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  • @aliushafilms877
    @aliushafilms877 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    i prepared only within 10 days with your videos and got 7,5 on writing ,thanks

  • @diva1733
    @diva1733 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +11

    Thank you so much Lilie, I just got my results today
    W - 7.5
    S - 8.0
    L - 8.5
    R - 9.0
    Overall 8.5 (my first try)
    You techniques really helped me, thank you so much. ❤

  • @lengan156
    @lengan156 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    Hi Lilie, I watched all your videos in two weeks before the exam and I got 7.5 overall on my first attempt thanks to your strategies. Thank you so much!

  • @RedemptionChronicle
    @RedemptionChronicle 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +20

    Hello Lilie,
    This might be cliché, but it’s the very first comment I’ve ever made on TH-cam. I found your channel and watched your videos just a few days before my exam. I was only hoping for a 6.5 because I thought I had bombed it. I was so stressed during the exam, and I didn’t even have an extra minute when I rushed through my writing at the end-but I got a surprising 8! I couldn’t believe my eyes. Thank you, thank you, thank you a thousand times! You’ve cracked the code on all the points that ACTUALLY matter in writing. It’s really not about all those fancy ideas that everyone thinks are crucial. You are an amazing person, and you deserve all the success for the videos you make. Lots of respect from Iran. 🙏🏼💙

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  4 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      Amazing, congratulations!

    • @RedemptionChronicle
      @RedemptionChronicle 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

      @@LilieIELTS thank you 😇😇😇
      These are all my scores
      L 9
      R 8
      W 8
      S 7.5
      I had always thought that writing would be my lowest score 😄😄😄

    • @ayshabinte413
      @ayshabinte413 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

      U r English medium student may be ​@@RedemptionChronicle

    • @Loneliness-brb
      @Loneliness-brb หลายเดือนก่อน

      ​​@@RedemptionChronicle hey how how could you get that

  • @naginikp6965
    @naginikp6965 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

    Hi Lilie!! I just got my results. Now I got 7 in writing . A huge thanks to you. I watched all of your videos twice it was very helpful so that now I can do my further studies again thank u so much !!!!

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  4 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Wonderful!

  • @rounab8853
    @rounab8853 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

    Hi! I used your strategies for reading and writing and got 9 and 7 respectively, my overall is 8! Thank you so much for the helpful tips ❤️

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  5 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Congratulations! 🎉

  • @Fa-vd1to
    @Fa-vd1to 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Hello Lilie, thank you for all of your videos! Your channel is literaly gold mine for those preparing to exam!

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  4 หลายเดือนก่อน

      I'm so glad!

  • @user-zj4tx9xv1k
    @user-zj4tx9xv1k 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +6

    Hi Lilie! I just got my results last night and got 7.5 in writting! All big thanks to your tips in writting- I made a mistake of writting "the remaining" categories without ever mentioning their names at all from a bar chart but still got a 7.5 🥰
    I got an overall 8 🤗
    Listening 8.5, Reading 8, Writting 7.5, Speaking 7.5
    From all of the online lesson services, youtube videos, I could only say yours was the easiest to understand for writting. Ty so much!!! 😭

    • @nargizaslanova6849
      @nargizaslanova6849 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Hello! Congratulations! I hope I can get the same results as you! Can you share your strategy regarding writing? I am really struggling and my exam is in 4 days. I almost write essays from task 2 every day, however, I don't see much progress:(. I am really scared.

    • @user-zj4tx9xv1k
      @user-zj4tx9xv1k 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      ​@nargizaslanova6849
      A few things I kept in mind when I did my writting (while panicking 😅):
      Task 1 (not for maps or cycles):
      Avoid repetitions (what is already written in general paragraph doesn't need to be repeated in details)
      Organize + generalize
      - categorize what is similar. "Increase, decrease, etc." Write them in a sentence or two.
      - You can even write smth like "A and B increased slightly, but C skyrocketted from X to Y". I wrote smth like this for details paragraph + it fufills the need for comparison.
      Task 2:
      "Highlight" what is essential on the task
      exp: The government should make a "public transport" that is "free" and works "24/7" to "reduce traffic". Do you agree or disagree?
      "This will need to be explained and mentioned"
      Use example-led paragraph (A USEFUL TIP FROM LILIE 😭) basically explaining something using an example.
      Make your main topic clear in the first sentence
      Exp: making public transport that works 24/7 will help reduce traffic because bla bla bla
      Also try to make only 1 main topic in each paragraph (another useful tip from Lilie 🤗)

    • @nargizaslanova6849
      @nargizaslanova6849 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@user-zj4tx9xv1k Thanks a lot! I was asking how you practiced at home actually. 😅

    • @user-zj4tx9xv1k
      @user-zj4tx9xv1k 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

      ​@@nargizaslanova6849
      Pretty much similar to what you said, writting everyday. 😅
      Without anyone to examine my practices, I compared model answers to mine for task 1 (comparing your OVERVIEW with the model answer is essential)
      However, task 2 is a different story because ideas can vary person to person. So I only examined my answer by checking if I have fufilled the essential points (the ones I listed for task 2 previously)

    • @WeldonNieee
      @WeldonNieee 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@user-zj4tx9xv1kty to share your practical skills !hope i can get better grades than last time 😊

  • @izbasaraitugan5333
    @izbasaraitugan5333 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    my queen please wish me luck! i am going to pass my exam in 2 weeks! i will use your writing and reading methods!

    • @EESQUAD-y9d
      @EESQUAD-y9d 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Good luck from me! I will take the probe of exam in September-October
      I want to watch how will i succeed in it and what i need to practice more, but generally i planned to take it in April

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  5 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Good luck!!

  • @evamendes-s9m
    @evamendes-s9m 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Hi Lilie!! I got the score I needed, your videos were really helpful to me. I admire you a lot! God bless you!!!

  • @maiphuongnguyen4907
    @maiphuongnguyen4907 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    ready for my upcoming mock test!!!! Thank you so much, I've learned many new things since I watched ur videos

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  4 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      I'm so glad!

  • @ALiBaBa7uz
    @ALiBaBa7uz 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Hello Lilie.
    Since i started to prepare for IELTS, i had two months before the main exam. I had to get 7 band score at least for my job prospects and thankfully i got 7 overall. Within this period of time, i used your techniques, learnt a lot from your videos. Actually, they are so practical and easy to understand. I want to express gratitude and thank you with all my heart 🙏. May God bless you in all phases of your life. 😊

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  4 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Congrats!

  • @anoushkap4368
    @anoushkap4368 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Hi Lilie I just got my results ! Got 8 overall with L 9, R 8.5, W 7, S 7. Thank you so much for your writing tips! They really helped me get this result ❤.

  • @ugurercan3944
    @ugurercan3944 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    thanks for advices and crucial informations your chanel has a huge importance for me

  • @이영진-t6x
    @이영진-t6x 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Hello. your videos, including your tips and advice, are wonderful and helpful. Please, keep uploading many types of videos for other IELTS candidates. Thank you so much.

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  4 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Thank you, I will🙂

  • @rosmidavis9750
    @rosmidavis9750 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +5

    Hey lilie today I got my ielts result.i scored overall band 7
    Reading 8
    Listening 7.5
    Speaking 6
    Writing 6.5
    And the most surprising thing is that I didn't complete the task 1. Additionaly my task 2 is a simple essay with no many complex vocabs .I Just followed your paragraphing techniques and got a 6.5 even without completing task 1.Thank u
    Thanks a lot.
    Hey guys just read the essays in her website. It is organised very well and there are many type of questions.
    And pray hard...all the best for upcoming candidates.

    • @nishimacwan7749
      @nishimacwan7749 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      hey, how did you get 8 in reading? could you share any insights?

    • @rosmidavis9750
      @rosmidavis9750 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@nishimacwan7749i practiced some reading tests. i joined a 1 month crash course.Mainly the luck factor.

  • @simranjitsingh3850
    @simranjitsingh3850 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Hey lilie thank you so much i got 9 in reading and 8.5 in listening becoz of your videos

  • @Blessedbycleopatra
    @Blessedbycleopatra 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    My exam is on 24th aug. Thank you lilie this will b so helpful!!!

    • @ALiBaBa7uz
      @ALiBaBa7uz 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      I am also taking on that day, wish you luck 😊

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  4 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Good luck!!

    • @ALiBaBa7uz
      @ALiBaBa7uz 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@LilieIELTS thanks a lot 😊

    • @Blessedbycleopatra
      @Blessedbycleopatra 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@ALiBaBa7uz good luck!! We r going to do greattt.

    • @ALiBaBa7uz
      @ALiBaBa7uz 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      @@Blessedbycleopatra Yeah, sure. Thanks 👍

  • @Hiskyyang
    @Hiskyyang 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Hi Lilie, thank you so much.
    I got 6.5 in total. If I had studied your videos earlier, I am confident to get a higher score. But 6.5 is enough for at present.
    Thanks so much.

  • @edoardomontis2947
    @edoardomontis2947 10 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Thank you so much for your videos! You helped me a lot! Thank you🫶

  • @AnandAbbigeri-vu1sq
    @AnandAbbigeri-vu1sq 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Hi Lillie ,
    Wanted to thank you for your true strategies , really helpful, keep up the amazing work , wish you the best

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  5 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@AnandAbbigeri-vu1sq thank u😊

    • @pietacliched158
      @pietacliched158 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

      ​@@LilieIELTSI am fervently and earnestly requesting you to upload q task 2 writing of band 7.5 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏😢😢🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 please I'm sincerely requesting you 🙏🙏🙏🙏😢

  • @josephinekabwe8723
    @josephinekabwe8723 13 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    Lillie I am here to say thank you for your videos. Because of your teachings I got L 9,R 8.5,S 7.5,W 7. I am really short of words thank you so much❤.

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  13 วันที่ผ่านมา

      @@josephinekabwe8723 Congrats and thanks for sharing your test result here!

  • @tobi_004
    @tobi_004 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +14

    Guys, I have already booked IELTS test for 14th of September. I'm worrying💀 Wish me luck, please❤

    • @rreverde
      @rreverde 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      good luck,hope u will get 7+

    • @samodgamer2012
      @samodgamer2012 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

      ​@@rreverdehlo where are you from

    • @rreverde
      @rreverde 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      @@samodgamer2012 why?

    • @samodgamer2012
      @samodgamer2012 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@rreverde just because of quriosity

    • @samodgamer2012
      @samodgamer2012 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Im preparing for my ielts examination so if you can help me to make my English better

  • @a.k.nikson3987
    @a.k.nikson3987 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Hi Lilie!
    Could you please check whether you described the 0-14 category as the 25-64 category instead?

  • @musyokachristine4678
    @musyokachristine4678 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Watched this today in the morning, only to find the exact same writing line graph in my test... I just downloaded all of it from my memory... only thecountry had been replaced with a particular country.

  • @beyzaeris2976
    @beyzaeris2976 2 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    Hello, I love your strategy but I think you explained the dark blue line above according to the age range of 25-64, and the age range of 0-14 is according to the middle one.

    • @elbmc8
      @elbmc8 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

      thank you, finally someone has noticed that too.

    • @behn00sh_f
      @behn00sh_f หลายเดือนก่อน

      exactly!

  • @yasirarfat786
    @yasirarfat786 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Hi lili,
    Your videos are very meaningful and informative.
    I want to request you to post videos regularly also about new topics and trends that are getting introduced.😊

  • @nivbible5993
    @nivbible5993 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +4

    Please create more videoss

  • @alanemechinenyenwa7925
    @alanemechinenyenwa7925 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Hey Lillie, thank you for your tips!

  • @miss.sharminakterunkotgp-tu6qp
    @miss.sharminakterunkotgp-tu6qp 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Our Queen ❤❤❤

  • @Ilya_012
    @Ilya_012 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Lilie, genuinly i did not believe people here, but thanks to you I actually got 7.5 in writing. Got my results today

    • @Ilya_012
      @Ilya_012 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Thank you so much, if not you i could not do it myself

    • @userdeutschlerner
      @userdeutschlerner 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      ​@@Ilya_012Is it enough to just study and apply these videos?

    • @Ilya_012
      @Ilya_012 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      @@userdeutschlerner it depends on your english, mine is alright, not the best. I created the file with Lilie's essays, analysed them, highlited the phrases that i needed to use, practiced 10 days. Moreover, I read essays from ieltsliz, and tried to use the phrasing there as well. I used ChatGPT for feedback.
      It is only for part 1

    • @Ilya_012
      @Ilya_012 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      @@userdeutschlerner btw i got the map on the real thing

    • @userdeutschlerner
      @userdeutschlerner 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      @@Ilya_012 Thanks for the advice, I got it and will work as you said.

  • @bitaasgharian7406
    @bitaasgharian7406 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Hello thanks for all your practical videos

  • @lalala-sf8yv
    @lalala-sf8yv 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    oh i am first 🥰🥰🥰 thanks

  • @鄭靖怡-y8r
    @鄭靖怡-y8r 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Lilie老師您好! 很感謝您提供各種寫作的技巧和精闢的切入觀點!
    在影片11:30處,In comparison開頭這段,淺藍色的線年齡是25-64歲,
    而不是under 14,
    這裡有疑惑,
    但根據三條年齡線的顏色配置和人口數,
    文章內容應該是正確的,
    但是圖片的折線顏色標示有誤,
    應為淺藍色是0-14,深藍色是25-64,
    想跟您確認,
    謝謝老師!!!

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  4 หลายเดือนก่อน

      是的,我做图的时候把颜色标错了,文章里面写的是对的

  • @جوادعماره
    @جوادعماره 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Hi Lillie, why we didnot use "by age group, and i think your strategy is a little bit different in this graph than we used to

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  4 หลายเดือนก่อน

      by age group and age distribution both work

  • @anastasiakutateladze5653
    @anastasiakutateladze5653 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    This is so true, my brother took the exam a few years ago and got a 6.5 in writing. He went into the exam blind and had no idea that he had to write an overview at all, he also said that he wrote two paragraphs instead of four and reported every detail but still got a decent score.

  • @Np_ak
    @Np_ak 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +7

    My exam is on August 17 😃🎇👇👇👇

    • @jenniferakoto3758
      @jenniferakoto3758 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      All the best 🎉.

    • @Np_ak
      @Np_ak 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@jenniferakoto3758 thankyou 💗💗

    • @PrakritiBk-y7s
      @PrakritiBk-y7s 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      us bro us

    • @Np_ak
      @Np_ak 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@PrakritiBk-y7s hjr KAHA dekhi ho?
      Hjr pni IELTS preparation gardai hunu hunxa ke?

    • @PrakritiBk-y7s
      @PrakritiBk-y7s 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@Np_ak yeah ktm ho sathi

  • @hariprasath8818
    @hariprasath8818 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Can you discuss the strategy for advantages and disadvantages type of question ?

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  4 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      @@hariprasath8818 I already have two videos on that topic.

  • @AlbertaGodsluv
    @AlbertaGodsluv 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Hello Lillie, I’ve watched almost all yr videos and haven’t seen any abt the advantages and disadvantages, causes and solution or problems and solutions. Kindly do videos or tell me where I can find them if u have already done that.Thanks

  • @ajayiruth8174
    @ajayiruth8174 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Nice one

  • @umairkhan-xm7fd
    @umairkhan-xm7fd 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    This is treasure ❤

  • @zeinabgholamnejad1670
    @zeinabgholamnejad1670 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Thanks 😊 please make more videos ❤

  • @yurina1954
    @yurina1954 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Hi Lilie, please make more videos for listening MCQ.

  • @JohnsonNong
    @JohnsonNong 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    hi Lilie! your English speaking is so fluent! how can u do that?

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  5 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      by reading a script😁

    • @JohnsonNong
      @JohnsonNong 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@LilieIELTS ah huh really? no way

  • @evamendes-s9m
    @evamendes-s9m 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Thank you LIlie!!!!

  • @binhza4214
    @binhza4214 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Hi,
    Just saw your vdo about reading, can't say otherwise that your strategy of doing reading is very effective, and now I am preparing my writing. How would you suggest doing writing on my own? how can I check my writing to see if it good or bad?

  • @AnishaMeche
    @AnishaMeche 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Hi Lilie thank you so much can you please suggest how to improve vocabulary and where to read articles

  • @MrBringlove
    @MrBringlove 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    I am curious that can we assume it "2024" while it is "2020" as shown in the chart?

    • @bybo6055
      @bybo6055 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Me too

  • @yourvibz_
    @yourvibz_ 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Hi Lillie ! I hope you reply to this comment first of all I want to say thanks as I’ve scored 9 for listening in my mock test and I’m doing well in other modules as well but I’m struggling in reading even though I followed your tips I’m stuck at 6 in reading I’m not able to locate answer perfectly what should I do ? :(

  • @starzeyel
    @starzeyel 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Hi Lillie, quick note. Did you mix up the colors when describing the the proportion of those under 14? The 25-64 group should be 30% in 1960 not under 14.

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  5 หลายเดือนก่อน

      I colored the graph incorrectly when creating the graph but what I wrote in the essay is correct.

  • @Simple_a18
    @Simple_a18 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Hi Lillie ❤❤
    Can you please tell which sources did you use for reading?????
    What did you do to improve your reading?!?!?
    Can you please do video about Cambridge 19 readings!?! They are so difficult for me. My exam soon and you know the exam level be the same as the latest Cambridge. Yesterday I did it and the results were awful. I feel so bad. Can you just do them 😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢

  • @touhidurtonmoy4950
    @touhidurtonmoy4950 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Hi lilie! I think there is a mistake either in the graph or in your description. The graph shows that the violet colour line that intersects the 65+ age group line represents the 25-64 age bracket, but you described it as the 0-14 age group. Could you please clarify it? Thanks in advance.

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  3 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

      I colored the categories incorrectly when creating the chart but what i wrote in the essay is correct.

    • @touhidurtonmoy4950
      @touhidurtonmoy4950 3 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Thanks for clarifying. You're an amazing teacher.

  • @ta2mscribbles
    @ta2mscribbles 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    You have written the Summary on the first part.. would it be okay to have that pattern during the exam?

  • @ngocthuyduongta813
    @ngocthuyduongta813 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    (PLEASE RESPOND AS SON AS POSSIBLE)Hey Lilie, i have a question, i will take a paper exam this weekend. I had booked it before i knew your tips is taking computer exam. And i realise that writing the 2 body paragraphs first really help me to finish my essay faster.😢 what should i do now? Should i leave blank in the introduction paragraph and finish it afterward? Is it okay😢

  • @elifdemirkol859
    @elifdemirkol859 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    The colours dont sut with the explanation? Or am I wrong?

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  5 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      I colored the graph incorrectly when creating the graph but what I wrote in the essay is correct.

  • @EESQUAD-y9d
    @EESQUAD-y9d 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Lillie! How do you think can we group this ages by increasing and decreasing?
    I mean in the first paragraph we write about people who over 65
    In the second paragraph we combine 0-14 and 25-64 and write about them in one paragraph
    Can we group ages by time period?
    In one paragraph we write about all ages in the period 1960-2024 (past and present)
    In one paragraph we write about all ages in the period 2024-2040 ( future)
    Or will be it too big amount of information in one paragraph?

  • @РасулКапезов-з8д
    @РасулКапезов-з8д 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    What app you use for reading practice in your videos?

  • @lesslymedina5626
    @lesslymedina5626 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Can someone explain the 2022 error please? I didn't get it 😕

  • @youtuberboy005
    @youtuberboy005 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Make a video about the speaking part.

  • @badrelhaitout1386
    @badrelhaitout1386 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    That this means that we could work with templates to try to finish fastely in task 1 since they don't focus on it a lot during examination ?

  • @RiyaShrestha-qm1mv
    @RiyaShrestha-qm1mv 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    hello, I wanted your sites for samples of writing. tomorrow is my exam

  • @AbhiSaini-w9h
    @AbhiSaini-w9h 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Hello mam kindly give me some sentence structure for task 1

  • @TrangPhạm-q3l
    @TrangPhạm-q3l 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I just had an IELTS test on 8/8 and I also messed up my task 1 TT

  • @samodgamer2012
    @samodgamer2012 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    You mentioned age group are undercharged under 14 and 24-64

  • @bahar897
    @bahar897 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Lillie you are amazing! Can you help me😢 I usually get 7 in CC and TR but in Grammar and vocabulary 6 or 6.5. Pleaaaaaase make a video for getting7 in them ❤❤❤❤❤

    • @Princess-k4w
      @Princess-k4w 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Please tell me how uh organise ur CC AND TR becoz i only get 5 in that plz help me

    • @bahar897
      @bahar897 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

      ​@@Princess-k4w
      In short, I would say answer the question exactly as it asks and then support it with related ideas, without deviating from what the question demands.

  • @emeeneeenee
    @emeeneeenee 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    i really wanna join your 3 day challenge but i cant pay with dollar currency' , can i pay you with euro instead ?? like 1 euro instead of 1 dollar

  • @prasunlama9496
    @prasunlama9496 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    I have myexam tummorow and m scared~

  • @adhamjon_norkulov
    @adhamjon_norkulov 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Hi Lillie, is there any chance I can connect with u, I have an upcoming test in 23the September, I just need ur tips for speaking and if it possible writing would be good. Plz sir, this is solely my final opportunity.

  • @Tenger-ErdeneBattulga
    @Tenger-ErdeneBattulga 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Guys should i give paper based or computer based. Could you give me some advice

  • @aytensalmanova5451
    @aytensalmanova5451 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Can someone say why she use 2024? While there is no 2024 in graph

  • @yurina1954
    @yurina1954 4 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Just to acknowledge, I think you got wrong with under 16 group and 25-64 group. Apart from that, I rlly like your essay structure, Lilie.

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  4 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      @@yurina1954 i colored the chart incorrectly but what i wrote in the essay is correct

  • @Baagiieuwot
    @Baagiieuwot 5 วันที่ผ่านมา

    What is the price of 3 days lesson?

  • @kanwalabbasi8953
    @kanwalabbasi8953 2 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Can we do task 2 first??

  • @DarCxn
    @DarCxn 24 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Can you have another payment because i dont have credit card😢

  • @MrBringlove
    @MrBringlove 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    It is "Japan has been aging rapidly" or "Japan's population has been aging rapidly?"

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  5 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@MrBringlove both are correct

    • @EESQUAD-y9d
      @EESQUAD-y9d 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

      i suppose second will be more correct

    • @MrBringlove
      @MrBringlove 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      @@EESQUAD-y9d oh she is right. I have checked again and know that this is the shorthand technique which is relatively common in writing. For example, it is believed that France won in the Olympics 2024, which means people of the country won it, not the country. It is like metaphor.

    • @EESQUAD-y9d
      @EESQUAD-y9d 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@MrBringlove ok i will remember, thx

  • @Filmi.994
    @Filmi.994 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Lille, ur 3day challenge course price is now 999$, why? Please change it soon.😢

  • @ibrahimgadli2583
    @ibrahimgadli2583 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    HI Lilie I think you swiped the age group 0-14 with 25-64

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      I colored the categories incorrectly when creating the chart but what I wrote in the essay is correct.

    • @ibrahimgadli2583
      @ibrahimgadli2583 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@LilieIELTS ohh got it, Lilie when giving computer based ielts is possible to attempt task 2 first

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@ibrahimgadli2583 Absolutely!

    • @ibrahimgadli2583
      @ibrahimgadli2583 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@LilieIELTS thank you so much, I am so scared as my exams are nearing 🥶

  • @chinnu_cj
    @chinnu_cj 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    looking beautiful 😘

  • @simplegirljusttrynnalive.6776
    @simplegirljusttrynnalive.6776 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Have exams in 2 days

  • @Flyingbabbu
    @Flyingbabbu 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Hi 👋

  • @daniofficial5002
    @daniofficial5002 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    How wonderful Explanation, But I think in details 2 must be the proportion of the population aged 25-64 and details 3 must be the proportion of the population aged under 14, you got switched by the color.

    • @pastelpearls_
      @pastelpearls_ 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Yes.. I was thinking the same 👍

    • @LilieIELTS
      @LilieIELTS  5 หลายเดือนก่อน +3

      I labeled the age groups incorrectly when recreating the graph, but what I wrote in the essay is correct.

  • @natashasaratikyan304
    @natashasaratikyan304 26 วันที่ผ่านมา

    Your speaking and actions have a negative impact on my nerves

  • @РисолатЛутфуллаева
    @РисолатЛутфуллаева 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Hello do u have telegram channel?

  • @kaandoganknd
    @kaandoganknd 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    How can i contact you ? Email ?

  • @pietacliched158
    @pietacliched158 5 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    Please write a Task 2 of band 7.5 please Please 🙏 😢 🙏🙏🙏🙏 @lilie 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏😭😭😭🙏🙏🙏🙏 🙏🙏🙏Please 🙏🙏🙏🙏

  • @Iamtrishna8
    @Iamtrishna8 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

    Lilie can I get 7, watching your all videos within 2 days.🫥

    • @userdeutschlerner
      @userdeutschlerner 3 หลายเดือนก่อน

      What happened to your score?