As a grower of food, I have to say that "ripened like new fruit" are clearly words from someone who probably never picked fruit from a stand, let alone a garden. Also, most men (boys are what she's actually talking about) are not people she has to protect herself from. Maybe a portion of that population, but that is a very shallow take understanding half the population of the world, let alone that you can gather half the population into a paddy wagon like that. But so it is with her work.
@@orionsghost9511she was born in a country that treated women like shit so she probably did have to protect herself from most men, and she was raped. this comment is stupid.
you're a bad fan of Sav and giving her bad rep if you're gonna use other people's performances and success as an advertisement billboard for your favs. explore kpop fandom and see why fan behaviour negatively impacts the image and reception of a figure. you're spreading toxic fan culture. esseantially you just did what Kanye did with Taylor Swift. hope you've grown and evolved from this mentality as ik it's an old post.
@@3xitthissid3 ow but yes, you're right. i understand that it is wrong to put someone down to promote someone else. i don't even want to be a hater and your comment gave me perspective, thank you!
You can't have that time back. I stopped shortly after "come on, look at me!" That painted a clear picture of what was coming. I did give her a few minutes after that to prove me wrong, but it got worse, not better.
Literally as soon as this started the vibe was non existent, at 0:16 she said “come on, look at meeeee, I like got this whole thing made for you! I’m excited to be here, honoured, and feeing so blessed to be in your presence” which is so obviously a jibe at the audience for not giving her the reaction she was expecting when she wakes on stage. It’s a shame that there’s a lot of grandiosity mixed with disdain that she projects onto the audience, because some of her poetry is wonderful and very very well written, but she immediately patronised every person there and made it clear that she expects to be held in a higher regard by the people who’ve already paid money to see her read poetry, and who no doubt have bought some of her books. Rupi, don’t sneer at your fans like this it’s really awkward to watch.
Can we just call this something else? Clearly people who know about poetry say it’s not poetry, but it’s still something worth telling. Why can’t this just be called “spoken storytelling” or something?
it is still poetry - spoken word poetry has it's own vibe and is different from regular, written poetry, and the reason it's so on the nose is because listeners don't have enough time to mull on a metaphor and decipher symbolism.
yeah, I enjoyed the initial story a bit more than the rhyming speech that followed, but I can see her blending the two and coming up with something really enjoyable
you know, she may not be a great poet but she is funny INTENTIONALLY. If she wrote intentionally funny poems I could see myself really enjoying them. hope she finds her voice
@Kiarabooth saying some random shit with your hands up and your eyes closed like you're possessed by the holy spirit without form, pattern or hint of a rhyme scheme doesn't make you a Poet.
I have always controlled myself as a man. I have always respected my female counterparts. Its actually why I'm alone partly along with my introvertive nature that just becomes more intense.
@CD S well, you choose. you said that "read a book" only in it first comment. so i mentioned some. arent we talk about preferences? just wondered why you people got so offensive ☺️ you may have your own taste, just dont humiliate others
@@amyrhibyamy I think what you're struggling to understand is that public art is, and has always been, in need of critique. All human expression is open to critique. I'm sure you remark on things you don't like. That's part of being human, but especially in the world where art is presented (or pretense at art, sometimes). It calls for engagement, and sometimes engagement doesn't produce a positive response. No one has less right to express displeasure with the material than you have to express enjoyment and appreciation. I'm sorry. And, I have to agree with those who express displeasure. We just don't need anymore shallow takes on life. The world is filled with them, already, and it's leading us down a destructive road of decadence. It's her right to share, but it's our right to say this is brutal and not uplifting at all. It comes off to this listener/reader shallow materialism hidden behind a veneer of self awareness and an illusion of awakening.
It's actually weird her expressions and this cringe steps,its bizarre the way she acts but her poetry is alright,although it's not classic or something lyrical but its okay.good for debut .not what I prefer but personally not judging but those who are shaming her slam poetry ways,its good to be opinionated but the feminism and womanhood is there cz she was a victim once at age of 5 and so on,if u read the assault poetry,its real experience so its beautiful watching someone Express themselves though still the actions are little strange, but plz stop shaming her,no one deserves to go through such things n after such things,if she is able to narrate them through poetry,then its something to be appreciated not hated.words are good,just the acting is a little over,
Salonyy's video is bullying against another woman expressing herself in the way she naturally feels. She is bringing joy and meaning to others. Salonyyy, shame on your inability to celebrate another woman. You don't like what you see, but here you are listening to her 😂. Jokes on you. Shame on you trolls.
I had to listen to it to find out it was awful to listen to... it's hardly a "sick burn" to say "you listened to something awful and immediately figured out it was trash". lol
She was just parodying Rupi for comedic purposes, that's not bullying. Parodies are a thing, you know. And for what it's worth the result was pretty fucking funny.
I don’t even know who Saloney is but I’m glad to see we all find this lady cringey. Some of her “poetry” is creepy. I could make that shit up on my tumblr or for a Instagram caption.
I remember reading her "poems" for the first time and finding them incredibly cringeworthy and below average but everyone was praising her in the comment section so I thought I was the one who didn't understand her poetry. But turns out her poetry is actually shitty asf
I don't understand nor share the hate or laugh. Yes, she reads her poetry in a peculiar way, and yes I do consider her poems poetry. I resonate with what she said, specially her poem "Broken English" Rupi Kaur I applaud you!!!
I mostly see the Indians hating on her. She's an artist, you guys. And art is limitless. You can't put it in a mould. So, whatever definition you have of art might not be someone else's. If you know this ain't for you, walk away.
There are so much feelings in those words. Unfortunately most people are empty and they couldn't understand the beauty in it. Her body also talked in a gracious way. She is a complete artist.
I agree wholeheartedly, she’s an artist. Every artist has there own way to showcase their art, and people don’t understand that. If they don’t like the way she talks about it or represents it then move onto something different.
Rupi Kaur Your future self will thank yourself for being an outspoken, brilliant Human, saw you on CBC tonight. You are Brilliant! So true about competition.
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I know u r here after salonayyy's video😂
Or bhage bhage aa rhiye ho
Arre aapko tho reference Nahi mil raha tha na 😂 ab mil Gaya hoga
Han bhai haan🤣🤣🤣
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Ok so most of us are here because of salonyy. 🤣 This feels so relatable 😅
😂😂😂😂 yes
Haha sahi
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Hail Salonyy 😂
Hahahaha very true
Just Know her after salonny gaur video..
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Who is here after salony video
"Come on, look at me!" That about sums up Kaur.
As a grower of food, I have to say that "ripened like new fruit" are clearly words from someone who probably never picked fruit from a stand, let alone a garden.
Also, most men (boys are what she's actually talking about) are not people she has to protect herself from. Maybe a portion of that population, but that is a very shallow take understanding half the population of the world, let alone that you can gather half the population into a paddy wagon like that. But so it is with her work.
@@orionsghost9511 she's damn pretentious.
@@DoctorDoom619 Indeed, she appears to be quite pretentious.
@@orionsghost9511she was born in a country that treated women like shit so she probably did have to protect herself from most men, and she was raped. this comment is stupid.
I hope poets like Savannah Brown get this kind of recognition and appreciation because THEY truly truly deserve it
@Samaashrita Addoor happy to😊 glad you liked her
you're a bad fan of Sav and giving her bad rep if you're gonna use other people's performances and success as an advertisement billboard for your favs. explore kpop fandom and see why fan behaviour negatively impacts the image and reception of a figure. you're spreading toxic fan culture. esseantially you just did what Kanye did with Taylor Swift. hope you've grown and evolved from this mentality as ik it's an old post.
@@3xitthissid3 ow but yes, you're right. i understand that it is wrong to put someone down to promote someone else. i don't even want to be a hater and your comment gave me perspective, thank you!
Who is here after watching salonyy's video 😂
Me
me
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Who’s that!
Me I loved that video of salony
Saloni brought me here
Same 🤣🤣🤣
Same bro
Same here ,😂
Same
Same😂
wtf did I just see? Yeats and Tagore are rolling in their graves right now
You can't have that time back. I stopped shortly after "come on, look at me!" That painted a clear picture of what was coming. I did give her a few minutes after that to prove me wrong, but it got worse, not better.
Lmao true asf
I SWEAR TO GOD.
Contemporary living poets are also grinding their teeth. And anyone who actually likes poetry.
@@jacforswear18 ya lmao. We need a group of masterful poets to counteract instapoets
arey bhaiiye mai toh bhaagi bhaagi aa rahi hu.
🤣🤣🤣🤣
😂😂😂😂 main bhi
Literally as soon as this started the vibe was non existent, at 0:16 she said “come on, look at meeeee, I like got this whole thing made for you! I’m excited to be here, honoured, and feeing so blessed to be in your presence” which is so obviously a jibe at the audience for not giving her the reaction she was expecting when she wakes on stage.
It’s a shame that there’s a lot of grandiosity mixed with disdain that she projects onto the audience, because some of her poetry is wonderful and very very well written, but she immediately patronised every person there and made it clear that she expects to be held in a higher regard by the people who’ve already paid money to see her read poetry, and who no doubt have bought some of her books. Rupi, don’t sneer at your fans like this it’s really awkward to watch.
this vain pompous vebal diarrhea is poetry😂😂😂? please
Thank salonyyy for all the extra views.
dude im only one minute into this and she's preemptively begging the audience to applaud everything she says. i fucking cant
Not all words are poems. Certainly not hers.
Salony bring all us here.... Conclusion - salony is more famous than rupi
Can we just call this something else? Clearly people who know about poetry say it’s not poetry, but it’s still something worth telling. Why can’t this just be called “spoken storytelling” or something?
They are just statements. Like.. affirmations you would find (and that I have found) in a new age self-help book or a Tumblr blog.
it is still poetry - spoken word poetry has it's own vibe and is different from regular, written poetry, and the reason it's so on the nose is because listeners don't have enough time to mull on a metaphor and decipher symbolism.
yeah, I enjoyed the initial story a bit more than the rhyming speech that followed, but I can see her blending the two and coming up with something really enjoyable
I was here only to know why salony used that jiggly filter.. Got it girl 😂😂
Saloni nailed it😂
Salonyyyy tumhari wajah se mai yha aayi hu 😆😆😆😆
salonayy did it sooo accurate😂😂😂👌
Broken English reminds me of my Nonna. Brought me to tears.
If this is poetry I am Shakespeare.
Man, what the actual fuck.
If this is poetry then I am saying poetry day in and out.
If this is
Poetry
Then I am saying
Poetry day in
And out
Dude😭😭
Damn! I need a strong mental purgative to get this video out of my head. 😂😂😂
you know, she may not be a great poet but she is funny INTENTIONALLY. If she wrote intentionally funny poems I could see myself really enjoying them. hope she finds her voice
wym shes an amazing poet!!
@Kiarabooth saying some random shit with your hands up and your eyes closed like you're possessed by the holy spirit without form, pattern or hint of a rhyme scheme doesn't make you a Poet.
Plagiarism is never funny.
And she's profited 1.4 million dollars from it.
I have always controlled myself as a man. I have always respected my female counterparts. Its actually why I'm alone partly along with my introvertive nature that just becomes more intense.
15 k view in 9 months but it will double soon because of salonnyyyy🌟
She's reminding me of The Scream by Edvard Munch. Thanks to Salony.
Omg what the hell is this? That for sure is not poetry. This fake self awareness is sad. Stop this cringe fest please 🚫
as an Amy the same name, why dont you just share whats better to be called as poetry rather than complaining only
@CD S milk and honey, home body, the sun and her flower are also books. why dont you read them 😉
@CD S well, you choose. you said that "read a book" only in it first comment. so i mentioned some. arent we talk about preferences? just wondered why you people got so offensive ☺️
you may have your own taste, just dont humiliate others
Oh, it's awful. The way she came out dressed, followed by "come on, look at me" made it clear what was coming next.
@@amyrhibyamy I think what you're struggling to understand is that public art is, and has always been, in need of critique. All human expression is open to critique. I'm sure you remark on things you don't like. That's part of being human, but especially in the world where art is presented (or pretense at art, sometimes). It calls for engagement, and sometimes engagement doesn't produce a positive response.
No one has less right to express displeasure with the material than you have to express enjoyment and appreciation. I'm sorry. And, I have to agree with those who express displeasure. We just don't need anymore shallow takes on life. The world is filled with them, already, and it's leading us down a destructive road of decadence. It's her right to share, but it's our right to say this is brutal and not uplifting at all. It comes off to this listener/reader shallow materialism hidden behind a veneer of self awareness and an illusion of awakening.
Saloni? Not alone
Salonyy made her famous.... tbh she is the real girl boss😁🔥 Salonyy fam🔥🔥
I’m not sure why people are hating because every artist has their way of showing their art. If you don’t like it move on, stop trolling about it
It's actually weird her expressions and this cringe steps,its bizarre the way she acts but her poetry is alright,although it's not classic or something lyrical but its okay.good for debut .not what I prefer but personally not judging but those who are shaming her slam poetry ways,its good to be opinionated but the feminism and womanhood is there cz she was a victim once at age of 5 and so on,if u read the assault poetry,its real experience so its beautiful watching someone Express themselves though still the actions are little strange, but plz stop shaming her,no one deserves to go through such things n after such things,if she is able to narrate them through poetry,then its something to be appreciated not hated.words are good,just the acting is a little over,
After saloni's video😂😂
Boy, I'm sure glad I read her words before watching her perform. It feels like she's making fun of herself.
Me: reading the comments
Still me: who tf is salonay
Salonnnyy you nailed it.. 😂😂 I really liked her book "milk and honey" .. but this poetry is cringe to another level 🤮
Salonyy's video is bullying against another woman expressing herself in the way she naturally feels. She is bringing joy and meaning to others. Salonyyy, shame on your inability to celebrate another woman. You don't like what you see, but here you are listening to her 😂. Jokes on you. Shame on you trolls.
I had to listen to it to find out it was awful to listen to... it's hardly a "sick burn" to say "you listened to something awful and immediately figured out it was trash". lol
Exactly
She was just parodying Rupi for comedic purposes, that's not bullying. Parodies are a thing, you know. And for what it's worth the result was pretty fucking funny.
I don’t even know who Saloney is but I’m glad to see we all find this lady cringey. Some of her “poetry” is creepy. I could make that shit up on my tumblr or for a Instagram caption.
I remember reading her "poems" for the first time and finding them incredibly cringeworthy and below average but everyone was praising her in the comment section so I thought I was the one who didn't understand her poetry. But turns out her poetry is actually shitty asf
This is what PR and a publishing house can do.
actaully sobbing love you
salonaayyssss WAVY FILTER sent us here and it's true... damnnnnn
what did I just watched?? @Salonayyy how do you find such gems xD XD
Thanks to saloneyy 😂😂😂 now I understand that what was that
Salonyyyyyyy you slaaaaaayyyyy girl..
😂😂😂😂😂Who came here after after seeing salonyyy vedio....😍😍🤩🤩
I don't understand nor share the hate or laugh. Yes, she reads her poetry in a peculiar way, and yes I do consider her poems poetry. I resonate with what she said, specially her poem "Broken English"
Rupi Kaur I applaud you!!!
I mostly see the Indians hating on her. She's an artist, you guys. And art is limitless. You can't put it in a mould. So, whatever definition you have of art might not be someone else's. If you know this ain't for you, walk away.
She's international version of Dinchak pooja......😂🤣🤣
Ohhhh god!😂😂😂
Lmao dooodeeeee 🤣
Salonyyyy rocks🔥🔥🔥
This is really beautiful. I can't seem to get her out of my head
She is so smooth ☺️☺️
Who came here after seeing salonyy video #popularsaha
Aree main toh bhagi bhagi aayi yahaan naange paon..
can anyone tell me how can i find the background music when she's performing "Art of Growing"?
Rupi Kaur - I love you!!!
what is the song name that was playing in the background?
Here for International Women’s Day!
Saloni you girl nailed it
I m here after salonny ''s vedio😊
Not quite fan of salonayyy but she did way better than original ✌️🥺✌️
Hit like if u r hrre after saloni's video
Just read Nayyirah Waheed
I did. The shit is identical.
Oye salonyyyyyy ek dam sahi yr🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
This was the cringest performance i've seen in My entire life
Would someone legit ever call her lie out and save young women from believing whatever COOL this is, it is neither poetry nor philosophy
Lmao...her poetry is all definition of words like wtf is this-
I knew her after Salony's video.
You're here after Saloni's video🌚
Why do they all read like that? :P
I asked the same question. I like a bit of aesthetics but I personally don’t get this over dramatic performances these days.
haha
Dhiraj Tayade she has talent , but I know what you mean 😊
M done😂😂😂... people actually pay for all this🙄🙄
Sad .....
We will read a news telling us “ rupi kaur is taking professional therapy “ 😂🤣🤣
God, I wish you knew that it's not supposed to be funny.
@@symmetricallyweird829 well we also wished her to respect the nobility of poetry ...
Wishes seldom come true.
@@unitedstatesofindia1460 I wish you could be wrong. God.
Ohhh god solonyyy... U nailed it
Nice poetry....conratz from Indonesia..
She thinks so highly of herself here, making the crowd feel bad for not cheering more when that's pretty normal in poetry readings.
Wtf is this???
Poetry???
General Bong literates will be horrified.
Here after salonyyyi
There are so much feelings in those words. Unfortunately most people are empty and they couldn't understand the beauty in it. Her body also talked in a gracious way. She is a complete artist.
I agree wholeheartedly, she’s an artist. Every artist has there own way to showcase their art, and people don’t understand that. If they don’t like the way she talks about it or represents it then move onto something different.
It’s cliche garbage
she stole most of her poetry
Now I know where Bill Burr’s rage comes from.
Girl you really need to thank Salonayy
Rupi Kaur Your future self will thank yourself for being an outspoken, brilliant Human, saw you on CBC tonight. You are Brilliant! So true about competition.
what is salonyy?
I can’t help but see her as a drunk girl vibing in a club when she reads her poetry. I’m a fan of her poems but that movement, c’mon.
Love, love, love this !! 💗💗
salony ki video ke baad kon kon aaya
Thank you for sharing this! Loved it.
@Dhiraj Tayade Unhappy? Find something to make you feel otherwise :)
Beti ohh beti mauj kardi...badi heavy poet ho tum toh..
Super for the willing.
I think this is beautiful people love to hate when someone’s confident in themselves
Or maybe - hear me out - we genuinely think she's terrible?
this is genuinely terrible
and because i love her reading, i'm here
Here, after the one and only Solonalyyy😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 And I'm glad to see every one is here after that one Reel same as meeee🙊🙊
Salonayy
I came here after watching saloni’s video 😂😂😂😂😂😂
Say thanks to Saloni to increase your viewers to manifold 😁
Does she know that her offsprings will laugh at her someday
😂
She will brainwash em into believing this is cool stuff😂
I can't- 😂😂😂😂
Twitter turned against her 😂😂
Good job salony
Salonayyyy is amazing😂😂
Here after slonayy video
This woman is my everyday inspo.
I love writing poetry too,
she taught me so much!
We're so glad you found this video. Keep writing!
@girlboss Inspiring!
Saloni made her famous
I’m not sure what this is but it certainly isn’t poetry.