IELTS-Simon-Writing-Task1-Academic-part-7
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- เผยแพร่เมื่อ 26 ก.ย. 2024
- Here’s the report that I wrote in the video lesson:
The first flow diagram illustrates the process of glass container production, and the second
diagram shows steps in the process of recycling used glass.
We can see that glass is made using three main raw materials, and that the manufacturing process
consists of four distinct stages. It requires five steps to turn used glass into new glass products.
At the first stage in the production of glass, sand, soda ash, limestone and other chemicals are
mixed together. Next, this mixture is heated in a glass furnace at approximately 1500℃ to produce
molten glass. The molten glass can then be shaped, by blowing, to create the end products,
namely glass containers.
Glass recycling begins with the collection of used glass products. The collected glass is sorted
according to its colour, and then washed in order to remove any impurities. At the fourth stage of
recycling, the glass is crushed and melted, and the resulting molten glass can finally be moulded to
create new items.
Analysis task:
1. Underline examples of paraphrasing in the introduction, comparing it with the question.
2. Which two main points did I choose for the overview (paragraph 2)?
3. Underline the ‘steps language’ in paragraphs 3 and 4.
4. Underline the passive verb forms in the report.
5. How many sentences did I write in each paragraph?
Vocabulary task:
Watch the video lesson again. Near the end of the lesson, find the list of good vocabulary. Highlight
those phrases in the report on page 1 of this worksheet.
Extra task:
Try to write your own report about the same flow diagrams using what you remember from the
lesson (but without looking at my answer).
Compare your finished report with mine, and look for areas where you could improve.
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incredibly informative!!
So simple. Thanks for sharing
Thanks a lot! It was really helpful and informative
Appreciate your support sir
isn't that three steps for glass production? since the last box simply shows "glass container" as the final product
Sir thanks for your lessons. I have the IELTS exams on the 4th and 7th of January. I need someone who will be guiding me through mock texts to now know how I am doing
Hello Sir, is it Okay to outline the process in the overview? For example, after mentioning the 3 or 4 stages, then go ahead to mention them as well in the overview. I saw this in another Ielts video here on TH-cam.
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Hi Simon, thanks for this video
My question....which is right
Limestone and clay are mixed or
Limestone and clay is mixed?
If you watch attentively you will recognize that Simon mentions: are mixed.
If it is plural you should use "are" or on the contrary if it is singular you should use "is".
May I could explain.
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Excellent work Sir❤
at the first stage or in the first stage?
Thnk u so much ❤sir
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Thankyou
How do I print the work sheet
i wrote it and gave to my teacher, she found two mistakes, 1 is "flow first "[lexical resourc] and other one is spelling mistake"recycline" how can i correct this?
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How can i print this? anyone give pdf link please.
what about natural process
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