Artist Critiques your work AGAIN
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I finally got around to making a second critique video and I was overwhelmed by the talent I received when I asked you all to send through your work. I always have a hard time choosing examples to show you but I tried to pick work that highlights mistakes I saw a few people making. Thanks so much for trusting me with your work and I hope you find this video useful. As always, leave any questions or suggestions in the comments below and I’ll do my best to answer as many as I can!
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As a teacher I really enjoyed watching and listening to you give feedback. You were respectful of the efforts but very clear-eyed and precise about your criticism and used each piece to highlight one main issue. Each critique built on those that went before (eg. the grid work) so that I came away wth a swag of very useful insights. It is very generous of you to share your expertise in such compassionate yet direct lessons. Thank you.
I appreciate that! Thanks for watching :)
You should change “I do pencil drawings” to “I create masterpieces”
@@jonishaan6626 not exactly sure how that relates to the comment or the video...
@@whdrawing3863 I think that he's commenting on what could be considered an understatement; for example: "I'm Michael Jordan, and I play basketball", or, "I'm John Glenn, and I'm a pilot".
You're the most talented Artist TH-camr here. I've seen many artists on this platform, But you Sir... Wow. The beauty of your work is ineffable.
I agree!!! 👊 The details of his works! Ughh! 💯👌
Hi Jono... I just want to show my appreciation for your continued support for other artists, this critique video is soooo helpful and gives me an insight into different ways of thinking & critiquing my own work. Thank you for your generosity.
Glad I could help!
@@JonoDry do you wet the graphite when you do the background? I learnt alot from the critic video🙌
The fact that he be able to critique each insanely good drawings to create more room for improvement is insane 😳
I agree, it's just insane. If he saw one of mine - oh, I can't even imagine..
This dude needs a Masterclass
Yes!
Your words on relation between light and shadows, highlights area on a woman's portrait is really helpful sir. Thank you. I have sent you my artwork, can you give me feedback...
You inspired me so much and because of that i started hyper realistic sketching and its coming out really good..and now i coming up.. at your lvl but in 1 year maybe😅
Heartbreak! My exams are going on and I missed when you asked to submit the artworks for critique. 😫😭 please do another critique video soon. 🙏🏼
Hi Jono, love you art btw. I was just wondering which brand of pencils you personally use for your artwork. Just seeing if you could point me in the right direction of better pencils. Thanks!
I use Faber castell pencils :)
@@JonoDry thanks a lot! :)
@@JonoDry why not staedtler?? I read they r better, which little or no shine. 😊
Hello Jono, good day, I wanted to share my artwork, I just started focusing making portraits this april, and have a great time learning some techniques, I'm thankful that I saw your videos you're one of inspirations. You're great. I'm from Philippines. How I will be able to show my art to you?☺😅
thank you for the advice!! although i submitted my artwork i feel a bit insecure now via seeing these beautiful master pieces... thank you for inspiring me jono ❤
I know right 😂... Keep practising, we'll get there 😎
you should do more of these! they are entertaining and helpful:)
I feel sad that my drawing was not included in the list. 🥲
How did you submit your work? Where did you submit it?
I saw mine as you were scrolling and it made my day- just to know that you may have seen it. You are one of my top idol artists.
Thank you Jono for taking your time to do this, I can guarantee you made someone's day when they saw their work. I know a photographer that does paid video critiques. This might help offset the time it takes for you to do these critique videos. We pay you, you critique for 5 or 10 mins, and we get a video that we can add to our portfolio... Just a thought 😊
That voice is so soothing
You are an inspiration for people in the art community ❤️
Would love to see more art critiques. I’m not a great drawer at all, but listening to your advice helped with just the scribbled sketches I attempt to do. So helpful and so nicely given to each persons work. If I could draw half as well as these artist who submitted wonderful drawings I would be thrilled to no end.
Jono has critiqued everyone's drawing very fairly and kindly, hasn't he. I think so many people become discouraged in their art because they receive harsh or unkind critique, maybe even as early as at junior school. There is always something kind to say about anyone's drawing, and follow it up with tips to improve. Thankyou Jono for sharing your awesome skills and for your kindness too. Hugs from London.
Please make a video on how you get your graphite to look so matte... please
Hello sir.
Can I re draw your artworks?
Im a big fan☺️☺️☺️.
I personally would say don't. Come up with your own ideas, take inspiration, but don't try to re create it exactly (similar to that piece in the vid).
@@averyschlicher758 oh ok.
Thank you sir☺️
Your critiques help so much. Your work is extraordinary. I'm learning not to be afraid of going darker.
I am always blown away by your drawings. I would love to see how you transfer your outline to your large-scale work.
I used to draw in my childhood... after growing up I didn't draw for around 6 to 7 years...but after finding you I start sketching again ....and I'm really happy. ..thanks Jono. .thank you very much..❤❤
Love from Assam brother. If you read this please like .
You are the god of graphite according to me❤️🖤,keep encouraging me and your drawings are the reason to select graphite as my place to shine and learn how it has another fanbase❤️🖤
Hey Jono,
Thank you for your videos, they are super inspiring and educational, and I only just found your channel an hour ago! This is really just a side note that I hope you might find useful. I got distracted by your fingerprints on the ipad for the anime-looking artwork of the guy with the flowers on his head. It was of course because of the angle but just a note :)
Have a great day!
Cheers, Stina
I love how unegoly you give your critics. And also, how openley you share your artist technique. Your confidence and actual desire to spread usable information is just as stunning as your art
You deserve way more subs
Those people’s drawings were awesome!!!!
I’m an early artist and you really inspire me!!
Thank you.
Omg first vwer..and .I am planning to draw solitude can i get permission to upload it on yt plzzz? Btw big fan
You can just please credit the original work :)
@@JonoDry thank you 😊
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I always wished to be in this video. Just a lil unfortunate.
You're helping me see a whole new world..
I think I'm not the first unartistic person who've learned to appreciate and love Art because of Mr. Jono..
Thank you very much..❤
P.s.
I know this isn't ASMR, but your voice helps me with my insomnia. So soothing.
Could You please say which brand tablet you are using for your critique videos?
Big fan from india
Thank you for giving me criticism Jonodry!! I’ll definitely work on contrast, techniques, and cleaning up pencil strokes.
Heii Jono you are a real inspiration to draw.
No words to appreciate your art 🤍🤍 Stay blessed 🤲
Thank you so much 😀
That’s great and honest Jono. I really learned from you.☺️❤️
Keep safe and God bless you Jono.🙏🏻
I don't know your drawing is inspired me but I try same way my drawing is not so good 😸😸 daily one drawing 😌😌.....from Nepal
This video is so much informative and helping ...best critique video ever . This is the reason I love to watch ur videos and critiques videos
I loveeeee your art
My inspiration 😊😊😊
Love from India 🇮🇳 🥰🥰
This guy work is amazing
Love from India, Mumbai 😊
Incridible as alwaya. Supercool jono 🔥🔥🔥
Do you only critique work that's been done in black and white medium's? If not, I would make it a priority to do one if it meant having an opportunity to have you critique it. I'm always looking for advise, especially from some one at your level. I have no formal education, but I've always enjoyed drawing and just want to keep improving. With that said; I've been searching the old interwed for any tricks or tips to help me advance my technique. I've picked up a lot of neat things so far, but I'm still missing so much to get me to the next level. Any input is always appreciated.
always waiting for your videos...gives me that zest to continue with my art
Great to see you on 225k subs.
I followed u when u were at 58k subs.💙.
Thats great.
If you don't mind me asking, how do you price your graphite works done on a page size 160 cm x 114 cm? (Or even smaller and bigger)
I began drawing last year. Almost everything in my life I endeavor becomes an obsession then just as quickly fizzles out. I hate this because in a matter of a year I grew so much and feel I could really produce beautiful masterpieces.
كل لحب وتقدير 🥰💐
Hello jono
I'm from Pakistan
Your work inspired me a lot I'm learning art as well but my question is that will you suggest me objects for making me busy in practice
I just want to work like you
You work on very large paper...so how do you get all your proportions right..?
You also draw on a table...don't you have parallax error..???
Second part is going to there?
Grids are cheating in my opinion as all starts with getting the perspective and measures right all the way so if someone relies on it then what is the point? First train to get accuracy and then start simple shading etc. Not everyone is JONO DRY. The best..
What a cool dude
You should realy consider teaching! You‘re so good at giving critique and realy helping people get better
How does the good lawd make such handsome creatures 😭 uhg.. you are such a doll! Brand new sub, #1 fan 🤩
Jono or kelvin okafor?
I think your critique of the first piece was incorrect. I believe the artist was deliberate in not adding detail to the parts of the hand and sleeve. A method of drawing attention to the much more detailed eyes.
I sent my drawings too !
Hopefully sometime in near future i will be able to part of you critique video 🥰 and also you are the most amazing human being 😘 I learn so much form your videos
how do we send out drawings? through which link???
@@jagdeeshpm9323 he will tell you in advance on Instagram then only the link works ! Btw I sent it to @jonodrysubmissions@gmail.co
@@jyotsnasah5369 thanks browe!
Once again you've given us a treasure chest full of ideas. Thank you so much!
Hey jono can you make a video on how you make outlines of your drawings. Please reply
I love your videos best Artist, king of all graphite pencils 👌
You are my favorite ❤
What if i just turn an actual photo into black and white and sent it over and just call it hyper realistic.
Están bien tus videos de críticas has más....
If Keanu Reeves was a pencil artist, he would be this guy
Hi Jono. How do i participate? I have a drawing that i really want you to comment on it.
I want to be sharing my drawings with u so that u can help please how I can be sending them to u
I have a talent like yours but its not my passion.. After watching your videos.....Need to turn my talent to passion.... 😍
You can do it!
Hi Jono, what graphic tablet do you use?
what abou the wetting the paper down. is that before the drawing to have more tooth for the graphite ?
Man I like your iPad pro and apple pencil
My Dream ipad❤️💕
man please he needs to be famous before he dies and I mean more famous than pewdipie and r.beast
Dude you are one of the best in the world your critic is very appreciated
is it ok if I send you a movie poster drawn by me Mr. Jono??
Your work is technically phenomenal, but if I were to critique you it would be about subject matter. There are some that are fine, but then there are some that look like pretentious art school angst. It's just not intellectually deep at the level of your skill, in my opinion. You don't need to go into the creepy surreal to show deep human emotions, either. Frankly, you're not hitting the mark on some of these, and it's a shame, because you obviously put in lots of time. I actually think it's warranted to put a little of the "unreal" in a realistic drawing, though, because this lets the viewer know its value over photography, but I feel like your approach is akin to getting smacked in the face with a water balloon. . . you know something significant happened, but you are in a state of confusion. Precise art needs a precise subject. And frankly, realistic art should be pretty, because reality is pretty, even when it's ugly. Your work seems ugly to me, despite its realism, because the subject matter is so mundane.
So, I just don't agree with certain creative choices that I've seen. However, like I'm saying, some are decent. Like the hands holding the elephant - it's a fine work, but it's really nothing profound. It's like you have the skill to do what a high school art student wishes they could. Honestly, I feel like your choice of subject matter looks like you're struggling with yourself. This is not a good thing as some would want to argue (especially the lamebrains typical in youtube comment sections, except for mine), because the artist is only a medium. The expression of an artist is actually on the margins of the piece, in the abstract, and also in the choice of subject. Any aesthetic expression is the result of you working regardless of how precise you are. I also do realistic drawing and I know a problem for the artist is thinking that since the work is precise you must compensate in the subject by making the image inexplicable or weird somehow. This is a mistake. You are precise. Your subject matter should be precise. This will emphasize any messaging.
Consider, Picasso. Do you think he creates distortion because this is somehow expressive? No, he's finding the fastest way, for him, to go from point A to point B for his subject. Since your work is clearly not this, you need to be considerate of your journey, which in this case, is your medium. So, a precise subject is really warranted for precise work (there are caveats to this, but I still don't think you could make that argument about your work). I mean, a viewer should feel the distinct message, and it should feel like words in their brain with no words.
Bruh, what are you talking about?🤨
I lost your point like half way through this 5 page essay😂
Hey jono,are you gonna make 2nd critiques video with the same artworks you got before? Which you shown here like.
Such gifted hands view this youtube channel
Am bamboozled by the art submitted
Great work you all
“Bamboozled” is probably not the word you are looking for. It implies you have fallen victim to a scam. “I am floored” perhaps
Your artwork is out of this world amazing!!!
Please critic works painting the maestro Toni hariyanto
estaria chevere que haya traduccion tambien para español :
it seems that you mastered the art of criticism as well. pointing out the good things first and then slowly correcting them without bringing them down. amazing as always
Very helpful. I learned some stuff. Also, I don't know how to price artwork, but I think you should up yours. There's a 12-year-old boy that does his drawings with a blue ballpoint pen. It takes him 6 weeks and charges $600. I want to say he's in Nigeria. He drew a picture of President Macron of France, and because of that President Macron help build the art school. And it's not your 8x11 inch drawings. Holy moly guys, another young artist that's taking the spotlight.
Magnificent work!!! Blessings to you 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼
Thank you so much, Theresa!
What do you recommend to learn precise proportions?
Sir I have a question, can you pls tell how can I give one of my artwork for critique?pls pls pls do reply, even i want to improve and become an artist like you. Thankyou 😊😊
How do you choose artworks for critiquing?
Hi Jono, I really love your art work. How confident your art knowledge absolutely inspired me. You are the best art teacher. God bless you.. 🙏🙏🙏❤️🌹
Thank you very much Jono for taking out time for this and choosing my artwork. What you said was right and very useful for me. I will strive to create better works. Thanks.
P.S. - For the people who dont know . The second artwork of the eye is my submission . Insta - sagar_g_arts Thanks
Hi jono i reall appreciate your work
....the way u r dedicated towards ur passion is incredible ..... U r an inspiration....
I appreciate your support, Vimal! 🙏
Hey Jono, I love your drawings and I have always wanted you to critique my pencil shaded artwork. Will you be doing another critique. And when can I send my work to you. It would be great to hear from you. Love you. You are the best artist. Love you ❤️
Im curious about the tablet your using...
Jono can you draw a hyper realistic drawing in 1 day
Wow sir , you are so amazing....I wish to learn from you😍....I also submitted my artwork....so I wish for the luck to critique my artwork by you in any of the upcoming videos
Every single video of yours I full of knowledge..I was hoping to get critqued but next time.
Hy JONO, I've just loved ur drawings and u r my inspiration for stating up my conceptual drawings!!! And how and where do i submit my drawing for the critique review?
Sir jono please critique my work
You seriously need to have more subs
How to send my artwork to u for this type of videos?