rupi kaur scammed all of us

this is a mess
follow me on insta, im cool
giugavina

[@Moon0525_]

I laughed so hard
I had coffee expelling from my nose
Except
I drank my coffee hours ago
- the girl who clicked on your video today

[@honeymoongiu]

please publish a book

[@shubhranshupandey1969]

Still better than rupi

[@MrUndersolo]

Have mint chocolate ice cream.
That way it will mix
with the coffee...
A sundae?

[@MrUndersolo]

First, she never fooled me.
Second, I have looked up the name of her publisher and started to put my work together. If they are willing to publish her, then I should get a fair shot! 📖

[@ashwanikumarsharma15151]

She actually self published it, later due to insta shit she become famous and then other publishers started publish her work.

[@fadrianbartley4419]

THAT PUBLISHER IS CALLED ANDREWS MCMEEL, I SEND THEM A COLLECTION OF MY MANUSCRIPT 2 YEARS AGO AND THEY REPLIED SAYING MY WORK IS GOOD BUT ITS NOT WHAT THEY ARE LOOKING FOR

[@bigbeefscorcho]

I went to school for poetry not long after her books became popular and Kaur was/is the bane of my personal poetic existence. I try to find the value in anything anyone makes in good faith, but her work reads to me as a lazy cash grab.

[@justlottie]

Also lemme just say that door is more poetic than the book....

[@honeymoongiu]

LOOOOL THANKS!!

[@justlottie]

@@honeymoongiu 💛

[@tiernan2023]

Lmao that was hilarious ​@@justlottie

[@MrUndersolo]

Perfect comment! 🏅

[@hanotes2]

So true

[@salutic.7544]

Wow
Such a good video
It made me feel joyous
A new subscriber, you have
- _new subscriber_

[@victoriaslife]

I picked her book up on the shelf without even knowing who she was and read it and said "This is horrible, this is not really poetry." I am an accomplished educated poet, so if I said that without ever knowing who she was, then you know it has to be true.

[@blabbinglobster]

So, given that you are accomplished, is it safe to assume you are widely published in respected literary journals? You have a book (or several) published with traditional publishers that is readily available in bookstores internationally? Could you share some credits because I'd like to read your work and decide for myself how accomplished you are, just as you judged Kaur.

[@green2709]

@@blabbinglobster Just because they haven’t published anything, doesn’t change the fact that the poems are terrible 😂

[@brutanedda3107]

​​​@@blabbinglobster I mean she bought Kaur's book as a customer and judged the product, which is a thing anybody could do. Stop with the "She got published, so she's better" type of argument, in an hyperconsumistic economical system in which overconsumption is synonymous with simple, pastiche, immediateness, is a prorogative for selling high numbers to be the most hacky work possible, and it's not about me being edgy, it's a consequence of the market. There's no direct link that unites the market and the cultural subject, poetry and prose come out from social media, not academia or cultural movements, the language of reference is the one of social media and the market, not of art. Rupi Kaur is, and will always be, worse than anything who has a method writes. I don't even mean it as gatekeeping, you can buy and consume the product or whatever, I just don't accept the "accomplishment" argument anymore. I can understand local accomplishment, being accomplished in a certain niche, but to become the absolute standard it means you totally adapted to the market's demand and so you're most totally of the most marketable quality, which is, by late capitalist definition, some of the worst quality, again simple, immediate and yada yada yada

[@valvihk3649]

@@brutanedda3107 You lost me on the cultural subject. Could you explain that more? I understand that capitalism is integrated into our culture whether we like it or not. Kind of like religion is integrated into politics even though government wants church to be a separate thing - they cannot because they have to appeal to the masses. Social media is integrated into our culture. Social media is the door people use to look at platforms for art or whatever. There are still platforms that talk about Edgar Poe or other classics that are actually good. There is some academia that goes over Rupi Kaur. And, academia is prompted by the market. They would not have looked at her if she wasn't so influential to modern teens. They wouldn't cover her if she didn't establish a new genre "insta poetry" no matter how bad it is.

[@brutanedda3107]

@@valvihk3649 I would argue that the absolute of the free market is, at the same time, an antithesis to culture while holding some form of culture in itself. The market didn't integrate in the culture, it ate it and dismantled it and repurposed it in a form that doesn't hold any substantially political, artistic or human value. It's just impossible to actually "engage" with and from within culture today, wheter we like it or not, that is a fact, but there are indeed historical reasons for it. To see perpetual technological progress as something as better than what came before is a product of a positivist thinking that condones and omits the practices of capitalism in itself, therefore it does tell that capitalism holds a culture that serves mainly at justifying the status quo, and the culture that keep capitalism alive are what created United States, which are hyperindustralization, colonialism, racial segregation, and so on. Every single aspect of capitalism leads to that, there's just no way to see it in other ways. We can, objectively, argue that visual art (in the way we intended it before), for instance, is dead, there's no dimension or prospect to a substantial evolution of it's form as it's form is held by culture and capitalist culture has no form. Regarding literature, I was definitely wrong at associating the academia's positions as independent to market, as it is subjected to it as much as anything else. I just think it would be absolutely necessary to insert the discussions about art and creativity in an argument inseparable of historical-materialist criticism of neo-libertarian ideology and post-capitalism, as we know today that the concept of freedom by capitalistic means are really not reconcilable with creative, private and juridical freedom, and it's just a concept to justify a free market that can, and will, overcome these notions for it's interest.

[@mizz308]

I remember buying it in high school and being flabbergasted by how bad it was.

[@cido2270]

I remember reading this and thinking I was the dumb one cause I found most of the "poems" too shallow, and convinced myself that there must be some deeper meaning to them which I couldn't understand or something like that. I couldn't believe that this was what everyone was crazy about, so that's the explaination I came up with lol.

[@elleblackmusic]

I have a very similar take. A lot of her stuff is just too short and cheesy, but there are some nice pieces throughout. I'm surprised she got as published and made as many sales as she did. She definitely took advantage of the "tumblr days" to create her name. Of course, in modern times, she's not as relatable as she may have been to 14-year-olds just exploring life back then.

[@victoriaslife]

there is no type of dark and light in her poetry, no type of contrast. Plenty of poets put great lines in their work but the poem must be great as a whole.

[@museruse1]

Great insight. It's like they found a good line and wrote empty words around it.

[@user-kz8xe2vd8y]

If you're an African American, please come out of this mindset that you need to support every black/brown blindly , in Indian racism based on color is not that of an issue as it is in west and Europe.. please don't be fooled , I'm an Indian..thanks

[@valvihk3649]

I disagree with the idea of comprehension as a whole, this is the kind of mindset that makes majority of people completely turned off by poetry. For many, poetry is difficult to understand. However, if one line within a poem touches your heart and makes you remember it for the rest of your life shows how great that poem is within one speck of it (for you). Enjoyment is part of poetry not necessarily just comprehension. Rupi Kaur is a terrible poet. What she does needs "insta" something but not "insta poetry." She made poetry way too obscure.

[@mattyfox_]

Im a male who reads alot of Charles Bukowski and i often consider bob dylan a poet as well
I genuinely want to write a poetry book and its books like milk and honey that make me scared to publish my own writing.
I dont want to be called cringey for pouring my pain and sorrow i express in my writing
I dont want to be compared to shitty tumblr/pinterest poetry because i am actually passionate for writing.
I write about nostalgia and moving forward putting things in the past

[@honeymoongiu]

first step is stop reading charles bukowski please im begging u.
other than that fully support any type of poetry writing even the one I criticized because it will be a gateway to many people!

[@honeymoongiu]

me hating on bukowski was uncalled for lmao i just hate the man but u can read whatever u want. and also write whatever you want!!! thats the beauty of poetry. many love rupis work, poetry is very subjective!

[@valvihk3649]

If you stay away from insta poetry than you are good. You actually want to write like Kaur?

[@levitybooks3952]

@mattyfox_ Hang in there dude, I feel a similar way. Bukowski's directness in novels and poems is amazing. Maybe find more similar voices, and then make it your own. I personally think Kaur falls down here not for being intense and direct, but for not developing or creating enough. Consider checking Mary Oliver and Anne Sexton, you might like them for a similar reason to why you like Bukowski (at least, I do). Good luck!

[@valvihk3649]

@@levitybooks3952 Do you guys have recommendations on what I should start with Bukowski? I've heard of him as an author but not as a poet.

[@MayaSalila]

I'm angry that I didn't make this kind of book first lol

[@samheredia1103]

i wrote a poem a long time ago but ive felt really discouraged because rupi kaur readers dont consider it a poem. please tell me whether or not it is❤️
there will come a day where you sit on your bed. kittens surround you, climbing your limbs and eating away at the fabric of your clothes; the warmth of the mattress will welcome your mind to rest and the sanctity of the pillow will tangle your hair, leaving you blissfully unaware of it. mourning doves outside will sing the song of youth and old age all the same; the medley will connect you with those in the area as you hear the same tune, pridefully chanted by the fowl on the communication wires, sitting neatly in a comfortable row. you will wonder how they spend hours up there, perched gleefully with a lack of responsibilities and an always-free schedule, but you will not question. you will simply admire and only slightly envy.
there will come a day where those kittens have grown and left your home, running free in the hallways of a foreign place, and the mattress that welcomed you so kindly will be old and stained with juice of all sorts. the pillow that happily tussled your hair will now wrap those strands around your head, invading every cavity of your face as well as your comfort. the sound of the birds outside will now be replacements for the mourning doves that once brought you to a state of tranquility. you will realize that the songbirds you internally inquired about had the constant responsibility of worrying about what to eat for dinner that day, and the incessant fearful alertness that comes with having a natural predator. you will know that some of those gorgeous feathered flurries have been devoured by a higher power, not given the mercy of living another day.
the communication wires will soon be as empty as your bed.

[@kaiuniversity9889]

Hey, this is great poetry. I'd read this any day over Rupi Kaur. Good use of setting.

[@samheredia1103]

@@kaiuniversity9889 WHAAAT THANK YOU

[@PixieBrunerPoet]

Lovely prose poem, great imagery and metaphors! This is actual poetry. Good use of prose poem- it’s snapshots/images/dreamlike images in narrative as a poem.❤

[@samheredia1103]

@@PixieBrunerPoet YOURE SO SWEET THANK YOU☹️❤️

[@aged_balloon_popping]

I very much enjoyed this poem over the poetry of the subject of this video.

[@HkFinn83]

The saddest thing about the Rupi Kaur story is it shows that there are millions of people who feel that they want art and have an interest in it, but have simply been failed by the education system.

[@Zenaidafromthemoon]

The one Rupi Kaur poem I like is called “fingers”
“the most important conversations
you’ll have are with your fingers
when they nervously graze hers
for the first time during dinner
the thrill of raising goosebumps on
her breasts while unbuttoning her shirt
on days you are angry,
they’ll ball into fists
and she’ll cry,
but as they shake
for forgiveness
she’ll see what
apologies look like
and when one
of you is dying
in a hospital bed at 65,
your hands’ll grip hers
to say things words
can’t describe”

[@levitybooks3952]

But why did nobody criticize them WHEN they came out?! I felt so alone haha

[@wildflowerspoetry]

I felt disappointed reading it but it gave me hope that i could make money from writing

[@NatashaCwincy]

No one's talking about it so I'm gonna - I love your t-shirt with Marjorie lyrics, your I love niall cup and that back wall!!!! (I noticed the larry)

[@honeymoongiu]

LMAOOOO girl nothing describes 14 year old me better than that back wall lmaoo. (still a niall girl 4ever

[@77ds07]

Rupi kaur is anything but a poet😂. She can't do poetry and has no idea what this creative art is

[@selbyhill4905]

She is the definition of someone “telling and not showing”.
Also I’m a year late to this video but ever since 2015 I’ve been scouring the internet for like minded individuals when it comes to Rupi. Thank you for this.
Another side note. I know, I KNOW, it’s poetry but I will NEVER not feel rage bubbling the acid within my stomach when I see the way she writes her sentences in the forward. It literally gives me heartburn to see the lack of capitalization.

[@hearsae]

came for the poetry commentary, stayed for the taylor swift reference t-shirt

[@honeymoongiu]

SLAYYY

[@mia414]

13:53 that's the thing... it's not filler. she's self published. she WANTED that to be there, and truly regards it as a poem.

[@honeymoongiu]

idk how to tell you that self published books can have filler. no one will self publish a 50 page book with 2 liners. its filler

[@justlottie]

BAHAHAHAHAHA I absolutely adore this video and all of your remarks and comments are smarter and more metaphoric than the whole book 😭 apart from the tumblr style posts, I found this book very off-putting with all of the birth-repro involving things... idk it's just really weird and unnecessary

[@user-kz8xe2vd8y]

Thank you for exposing the Rupi Kaur cult. I was wondering why Indian woke leftists are blindly marketing her stuff, I was pretty interested to read this book someday because I love poetry too. One reason why I think her poetry is in such style in because she thinks her target audience Indians are illiterate foolish to accept anything garbage as poetry especially if it comes from Non resident Indians (NRIs) staying in abroad. May be she is targetting Punjabi audience in India may be the English education is below standard levels there but I'm sure Punjab audience is not dumb as her writings. These people push sexuality in everything, I'm okay if they want to discuss sexuality but they should also discuss the trauma associated with it and workable solutions for it.
I remember during my school days my English teacher used to describe poetry lessons in classroom and language classes were the most memorable part of my childhood. I am somebody who grew listening to Shakespeare, Dickens, Robert Frost kind of writers from schools. I never lately touched poetry but last time I delved into poetry was during my guru Sadhguru narrating his poetry works in a video titled " Eternal Echos " since then my interest in poetry kind of taken a rebirth .I would suggest you to watch the video Eternal Echos with Sadhguru on TH-cam..I'm sure you will love it ... Besides this I read some poetries in my native language Kannada by eminent writers of Kannada. Thank you ❤️

[@MayaSalila]

Kudos to you for Sadhguru

[@nehasarkar5822]

and her sketches , she must have done all of them as 3 y o when moving to canada

[@simao8715]

can you do a video about poetry books that are actually good?

[@honeymoongiu]

sure!! will talk about some of those in my next one!!

[@empasant]

And I thought it was just me all this time.

[@juliarmh]

Hi :) what’s your opinion on the newer poetry books of hers ? Milk and honey came out 9 years ago do you think she improved ?

[@honeymoongiu]

haven’t read any of her more recent stuff tbh but I have a video idea about one of her other books so maybe I’ll give it a read!!

[@juliarmh]

@@honeymoongiu okay thank you :))

[@crunk62]

An AI app can do better than her on standby 😂😂😂😂😂

[@spellhex6213]

your room is literally is an aesthetic

[@michaela_corinne]

tbh I like poetry but I also like Rupi Kaur but your commentary was great 😭 and really funny lol

[@honeymoongiu]

thats totally valid btw!!!! poetry is about taste and if u like her literally who am i to judge lmao! glad u still liked the video tho!!

[@cowboyorangesoda8408]

I am me
you are you
we are two
different people
- (un)common sense/so deep like deep y'all

[@ultravioletpisces3666]

I just feel like these books of this style of poetry, are not about the poems alone but about the experience of being a woman, which is basically not addressed in public works quite this way.
To me it’s very much of the whole being greater than the sum of its parts.

[@redsol3629]

A poet who is divorced from the mystical experience of creation is no poet at all.

[@user-kz8xe2vd8y]

I would recommend you read Eternal Echos by Sadhguru..he is a mystic himself

[@ultravioletpisces3666]

33:40 I feel like the first poem wasn’t literally trash talking the new woman,
It was just a vent. It reminds me of “You Oughta Know,” (I mean not as good but similar type of thing)
I think I was going somewhere further but my phone did a mini-reboot and I lost my thought.

[@gcwishbone]

You wrote a beautiful rupi kaur-esque poem in this video's description!

[@honeymoongiu]

LMAOOO

[@deepsea5348]

16:41 this is just Bad Romance by Lady Gaga!

[@honeymoongiu]

LMAOOO

[@ThePreciousWonPoetryShow]

Check out the book series, "Queendom Beautiful Women" By: Precious Won. An empowering and inspirational book that you will enjoy!

[@strawb3rry.c0ffee]

got it from the library the other day excited because no.1 , its always checked out , and no.2 ive seen so much hype about it , read it , and hated it

[@patriciabradnorismakingpudding]

'the emperors new clothes' story sums up this book....and the recognition it received. very good to see someone else sees through this for what it is....
poetry essentially, is a craft of sewing words into a tale.... to depict emotion.... it requires a depth of levity and passion.... it requires a richer ink... a rhythm. the poet must possess the ability ... the inner twinkle..
Within the soul of poetry, grow the fruits of life... the labours, the desires, the earth that surrounds us... the beings who dwell.... that is why in the past the great bards wrote so well... they had the twinkle of life and were able to use the language to portray this to the world. nowadays...however this has been lost.

[@DLaz-qe5cq]

We need more people like you, calling out this rubbish that calls itself poetry,publishing companies clearly saw a gap in the market in printing 12 yr old girl diary entry on tumblr! But don’t call it poetry!!

[@amandamguyre8528]

I wish you were my English teacher

[@honeymoongiu]

lmaooo

[@theoneandonlyfool7103]

@@honeymoongiuno literally this is my first time watching a video of yours and girl I is wanna sit by you as we read these and laugh😭😭 your videos r so fun

[@amandamguyre8528]

She was muzak
but he took the stairs.

[@bobsbigboy_]

💀💀💀💀💀

[@ingejustavanderhelm5208]

Rupi is overrated. Her marketing skills are better than her writing skills.

[@ultravioletpisces3666]

31:14 “cut off” could have two different meanings… like literally cut with a knife or scissors like Vincent Van Gogh (which actually makes me think lots of other things about this poem) but it can also be used to mean “turned off.” So in the south a lot of people say “cut off the lights” or “cut off the radio.” Instead of turn off… you can also think of cutting something off like “she was getting money from her parents but they cut her off.” So in this case it’s that they stopped providing, they cut off their support. You can cut someone off in traffic or cut them off when they are talking. I feel like the use of the phrase “cut off” can just evoke so many things.

[@honeymoongiu]

as i said id any of these mean anything to you and make u feel and think, thats awesome for u. to me it was very shallow and didn’t make ME feel anything. the video is MY opinion. no need to try to explain what YOU interpreted. hope that helps!

[@ultravioletpisces3666]

@@honeymoongiu I was just letting you know that “cut off” sometimes is used in a different way because not everyone is aware that people say “cut off the lights”

[@honeymoongiu]

@@ultravioletpisces3666 and im letting u know that i know. and didn’t think she used it in any of the ways it could be used. its literally just a phrase.

[@RadheradheHareKrishna-sy2yb]

I don't see a problem with giving different perspective on same topic and different guidance to make people realise and get the message well, if she get idea of it why she won't add it, and as much i know she can put it on one chapter, but she just increased chapters which is her personal choice as author

[@honeymoongiu]

@@RadheradheHareKrishna-sy2yb cool so definitely do a video about that. on mine i said what i thought and my opinion. thats art for ya, we all agree and disagree.

[@ximenadelrio]

My position regarding Rupi Kaur's poetry is similar to Martin Scorsese's regarding Marvel movies. There is absolutely nothing wrong with liking her work, that you feel identified with her phrases, that you are moved by her life story. All of that is great. But what she writes is not poetry. Literature is an art that deserves respect, we must respect great writers and value true talent and effort. That does not mean that Rupi has no talent or that she has no merit. Personally, I give her full and complete credit as an influencer, public figure, opinion leader, internet personality and also as a visionary, businesswoman and activist (although I don't really buy her ideas that much)... but I can't give her credit as a poet because that would be disrespectful to poets, her lines are incomplete thoughts and little more than that. I would add that I think it is very audacious of her (in a good sense) to have taken her writings to the field of performance because, once again, she is a visionary woman and has known how to capitalize on the attention she has received, she has known how to jump on the bandwagon of fame and has been very astute (or maybe just intuitive and instinctive) in aligning herself with mainstream themes. Honestly, I'm glad for her success but I'm not happy at all for the decline in quality that all artistic disciplines are experiencing. I hope my appreciation of this author helps some people to broaden their horizons. Blessings to Rupi, by the way.

[@shanebullion4172]

I’m dead this shit is hilarious and good. Thanks for sharing your experience strength and hope.

[@ar1456]

The poems are very basic, but I think people getting into poetry (making or reading) is good :]

[@TheSteinmetzen]

I never did her poetry on my channel... but got a bit scammed as well. I was relatively new to poetry and similar poets. They seemed more like self-help poetry.

[@rswow]

The name Kaur: Rhymes with more & starts with K as in maKe. 00:50
At 20:22, The hair bit. Rupi, who claims to be Sikh, seems to be validating a conviction -- religious or not, her own and/or others' -- to let hair be.
Background: Hair on any part of the body stop growing at a naturally-finite length.
Sikh faith considers the hair sacred, so one tenet is to let the hair be & kept tidy & covered
Orthodox Sikhs (the "Khalsa") must not cut, trim, or shave hair. They also need to wear a turban -- a long cotton cloth wrapped freshly each time -- that helps with comfort, mood, head & hair safety, and hair management. [And safety, for the head....turban often works to save from concussions etc.!].
Countless others practice the two roles as well, though women less so in the turban role. When it comes to many Sikh females: without turban that bonds more conviction to the spiritual and/or religious path, many of the youth & women turn to hair & body fashions & modifications -- with particulars that may go against tenets and/or a necessary humiiliy in living.
In 2007 & 2010, I wrote about hair vis-a-vis appeal to nature and other factors, in greater depth, with more pith and feeling. Who wants to read it?

[@rswow]

​ @honeymoon giu
Re: "This is awesome to know! And I wish she would’ve included this in the preface just like she included the reference to the name of the book. I know it's not her job to educate me on my ignorance about religious practices and beliefs, but it wasn’t written in a way that made wonder what the context behind the poem was, unlike some of the poems I liked that she referenced things without having to clearly state them. And even with the context, I still don't feel like these were good poems to represent this you mentioned, still feels shallow, in my opinion. :)"
That reply of yours got deleted, I guess when I deleted the main post to repost an expended version.
*If you want depth, try my version. Say the word, and I'll give/email you the link.*

[@Brooke-st3oz]

Girl let me send you my book and tell me what you think.

[@pandora5055]

off topic but girl your voice is so beautifullll

[@lalahang]

*rupi cower* she said

[@honeymoongiu]

sorry thats just how we sound the vowels in portuguese. seriously my bad for not researching how it was correctly pronounced.

[@lalahang]

@@honeymoongiu no I found it funny 😂😂😂

[@honeymoongiu]

@@lalahang lool

[@asm5959]

Dude, 😭i downloaded this last year started reading it and literally stopped at a point because wtf????

[@pitag397]

"Peace
Love
and Cucumber"
-Rupi Kaur

[@ultravioletpisces3666]

7:46 basically she’s been doing it all her life before she was even conscious- it was the very first thing she did

[@honeymoongiu]

again, i get it, it just doesn’t translate the message to me thanks

[@winosandbar5077]

This is hilarious. You should make videos again.

[@anielsky4831]

I remember being new to reading and getting this book because people reccomended this so many times. At the time I thought I must just fucking hate poetry t.

[@tabassumwaris707]

ugh good that atleast someone out there is spilling the truth

[@windjaeger]

The only halfways ok rupi kaur book is the Healing through words workbook cuz it fr helped me, kinda XD
But probably bcuz its none of kaur's 'poetry' but instead my own XD

[@honeymoongiu]

right!! this new book of hers is more about who is writing it ive heard so um glad it helped u!

[@windjaeger]

@@honeymoongiu ita kind of about yk meeting ur inner self and dealing with trauma through writing. Mostly just promts and poetry starts that you are supposed to fill in and also some thinking and stuff

[@windjaeger]

@@honeymoongiu idk XD but wOAH quick awnser!

[@daniel-eo9ql]

She gained buzz and fame through her short form poetry on social media platforms, mainly instagram. I get why you feel scammed but you can't fault her for sticking to her niche. She popularized this way of writing then literary heads came for her with torch and pitchfork. Further, just bc it's short form doesn't make it any less valuable or complex. Writing a novel vs writing poetry both take a lot of energy to do. You gotta give it to her tho, she had the perfect setup for the times we're living in where people's attention spans are that of a fly.

[@ultravioletpisces3666]

I’m confused. It appealed to you when you were young and it got you into poetry…
Now you’re older and you have different tastes…
This doesn’t seem like a scam. It seems like she wrote something that spoke to you at a different time in your life.
Why would poetry that appeals to a young teen girl not be valid because you apparently grew beyond it, or your tastes change.
Also I feel like the “this isn’t a poem it’s a tumbler post” somehow makes it less… idk.

[@mizz308]

Also she doesn’t have to like all women or not be honest about her bitter/jealous feelings for the hypothetical woman who her ex will end up with just because some of her writing is uplifting women. She’s human.

[@honeymoongiu]

never said she isn’t. just saying that it feels out of place in the same chapter. she has very well separated chapters that have incredible meaning behind but she doesn’t divide her poems in accordance so it seems like shes being hypocritical. thats just my opinion btw u can think whatever u want

[@dollyattic]

so many of these just sound like text messages or things you write in your notes app - like you said, as an idea. I don't think she's bad at writing poetry but I do think sh needs to take her time before publishing her work as a book so that she doesn't have to fill it with so many meaningless words.

[@RadheradheHareKrishna-sy2yb]

I don't agree with you like you showed those first half about love and relationship they are similar but they don't have exact meaning, they have different perspectives and lesson which i felt, and those poems are really good and thoughtful and powerful to make you realise a lot of things and the other poem you called absurd was deep, and but then the poem it was actually very similar to it but not same, that was about the memories that stays , second was about what it says about the person which i interpreted. Poem Can be short, it's not wrong, or bad, there are poems like that, and they can be still powerful and impactful a lot, art is subjective after all . There are poems in it which are shallow but the not one you showed then.they are a lot different, carry similar message and it's not wrong repeat similar message in different way and perspective through poem .

[@honeymoongiu]

@@RadheradheHareKrishna-sy2yb again same thing as i answered yout last comment AND qhat I said in the beginning of the video: if you like these, good, i didn’t and I wanted to share my frustration. you may think something i think is deep, really dumb and thats ok.
I thought her poems were mostly shallow but i do believe she is capable of writing good poetry because she did and i mention that.
Sometimes poems that i loved u might hate because of our dofferent experiences and thats fine

[@rswow]

I replied yesterday to your reply under the other comment I had deleted to fix & repost. I had deleted my comment before I saw your reply, so yours got deleted as well.
So, did you get a notice of my reply, which is now visible?
I don't know if TH-cam notifies a video owner about replies in separate comment threads where s/he's no longer "subscribed" to.

[@adrianchian56]

*write me a rupi kaur poem about sikhism*
ChatGPT:
In the heart of devotion,
In the rhythm of prayer,
Sikhism blooms like a lotus,
In the waters of truth we share.
From the sacred hymns of Guru Nanak,
To the valor of Guru Gobind Singh,
Each word, each stride, a testament,
To the strength that Sikhism brings.
Turbaned crowns gleam with dignity,
In every stride, a legacy untold,
Through trials and triumphs, they rise,
With the divine wisdom they hold.
In the langar, where all souls unite,
Rich or poor, none stands apart,
For in the eyes of Waheguru,
Every being is a cherished part.
With every breath, with every step,
Sikhism's essence forever flows,
In the hymns of love and equality,
In the spirit of chardi kala that grows.
So let us walk this path together,
In the light of Guru's grace we find,
For in the embrace of Sikhism,
Eternal peace and love entwined.

[@hattie7910]

Am I going crazy or do we not use capital letters?

[@omniscientmoon77]

Where did you get that Kurt cobain shirt?

[@honeymoongiu]

hot topic lol

[@omniscientmoon77]

Thank you. Great video! I’m a poet myself and I agree with what you said here. Also it inspired me too. Thank you.

[@Baalur]

Catharsis of the rant
I share this world
With only fools it seemed.
They praise mediocre drivel
As if it surpassed the words of old masters.
A voice cuts through numb apathy!
With just the right amount of snark
The TH-cam woman makes things bearable again.

[@danielbroome5690]

That poem at around 20:30 is just an appeal to nature fallacy assuming that because something is natural, it is therefore meant to be, or good.
The far more interesting exploration would be exploring the social construct of WHY people choose to remove it or even maybe having a poem about why it would be that way if you wanted a religious angle on it to raise a question. This is just fallascious thinking as a poem.

[@prettymary1206]

Damn!! I love this critic soo much you're hilarious... I could watch you forever 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂

[@VikoSuleimanMuliaga]

She scammed yall lol we knew she was terrible this whole time 😂

[@nellhennessy9128]

as a 14 year old I love her with all my heart but watching this video makes me cringe so bad

[@ryangayo9641]

I thought I was the only one who felt horrible reading Kaur's poems.

[@hellaSwankkyToo]

whoa WTF?! how did you pronounce her last name?? have you never heard the surnames Kaur or Singh before?! i understand mispronouncing Sikh, all americans//westerners//white ppl do that. but... mispronouncing the surname of the very subject of your video? the surname of millions?
i'm annoyed w| Rupi as much as the next writer but geezus that's just....really telling. makes me question your credibility on this particular subject matter.

[@honeymoongiu]

lmao im sorry u just pronounced how i heard it. my bad for not looking it up and my credibility is none as i said in the beginning of the video this was just me ranting. but go off i guess lol

[@honeymoongiu]

also i just sounded the name like I sound names in my native language. it was just how i read it. sorry if it was so very wrong.

[@user-kz8xe2vd8y]

Bro stop..I know where you are taking this... She is American and they pronounce A as Aau , forgive her , she is not used to with Indian names and pronounciation..may be she doesn't have Indian neighbours in her locality

[@honeymoongiu]

@@user-kz8xe2vd8y IM NOT AMERICAN AAAAAAAAAA IM BRAZILIAN WE PRONOUNCE KAUR AS AH OO!!!!

[@honeymoongiu]

I mean AU as AH OO

[@nmo3148]

2.25 well you owe rupi then.

[@honeymoongiu]

?

[@uniquehandel]

More personality in the first minute of this rant than the entirety of Rupi's corpse. Sorry, "corpus"

[@__elise333]

Yes they sound like Tumblr posts but aren't they poetic? Aren't they raw, honest and expressive? Isn't that what poetry is?

[@honeymoongiu]

not in my opinion. there are poetic things in tumblr for sure but a single sentence with two breaks is not poetic TO ME most of the time. if u like it, thats fine.

[@Moon0525_]

Imho poetry is like a novel.... It's an art that requires skill, not just the emotions and expressiveness required for the voice. Storytelling, regardless of how you do it, requires technique. Even free verse poetry has technique and rhythm embedded into it. Writing sentences and breaking them into something compact isn't a poem, because it's simply just a thought made to look aesthetically pleasing, then shared on the internet.
I'm a lover of the Romantics. Not every poem they wrote has the same form, meter, or rhyme. Some of them are short and simple, Keats is an example of the beauty in the simple things. But the reason they're poets, and Instagram Poets aren't, is he had the skill to manipulate words. He didn't just jot them down and spliced it up to look pretty.

[@cassie2055]

​@@Moon0525_ i totally agree, and love keats as well. you have good taste.

[@dylanchurchill1094]

I laughed very hard hahah thank you

[@senaitgg614]

Wow, This is horrible😂😂

[@MacKenziePoet]

It's even worse when you consider that they only "poets" who ever get published with mainstream publishers are just as bad as the pathetic Rupi.

[@PunjabiHumanitarian]

What you did here does not even qualify as constructive criticism...it's downright hating. The title (scammed lol) itself was enough to suggest that this wasn't going to be some well researched and well articulated, objective evaluation of a work but my poor choice, I clicked anyway. I regret.

[@honeymoongiu]

bet thats what i said in the beginning of the video lmao. but go off

[@PunjabiHumanitarian]

@@honeymoongiu lol go off? I don't go off, I actually have class. But you do you. I do feel sorry for you because you are a decent looking person but ugly personality overshadows it completely!! And the worst part I don't think you realize the flaws. Anyway peace out

[@upmahans3351]

I hate Rupi Kaur for supporting Khalistan.

[@Heidi6852_]

She does? Has she openly acknowledged it?

[@carbonc6065]

😃😃😃😃

[@hushanverma9907]

The idea that we are so capable of love but still choose to be toxic~Rupi Kaur❤

[@honeymoongiu]

lmao deep

[@bk2524]

All of it is garbage

[@fllorine]

Why would anyone take time out of their day to create a negative video on someone else’s art? You don’t like it, keep it pushing.

[@richerthanastronauts]

She literally said she liked 15 poems and read some of them in this video. Also - art is meant to be critiqued. People do it on Amazon. Do you also get upset when movie critics give negative reviews?

[@honeymoongiu]

i was bored during summer and anyone can critique art. im not being a hater for no reason im just exposing my opinion. you have the right to not watch it as much as I have the right to publish the video. 🤷‍♂️

[@izamils]

You're obvs not canadian.

[@honeymoongiu]

lmao i am not but idk how that’s relevant, i do live in canada if that explains anything.

[@shayleenpeters]

What does being Canadian have to do with the topic girly?

[@justlottie]

@@shayleenpeters looooool exactly! people are allowed different opinions!

[@izamils]

@@justlottie I didn’t say she couldn’t, lmao. It was just a comment. I like how y’all say ppl can have different opinions but I’m not allowed to have mine.

[@honeymoongiu]

@@izamils your opinion is that im not canadian? make it make sense lol

[@aishaglzr]

Can I say something girl? This seem more like bullying Rupi rather than critic. I feel her work is organic and simple. You just can't generalise peotic work. Unfortunately you have no exposure to diversity and you fail to connect to her. Nothing wrong with that but guess what you could have been more objective rather you seem very naive like throwing out gossip. I think you are seeking attention.

[@mynx6522]

I think it just shouldn’t have been labelled poetry it was lacking in most areas

[@honeymoongiu]

ok what? throwing out gossip? I clearly stated that this is MY opinion and I also showed what I liked and didn’t. I don’t have to agree with me and thats fine but saying im naive, gossiping and that I don’t have exposure to diversity is beyond anything this video is about. If u like her stuff, good for you. I dont, thats why I made a video about it. i like some of rupis work but I think some of it is filler and not good. You think um seeking attention? girl this is youtube who isn’t? but also i was just having a bit of fun. if this affected you this much im sorry but it was just a dumb opinion video, dont assume things about me.

[@Moon0525_]

Majority of people who like poets, don't like Rupi's work. Some of us were introduced to poetry via things like Dead Poets Society, which sent us on a trail of poems from the Romantics to the Realists, WWII and even some modern. The "organic and simple" can be done with skill; Keats is the best example I have of someone who did exactly that. The problem is, putting a #deepthought with a few line breaks and a pretty background, does not a poem make.

[@aged_balloon_popping]

She has no exposure to diversity? Everyone does nowadays. Also it is extremely pandering to assume that all work done by a certain race is automatically not allowed to be critiqued. You shouldn’t treat different races differently.

[@Bb-xp8ym]

This book is disgusting...

[@mizz308]

😭😭😭

[@deadat_thebarrel]

This video is a masterpiece. Pls rant about other bad poetry if you have the time!! Longa lua honeymoon giu!