It has the feel of a very professional high budget film. None of the actors seemed like amateurs. I will definitely look out for more productions from Dawnward Universe
Such interesting story lines. My hat is off to the writers whose nights must be sleeplessly, exhaustingly burdened with creativity and whose days must be weighted with the birth of such dreams.
A subtle action I noticed is when the soldier placed the rock on the grave marker...in the Jewish religion it is a custom to leave a rock sitting on the tombstone when you visit to show that someone was there. That's a nice touch worthy of a good production.
So, were the good guys the ones dressed in the red armour? I found the last minute or two confusing. I think the 'little lamb' soldier probably survived because the red guys felt sorry for him, he had a peaceful heart. He wasn't a born soldier that was able to kill.
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Very well done. I was surprised when I recognized the actor playing Kirkland as one of the actors who I had previously seen in Marc Zicree's Space Command series.
at 18,42, did the light where he was a moment before come on or has he entered the lit room and not swept the room that is to the / his, right hand side, inside it? you know, just before he sweeps the room with the black shadow thing in it to his left.
You're not wrong! When we built the armor we did a poll for visor design and everyone voted for what we ended up using. Then everyone agreed it was a mistake. The helmet has since been changed.
Amazing work guys, I was surprised to hear familiar accents, I love that the world gets to see things like this I guess we're not so little NZ anymore!
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even as a kid decades ago in the uk, we would get ausie sci fi shows, me and my sis would say how they must have big effects budget and were just better quality.. assuming this is, they sound aussie to my ear at least!
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I've left many comments in a row now, and I wish you please to not take disrespectful intents. I've have been making films, or more specifically, working on films for some years now, and what I have found in everyone around you does not give honest feedback, they play lipservice and boost egos--not healthy for filmmakers. Especially ones that cost the type of budget like this cost. What was this like 500k?! Finally, your film crew is top notch, costume crew same, casting and scene selection needs minor work, but still workable, writers and editors--trash them. don't spend that same amount of money again with those on board, and if you wrote, and edited, remove your ego, hire some capable people and just direct. Remove ego, you can't be great if you don't. Good start and it was entertaining to watch, if you remove these comments and never listen to them, fine, I am writing them as much for you as for me, and my future film analysis, and production. Good luck my friend.
Earlier today, I watched the 2 hour full movie of Space Command, with Ethan McDowell as the Captain of one of the space ships. And here he is again...neat.
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Started off well enough, ended well, I'm just not sure if that's enough to redeem what played out between them. Awkward dialog, unusual and unexplained inconsistencies, and other small annoyances like using a fog machine on a breezy, sunny afternoon. Overall it's not terrible, the acting was good for the most part. If the story gets flushed out a bit more, the dialog is scripted/directed better, and with a bit more attention to set detail this could be a winner.
Hi David. That’s one of our goals. We currently have a few books out as well. If we could make a feature film in the future, I think that would be one of the goals. Currently we’re releasing some of our shorts we’ve made over the years to show different areas of the universe. But we’ve been blown away by the response. We have a couple more shorts to show off and we’re hoping to make more in the near future!
@@dawnwarduniverse8088 Have you ever considered just making a bunch of shorts, film a separate wraparound (like in an anthology movie) and just distribute it as a full movie? Or even better, go for a smaller, shorter web series, mini-series or limited series (of only a couple of episodes), rather than a full series of multiple seasons?
A Feminist SF Fantasy. In reality, a skinny little woman would be quickly crushed and defeated. They do not have the mass, speed and upper body physical strength. She was a cutie though. The first job of a story is to cause the audience to suspend disbelief. This one doesn't do it for me.
You sadly failed to understand she was an enhanced transhuman like the saergent. You also don't have much knowledge of real life and the capabilities of real human females.
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NICE!...well done on all levels. better than all others. cheers! DVD:)
Hellflower? B'ein che?
Well I guess you haven't read those novels. To bad, they're fun in a very odd way.
I loved it, thank you verry much.
This was Very Good!
Great movie. Thank you.
It has the feel of a very professional high budget film. None of the actors seemed like amateurs. I will definitely
look out for more productions from Dawnward Universe
Such interesting story lines. My hat is off to the writers whose nights must be sleeplessly, exhaustingly burdened with creativity and whose days must be weighted with the birth of such dreams.
A subtle action I noticed is when the soldier placed the rock on the grave marker...in the Jewish religion it is a custom to leave a rock sitting on the tombstone when you visit to show that someone was there. That's a nice touch worthy of a good production.
There is SO MUCH WORK in this. Wonderfully done and incredibly acted. The ending hits hard!
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Epic!! Loved it! Would pay tickets for a full feature film. I wish Hollywood made quality films like this. Great work!
Amazing. This should be a movie. I really enjoyed watching it. It’s a masterpiece.
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@@dawnwarduniverse8088 OMG that’s awesome!!! I’ll watch it right now. ❤️
@@dawnwarduniverse8088 Nooooo...... too late, the the time loop is closed.
I love the story line, we need more of this story
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So, were the good guys the ones dressed in the red armour?
I found the last minute or two confusing. I think the 'little lamb' soldier probably survived because the red guys felt sorry for him, he had a peaceful heart. He wasn't a born soldier that was able to kill.
Excellent writing and character development, both of individuals and societal structures. Well done all.
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Very well done. I was surprised when I recognized the actor playing Kirkland as one of the actors who I had previously seen in Marc Zicree's Space Command series.
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Jolly Damn Good !!! watching sequel now
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What an amazing movie. I got completely sucked in. Gotta see more of these futuristic armored ronin zealots!
More, more!!!
at 18,42, did the light where he was a moment before come on or has he entered the lit room and not swept the room that is to the / his, right hand side, inside it? you know, just before he sweeps the room with the black shadow thing in it to his left.
I really like these short films. Well worth a watch. 🥰🇬🇧👍
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Excellent very creative and thought provoking.
I love it. I love it. I just wish the helmet design wasn't such a copy of the Mandolorians.
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@@dawnwarduniverse8088 he had shades of predator too, somehow, great movie though!
I like the idea of a mandolorian on earth killing predators.
You can only do so much with head protection, lol.
Man...
That was intense.
Outstanding! Must watch and more please!
VERY good job, guys!! I had a great time watching it... thanks for the hard work!!!
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Loved editing this one with you guys!
Thanks for all your help!!
The Mandalorian meets Halo meets a truly original story. Could have been delivered stronger in my view, but an amazing job overall.
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Amazing work guys, I was surprised to hear familiar accents, I love that the world gets to see things like this I guess we're not so little NZ anymore!
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The actor referred to as little lamb (Mitchell) plays his part excellently
He’s great!
The red head gear is awrsome
Hello New Zealand across the pond here NSW AU may I say and amazing piece of work indeed.
Hi!!
Really enjoyed that, a quality short...thanks!
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Very enjoyable!
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That was well done, a couple holes here and there but still very well done. Lots of room for story and character development.
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THIS IS SO FOOKIN GOOD!
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Another good one..., thank you.
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🎉🎉🎉🎉enjoy every moment London UK
This could be a great movie or a series
We're hoping for that one day...
Somekind of predators low-budget version...not bad at all !!! I really liked ,keep it up !!!
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I will definitely have to find the book. Thank you. This reminded me of a favourite but obscure series from way back then.
Wow a marvellous film. Well worth the watch. Way too short
There's really something there! I hope to see more from this universe.
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this sci short is badass I can't wait too see more of this.
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Cool film, cool story.
NICE!...well done on all levels. Thank you DVD:)
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Wow. I'm hooked. More please. 🙏
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Amazing job...Peace
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Awesome, thx!
even as a kid decades ago in the uk, we would get ausie sci fi shows, me and my sis would say how they must have big effects budget and were just better quality.. assuming this is, they sound aussie to my ear at least!
Close! We filmed this out in New Zealand!
Dragoon armor has +10 badassness but -10 ergonomics.
What I’m hearing is the score is “still” neutral though
loved it, thankyou.
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Really enjoyed this one! Great job!
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Nice work on your film. Best part played might have been the fellow that found his intestinal fortitude towards the end. Well written and acted.
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Brilliant film
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I did like the movie. But I would advise to use less compression on the sound as it makes the voices muffled and hard to understand.
Simple... Yet deep... Would be interesting to see more...
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@@dawnwarduniverse8088 glad to know... And will be following the link! Thank you!
I've left many comments in a row now, and I wish you please to not take disrespectful intents. I've have been making films, or more specifically, working on films for some years now, and what I have found in everyone around you does not give honest feedback, they play lipservice and boost egos--not healthy for filmmakers. Especially ones that cost the type of budget like this cost. What was this like 500k?! Finally, your film crew is top notch, costume crew same, casting and scene selection needs minor work, but still workable, writers and editors--trash them. don't spend that same amount of money again with those on board, and if you wrote, and edited, remove your ego, hire some capable people and just direct.
Remove ego, you can't be great if you don't. Good start and it was entertaining to watch, if you remove these comments and never listen to them, fine, I am writing them as much for you as for me, and my future film analysis, and production.
Good luck my friend.
Wow, Andrew you went full on! Thank you so much for taking the time to share your thoughts and suggestions. Left us with a lot of notes to consider.
You are well off with your estimate of the budget! Try 15K!
@@AaronFalveyFalvation Nice work, you did great.
Earlier today, I watched the 2 hour full movie of Space Command, with Ethan McDowell as the Captain of one of the space ships. And here he is again...neat.
We love Ethan!!
this was cool
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pretty good
That was pretty awesome! a few more hours of it I def would like!
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Singular or plural
Wooo Scifi Shorts!
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What's Mando doing here? Pretty cool
Hey this is the way
Great everything acting effects and CGI
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i did- good job
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What killed to poor girl in the beginning?
I want more!!!
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A knights of the round table in a dystopian future.
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i think we are in the dystopian future already mate!
@@dawnwarduniverse8088 is that singular or plural?
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Sorry I went so deep on this one. I think that's a good sign of a maker in the making.
Really enjoyed this. He talk's to much though🙂
Glad you enjoyed!
Started off well enough, ended well, I'm just not sure if that's enough to redeem what played out between them. Awkward dialog, unusual and unexplained inconsistencies, and other small annoyances like using a fog machine on a breezy, sunny afternoon. Overall it's not terrible, the acting was good for the most part. If the story gets flushed out a bit more, the dialog is scripted/directed better, and with a bit more attention to set detail this could be a winner.
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In this future Eddie Izzard is the president and have recruited the Mandalorian for one last job..
I think we have a spin-off
a little slow in the beginning, but picked up with more action and a twist at the end.
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@@dawnwarduniverse8088< I'll be watching that as well. Thanks for letting me know.
👍👍👍👍
Thank you so much!
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You're welcome!!😊😊 Hoping to see more work real soon!!!
Will this show become a series?
Hi David. That’s one of our goals. We currently have a few books out as well. If we could make a feature film in the future, I think that would be one of the goals. Currently we’re releasing some of our shorts we’ve made over the years to show different areas of the universe. But we’ve been blown away by the response. We have a couple more shorts to show off and we’re hoping to make more in the near future!
@@dawnwarduniverse8088 Have you ever considered just making a bunch of shorts, film a separate wraparound (like in an anthology movie) and just distribute it as a full movie?
Or even better, go for a smaller, shorter web series, mini-series or limited series (of only a couple of episodes), rather than a full series of multiple seasons?
This was great, I watched them in the wrong order, never-ending, I would much rather watch this than the woke garbage Hollywood churns out well done
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At times this was so bad, I stopped taking it seriously, then it wasn't so bad. The cool thing... You don't really know who the "bad guys" are.
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Asendalorian
There’s definitely some similarities in the helmet. We’ve actually changed up the helmet designs a tad for the future shorts
oh it's NZ sorry guys, i made a previous comment saying it sounded australian..lol.
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A Feminist SF Fantasy. In reality, a skinny little woman would be quickly crushed and defeated. They do not have the mass, speed and upper body physical strength. She was a cutie though. The first job of a story is to cause the audience to suspend disbelief. This one doesn't do it for me.
You sadly failed to understand she was an enhanced transhuman like the saergent.
You also don't have much knowledge of real life and the capabilities of real human females.