Imitating Jimi Hendrix, original music

this was improvised. it is an old idea that I have been fiddling with for a number of years. its dramatic sounding. wild sounding I suppose. I definitely think I could direct it more to mimic thunder and lightning. I get thunder and lightning vibes when I play this.
I want to give a music lesson using thunder as an example, especially to address the negative comments that people leave. using a musical depiction of thunder and lightning is a perfect way to explain how little people understand music. even a depiction of electricity. have you ever seen electricity? Do you think a musical depiction needs to be so grounded? no. thunder is instantly recognized as a powerful expression. but people dont want to hear sound effects. they want to hear music. the wild essence of thunder and lightning and electricity opens the door to some freedom with music. this is lost on people. an argument people could use is these elements follow the laws of physics. yes. and? Thunder doesn't trigger in time or in rhythm. I guess that means thunder is incoherent gibberish to the musicians who leave negative comments. in order to capture these elements musically, you could easily use a little wildness. it is the expression that makes music easy to follow NOT THE RHYTHM. at the very least, music does need a consistent pace, which would be the most basic form of rhythm. and all music concepts can be reduced to there most basic forms and still be very expressive. Ever hear of a one note guitar solo? ever hear of a two note melody? or how about a person whistling a tune? I guarantee that they are not whistling in time. so I guess it is incoherent gibberish according to the comments people have left on some of my videos. I want to point something out about these people. they are serious. I can recognize the difference between a hater and a person who truly doesn't understand music when they leave negative comments. I know these comments reflect what musicians will think to say and im calling it ahead of time, they are embarrassing themselves. more and more I realize how my music makes it easy to see through what musicians say. it is their own fault. I spent my life questioning myself. these people never did.