in it
Yeah, I drew a drawing of ivykit and I hope it’s featured to
*Good very good*
rootpaw has frozen banana vibes
I don't think it's confidence so much as he wants to be normal.
My first section of the series I read was Dawn Of The Clans
Gray Wing x Turtle Tail forever!!!
Lol idk help me..
Still on the ad! :3
I don't even read the books anymore yet I still watch this channel for whatever reason
My mom hates Bright Guardian Akira’s voice for some reason........... Whatever🙄🙄🙄
We stan Akira but his voice is a bit annoying.
The Silent CLAW
Ikr cats are so quiet
Ahh 46 likes and 5 views wow
I love this alderheart design
I'm only on the second arc of the books and yet I'm here
I think Shadowsight is pretty bland, but I love Rootpaw.
I don't even have a real reason for loving him, but maybe it's because I also have social anxiety.
And Bristlefrost... Well, I don't really know what to think about her.
I do like her, but she's not so interesting imo.
I do hope that the protagonists become a bit more three dimensional.
And I am super pissed because Turtlescratch, Kitecrawl and Wrenpaw were just squished into the background after being introduced as major characters in Lost Stars...
Maybe this guy doesn’t feel sad when he reads Warriors because when SilverStream died... it was sad
Well I hope that in veil of shadow can fix this lttle problem because I think the same qwq
@Dani catfox I do too, Shadowsight is my favorite and I'm a bit upset that he got so little emotion
@@invadermelon yeah My favorite is Rootpaw and I need him more sentimental xd you know what I'm talkin about :V
First time in forever (I am early!)
(8 likes ty!)
I haven’t read the book yet, but Rootpaw is so adorable 😍
I think it's one eye cause one eye did some bad things and code breakers killed him and he hates thunderclan cause thunder killed him and one eye is very protective of thinks that are his so and he was old and Bramblestar ghosts acts really old and one eye would not have a grudge against skyclan but on shadowclan
Im reading Rising Storm at the moment but I haven't read it in a while because I'm waiting for christmas ;_;
Not early, but I agree.
I think this story was meant to not show much emotion. I’m sure we’ll see more later
I’m like what 😮 because I only read omen of the stars ⭐️ fire and ice 🧊 and bumble star’s storm ⛈
I just watched the video where you played tallstar for Moonkitti
Silent thaw gave me emotion! At the end, I freaked out, because Shadowsight was attacked. I had extrEme eMoTiOn
So true! I was thinking about this last night.
I honestly disagree, Rootpaw is a great character who can make a good storyline, I don't cerebrate Bristlefrost and Shadowsight could relate. Rootpaw exposed what he knew to ShadowClan. But you may thing he is trepidacious because he doesn't apportion it to the other Clans. Erin Hunter cut the book short. I'm only endeavoring to prove a point, It could just be my opinion.
825 views in 15 minutes. Good job
Early cat!!!!
#Silvermist is early
This
Channel
Is
Amazing
MAKE A VIDEO ABOUT PURDY NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I really love Purdy, he is my second favorite (Yelloewfang being first). He takes the award of "Minor character with most personality." His whole personality just makes me and my friends giggle! As my favorite Warrior Cat youtber, you must make a video on this topic!
this is a mostly a joke, just keep on making more vids Akira
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I thought I was a Warriors geek but Ashfur theory and this makes me feel like I don't know anything. Also before I heard about Ashfur theory i thought it was Tigerstar back again but I'm dumb and forgot Ashfur hates Squirrelflight and he's in StarClan. So I guess I''m not as much a Warriors geek as I thought I was.
Actually its the genetics
Oh I’m early!
Lets not be a lionblaze, shadowsight! Be more than just a superpower