10 TIPS For Better Worldbuilding In Your Comic, Manga, And Webtoon Stories

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  • @MonitorComics
    @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว +83

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    • @Kingsmoove5423
      @Kingsmoove5423 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      This video had help me I wrote down all the tip so I can get a better understanding of my world for my comic/manga

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@Kingsmoove5423 Super happy to hear that!! Thank you so much for taking the time to leave a nice comment! I really appreciate it!! Best of luck with your comic!

    • @theboywholovesthewind7022
      @theboywholovesthewind7022 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@MonitorComics As neat as this video is, it doesn't help me with the actual designing of the world I am hoping to make. Do you think you could help me out? If so, I'll send an invite to my Discord server where I am trying to get a manga started. I will need all the help I can get.

    • @lloydbradly307
      @lloydbradly307 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      is there anything more on the map comment?

    • @AussieWiz245
      @AussieWiz245 ปีที่แล้ว

      ​@@MonitorComics I am still in highschool, but I have already thought of an idea for an animated series I want to make. Do you think these concepts and laws can apply to a film medium, or are they slightly different?

  • @Rain-nm1ee
    @Rain-nm1ee 3 ปีที่แล้ว +421

    ‘One piece’ and ‘tower of god’ s world building is insane and what I aspire to be able to create, or at least create something half as good

    • @Ayocartoonclips
      @Ayocartoonclips 3 ปีที่แล้ว +45

      Happy to see someone say Tower Of God and I know this isn’t much I believe you’ll be able to create something as good 👍🏾

    • @namiboy787
      @namiboy787 3 ปีที่แล้ว +16

      made in abyss > tower of god

    • @geometrysquared1939
      @geometrysquared1939 ปีที่แล้ว +8

      Avatar, Warhammer 40k, Lord of the Rings, Game of thrones, Wheel of Time and Mistborn are all amazing as well.

    • @lancerofredkarna1867
      @lancerofredkarna1867 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@namiboy787 Nah

    • @YK20223
      @YK20223 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@namiboy787 No one but you brought up MIA. I like them both but there’s so reason to state your opinion here

  • @harsyakiarraathallah2222
    @harsyakiarraathallah2222 2 ปีที่แล้ว +146

    So the Conclusion Tips
    1. Choose your World
    2. Where to Started the Story
    3. Created the Laws
    4. Created the Places
    5. Created the Cultures
    6. Ways of Speaking
    7. Write the Worlds History
    8. What's Your Characters Act
    9. Take all Cliches and make it your own
    10. Build your World Slow and Clever

  • @stormrave5371
    @stormrave5371 3 ปีที่แล้ว +230

    One idea that I propose to all aspiring writers is to KEEP IT SUPER SIMPLE. Most people will watch a video like this and get bogged down under all the details and feel the need to micromanage them. When you keep your world building simple, it makes your overall story easier to understand, and everything else falls into place.

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว +36

      Great advice! Thank you for taking the time to share your insight!

    • @socithecreator2942
      @socithecreator2942 2 ปีที่แล้ว +17

      Yeah I agree. I personally don’t like reading or watching stuff that have super confusing worlds. If you are making a world in a story, explain things about the world little by little and keep it concise and simple to understand

  • @hyuuganatsume2621
    @hyuuganatsume2621 3 ปีที่แล้ว +184

    World Building in One Piece are so amazing and great that most people wanna lived in that world. Also the concept of freedom and civilization are wonderful in One Piece

    • @idkanymore4664
      @idkanymore4664 3 ปีที่แล้ว +7

      DUDE- I WANNA BE IN ONE PIECE SO BAD.

    • @mybizness124
      @mybizness124 3 ปีที่แล้ว +7

      Idk anymore depends on where you live I guess cuz one piece would be ass 💀

    • @griffith7615
      @griffith7615 3 ปีที่แล้ว +16

      yeah imaging being a normal height dude and find out some "people" are over 10 ft tall I would be terrified

    • @prateekbasera4653
      @prateekbasera4653 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      I wanna live in hxh or pokemon world

    • @idontusecolgate
      @idontusecolgate ปีที่แล้ว

      ⁠@@idkanymore4664 u would not. u would get raided by pirates all the time or you would live in poverty under the corrupt government. if u were a pirate u would most likely die from the marines or against other pirates. it’s still cool tho.

  • @blackharmonics4518
    @blackharmonics4518 2 ปีที่แล้ว +21

    One Piece and Made in Abyss are the most immersive worlds I've seen in fictional works yet. Both worlds want you to explore them and unscramble all the mysteries. They are not disposable locations where the characters do their thing, they are actually relevant to the story. You can't put the characters of these works into another world and expect to equally unfold themselves (well, maybe you could do that with Riko, because she loves to explore everything, but it wouldn't be the same without the Abyss). It's only possible in these respective worlds. And not only does it matter what the todays characters do... it's equally important and is a major motivation for our beloved characters, what the past characters did and why they did it.
    I love these works.

  • @luxluther436
    @luxluther436 2 ปีที่แล้ว +171

    One Piece: King of world building
    HxH: King of power systems
    Jojo: King of unique character designs

    • @abylaiashken2611
      @abylaiashken2611 2 ปีที่แล้ว +30

      You might as well call JoJo King of Visual Style/Artistic Sense and One Piece King of Long Term Storytelling.

    • @luucid5734
      @luucid5734 2 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      @@abylaiashken2611 I think berserk has the best art imo

    • @abylaiashken2611
      @abylaiashken2611 2 ปีที่แล้ว +16

      @@luucid5734 Yes, Berserk is a king of art. What I meant is that JoJo has very strong visual idendity cause frequently the color swap happens to fit specific mood.

    • @Jonas-jx3kw
      @Jonas-jx3kw 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      jojos character design is trash

    • @Hugm4lsecondaccount
      @Hugm4lsecondaccount 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@abylaiashken2611 i think the climber has best art

  • @takedakozuki921
    @takedakozuki921 3 ปีที่แล้ว +215

    Small correction: Code Geass isn't a manga series. It's an anime original

    • @slc_
      @slc_ 3 ปีที่แล้ว +17

      yeah ur right but the anime got adapted to manga

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว +55

      You're right! I forgot that the manga came after. Thank you for correcting me!

    • @chicksinfire
      @chicksinfire 3 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      Wait really?!

    • @SamuraiGintoki4
      @SamuraiGintoki4 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@MonitorComics wait there is a manga of code geass?

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@SamuraiGintoki4 Yes! After poking around I think there were about 5 different manga spin offs that came out after the anime

  • @dummydummy5841
    @dummydummy5841 3 ปีที่แล้ว +119

    Thank you for another great video! Appreciate it. Btw, would it be fine if you can make a detailed video on how to get your manga published on saturday am?

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว +17

      Thank you for taking the time to check out this video and leaving a nice comment! As far as Saturday AM goes, there isn't really a secret. I just entered the March Art Madness contest and they learned my name. I didn't make it far I got knocked out in round 2. Then I applied for the Summer of Manga Competition and got accepted. My one-shot ran in issue 106 and they assigned me an editor and asked me to create a series for them. It was pretty straightforward, just take advantage of their submission events and contests! Best of luck!

  • @Oktoayy
    @Oktoayy 2 ปีที่แล้ว +63

    Mushoku Tensei is a top tier when it comes to worldbuilding. from episode 1 the entire world just feels so real and interesting, and the creator of the manga even developed 2 different languages to fit in his story.

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  2 ปีที่แล้ว +15

      FOR REAL. MUSHOKU TENSEI IS S TIER

    • @blackharmonics4518
      @blackharmonics4518 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      @@MonitorComics It's S tier when it comes to story and characters, but in worldbuilding I think, it's more on the generic side of isekai anime/manga. You could easily put the characters in another similar world and they would do the same. Don't get me wrong, it's a beautiful world but not as good as OP or Made in Abyss in my opinion.

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  2 ปีที่แล้ว +15

      @@blackharmonics4518 Compared to the majority of "starter town medieval town" isekai stories, Mushoku Tensei has a MUCH MORE fleshed out world
      I would personally say its FAR from generic. Most isekai series barely leave the starter town and if they do they just go to a generic forest, king's palace, etc
      I do agree that series like Made In Abyss have great worldbuilding. But at the end of the day, Made in Abyss is a fantasy series, so we should hope it has a cool world
      When it comes to Isekai the expectations are EXCEEDINGLY LOW because of all of the generic titles to come out in recent years.
      It definitely helps that Mushoku Tensei was one of the earlier light novels that took off around the time as The Familiar of Zero, WAY before the SAO isekai boom

    • @blackharmonics4518
      @blackharmonics4518 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@MonitorComics Yes, I absolutely agree. Compared to other isekai titles out there, Mushoku Tensei is waaaaay above the others.
      Maybe it's not fair to compare it to straight fantasy titles like MiA.
      I really love MT, because of the characters and the storytelling, pace, etc. And it is really nice to see an isekai character actually travel around instead of just make a base in the spawn town. MT is one of the few anime I really appreciated the last few years (MiA is still my absolute no. 1 title)

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      @@blackharmonics4518 For sure! I don't know if you watched my recent video about Isekai anime, but its really interesting to think about how old MT is
      A lot of modern isekai authors credit MT for inspiring a lot of the character archetypes, story tropes, etc in modern Isekai anime
      It's really surprising how many of those series dont try to replicate the GOOD aspects though like trying to build a unique world, or making an interesting plotline or engaging characters
      I have no clue why so many isekai series copy each other creating the same generic "story" over and over again

  • @dudemgee
    @dudemgee ปีที่แล้ว +6

    For the story that I was writing, I had a story I was really happy with (still wip)
    but I realised I didn't have an amazing world, I took the setting of traditional Asia but that was it. I knew I wanted a fantasy world but I didn't know what to do.
    So for me (and for you), here's some advice or guides:
    - if you are lost on what to do, try exploring a perspective or theme, and then personifying it into a location.
    - you generally already have a setting in mind, but if you don't, just work on the story until it comes to you
    - Take the rules, systems, and laws of your world and make systems to fit them (example from attack on titan: big titans, how do we kill them, their napes, how do we get there, verticality, how do we do that, spiderman gear(because flying looks goofy and isn't technologically possible) boom, military equipment that is a staple for how characters traverse the world and survive in it) (I only just realised that he talks about aot in the video now I don't feel unique)
    - Taking inspiration is a good thing don't be scared of it.
    - History is your friend, there is so much more than medieval Europe, decide your tone and think of what personality it has and what setting would be best to sample
    - culture and politics are great for deciding alliances and enemies
    that's all I have, feel free to add more or thank me cause I'm an incredible person

  • @OniBoiXD
    @OniBoiXD 3 ปีที่แล้ว +39

    great video, I would like to add that picking if your starting from your characters or your world is a big difference of how you design your setting

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Could you go a bit more into detail for others who might be curious? Thank you for taking the time to check out the video and leave a comment I really appreciate it!

    • @OniBoiXD
      @OniBoiXD 3 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      @@MonitorComics yeah of course. I was talking about how there tend to be two starting points for world design. one being based around your MC and other characters. Where you start smaller and build out filling in what you need. the second method being larger design into a smaller design. where you design around larger events and fill in characters later on.

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@OniBoiXD Great points! Thank you for taking the time to elaborate!

  • @christrafalgar2852
    @christrafalgar2852 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1155

    One Piece is the King of Worldbuilding.

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว +156

      TRUE

    • @dougeefresh1534
      @dougeefresh1534 3 ปีที่แล้ว +63

      I’m a huge One Piece fan but O gotta say Toriko does a really good job too.

    • @shadeslimmy8311
      @shadeslimmy8311 3 ปีที่แล้ว +14

      Unrivaled

    • @dougeefresh1534
      @dougeefresh1534 3 ปีที่แล้ว +52

      @@julfikarsheikh1478 You’re entitled to your opinion but Naruto is nowhere near the king.

    • @dougeefresh1534
      @dougeefresh1534 3 ปีที่แล้ว +38

      @@julfikarsheikh1478 I have watched the anime. It’s been a long time so I won’t speak on it too much but I don’t ever see people bring up the world building.

  • @DNVS.11
    @DNVS.11 2 ปีที่แล้ว +17

    You’ve got some amazing content. I was writing a manga with nothing but ideas and realized how many concepts i had missed out on while watching your videos and now feel a lot more excited in what’s to come

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      That's awesome to hear!! Thanks for taking the time to share! Best of luck!

  • @appliepi3.14_anji
    @appliepi3.14_anji 2 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    The worldbuilding for Houseki no Kuni is absolutely one of my favourites
    From Gems formed to fight Lunarians to protect themselves and eachother with it's history of the possible extinction of Humans and how the Admirabilis were there to witness the evolution of it all. And how the story would end up back at the very beginning of one creating a human once again. It all connects into something and even for a small type of worldbuilding it has so much meaning and depth to it and I hope one day I'll be able to create such a great world like this.

  • @thedirector2878
    @thedirector2878 3 ปีที่แล้ว +16

    Im currently working on a series and I think your video sums it up, no bullshit straight to the point, and even extra points for actually giving us the definitions for certain areas for world building uwu!

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      I'm happy the video could help! Thank you for taking the time to leave a comment!

  • @harshalkolase9249
    @harshalkolase9249 3 ปีที่แล้ว +416

    AOT and one piece has best world building

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว +40

      TRUE. Thank you for taking the time to leave a comment!

    • @footy743
      @footy743 3 ปีที่แล้ว +99

      Aot has 3 walls underground city ocean and another town in the other side ain't so special

    • @audisuuu
      @audisuuu 3 ปีที่แล้ว +14

      @@footy743 how is it not special?

    • @footy743
      @footy743 3 ปีที่แล้ว +10

      @@audisuuu tell me how 3 walls underground city ocean and another city is so special

    • @audisuuu
      @audisuuu 3 ปีที่แล้ว +42

      @@footy743 Titans inside walls. 50km walls that protect people. I think the underground aint special tho. But imagine you think ppl outside the walls are extinct. Then theres that Island lmao.
      Im bad at english soooo... im bad at explaining this.

  • @acsin1125
    @acsin1125 3 ปีที่แล้ว +255

    World Building TIp: Learn from One Piece.

  • @jasomega2446
    @jasomega2446 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    1:50 2:29 2:37 4:07 4:20 6:12 7:12 8:51 9:47 10:41 I Thank You For This! 11:59 12:59 13:25

  • @Rekter
    @Rekter 3 ปีที่แล้ว +77

    Thanks for the video Monitor, I really need tips like these xd. In terms of my world building in my story it’s like the United States but if it was broken up into Islands (it serves an incredibly important part in the story but I’m still having trouble designing the islands).

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      Sounds awesome Rekter! Thank you for your continued support I really appreciate it!!

    • @Rekter
      @Rekter 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@MonitorComics No problem! You always have the best tips when it comes down to both story and art so thank you for the helpful videos!

    • @user-dl4pt7qt3c
      @user-dl4pt7qt3c 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Hey reketer start a blog for practice even I did

    • @user-dl4pt7qt3c
      @user-dl4pt7qt3c 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      For my anime world no pictures like a book

    • @windy6587
      @windy6587 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Sounds amazing honestly dude

  • @water-fallswebtoon5239
    @water-fallswebtoon5239 3 ปีที่แล้ว +50

    Thank you, your videos always help me a lot with my webtoon

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว +8

      Of course! I'm super happy to hear that! Thanks for taking the time to leave a nice comment! Best of luck with your webtoon!

  • @malosprime4910
    @malosprime4910 3 ปีที่แล้ว +202

    One Piece is the ideal when worldbuilding.

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      TRUE

    • @MartialArtsTechniquesideas
      @MartialArtsTechniquesideas 3 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      Nope. One piece world is just bigger, not better.
      People mistake those two things. Like people in the comments really compare One Piece to LOTR lol. In my opinion, even Naruto is as well as one piece :
      There is lore, myths (Rikudo), past events and war that are important for the present of the story (like the ninja wars), war heroes and mythical characters as well, geopolitique (kage cousil), a power system based on chakra, dead civilisation as well (like the Uzumaki clan) etc...
      Naruto’s world seems real and is pretty well developed throughout the story.
      I don’t see what One piece does so much better.
      Are there different languages in One piece for exemple ?

    • @sinsfast5435
      @sinsfast5435 3 ปีที่แล้ว +29

      @@MartialArtsTechniquesideas stop downplaying one piece just because you like naruto.all of those things are in one piece and more, plus they are fleshed out more.

    • @MartialArtsTechniquesideas
      @MartialArtsTechniquesideas 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@sinsfast5435 if you were paying attention you would see that I’m not downplaying One piece. I’m just saying that many manga as are good at world building including Naruto. But you are probably too fan to understand this kind of shades.
      You can’t say bs like "One piece is the best" just because there are a bunch of animal humans and a bit of geopolitics. It’s as good as the other, not better.

    • @MartialArtsTechniquesideas
      @MartialArtsTechniquesideas 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@sinsfast5435 what is done better in One piece lol ?

  • @Javier_Pichardo
    @Javier_Pichardo 3 ปีที่แล้ว +18

    Recently came across your channel and been listening to a lot of your old videos. They’re so good! World building is so fascinating to me and it’s awesome to hear your tips on this topic. I’ve been sitting on several ideas and have just recently started to piece things together. Your videos have helped a lot!

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      I'm super happy to hear that! I kind of cringe looking back at some of my older videos because my speaking, audio quality, editing, and thumbnails have come a long way since then lol. I appreciate you checking them out though and taking the time to leave a nice comment! I really appreciate it! Best of luck with your project!!

    • @Javier_Pichardo
      @Javier_Pichardo 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@MonitorComics Haha! I know what you mean. I had a comic book podcast for a little while and in the early episodes our audio was bad too and I was really nervous. But the cool thing is looking back and seeing how you much you’ve grown! #PlusUltra
      I honestly haven’t caught any of the audio issues you pointed out. The quality of your content outshines anything else 👍🏽
      Quick question. I think I heard you mention some of your different work, but do you still have an ongoing manga series that you publish or are uploading somewhere?

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@Javier_Pichardo I appreciate that haha. Thanks fot taking the time to share all of that! I really appreciate it. I post all of my older works and projects on my Webtoons! If you search MonitorComics on webtoons you should be able to find them! My current published series is with Saturday AM but it debuts when their new mobile app is ready to drop. So far I have two chapters done and will be publishing bimonthly once the new app gets going! I post updates and process shots over on my Instagram!

  • @devinagonistes
    @devinagonistes 3 ปีที่แล้ว +30

    Thanks for another great video! I really enjoy your channel. One of my favorite examples of worldbuilding is The Fifth Season by N. K. Jemisin. Not a manga, I know, but one of the best literary fantasy novels I’ve ever read.

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Thank you for stopping by and taking the time to leave a nice comment Devin! I really appreciate it! I'm super glad you recommended a novel for all of us to check out! I think we can all appreciate the intricacies that go into novel writing as comic artists! Some of the best stories came from novels after all haha. Thanks again for your support!

  • @Kingsmoove5423
    @Kingsmoove5423 3 ปีที่แล้ว +12

    This video had help me I wrote down all the tip so I can get a better understanding of my world for my comic/manga

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Super happy to hear that!! Thank you for checking out the video and taking the time to leave a nice comment! Best of luck with your project!

  • @kasyfi5546
    @kasyfi5546 3 ปีที่แล้ว +11

    Woah man, such an early stage to get a sponsor. Congrats!

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Thank you so much i really appreciate it!

    • @kasyfi5546
      @kasyfi5546 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@MonitorComics You're welcome :D

  • @toongamer2810
    @toongamer2810 3 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    0:32 oh cool! I've really needed these types of videos! The inking stuff i mean. Thanks for the sponsor man!

  • @antoineboulanger5963
    @antoineboulanger5963 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    I fell in love with your channel, it's really helpful for us beginners

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      I'm super happy to hear that! Thanks for taking the time to leave a nice comment! I'm glad my stuff can help!!

  • @apotheocary8839
    @apotheocary8839 3 ปีที่แล้ว +16

    Amazing content. Thanks for putting in the leg work for us smooth brained world creators xD

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      Thank you so much for taking the time to leave a nice comment! I really appreciate it! As a fellow smooth-brainer, I'm glad this video could be useful!

  • @RascalEntertainments
    @RascalEntertainments ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Thanks so much for this! The world I have is nowhere near as big as One Piece's, but it's a bit like the MCU.
    It starts off with one team of heroes, then branches off with other types of heroes that exists within smaller groups in the same world.
    This definitely helps me find a good balance to explore each story and how each hero came to be. Thank you for all your tips!

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  ปีที่แล้ว

      That's awesome to hear! I'm glad this video could help! Thanks for taking the time to watch!

  • @daria4810
    @daria4810 2 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    As for me, Gintama's world building is one of the best! i love the worlds based on absurd ideas so much!:>
    Berserk and Gigantomakhia are also amazing! Miura is truly a master of worldbuilding

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Great picks! Thanks for taking the time to share!

    • @furorteutonicus9045
      @furorteutonicus9045 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Gintams world is quite limited tho and you do not really explore anything outside of earth much.

  • @darkmirror21
    @darkmirror21 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Something to add which was something I've learned along the way in terms of worldbuilding in regards to your own story: 'build the character within the world, don't build the world around a character'. It sounds like common sense but this is partly how to avoid creating mary sue characters while creating a more believable setting as well making your characters 'fit' into the world.
    And if I'm being honest, world anvil discord taught me a lot about the subtleties of worldbuilding and how to keep the information open to new possibilities instead of making something so specific. Like with One Piece, Oda most certainly did not create the entire thing from the very start. He built up on it over time as he went through the story to a point he has such an extensive worldbuilding that works within the context of the story. The lesson to get out from that is not to go overboard with worldbuilding especially when you're trying to write a story because the rest of the tips on this video goes naturally as you progressed through it.
    But yes, maps. Make a map. As someone who does too much worldbuilding and not enough writing, maps are your bestfriend with worldbuilding. Even just blobs of where things go is enough to start off with.

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  ปีที่แล้ว

      Amazing advice! Thanks for taking the time to share all of that!!

  • @peanut8942
    @peanut8942 3 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    Wow I just found your channel and you’re literally perfect I’ve been thinking about making a story but this is like my first time actually taking it serious and doing something about it and you and yourself channel are so helpful thank you so much

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I'm super glad to hear that! Thank you so much for the nice comment! Best of luck!

  • @itswickie8545
    @itswickie8545 3 ปีที่แล้ว +9

    I’m a bit late to this video, but it helped a lot! I love worldbuilding and this definitely helped.
    (Also, I think the series Re:Zero is really good in worldbuilding. But I might be biased because I see it as one of the best things ever)

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Super glad to hear that! Thanks for stopping by and taking the time to leave a comment! I love Re:Zero as well! I've been super busy so I couldnt check out season 2 yet, but I plan to soon and then I will definitely reference it more in my videos haha

  • @Lazer-bp9lf
    @Lazer-bp9lf 3 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    I actually made several concept arts about the world of my own fan made manga I'll make very soon. I'm doing it on paper as I don't have the hardware and software to go digital yet (plus my budget is meh) but I started out with a map regarding all the regions of this world (kind of like AOT in which the world map is basically like our world but with the world map upside down and inverted). Thanks for these tips btw!

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Sounds awesome! Best of luck!

    • @Lazer-bp9lf
      @Lazer-bp9lf 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@MonitorComics Thanks :)

  • @dereklucks4549
    @dereklucks4549 3 ปีที่แล้ว +22

    One Piece is the best in world building in fantasy and scaling of mechanics. It is not completely perfect but one of the best there is for shounen. It has nearly everything that meshes super well together and scales really well and stays consistent to itself.

  • @rovorovo9511
    @rovorovo9511 3 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    5:14 glad to see girls last tour was put as a ref up there :)

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Yesss! A great anime for sure!!

    • @rovorovo9511
      @rovorovo9511 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@MonitorComics mhm

  • @Mr.OJ17
    @Mr.OJ17 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Great video! Probably my favorite so far

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Super glad to hear that! Thanks for taking the time to watch!

  • @prominence247
    @prominence247 3 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    This video really helped me out!!!!!!! I’m trying to get better at storytelling and this definitely helped me get better direction. Lol I just write stories no drawing so I’ll get someone else to do that part

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Sounds awesome! I'm glad to hear this helped! Best of luck!

  • @bdneditz1
    @bdneditz1 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    great advice trying to start my own anime and you the first one to example perfect for me. keep up the work

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      I'm super glad to hear that! Thank you for taking the time to check this video out! I'm happy it could help!

  • @Grimeo
    @Grimeo 3 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Magi's worldbuilding is also amazing

  • @studiodevil5283
    @studiodevil5283 ปีที่แล้ว

    glad you brought up Attack on Titan, it has my favorite worldbuilding

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  ปีที่แล้ว

      Yess, Attack On Titan is amazing!

  • @prathameshrana2099
    @prathameshrana2099 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Bro your videos have help me so much I can't even tell in this one single comment thanks you.
    Can you do character, world, setting analysis videos?

  • @Alex_x664
    @Alex_x664 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Your channel is not just good it's amazing

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Thank you so much I really appreciate that!!

  • @Its-j
    @Its-j 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Thank you for making this video.

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      My pleasure! Thank you for taking the time to check it out and leave a comment!

  • @bootnoxer
    @bootnoxer ปีที่แล้ว

    Awesome video .. thank you for all your content .. very insightful and inspiring

  • @membryo9247
    @membryo9247 3 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Best piece of worldbuilding is the world itself

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Good point! Thank you for taking the time to leave a comment!

  • @haroldmosley1751
    @haroldmosley1751 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Taking all the aspects you talked about into account. I have to say fire punch is an absolute master class in world building.

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Great example! Thank you for sharing your thoughts!

  • @muazadam983
    @muazadam983 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    I've been waiting for a video like this thanks

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Super glad to hear that! Thanks for taking the time to watch!

  • @rubsbalotoliii
    @rubsbalotoliii 3 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Thanks for the tips. I am planning on making a manga and need tips for worldbuilding and power source. also got my free trial on skillshare, thanks for the 1month trial

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Nice! Super glad to hear that! Best of luck and enjoy the Skillshare courses!!

  • @eletrica_
    @eletrica_ 3 ปีที่แล้ว +41

    I want to achieve a worldbuilding as good as One Piece and Tower of God (my favorites).
    I love the concept of the main story of TOG being set in a GIANT tower, divided into three parts with unique floors and rulers for each one, that keeps the order. Each floor also has a density of Shinsu (TOG's "mana" and substitute of water and oxygen in the tower) that gets stronger as you climb the tower. There's a lot more about the TOG world too, but it's a lot to explain here.
    But my favorite is still One Piece, I love how bizarre and creative some islands are. Screw normal places, let's make an island made of Cake. Also, the concept of the OP world being divided by the red line, grand line and calm belt is really interesting and gives opportunity for crazy but pausible theories.
    My only fear is that I make a world so big that my story ends up taking years to finish (which is the case of TOG and OP) lmao. Great video!! :]

    • @dabunga23
      @dabunga23 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Having it take years means it's gonna be well thought out and enjoyable

    • @bootnoxer
      @bootnoxer ปีที่แล้ว

      Good luck with your project .. sounds very exciting

    • @Rakhunbam
      @Rakhunbam ปีที่แล้ว

      Same! I love tog’s world building a lot ✨

  • @justdhurba
    @justdhurba หลายเดือนก่อน

    One Piece excels in worldbuilding because of its vast and interconnected world, filled with unique islands, cultures, and societies that feel alive and purposeful. Oda integrates geography, history (like the Void Century), and politics seamlessly into the story. The Grand Line's structure naturally pushes exploration, while its lore-like the Poneglyphs and mysteries of the Pirate King-adds depth. Additionally, every arc contributes to the world's complexity without overwhelming the reader.

  • @jpm5772
    @jpm5772 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Another amazing example of world building is star wars. There's a reason so many people love it

  • @BK_CreativeCurse
    @BK_CreativeCurse 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Very informative. Thankyou for this video.

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      I'm glad you enjoyed! Thank you for taking the time to leave a comment!

  • @jackattackhero5571
    @jackattackhero5571 ปีที่แล้ว

    I am blown away you made a video about world building and didnt mention berserk at all

  • @jksupergamer
    @jksupergamer 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Kumo desu ga is one series I’d say that has absolutely amazing world building.
    It goes really in depth on basically every aspect of the world

  • @lesouth03
    @lesouth03 ปีที่แล้ว

    When It comes to world building, I can't get enough of one piece, legend of Zeld, and elden ring

  • @ivythealiencat
    @ivythealiencat 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Wow I rly needed worldbuilding tips and then you uploaded 😅

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      I'm glad to hear that haha. Thanks for checking the video out and taking the time to leave a comment! I really appreciate it!

    • @ivythealiencat
      @ivythealiencat 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@MonitorComics np

  • @ashleylewandowski3467
    @ashleylewandowski3467 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Just found this channel today, already watched 5 videos. These are amazing, thank you very much!

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  2 ปีที่แล้ว

      I'm glad they could help! Thanks for taking the time to leave a nice comment!

  • @sheevpalpatine6139
    @sheevpalpatine6139 3 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    One Piece, the PINNACLE of world building for me. Absolutley amazing. Hje only one I can think of that rivaled it is Toriko. Too bad it got axed or ended because it too was amazing

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Great choices! Thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts!

    • @rajsaha7885
      @rajsaha7885 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Agree about toriko

    • @poomipatlurkudom3883
      @poomipatlurkudom3883 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@rajsaha7885 One piece and Toriko, best world building

  • @DanceBoy65
    @DanceBoy65 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    New subscriber! Love your stuff! I’m a screenwriter and it’s so great to see your content 🤟🏻

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      I really appreciate that! Happy to have you!

  • @cantplayval
    @cantplayval 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Underrated is understatement for you. Really dude you are much better than some 1 Millions TH-camrs.

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      I really appreciate that!!

    • @cantplayval
      @cantplayval 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@MonitorComics Please make a video regarding, How to make a good Villain organization ?

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@cantplayval Thank you for the video suggestion I will add it to my list of upcoming topics!

    • @cantplayval
      @cantplayval 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@MonitorComics Thank u very much. Hope you will soon reach 1 Million Subs

  • @peeper2070
    @peeper2070 3 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    One Piece has the best worldbuilding I’ve ever seen, recommend me some stuff which is comparable to it. A Sky Island above a skull, the 3 marine headquarters, one of which is in the middle of a giant waterfall, random giant human-like monsters near Thriller Bark which have not been explained for 12 years now, a country of toys, a kitty pirate who is actually a cyborg revolutionist. Brilliant stuff.

  • @dandem9906
    @dandem9906 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    I got a good one, a world where the main character with other unknown people get kidnapped to a facility providing soldiers for the war outside and the main cast figures out the meaning of their training and try to escape to freedom

  • @srianshrathod3367
    @srianshrathod3367 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Loveeee it this vido is op

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Super glad to hear that! Thanks for checking it out and taking the time to leave a comment!

    • @srianshrathod3367
      @srianshrathod3367 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Oooohhhh!!!! What monitor comics replied to meeee aaaaaa ok actually I don't get cool youtubers comment back soo yeah actually I am fanyou tips are freakkkkin awesome thankyou then bye

  • @StarryOcean99
    @StarryOcean99 ปีที่แล้ว

    I need this so bad omg.. finally i've found some good tips for my manga😭😭👍👍

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I'm glad to hear that! I released a part 2 to this video a few weeks ago!

    • @StarryOcean99
      @StarryOcean99 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@MonitorComics Good to hear that😄 I'll watch it soon after this video

  • @dewanyeward4548
    @dewanyeward4548 3 ปีที่แล้ว +28

    One piece has best world building and all though it’s not a manga but a WEBTOON tower of god I think as well

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Good choices! Thank you for taking the time to share!

  • @skytiburon
    @skytiburon 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    An anime I think has great worldbuilding is Fullmetal Alchemist, everything makes sense and generally feels like a believeable world.

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      FACTS. Thanks for taking the time to share your thoughts!

    • @skytiburon
      @skytiburon 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@MonitorComics no problem!

  • @JushSam
    @JushSam ปีที่แล้ว +2

    My fav world building for me
    One piece
    Toriko
    Hxh
    Gachiakuta
    Dragonball
    Fairy tale
    Berserk
    Yuyu hakusho
    Naruto

  • @nathanbrown8038
    @nathanbrown8038 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Love your content

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Thank you so much Nathan! I really appreciate you taking the time to leave a nice comment!!

  • @sullybutler1775
    @sullybutler1775 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    This video really helped

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I'm glad! Thanks for taking the time to watch!

  • @octaspi
    @octaspi 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    unrelated but im obsessed with the way u say past

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      LOL thank you! That’s the first time someone has ever complimented me for that haha

  • @DvLUH
    @DvLUH 3 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    I’m not creative at all and don’t have much of a passion for storytelling or art so probably never gonna need this but thanks I will use this to make my unoriginal brain a little better

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Glad this video could help! Thank you for taking the time to leave a comment! Best of luck!

    • @DvLUH
      @DvLUH 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@MonitorComics thanks

    • @osam4470
      @osam4470 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Nah man, u just gonna have to take that pen, and sit everyday drawing atleast for 30 mins, like that Ur creativity and art will improve, and maybe, you make a manga or comic one day

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@osam4470 Good advice!

  • @volumeburner195
    @volumeburner195 ปีที่แล้ว

    Very informative.

  • @MosArtReacts
    @MosArtReacts 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Yes been waiting for a new upload. Appreciate the video

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I appreciate the support! Thank you for taking the time to check it out and leave a comment! I really appreciate it!

    • @Brandon.manga.
      @Brandon.manga. 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@MonitorComics woohoo let's go Momitor!

  • @yann1922
    @yann1922 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    in my project it is not a map I need to do, it is a entire system so multiples planets, moons, stations, possibly multiples suns, asteroids belt and things on them like cities, outposts, factories, villages, if I can make thing look logicals it could be a amazing world building but if I fail it is going to be horrible

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Sounds awesome! Thank you for taking the time to share that with us! Best of luck!!

    • @yann1922
      @yann1922 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@MonitorComics Thanks ! I am trying my best !

  • @DrawingwithBalance
    @DrawingwithBalance 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Really helpful vid appreciate it

  • @Joker-f7e5k
    @Joker-f7e5k 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thanks I really needed this

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Super happy to hear that! Thanks for checking the video out and taking the time to leave a comment!

  • @moro-og-739
    @moro-og-739 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    One Piece, Dragon Ball, Naruto and Attack on Titan really have the best world building in manga history

    • @justaguywithastrawhat9293
      @justaguywithastrawhat9293 3 ปีที่แล้ว +6

      I can agree with one piece but I can't agree with Naruto because it's world is so small, They go from one village to another and that's it. And they reach their destination in just a few days. Naruto is mostly about the animation and story telling. The same for dragon ball, the original dragon ball had good world building but the Z and super have no good world building, they make traveling to planets look so easy, they reach one planet to another in a matter of seconds, it is about fighting and story telling only. I just don't agree with Naruto and db in terms of world building, other than that I enjoyed both of the shows .And I haven't watched aot so I can't say anything about it.

    • @moro-og-739
      @moro-og-739 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      @@justaguywithastrawhat9293 sorry but you’re wrong about Z and Super. Z showed so many new locations like Snake Way, King Kai’s planet, Planet Zoom, World of the Kais, new locations of Earth, Babidi’s ship, new dimensions like the hyperbolic timechamber, Namek, Planet Vegeta, Other World, Hell and that’s excluding Super, which becomes even bigger. Attack on Titan has nothing on Dragon Ball’s worldbuilding, because (eventhough everything is explored) there are only 3 or 4 locations shown, while there’s so much symbolism, religion, locations and so many types of aliens and humans on earth that it in my opinion really comes close to One Piece. I haven’t finished One Piece YET, but I’ll see it for myself

    • @justaguywithastrawhat9293
      @justaguywithastrawhat9293 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@moro-og-739 Fair enough

  • @azariahspence8551
    @azariahspence8551 3 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Thank you, Monitor Comics! Trying to Worldbuild is new to me, so I needed a video like this! I'm still learning, so I might just look at this again as a reference!

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Awesome! Thank you for your constant support and engagement Azariah! I really appreciate it! Best of luck!

  • @1995yuda
    @1995yuda 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    You rock my dude

  • @احمدجمال-غ7م8ج
    @احمدجمال-غ7م8ج 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    TORIKO is one of the best Worldbuilding in anime and manga history

  • @embereclipse634
    @embereclipse634 3 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    my favorite mangas in world building: BERSERK, ONE PIECE, HXH, BLACK CLOVER and AOT

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Great choices!

    • @poomipatlurkudom3883
      @poomipatlurkudom3883 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      You gotta read Toriko

    • @embereclipse634
      @embereclipse634 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@poomipatlurkudom3883 i have it actually with other mangas in my pc i will definitely read it I've seen some manga panels i can tell the gore and the massive creatures and worlds will hook me up

    • @poomipatlurkudom3883
      @poomipatlurkudom3883 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@embereclipse634 The world building in Toriko is on par with One piece

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@poomipatlurkudom3883 True!

  • @av-nx4dd
    @av-nx4dd 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you so much for this video!!!!

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Of course! Thank you so much for checking it out and taking the time to leave a nice comment! I really appreciate it!

  • @Eterrath
    @Eterrath 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thanks for the great video.

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Of course! Thank you for checking it out and taking the time to leave a nice comment! I really appreciate it!

    • @Eterrath
      @Eterrath 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@MonitorComics You're welcome. I'm not the most alert reader and have been trying to understand worldbuilding in stories. It's something I find hard to see in many shows and wonder if it's my fault for not being able to see it. I've asked for suggestions before but getting told to go and read the entire State Wars and LOTR collection isn't really the most pleasant experience. These and One Piece are also franchises where the worldbuilding is very pronounced in my opinion. It made me wonder if worldbuilding exists in every/the majority of the non-fantastical shows.
      Thank you for the Slice of Life example tho, my favorite SoL, March Comes In Like a Lion has the main character constantly switching from one fictionalized irl Japanese location to another which are labeled as month towns (March city, June town).

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@Eterrath All good! I'm glad my video could be helpful! And I love March Comes In Like A Lion lol. Worldbuilding does exist in every story. Some stories like those in the adventure or fantasy genre tend to capitalize on it the most. With slice of lives for example you could worldbuild by having several locations like you said (school, home, friends home, town over, beach, amusement park, local cafe, etc)!

  • @kavivarman
    @kavivarman 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thanks for the video

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Of course Kavi! Thanks for checking it out and taking the time to leave a comment! I really appreciate it!

  • @summerevergreen8447
    @summerevergreen8447 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    Yess new upload

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Yesss Thank you for checking it out and taking the time to leave a comment!

  • @rilayyy4151
    @rilayyy4151 3 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    Really, really good and helpfull video

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      I'm super happy to heat that!! Thank you for taking the time to leave a nice comment! I really appreciate it!!

  • @whattum9530
    @whattum9530 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Just as good as I thought it would be

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      I really appreciate that! Thank you so much!!

  • @Trueb3t0ld
    @Trueb3t0ld 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    How did you get better at digital art? I want to start making comic but I don’t know how or what to do and I personal suck at any backgrounds so I’m scared it would be appealing I’m not the best at art but I’ve came up with so many different stories and I want to put some out there

  • @ΕγώΕίμαι-π9ι
    @ΕγώΕίμαι-π9ι 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Imo maybe one piece has the most complex world building but ATLA has the most beautyful

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      TRUE! Thank you for taking the time to share!

  • @mastercheesys
    @mastercheesys 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Can you make a vid about characters personality?

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I will add it to the list of upcoming topics! Thank you for taking the time to leave a video suggestion!

  • @oddiunapologetic
    @oddiunapologetic 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    The best worldbuilding that I have seen so far is one piece, jojo's bizarre adventure, naruto & avatar the last airbender

    • @badreddinebelabed9156
      @badreddinebelabed9156 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      If Naruto is a top for You, it means You haven't seen a lot of mangas/animes 😂

    • @MartialArtsTechniquesideas
      @MartialArtsTechniquesideas 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@badreddinebelabed9156 what’s wrong with Naruto ? You probably one of those who think One piece world is as good as Tolkien world lol. Naruto did a very great job with his world building, just like One piece.

    • @MartialArtsTechniquesideas
      @MartialArtsTechniquesideas 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@badreddinebelabed9156 if you have a problem Ith Naruto world building more than Jojo were there is not a huge world building, then it’s you who must have read only few mangas.

    • @halloeverybodhi613
      @halloeverybodhi613 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Naruto had good world building until halfway through the war arc when almost everything was disregarded

    • @oddiunapologetic
      @oddiunapologetic 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Naruto worldbuilding is okay, the author should have just waited until boruto to introduce the aliens. Aliens fit in more with Boruto aesthetic of scientific ninja tools and radical cults.

  • @Miguelrirez-ne6kq
    @Miguelrirez-ne6kq 3 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    next video many could be tips to split up chapters?

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  3 ปีที่แล้ว

      Thank you for taking the time to leave a video suggestion! I will definitely add it to my list of upcoming topics!

  • @elmendelasarten8365
    @elmendelasarten8365 3 ปีที่แล้ว

    oh yeah, now *this* is what i need to see

  • @Winter-ren
    @Winter-ren 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Hey. @Monitor Comics, I'm planning on writing a manga that involves a lot of death of characters. Do you think you could explain how to make emotions in writing feel more natural? The manga has the main character face the death of his younger brother. I've tried writing out storyboards of how I want the death scene to go. But it feels so artificial when I try to write it, do you have any tips or advice for writing scenes like this in stories?

  • @joshuamurdock8140
    @joshuamurdock8140 ปีที่แล้ว

    I love lord of the rings, one piece and Magi’s worldbuilding

  • @csnshorts
    @csnshorts ปีที่แล้ว +3

    There are too much spoilers 😕.

  • @colefarbakhsh8021
    @colefarbakhsh8021 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    Anyone else get excited when they saw magi in the beginning??

  • @abylaiashken2611
    @abylaiashken2611 2 ปีที่แล้ว +8

    In my opinion, JoJo has one aspect that makes its worldbuilding very interesting and that can be studied: The Invisible Force of Fate (Later Flow). Fate/Flow are inseparable from JoJo, as even some stands and stories don't work without it, like King Crimson, Rolling Stones, Wonder of U, Heaven Plan, Kira's BTD and his downfall.

    • @abylaiashken2611
      @abylaiashken2611 2 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      Stands also bring a lot for JoJo's world as Stands initial purpose is to explain records of supernatural activity like ESP, Gods, or Yokai.
      However, not everything is a stand as Ghost alley, Ghosts, and other paranormal activity exist.

    • @MonitorComics
      @MonitorComics  2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Great points! Thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts and adding onto the discussion!

    • @rcnemesis7645
      @rcnemesis7645 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Sorry but Jojo has no worldbuilding full stop Araki makes shit up with no planning at all, worldbuildingn isn’t jojo strong point

    • @abylaiashken2611
      @abylaiashken2611 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@rcnemesis7645 didn't care I addressed my point

    • @rcnemesis7645
      @rcnemesis7645 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      ​@@abylaiashken2611 And you point doesn't make sense, jojo doesn't even hvae worldbuilding or any interesting worldbuilding in that matter, dude, since Araki basically makes shit up as he goes without much regard for consistency.
      Worldbuilding is a mess, like How did Dio even find out about the whole stand ascension thing. Vampires after Dio Death are non-existant like I said Araki makes things up without any care for consistency,
      The whole Giorno being the boss of an italia-wide gang thing is never mentioned again after it happens, or even the events of Rome in part 5. Little explaination to the alien virus
      Your trying to exaggerate one of Jojo bizarre strong points, it's worldbuilding is kinda shit and messy and have no consistency at all
      Literally any Jojo Bizarre fans would agree that worldbuilding is non-existent