how to write a *detailed* example in ielts writing task 2

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  • @윈드포스원
    @윈드포스원 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    I dare say that lilie's teaching is the most professional.

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  9 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      감사합니다😊

  • @quanphumau198
    @quanphumau198 ปีที่แล้ว +24

    Just got a band 6.5 in writing. Shout out to LILIE whose videos on task 1 writing helped me a lot 🤩🤩

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  ปีที่แล้ว +5

      Wooow, congratulations and thank you so much for sharing your score here! Wish you a bright future ahead!

  • @leerapreethi1493
    @leerapreethi1493 ปีที่แล้ว +16

    I love your teaching Lilie I scored 7 in writing.god bless your wonderful work of sharing knowledge❤

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Woow, that's amazing and congratulations! What are your scores on the other sections?

    • @leerapreethi1493
      @leerapreethi1493 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      L8, R7,W7,S7

  • @sanjeevk.c.7200
    @sanjeevk.c.7200 ปีที่แล้ว +17

    I got 6.5 band in writting , (overall 7) just watching all your playlist of writting , one day before exam
    Thank you very much❤
    Lots of love from Nepal🇳🇵

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  ปีที่แล้ว +4

      One day before the exam, that's impressive! Thank you so much for sharing your experience here and wish u a bright future ahead!

    • @MohammedAbbasPLUS
      @MohammedAbbasPLUS 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

      😢 thats my dream

  • @noilamahmatkulova5465
    @noilamahmatkulova5465 ปีที่แล้ว +9

    I hated writing section seemed always daunting to me .started watching your video lessons since last year and now writing is one of my favorite especially task 1 .thank you for effort wish u prosperous

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Glad that my videos have added value to you.😊

    • @patelheet4380
      @patelheet4380 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Yes, u have significant numbers of fans.. 😊

  • @kieuminh3106
    @kieuminh3106 10 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Great videos tbh, you’re the best Lilie. I’m so nervous because my ielts exam will be next month and my writing skill is terrible. Luckily, i found your channel in the suggestion videos and got amazed by how your strategies helped me to score impressive points in other skills 🎉

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  10 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      It's okay to be nervous😊

  • @Elizabeth.Opoku_17
    @Elizabeth.Opoku_17 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    Hi.... I got an overall score of 8 with L-8.5, R-8.5, W- 6.5 and S-7.5 I want to say thank you 😊

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  ปีที่แล้ว

      Congratulations and thank you so much for sharing your scores here.😊

    • @alphaassyl3349
      @alphaassyl3349 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

      This is kinda crazy how I got L-9 R-8.5 W-7 and S-8 and still got the same band as you. No offense but it’s a bit crazy that 3 out of 4 sections were higher lol.

  • @dmanuelvater4402
    @dmanuelvater4402 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    It's been a while ,I love your simplitude in writing

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      thanks for waiting.😊

  • @yeshapatel4946
    @yeshapatel4946 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    You are too good. Make videos on how to generate ideas and elaborate them

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I have one on that topic: th-cam.com/video/FAUbhn5N0SI/w-d-xo.html

  • @maddiesaddiction
    @maddiesaddiction ปีที่แล้ว +2

    i love your videos lilie, it helped me alot in writing and many other skills!

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I'm so glad!😊

  • @starleythomas4849
    @starleythomas4849 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Your video is really great help for me thank you for sharing ur knowledge with us also plz make videos on reading parts too 🙏🏼

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Many viewers have requested a reading video, I'll definitely make one. The next video will be a table video though.😊

  • @dushyantnagan2477
    @dushyantnagan2477 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Thank you so much for your kindness. Words are jst not enough to say how great you are. I jst got overall 7.5 🎉. May God bless you Lillie.. i have a name for you as well " THE PUZZLE SOLVER " 💯
    I'm so happy today , you helped me to step up on my goal . Thank you Angel. 🙏🏻

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Thank u so much for sharing this amazing news here. Congratulations and wish you a bright future ahead!♥

    • @dushyantnagan2477
      @dushyantnagan2477 ปีที่แล้ว

      Thank you. Hope I ll find a way to pay back one day. Have a good future ahead too ❤

  • @yoursiren
    @yoursiren ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Im gonna take IELTS exam test in the next two days. Thank u so muchhh!!

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Best of luck and don't forget to come back and share your test result here.✊

  • @bthiban
    @bthiban ปีที่แล้ว +4

    From the earlier videos, I was thinking it is a robotic voice, NO it is human's one :D

  • @Lynn-uh4ul
    @Lynn-uh4ul ปีที่แล้ว +1

    But in Road to IELTS, it is being taught that unnecessary examples should be left out. How can we distinguish between needed and not needed information?

  • @Jamessbx
    @Jamessbx ปีที่แล้ว

    Idk i just came here just to hear your voice omg i cant its so soothing😊

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  ปีที่แล้ว

      Glad that my voice can calm you down.😊

  • @hilolajabborova6793
    @hilolajabborova6793 6 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Your videos are super helpful! ❤thank you for superb content!

  • @faranmalhotra5112
    @faranmalhotra5112 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    You are one of the best youtuber for ielts prep....keep it up

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  10 หลายเดือนก่อน

      So nice of you😊

  • @rakibhasan4328
    @rakibhasan4328 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    i have to admit that learning many things from u 🖤

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Appreciate that😊

  • @saifdosa9020
    @saifdosa9020 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Her videos are really very very informative and beneficial ❤

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  4 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Glad you like them!

  • @ahsanahmed5724
    @ahsanahmed5724 9 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Thank you teacher 🖤🖤🖤 for sharing tasks with us the way you explain is really amazing

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  9 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Thank you! 😃

  • @mohammedfathihassabo8268
    @mohammedfathihassabo8268 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    Thanks so much for this lesson.
    Please could you ab example for ( table ).
    I wish you luck.

    • @mohammedfathihassabo8268
      @mohammedfathihassabo8268 ปีที่แล้ว

      In fact, I've meant. Could you make an example about table graph.
      Thanks.

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Yes, I could but you probably need to wait a while because I've already planned out the next two videos. You can watch this table video if you haven't already: th-cam.com/video/95kMPpp3muY/w-d-xo.html
      You can also read table essays on my site: www.ieltsessaybank.com/category/writing-task-1/table/

    • @mohammedfathihassabo8268
      @mohammedfathihassabo8268 ปีที่แล้ว

      I've already watched.
      However I'll wait for that one.

  • @theweeknd8087
    @theweeknd8087 ปีที่แล้ว

    hey lilie, ı want to thank you. just thanks to your techniques ı took 6.5 in writing part. thnx a lot

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      That's great, congratulations! And wish you a bright future ahead!😊

  • @noahguinto6960
    @noahguinto6960 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I love your teaching Ms. lilie

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  10 หลายเดือนก่อน

      I'm so glad!😊

  • @abishekneupane6215
    @abishekneupane6215 ปีที่แล้ว

    Now you look just magnificent and big thanks for teaching us ❤️

  • @Parveen.kaur.
    @Parveen.kaur. ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank u so much 🙏🏻🙏🏻I always watch your videos it’s really helpful for me

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  ปีที่แล้ว

      Really glad to hear that😊

  • @patelheet4380
    @patelheet4380 ปีที่แล้ว

    lilie, nice to see u again, u really gave great ideas with good smile😊

  • @A9_0076
    @A9_0076 ปีที่แล้ว

    Very very effect I need you as a techer you are brilliant

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      thanks for the kind words!☺

  • @hemantshahi1100
    @hemantshahi1100 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    i love it teaching way
    writing task.

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  4 หลายเดือนก่อน

      thank U🙂

  • @faizaa4859
    @faizaa4859 ปีที่แล้ว

    Tysm for the video Lilie !❤

  • @jatin4058
    @jatin4058 ปีที่แล้ว

    Wonderful...pls make more videos on task 2

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  ปีที่แล้ว

      Will definitely do that but the next one will be about task 1.

  • @AnushkaSharma-g6v
    @AnushkaSharma-g6v ปีที่แล้ว

    please provide more videos about task 2

  • @IpVp4Fun_
    @IpVp4Fun_ 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Awesome, Thank you.

  • @KhwabonKiAwaz
    @KhwabonKiAwaz ปีที่แล้ว

    I understood the idea one day and forget everything the next day. 😢 I have exam in 2 days , what to do

  • @BRIJESHPATEL-wq6gk
    @BRIJESHPATEL-wq6gk ปีที่แล้ว

    Nicely explained

  • @JoanVegas_
    @JoanVegas_ ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you so much... This was really helpful ✌️💃

  • @Panor-cu3iq
    @Panor-cu3iq ปีที่แล้ว

    Can you make a video about complex sentences

  • @KhwabonKiAwaz
    @KhwabonKiAwaz ปีที่แล้ว

    why men and women are deciding to have children later on in their life, what are the main reason for this .and then explain how this can impacts those families and society.
    I had exam, today's IELTS academic exam topic. Task 2

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  ปีที่แล้ว

      thanks for sharing

  • @yeshapatel4946
    @yeshapatel4946 ปีที่แล้ว

    Please, Make more videos for agree or disagree type task 2

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      You probably need to wait a while.😊

  • @bill-kissabdul-razaq621
    @bill-kissabdul-razaq621 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    You the best Lillie darling ❤

  • @haroon__007
    @haroon__007 ปีที่แล้ว

    Great Lesson☝🏻

  • @azmiresultana5825
    @azmiresultana5825 ปีที่แล้ว

    Mam, I am big fan of yours..ever since I have started watching your videos, I have applied all of the tips and strategies you have suggested... needless to say that my writing has improved a lot...but mam I find one particular type of writing task 2 question really hard to answer...which is " To what extent do you agree or disagree" ..could you pls make at least one more video regarding this matter.I have searched this question type on your website too.....my xm is on 16 th May...I will be eagerly waiting for your response...thanks a million in advance

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  ปีที่แล้ว

      Thanks for the kind words, Azmire! What problems exactly do you have with agree-or-disagree essays?

    • @azmiresultana5825
      @azmiresultana5825 ปีที่แล้ว

      Mam , I have heard that We should not fully agree or disagree with the statement if they ask in the question "To what extent do you agree or disagree?" ..but I find this puzzling..pls help me how to address this type of question and specifically how to and what to write in the introduction?

    • @azmiresultana5825
      @azmiresultana5825 ปีที่แล้ว

      And If I write " I agree / disagree to some extent to the statement" will it be correct? If yes then how I can develop body paragraphs keeping that in mind...

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  ปีที่แล้ว

      @@azmiresultana5825 To answer "to what extent", you just need to use words like "completely" or "totally", like "I completely agree with this statement".

    • @azmiresultana5825
      @azmiresultana5825 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@LilieIELTS thank you so much

  • @kinleyphurba5075
    @kinleyphurba5075 ปีที่แล้ว

    Always well explain ❤

  • @eminem4076
    @eminem4076 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Love from UZB

  • @patelheet4380
    @patelheet4380 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hello! Lilie..
    Can u make videos on other modules (LRS) of ielts because u really have a great knowledge about ielts writing, so i hope😢 you can make exceptional videos on other modules to teach others.

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  ปีที่แล้ว +3

      I've already planed out the next few videos. I'll try other modules when I run out of writing ideas.😊

    • @patelheet4380
      @patelheet4380 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Ys its true, it requires more free time. 😬

  • @mia66
    @mia66 ปีที่แล้ว

    This is Amazin!!!!

  • @SalamaAhmed-pj3jv
    @SalamaAhmed-pj3jv ปีที่แล้ว +1

    As you are an expert in IELTS, do you know essays templates? I just was wondering if I can get a band 6 using a good template. And 6 is all what I need, so do you think I can?

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  ปีที่แล้ว

      I believe you can get a 6 by using a template but I don't have one, sorry.

    • @SalamaAhmed-pj3jv
      @SalamaAhmed-pj3jv ปีที่แล้ว

      @@LilieIELTS thank you, you have lots of beneficial videos

    • @nsb961
      @nsb961 ปีที่แล้ว

      ​@@SalamaAhmed-pj3jvHello dear, can you share it?

  • @chanderjyoti504
    @chanderjyoti504 7 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Very nice

  • @doitandmakemoney7039
    @doitandmakemoney7039 ปีที่แล้ว

    ❤❤ thanks dear

  • @amansandhu1934
    @amansandhu1934 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank you

  • @biplopgaming1869
    @biplopgaming1869 ปีที่แล้ว

    Love from Nepal mam ❤

  • @imalomgirhussan
    @imalomgirhussan ปีที่แล้ว

    I've already scored a 6 in writing(AC). from now on, if I implement your writing approaches while practising every question for 1.5 months on a daily basis, will it be enough to obtain a 7?

  • @gorkhalegendsyt8714
    @gorkhalegendsyt8714 ปีที่แล้ว

    love from Nepal ✌️

  • @nabinadhakal2003
    @nabinadhakal2003 ปีที่แล้ว

    I have my ielts exam today.. I Hope it goes well😣

    • @dikshyaparajuli7129
      @dikshyaparajuli7129 ปีที่แล้ว

      Mine too.. From where you're giving your Exam?

    • @nabinadhakal2003
      @nabinadhakal2003 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@dikshyaparajuli7129 Birtamode and you?

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  ปีที่แล้ว

      Best of luck and don't forget to come back and share your test result here.✊

    • @nabinadhakal2003
      @nabinadhakal2003 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@LilieIELTS i got band 6.Only 3 days of watching your videos ..All thanks to you🤗

  • @drfrankenstein5414
    @drfrankenstein5414 ปีที่แล้ว

    I doubt about if we should say at Starbucks or in Starbucks. are you sure about that?

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  ปีที่แล้ว

      Hi, I'm pretty sure that it should be "at Starbucks".

  • @momotaro0410
    @momotaro0410 ปีที่แล้ว

    May I know what kind of reading materials that you use to acquire these knowledge? I tried to read news and magazine but can't remember what I have read and I couldn't think of anything when I need to write an essay. 😅please help

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  ปีที่แล้ว

      I consumed news too but instead of reading it, I listened to it. I used to listen to news podcasts EVERY DAY, not just once. I recommend WSJ tech news briefing.

    • @momotaro0410
      @momotaro0410 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@LilieIELTS thank you for the recommendation and quick reply.

  • @virajpanchal
    @virajpanchal ปีที่แล้ว

    I really enjoy your face cam video , actually I see first time your face cam video.

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Will show my face more often.😊

  • @stevecharles9059
    @stevecharles9059 ปีที่แล้ว

    听我说,谢谢你,因为有你。。。

  • @Habib-pn4qk
    @Habib-pn4qk ปีที่แล้ว

    I already watched your all writing task but I straggle

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  ปีที่แล้ว

      Why?

    • @Habib-pn4qk
      @Habib-pn4qk ปีที่แล้ว

      @@LilieIELTS lack of confidence during my writing, time is main factor. and your explain is the best as compared to others

  • @shiranieperera4704
    @shiranieperera4704 ปีที่แล้ว

    Hi,I just want to know if a candidate gives his opinion, a discuss both views essay, will it be penalised or get a lower band. Please confirm.
    .

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  ปีที่แล้ว

      We definitely need to give our opinion in a discuss-both-views essay.

  • @travelvlogz8050
    @travelvlogz8050 ปีที่แล้ว

    what is rehabilitation??

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  ปีที่แล้ว

      dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/english/rehabilitation

  • @Preeti-sr4yj
    @Preeti-sr4yj ปีที่แล้ว

    Could you please make one more video on examples ma'am... it's really helpful

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      What challenges do you encounter when writing examples?

    • @Preeti-sr4yj
      @Preeti-sr4yj ปีที่แล้ว

      I usually write examples about survey or articles which are not accurate at all ... I kind of feel lack of ideas

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@Preeti-sr4yj listending to news podcasts may help.

    • @Preeti-sr4yj
      @Preeti-sr4yj ปีที่แล้ว

      @@LilieIELTS thanks for suggestion ma'am ... I will listen podcast. 🥰

  • @sajanramgarhia7111
    @sajanramgarhia7111 ปีที่แล้ว

    Mam, from where you got the detailed writing band descriptor, could you please provide us ?

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      It's a pdf they attached in my test result.

    • @sajanramgarhia7111
      @sajanramgarhia7111 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@LilieIELTS I'm very lucky that i got response, can you please somehow provide me that pdf because i really want to read the whole pdf

  • @fidanfazilova3542
    @fidanfazilova3542 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    what was your overall Lilie?

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  10 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      8

    • @fidanfazilova3542
      @fidanfazilova3542 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@LilieIELTS congrats!!🌸

  • @Panor-cu3iq
    @Panor-cu3iq ปีที่แล้ว

    Hi Lille! I have my exam in oct7 and I feel like I’m lacking a lot in writing and reading. Please help

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  ปีที่แล้ว

      I'll be holding a 3-day task 2 challenge soon. Hope to see you there!

    • @Panor-cu3iq
      @Panor-cu3iq ปีที่แล้ว

      @@LilieIELTS I hope it will be before oct 7

    • @juniorff1829
      @juniorff1829 19 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Result ??​@@Panor-cu3iq

  • @darshangurung1892
    @darshangurung1892 ปีที่แล้ว

    I scored 7 mam ❤ Thankyou

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  ปีที่แล้ว +2

      You scored a 7 on the writing test? What about the other sections?

    • @darshangurung1892
      @darshangurung1892 ปีที่แล้ว

      My instructor was a lazy; he barely taught us two days of speaking courses and two days of writing classes. He didn't show up to revise after arranging an IELTS date. I was able to smoothly pass the IELTS test thanks to you on TH-cam. Thank you so much, ma'am.
      writing 7
      Speaking 6
      Reading 6.5
      Listening 7.5

  • @bill-kissabdul-razaq621
    @bill-kissabdul-razaq621 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Wow first to comment ❤

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Thanks for your support!😊

  • @kylam9262
    @kylam9262 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

  • @NazmushSakibAuntoo
    @NazmushSakibAuntoo ปีที่แล้ว

    LILLE what is your writing score?

  • @RominaMayeli
    @RominaMayeli หลายเดือนก่อน

    👏👏👏👏👏👏❤❤❤❤❤❤

  • @midoahmed2725
    @midoahmed2725 ปีที่แล้ว

    You are magnificent.

  • @farhanayasmine7764
    @farhanayasmine7764 ปีที่แล้ว

    Wow sis..... You r so beautiful ❤❤❤
    Beautiful mam. I love you

  • @BigBros123
    @BigBros123 ปีที่แล้ว

    are u in a relationship btw??

  • @sekhonjatt324
    @sekhonjatt324 ปีที่แล้ว

    U r very beautiful 💕

  • @pratikkorat790
    @pratikkorat790 ปีที่แล้ว

    I found you very cute ☺️

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  ปีที่แล้ว

      Oh thank you

    • @pratikkorat790
      @pratikkorat790 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@LilieIELTS I have my IELTS exam on next Friday. Please pray for me ☺️

  • @noilamahmatkulova5465
    @noilamahmatkulova5465 ปีที่แล้ว