IELTS-Simon-Writing-Task1-Academic-part-5 Tables

Here’s the report that I wrote in the video lesson:
The table compares the five highest ranking countries in terms of the numbers of visits and the
money spent by tourists over a period of two years.
It is clear that France was the world’s most popular tourist destination in the years 2012 and 2013.
However, the USA earned by far the most revenue from tourism over the same period.
In 2012, 83 million tourists visited France, and the USA was the second most visited country, with
66.7 million tourists. Spain and China each received just under 58 million visitors, while Italy was
ranked fifth with 46.4 million tourists. 2013 saw a rise of between 1 and 4 million tourist visits to
each country, with the exception of China, which received 2 million fewer visitors than in the
previous year.
Spending by tourists visiting the USA increased from $126.2 billion in 2012 to $139.6 billion in
2013, and these figures were well over twice as high as those for any other country. Spain received
the second highest amounts of tourist revenue, rising from $56.3 billion to $60.4 billion, followed by
France, China and Italy. Interestingly, despite falling numbers of tourists, Chinese revenue from
tourism rose by $1.7 billion in 2013.
(200 words, band 9)
Note: word count includes all numbers.
Analysis task:
1. Underline examples of paraphrasing in the introduction, comparing it with the question.
2. Look again at the 2 main points that I chose for the overview (paragraph 2).
3. Underline the numbers and years that I mentioned in paragraphs 3 and 4. How many numbers
did I mention in the report?
4. Underline examples of ‘comparing’ language and ‘change’ language in the report.
5. How many sentences did I write in each paragraph?
Vocabulary task:
Watch the video lesson again. Near the end of the lesson, find the list of good vocabulary.
Underline those phrases in the full report on page 1 of this worksheet.
Extra task:
Try to write your own report about the same table using what you remember from the lesson (but
without looking at my answer).
Compare your finished report with mine, and look for areas where you could improve.
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[@suhrobabdivaliyev4124]

The table shows changing trends in the global tourist industry in five different countries in 2012 and 2013.

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Hi ​@@shaxlotemirova

[@suhrobabdivaliyev4124]

The table compares the number of tourists and the amount of money spent on touristic development in five countries in two separate years; 2012-2013.

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[@rukshaladilshani859]

thank you for your support.sir Can you mention any numbers for overview part ?

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[@user-vz1uc2pu7w]

The table below compares changing trend in tourism for countries namely UK,........from the year 2012 Upto 2013.

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Can we replace "it is clear that" by "overall" in overview in your example?

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[@niginabonuxajiqurbanova8231]

is it acceptable to write interestingly,doesn't that mean somehow emotion,surpise,which is not related to a report task1?thank you for the answer in advance

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[@__jayjoshi]

Is it appropriate to mention year or date or any numbers in overview?

[@jomanahalotaibi8760]

no

[@user-hf1bz5so1o]

Hi Simon, in the paragraph 3, the sentence is that 2013 saw a rise of between 1 and 4 million tourist visits to each country. Why isn’t between 1 and 4 million tourists visiting each country? I am very confused that why the tourist didn’t use its plural

[@traveltheworld6685]

The noun is visit: 1 million tourist visits, hope that helps
Saw a rise of between 1 and 4 million visits. Tourist visit is just a compound noun I guess

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[@CuongNguyen-pt7yp]

I think "rank" should be in active voice, not the passive one ( he ranked fifth)

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But it's not 150 words

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In this essay there are 157 words...

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