IELTS-Simon-Writing-Task1-Academic-part-4

Analysis task:
1. Underline examples of paraphrasing in the introduction, comparing it with the question.
2. Look again at the 2 main points that I chose for the overview (paragraph 2).
3. Underline the numbers and years that I mentioned in paragraphs 3 and 4. How many numbers
did I mention in the report?
4. Underline examples of ‘comparing’ language and ‘change’ language in the report.
5. How many sentences did I write in each paragraph?
Vocabulary task:
Watch the video lesson again. Near the end of the lesson, find the list of good vocabulary.
Underline those phrases in the full report on page 1 of this worksheet.
Extra task:
Try to write your own report about the same pie charts using what you remember from the lesson
(but without looking at my answer).
Compare your finished report with mine, and look for areas where you could improve.
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[@kyrielin9721]

The pie charts compare five categories of household expenditure in the UK and New Zealand in the years 1980 and 2008.
It is noticeable that the proportion of spending on food and drink fell in both countries over the 28-year period, while spending on utility bills rose. Also, UK residents spent a significantly larger percentage of their household budgets on leisure than their New Zealand counterparts.
In 1980, 29% of an average New Zealand household budget went on food and drink, while the equivalent figure for a UK home was 23%. By 2008, expenditure on food and drink had fallen by 4% in New Zealand, and by a full 10% in the UK. By contrast, both countries saw an increase in expenditure on utility bills for the average home, from 27% to 31% in New Zealand and from 26% to 28% in the UK.
Leisure activities accounted for the highest proportion of UK household spending in both years, but only the third highest proportion in New Zealand. In fact, in 2008, New Zealanders spent only half as much in relative terms on recreation (17%) as UK residents (34%). In both countries, transport costs and other costs took roughly 15% and 10% of household budgets respectively.

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[@Moonlight-tf3we]

Thank you simon for the lesson.
I wrote this sentence for my introduction. Is it correct?
The pie charts demonstrate the proportion of five categories on which families spent annually in the UK and New Zealand in the years of 1980 and 2008.

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[@IeltsSimon9]

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[@triviet1099]

can you please explain why should we use the word 'by'? For example, you use 'by 2008' in this pie chart example. Thank you!

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[@ngochieu_nguyen]

Hi, I also intend to write 2 paragraphs. However, instead of comparing category by category, I decided to compare 2 charts from different years, but from the same country for each paragraph. My friend, on the other hand, compares two charts from the two countries in the same year.
It is advisable to do it differently? Or will I be deducted some points relating to task achievement?

[@bin5phut334]

Both ways are fine, however since the purpose of pie charts with fewer than 2 time stamps is more towards contrast and comparisons, your friend's way may be more suited to common logic. The only reason why figures are represented as a pie chart is that people would like to compare/ contrast the figures rather than see the changes, as a table/ line chart is more suited to that task.

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Please upload the remaining 2. I have the exam in 2 days.

[@user-mp2ih4bv8e]

Why we shouldn't have a separate Paragraph for each country

[@raiyanrahman7201]

Cause we want to compare both countries and categories at the same time