I don't know of this woman, but she gives us an absolutely AMAZING performance. @18:25: I bet few caught it because it only lasts a second or two, but the book he pulls out of her memory case is not just any random prop book, but "The Beauty Queen of Leenane"; part 1 of a trilogy of Irish plays by Martin McDonagh. It takes an amazing mind to take the time to slip in little tidbits that make a scene so authentic. Very well done.
Hi Tj, that's Kris Ann Russell as Anne and very keen eye on the Martin McDonagh spotting haha. You're the first person who noticed and called it out. Bravo, sir. Thank you very much for watching and taking the time to write.
When I was 19, I worked as a receptionist for a guy in his 60’s. I learnt so much from him and he gave me the confidence to go to university. I’m now a masters educated teacher about to turn 50. He sadly passed away about 15 years ago but I think about him often and the impact he had on my life. What a legacy to leave someone. LOVED this film.
That's beautiful @mjhay1830. And to think you may be that very same inspiration in some other young person's life is a cool thing. Makes one reflect on the circle of life and the people we're each lucky enough to meet, know, and love through the course of our lives. Thanks for stopping by to watch and write
The only thing is disliked about this mini masterpiece was that it ended. I want to know so much more about these characters. I hope there is a part 2 in the works or a full length film. You got my attention and I’ll be watching you. Bravo sir. Subscribed
Big thank you for taking the time to watch and write, Billy. Much appreciate the kind words, too. Working on the feature length script. Stay tuned. Hoping to get to make it someday in the not too distant future, hopefully the next 2-4 years if I can get some luck to strike 🙂
Sometimes it only takes a handshake or a hug to keep the spirit of another person alive. I'm not one who's comfortable to receive any positive comment or praise; it gives me cringe. But for others, it's enough to open up worlds, so to speak. The lyrics of Diana Ross' song then makes perfect sense: "Reach out and touch somebody's hand; make this world a better place if you can..."
Hey Tago, what an awesome sentiment. Thanks so much for sharing and for the reference to the Diana Ross lyric, too. I made this movie at a time when I was feeling pretty lonely after having first moved to Los Angeles, and I was amazed multiple times at the kindness and openness of older people I'd meet in passing who would share a warm smile and hello. That simple kind of human connection made me feel a bit more at home--even while being so far away from my real home. I'm with Diana Ross--a simple smile and a hug can be a real beacon of light in a world that oftentimes can be pretty dark and complex
Loved it! See, here's the problem. Everyone I know has succumbed to what I call the "under 2 minute syndrome". If they can't digest it on social media quickly then they move on to the next posting or whatever. Maybe not everyone, but most. I know someone who will like this one though. Thank you. I needed that.
Thanks very much for taking the time to watch and write, Darrell. Glad you enjoyed and appreciate another compatriot bucking the "2 minute syndrome" haha
This was a delight! Bringing two unexpected individuals from two different back grounds to common ground. They were believable and had great chemistry. I would love to see this unfold to a bigger movie or series! Great job!!
I appreciated how the book was the trigger that helped Jake see a relationship could develop, yet neither character ever directly spoke of the book. Clever. Well acted; both characters were believable and equally invested in their roles. Truly enjoyable film.
Thanks, Michael, appreciate you watching and taking the time to write. Also, happy you liked the book connection between them haha. Planning on switching the book out for another with a little higher degree of on-sight significance, maybe The Alchemist. We'll see 🙂
The book was the trigger? Let’s talk about the WHITE ROSES. The old actress holding up a black and white picture of a small boy? She gave up acting to raise a child, who isn’t involved with her later in life, leading me to believe she gave up being an actress just to have her small child taken away (aka died). Look around her house and you see no pics of a grown up child. No grand babies. She sees through him what her boy could have been while he sees his mother what she could have been.
Great story. Once was a time when the generations were closely connected. Humanity has lost something along the way. Or a large part of it has. Well done on your film Jake Ebright. Well done.
Dang, Daniel, thanks very much for taking the time to share this. One of the things I love most about older people I meet is how willing they are to take the time to just stop and talk. That willingness to listen and to communicate goes a long way towards happiness and connection and is something I really admire.
@@jakeebright1041 Thank you for that Jake. Something precious for humanity has been lost to a large extent with social media. Even old guys like myself often communicate more on social media rather than face to face. I ca talk to people all over the world on social media. Nice. But like many others, I communicate a lot with people that live just down the road on social media. I remember a time not so long ago when people gathered around town halls and talked to each other..in person. Your reply makes me feel a little proud to be an "older guy". LOL. I'm 72 now and miss those days when people actually talked to each other.
@@jakeebright1041 I agree! For me, every interaction with another human is a gift and an opportunity to connect and contribute joy! We never know what others are going through. A smile, a “hello, how’s your day going so far” to the check out person at the grocery store or anywhere, can create an energetic shift that ripples throughout their day and brings them joy. And it brings me fulfillment to share joy. It’s a win win! My mother was the same way. She always made it a point to leave others feeling validated and appreciated no matter how short their interaction. And I would see the effect it had on her and the other person. I often say, “Life is short and days are long” so why not have a little fun along the way and share a smile with each person I meet! Nice story and beautifully acted! Congrats! 20:36
Have been pondering exactly this disconnection and separation of families, humans and generations. I feel its the cause of unhappiness. Humans need connections. I also have the feeling that if the oldies were much more connected to the young…they’d forget to get old.
I dont just beLIEve in good men and unicorns. I know good men and unicorns. They exist. And they’re coming back strong now! Congratulations on this beautiful, touching, thoughtful film.
You are such a handsome young man, with talents that I wish myself could share with the world. However, I never met a soul that could make my humble talents connect with the world. Seriously though, I didn't want the "Short Story" to end. I mean this with the utmost respect. You left us in the middle of a good story.
Thanks so much for writing, Kristine. Really appreciate your kind words and your time in watching. One thing I love most about people is that everyone is unique and has their own interests and talents. I'm sure you have more skills than you think you do and that people are appreciating them without you even knowing it.
your film made me so happy in so many ways. Your amazing and Kris Ann Russell... brighter than the sun. I wish that you would consider a part 2,3 and 4. What other work has she done and you. I thought that my day could not of been more horrible then I found this gem. Thank you so much.
Hi Richard, glad to hear you enjoyed it and that it brought some happiness to your day. I hear you, man, keep at it one day at a time. For the movie, just finished the feature script for it, so am submitting to writing competitions and will see what happens next. Hoping for the universe to send it some luck 🤞
thanks for writing @icedzinnia. Sorry to have made you cry haha but happy that you were affected by the story. The connection between Eli and Anne was an element of the story I thought was pretty cool and poetic, so I'm glad to hear it was impactful for you, too.
I loved this. I’ve had older friends my entire life and most of them are deceased now. My life has been so blessed I can’t help but think that they might be pulling for me on the other side, filling my life with so many wonderful things. I’m a big believer in karma for that very reason. When I was 36, my roommate was 92. We had a great time. Older people are more complex and interesting to me than younger people. I’m blessed to have known some great ones. ❤
Hey @thefilipinojoe, thanks for sharing about your life. I always feel like there's something cool about people who've been around the Earth a while. They always seem to me to be more open to connection, which is a really special thing. The people we come to know and love has to be the most important thing in life. Just spent time with my family back home and will always be thankful to have parents and brothers that I can sit with without saying a word and feel totally at peace with. Friends are like that, too. Family and friendship.
This is a short film that is really well made. It's rare to find a work of this caliber in the short film genre, and it's a testament to the filmmaker's talent and vision. I would highly recommend this movie to anyone looking for a thought-provoking, emotionally resonant cinematic experience
This was really well done. I thought 20 minutes, I don't know if I want to give 20 mins but I have enjoyed short films before often because their character work is good. I don't have the skill myself but I know what I like in a story. I want to feel some reality I can relate to and also discover something that is foreign to me that I can experience here I can't get in my own life. This achieved both those things strange yet achingly familiar. I laughed at a couple of points audibly and I cried for a moment as they spoke in the kitchen of those that had gone. I smiled a lot and willed the characters to take actions I wanted to see. This ability to involve someone in the story emotionally is what I see as the most effective form of story telling. I don't know about camera angles, set dressings, good and bad dialogue or effective use of music but something in all of this along with the good acting on behalf of the leads really conveyed the story you wanted to tell. Congratulations! I hope that you love that other people are enjoying the story you have woven together and feel every bit of the satisfaction of the art you have spent time making and sharing.
Haha dang, thanks, Trisjack20. Really appreciate you taking the time to write such a nice comment. That's very cool you enjoyed it and that you were affected so much by the characters and the story. I love hearing that people really connected to it because I had such a fun time creating it from start to finish. Looking forward to making more in the future. Thanks for stopping by to watch.
Man, I loved this film and really, really hope there’s a part 2!! You wore a lot of hats and all of it came together beautifully. Thank you for sharing.
Hey Mike, thanks so much for the kind words and for taking the time to watch & write. Glad you enjoyed it and fingers crossed myself for a complete version haha. Will be working on the writing of it.
This was very excellently made. Really tugged at my heart. It wouldn't have taken much for them not reach out or open up but because they did they both of them benefited a friendship that without them fully knowing they both really needed. Brilliantly executed. Well done, Jake.
Of course, it's my absolute pleasure. I love hearing thoughts on the story and very much appreciate anybody willing to take the time to not only watch but also to write. Means a lot to me reading all the comments and knowing the movie is resonating with people haha
haha thanks, @GrandTime-17. Glad you liked it. Had a really awesome time making it and getting to see the story come to life. Thanks for watching and taking the time to write.
This movie took my breath away. Somewhere those feelings are within each of us be it across the world or continents we relate to this. I felt so light just watching it and my day is beautiful.
Dang, SS, thanks so much for watching and taking the time to share your thoughts. Really happy our story made you feel that way. Wishing you all the best 🙂
There are shorts and there are shorts, this is above most, if not the best I have seen in a very long time. The acting, the script, the lot. Love it, saved.
This was an absolutely beautiful movie! I love how the woman and young man filled a void…a loss in each others life and a friendship evolved. And the acting was superb. Thank you for such a wonderful movie!
I learned something new. What a white rose symbolizes. Watching you sniff the rose, I could almost smell it myself. Beautiful, calming, amusing. This is the movie to watch on a cool rainy evening.
Incredibly done. Well written, impeccably acted and produced... the whole nine. The music was perfect, not too overwhelming, fitting perfectly. Like a fine wine, it fits, compliments the scene, instead of trampling over it. "Anne" has a bit of.. Jane Fonda in her voice, her cadence. What a very cool chemistry these two have, right? The way these they mesh is so believable, even if seemingly rare. And yes, I know people may say this a bit too often, but I truly see this guy going places. We'll see him around another camera or two....
Shoowee, thanks, Krystal. I really appreciate you taking the time to share those thoughts. They sure made a body feel good to read 'em haha and glad you enjoyed the movie.
This story caught my undivided attention today. It made me cry, then it made me smile, then it made me inspired, lots of emotions. But then it ended.....and I wanted and needed more of the story. Beautifully written, an engaging story for sure. Watching from Canada.
thank you for taking the time to write such a nice message, @lizharley5723. It’s an awesome thing that people who’ve never met can connect to a story in the same way. Reassures one’s faith in the future and in the human ability to come together to uplift one another and work towards good together.
I love this short. First it's heartwarming (why are so many dark or sad??), second it co stars a woman (why are lead women roles so rare in shorts??? Many have no women!), third Jake you are compelling to watch on screen as is the woman, excellent acting. thanks for making tis film and sharing it.
Hi Nick, my pleasure, thanks very much for watching and taking the time to write such a nice message. And I'm with you--a little positivity every once in a while is good for the soul 😁
renews my optimism to find something like this! thank heavens someone believes in characters and exploration, and hats off for the age differential. intelligent and relevant, without going cutesy. Kris Ann Russel is excellent. more please.
thanks for watching, Laura, and glad the movie meant something to you. Change in life is definitely tough and so is getting older, which is something I’ve been thinking a lot about lately. So, I hear you. I always try to remind myself that all of it is just another diverse part of the adventure of life to appreciate and enjoy for the time we get to be here. Wishing you all the best.
Very touching, emotionally deeply connecting, great subtle music, absolutely phenomenal acting so true! Definitely need more story to develop full length! One of my top 5 fav shorts in couple years, 2 became movies😊 will follow you🎉
Thanks very much for watching and taking the time to write, Joanne. I'm honored that you enjoyed it so much, and hoping I can follow suit with those other 2 😁
hi @lizziem, that’s awesome. Glad to hear the story pulled you in. Working on developing the feature script, so stay tuned. Hopefully more to come in the future. Thanks for stopping by and tuning in
It's an incredibly heartwarming film with outstanding performances! We are humans, irrespective of age, gender, or nationality; at the end of the day, we all need human connection, and it was beautiful to see in the film how that longing drives them to connect with each other. I loved the natural flow of conversations and laughs. It really left me wanting to see more of the characters, how their friendship develops, and how organically the layers of the story unravel. I loved it. Thank you :)
Hey @ashhilthakar980, thanks very much for watching and taking the time to write. And yup, that's really where the idea for the movie came from, a love for people and the kindness they can show for one another despite all their differences and challenges that appear to be keeping them apart
@@jakeebright1041 you appear to have some Indian heritage? Idk regardless, I feel for some reason a cultural connection with this peace. Maybe because I internalized a lot as a child. Maybe it was the way it was filmed a bit distant like idk
thanks, Anjetka. I liked that bit, too haha. One of my favorite shots of the whole movie was the push in on the rose in the window sill early on the movie with the white curtain behind it
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This warmed my heart like nobody’s business. Both characters connected with me. Amazing job, Jake. And thank you for reminding me that we all need an Anne in our lives.
Just to say I’ve only just come across this, but I absolutely loved it, I wish it could have gone on longer bravo both of you it was fantastic👏thank you 👌👍
Thanks, Terry, much obliged for giving it a watch. Love to hear it when people wish it would've gone on longer haha. Working on the rest of it and hope to make it someday in the future, so stay tuned 😁
Dudny want it to end. Well played well written a great job. Just goes to show how with just a little effirt you can connect with people you would normally ignore and discount . . If only more people would behave like this their workd woukd become richer for it.
Very enjoyable. The actors had real personality and a connection as the flow of the scenes moved along. Seemed very real to life. I think there's some real talent here! Yes, obviously I enjoyed the interaction of the two actors. Too bad this is just a beginning. I look forward to more, if possible. This really had some charm! + Durasaxon + ✝️
Wonderful and engaging short film. I fell in love with the characters who were beautifully acted - very genuine. I would love to see more of the story unfold in future shorts perhaps?
Hey there, thanks for watching. The hope is to continue developing the characters into a full length feature script, which I'm currently working on. Stay tuned for the future and fingers crossed we get some luck and can make it once I'm done writing 🤞
Hey Albert, thanks for taking the time to write, and I'm sorry to hear of your grandma's passing. Makes me happy to know you felt a connection to her through this story. Wishing you all the best, man
thanks very much for taking the time to watch and write, mindfuldistractions. just read this excerpt somewhere a few days ago about how the most important thing in our lives are the relationships we form with others. that’s what matters most while we’re living and when we look back on our own life. seems pretty accurate to me as I think on it
Wow! Such a great short film! I loved these 2 characters and how the relationship developed. Well acted and produced. Hope we can see more of these 2 characters. Stay safe! Mark ✌🏻😉✌🏻
@@jakeebright1041 I can only imagine how much time and effort goes into producing these short films, and I’m glad you were recognized via the awards you’ve received. It’s well deserved. 👍🏻 I subscribed to your channel so I can be notified if you post more of your work. ✌🏻✌🏻
thank you, Michelle. I very much appreciate the kind words and you’re taking the time to watch our movie. I let Kris know you enjoyed her performance as well 😁
17:07 ‘Same as most things I guess… It just sort of happened’ - reminds me of the famous John Lennon quotation ‘Life is what happens while you are busy making other plans’…
I always liked that line too haha. It’s kind of a weird process hearing things you’ve written said on screen-it feels almost like they take on a life of their own, like they’re not not even quite your words anymore, as if you’ve surrendered ownership of them when they’re released out into the world.
Very cool ! much talent and creativity shown in this film; from sound track to story line.. and yes, We are All Actors. -- each playing many parts and have our entrances and exits..,
This is such a touching short film. She's beautiful when she smiles with that warm smile and his eyes . . . dio mio! I'm an old singer and still singing well. Keep up the creativity, but what was the book about?
Thanks for the kind words, Richard. Glad you enjoyed the film. The book is just meant to connect the two of them; however, I'm intending on going more into that in the feature script. I'm also meaning to change up the book to be something more significant to the two of them. In the short, it was just a screenwriting book, but in the feature I'm thinking I'd like it to be The Alchemist, which is about following one's dreams and following your destiny.
Mr. Ebright, your film is à propos for showcasing a friendship between two people who are four or more decades apart in age! I was born in '64, and my friends range from born in '02 at the youngest to '22 at the oldest (yes: 1922). Other friends tell me I would be a great comedic actor, so please let me know if you need a male actor my age to add to your project of a full-length version of this wonderful film!
Hi Ralph, thanks for watching and taking the time to write. And wow, 1922--that's wild haha. I will keep you in mind for sure. Wishing you all the best, man 🙂
The interest grows with these two characters….Hey Jake,you need to go further with a chapter 2. Both well acted and give off a unicorn magic which draws you in wanting more with their friendship. That’s to you both. 👏👏👍👍❤️❤️🙏🙏
Hey @rsrfm24, thanks very much for watching and for taking the time to share such kind words. Really glad you enjoyed it. That there was some magic there is music to my ears haha. That’s what I love most about books and movies, that they capture your imagination and deliver a little bit of magic and beauty.
Thanks, Foster Lee, it's my pleasure. It really makes me happy to share something I've worked on like this so that other people can interact with it and feel some connection to it--and hopefully be affected in a positive way
Gracious from India. Incredible treatment of contemporary problem with a graceful classy touch. i have seen and feel so many things together in this movie, wonderful. Please keep working and be blessed all ways. i leave writing capital i few years back. Please don't mind. Thank you.
Eight comments before mine..... all are excellent comments. You seem to be a beautiful young man Jake. The "geriatric" lady was wonderful. I'm 72, so I guess I fit into that category now....ha.
Haha thank you, Bob. I'm working on it. If I keep up the work and can get struck by a little bit of lucky lightning, we just might be able to make it into a full movie. We shall see haha. Stay tuned :)
Jake, I enjoyed watching your film a second time! It's now one of my very favorite films! It's so touching and a lot of fun! I love both of your characters! You are great together! Are you familiar with the channel, "Omeleto?" It's short films, and it would help more people have the opportunity to see your film! ❤
Thanks for watching and taking the time to write, poppylove. That’s super cool to hear that it’s one of your favorite films. Also, no, I don’t believe I am familiar with omeleto at the moment. Does one just reach out and see if they will add your short to their channel?
Thanks @acer4237, working on it. Submitted first draft of the feature to the Academy Nicholl Fellowship this year. Still got work to do but really believe in the story, so hopefully we can get a little Good Will Hunting type action sometime in the future. Whatever the odds, a man can dream haha
Thanks for coming back for a second watch, @anjetka_2910, and for taking the time to write as well. Very appreciative of you and glad you still enjoyed it haha
Thanks, @Milisenta777 haha. Glad you enjoyed it and rest assured, I'm working on it 😁 Hopefully in the next few years we'll be able to do it, we shall see.
I don't know of this woman, but she gives us an absolutely AMAZING performance.
@18:25: I bet few caught it because it only lasts a second or two, but the book he pulls out of her memory case is not just any random prop book, but "The Beauty Queen of Leenane"; part 1 of a trilogy of Irish plays by Martin McDonagh. It takes an amazing mind to take the time to slip in little tidbits that make a scene so authentic. Very well done.
Hi Tj, that's Kris Ann Russell as Anne and very keen eye on the Martin McDonagh spotting haha. You're the first person who noticed and called it out. Bravo, sir. Thank you very much for watching and taking the time to write.
i think she's great... he voice is terrible
When I was 19, I worked as a receptionist for a guy in his 60’s. I learnt so much from him and he gave me the confidence to go to university. I’m now a masters educated teacher about to turn 50. He sadly passed away about 15 years ago but I think about him often and the impact he had on my life. What a legacy to leave someone. LOVED this film.
That's beautiful @mjhay1830. And to think you may be that very same inspiration in some other young person's life is a cool thing. Makes one reflect on the circle of life and the people we're each lucky enough to meet, know, and love through the course of our lives. Thanks for stopping by to watch and write
The only thing is disliked about this mini masterpiece was that it ended. I want to know so much more about these characters. I hope there is a part 2 in the works or a full length film. You got my attention and I’ll be watching you. Bravo sir. Subscribed
Big thank you for taking the time to watch and write, Billy. Much appreciate the kind words, too. Working on the feature length script. Stay tuned. Hoping to get to make it someday in the not too distant future, hopefully the next 2-4 years if I can get some luck to strike 🙂
I agree. I would love to see more of these characters. Loved the video, so cute and without additional heaviness those topics often brings. 🎉
Yeah, this really seemed more like the first part of a good feature-length movie. Great character development, but now needs more resolution.
Same here... I wonder if there will be a part 2🥰
@@jakeebright1041Yay, I agreed with @billycarroll9153 I left my original post under his comment. I hope to see it on my timeline when it's finished 😊
Sometimes it only takes a handshake or a hug to keep the spirit of another person alive. I'm not one who's comfortable to receive any positive comment or praise; it gives me cringe. But for others, it's enough to open up worlds, so to speak.
The lyrics of Diana Ross' song then makes perfect sense: "Reach out and touch somebody's hand; make this world a better place if you can..."
Hey Tago, what an awesome sentiment. Thanks so much for sharing and for the reference to the Diana Ross lyric, too. I made this movie at a time when I was feeling pretty lonely after having first moved to Los Angeles, and I was amazed multiple times at the kindness and openness of older people I'd meet in passing who would share a warm smile and hello. That simple kind of human connection made me feel a bit more at home--even while being so far away from my real home. I'm with Diana Ross--a simple smile and a hug can be a real beacon of light in a world that oftentimes can be pretty dark and complex
@@jakeebright1041 I so enjoyed this lovely movie. At 72 , It touched my heart. Thank you
Loved it! See, here's the problem. Everyone I know has succumbed to what I call the "under 2 minute syndrome". If they can't digest it on social media quickly then they move on to the next posting or whatever. Maybe not everyone, but most. I know someone who will like this one though. Thank you. I needed that.
Thanks very much for taking the time to watch and write, Darrell. Glad you enjoyed and appreciate another compatriot bucking the "2 minute syndrome" haha
pshaw, i love indie shorts!!!
This was a delight! Bringing two unexpected individuals from two different back grounds to common ground. They were believable and had great chemistry. I would love to see this unfold to a bigger movie or series! Great job!!
Hey LJH, thanks for taking the time to write such a nice message. Really appreciate you and will be working on the rest of the script 🙂
I appreciated how the book was the trigger that helped Jake see a relationship could develop, yet neither character ever directly spoke of the book. Clever. Well acted; both characters were believable and equally invested in their roles. Truly enjoyable film.
Thanks, Michael, appreciate you watching and taking the time to write. Also, happy you liked the book connection between them haha. Planning on switching the book out for another with a little higher degree of on-sight significance, maybe The Alchemist. We'll see 🙂
The book was the trigger?
Let’s talk about the WHITE ROSES. The old actress holding up a black and white picture of a small boy? She gave up acting to raise a child, who isn’t involved with her later in life, leading me to believe she gave up being an actress just to have her small child taken away (aka died). Look around her house and you see no pics of a grown up child. No grand babies. She sees through him what her boy could have been while he sees his mother what she could have been.
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Great story. Once was a time when the generations were closely connected. Humanity has lost something along the way. Or a large part of it has. Well done on your film Jake Ebright. Well done.
Dang, Daniel, thanks very much for taking the time to share this. One of the things I love most about older people I meet is how willing they are to take the time to just stop and talk. That willingness to listen and to communicate goes a long way towards happiness and connection and is something I really admire.
@@jakeebright1041 Thank you for that Jake. Something precious for humanity has been lost to a large extent with social media. Even old guys like myself often communicate more on social media rather than face to face. I ca talk to people all over the world on social media. Nice. But like many others, I communicate a lot with people that live just down the road on social media. I remember a time not so long ago when people gathered around town halls and talked to each other..in person. Your reply makes me feel a little proud to be an "older guy". LOL. I'm 72 now and miss those days when people actually talked to each other.
@@jakeebright1041 I agree! For me, every interaction with another human is a gift and an opportunity to connect and contribute joy! We never know what others are going through. A smile, a “hello, how’s your day going so far” to the check out person at the grocery store or anywhere, can create an energetic shift that ripples throughout their day and brings them joy. And it brings me fulfillment to share joy. It’s a win win! My mother was the same way. She always made it a point to leave others feeling validated and appreciated no matter how short their interaction. And I would see the effect it had on her and the other person. I often say, “Life is short and days are long” so why not have a little fun along the way and share a smile with each person I meet!
Nice story and beautifully acted! Congrats! 20:36
Beautiful story and a well done short film. 😊
Have been pondering exactly this disconnection and separation of families, humans and generations. I feel its the cause of unhappiness. Humans need connections. I also have the feeling that if the oldies were much more connected to the young…they’d forget to get old.
I dont just beLIEve in good men and unicorns. I know good men and unicorns. They exist. And they’re coming back strong now! Congratulations on this beautiful, touching, thoughtful film.
Thank you, @sonant888. Love to hear that haha
You are such a handsome young man, with talents that I wish myself could share with the world. However, I never met a soul that could make my humble talents connect with the world. Seriously though, I didn't want the "Short Story" to end. I mean this with the utmost respect. You left us in the middle of a good story.
Thanks so much for writing, Kristine. Really appreciate your kind words and your time in watching. One thing I love most about people is that everyone is unique and has their own interests and talents. I'm sure you have more skills than you think you do and that people are appreciating them without you even knowing it.
your film made me so happy in so many ways. Your amazing and Kris Ann Russell... brighter than the sun. I wish that you would consider a part 2,3 and 4. What other work has she done and you. I thought that my day could not of been more horrible then I found this gem. Thank you so much.
Hi Richard, glad to hear you enjoyed it and that it brought some happiness to your day. I hear you, man, keep at it one day at a time. For the movie, just finished the feature script for it, so am submitting to writing competitions and will see what happens next. Hoping for the universe to send it some luck 🤞
When i learned that he lost his mother, and after the scene indicating she lost her son, the jabbing at the end of the kitchen scene made me cry.
thanks for writing @icedzinnia. Sorry to have made you cry haha but happy that you were affected by the story. The connection between Eli and Anne was an element of the story I thought was pretty cool and poetic, so I'm glad to hear it was impactful for you, too.
I loved this. I’ve had older friends my entire life and most of them are deceased now. My life has been so blessed I can’t help but think that they might be pulling for me on the other side, filling my life with so many wonderful things. I’m a big believer in karma for that very reason. When I was 36, my roommate was 92. We had a great time. Older people are more complex and interesting to me than younger people. I’m blessed to have known some great ones. ❤
Hey @thefilipinojoe, thanks for sharing about your life. I always feel like there's something cool about people who've been around the Earth a while. They always seem to me to be more open to connection, which is a really special thing. The people we come to know and love has to be the most important thing in life. Just spent time with my family back home and will always be thankful to have parents and brothers that I can sit with without saying a word and feel totally at peace with. Friends are like that, too. Family and friendship.
@@jakeebright1041 true.
This is a short film that is really well made. It's rare to find a work of this caliber in the short film genre, and it's a testament to the filmmaker's talent and vision. I would highly recommend this movie to anyone looking for a thought-provoking, emotionally resonant cinematic experience
Thanks, Josh 😁
This was really well done. I thought 20 minutes, I don't know if I want to give 20 mins but I have enjoyed short films before often because their character work is good. I don't have the skill myself but I know what I like in a story. I want to feel some reality I can relate to and also discover something that is foreign to me that I can experience here I can't get in my own life. This achieved both those things strange yet achingly familiar.
I laughed at a couple of points audibly and I cried for a moment as they spoke in the kitchen of those that had gone. I smiled a lot and willed the characters to take actions I wanted to see. This ability to involve someone in the story emotionally is what I see as the most effective form of story telling.
I don't know about camera angles, set dressings, good and bad dialogue or effective use of music but something in all of this along with the good acting on behalf of the leads really conveyed the story you wanted to tell. Congratulations! I hope that you love that other people are enjoying the story you have woven together and feel every bit of the satisfaction of the art you have spent time making and sharing.
Haha dang, thanks, Trisjack20. Really appreciate you taking the time to write such a nice comment. That's very cool you enjoyed it and that you were affected so much by the characters and the story. I love hearing that people really connected to it because I had such a fun time creating it from start to finish. Looking forward to making more in the future. Thanks for stopping by to watch.
Man, I loved this film and really, really hope there’s a part 2!! You wore a lot of hats and all of it came together beautifully. Thank you for sharing.
Hey Mike, thanks so much for the kind words and for taking the time to watch & write. Glad you enjoyed it and fingers crossed myself for a complete version haha. Will be working on the writing of it.
This was very excellently made. Really tugged at my heart. It wouldn't have taken much for them not reach out or open up but because they did they both of them benefited a friendship that without them fully knowing they both really needed. Brilliantly executed. Well done, Jake.
Thank you, Chanté 🙂 Really appreciate you taking the time to watch and share such kind thoughts. Glad we tugged at the old heart strings a bit haha
Can see big things in the future for this guy. Writing, directing, acting, is there anything he CANT do???
Haha thanks, Henry. You the man 🙌
I really appreciate the fact that you take the time to write back to so many of us. Thank you for appreciating your audience
Of course, it's my absolute pleasure. I love hearing thoughts on the story and very much appreciate anybody willing to take the time to not only watch but also to write. Means a lot to me reading all the comments and knowing the movie is resonating with people haha
Noooooo!!! I wanted this to go on!!! I was so invested in each of these characters and the storyline!!! What a sweet, interesting short!! 💕💕💕
haha thanks, @GrandTime-17. Glad you liked it. Had a really awesome time making it and getting to see the story come to life. Thanks for watching and taking the time to write.
This movie took my breath away. Somewhere those feelings are within each of us be it across the world or continents we relate to this. I felt so light just watching it and my day is beautiful.
Dang, SS, thanks so much for watching and taking the time to share your thoughts. Really happy our story made you feel that way. Wishing you all the best 🙂
There are shorts and there are shorts, this is above most, if not the best I have seen in a very long time. The acting, the script, the lot. Love it, saved.
much obliged @timothygreening875. Appreciate you taking the time to write and glad you enjoyed our little short
This was an absolutely beautiful movie! I love how the woman and young man filled a void…a loss in each others life and a friendship evolved. And the acting was superb.
Thank you for such a wonderful movie!
thanks, @Gus-x3z. Really glad you enjoyed it. We had a lot of fun making it together.
I really enjoyed this! The acting was very well done and the whole story just brought a smile to my face. Thank you and keep it up!
Hi Minnie, thanks so much for watching and taking the time to write. Really happy you enjoyed it.
I learned something new. What a white rose symbolizes. Watching you sniff the rose, I could almost smell it myself. Beautiful, calming, amusing. This is the movie to watch on a cool rainy evening.
Thanks, Tony. Much appreciate you stopping in to have a watch.
Incredibly done. Well written, impeccably acted and produced... the whole nine. The music was perfect, not too overwhelming, fitting perfectly. Like a fine wine, it fits, compliments the scene, instead of trampling over it. "Anne" has a bit of.. Jane Fonda in her voice, her cadence. What a very cool chemistry these two have, right? The way these they mesh is so believable, even if seemingly rare. And yes, I know people may say this a bit too often, but I truly see this guy going places. We'll see him around another camera or two....
Shoowee, thanks, Krystal. I really appreciate you taking the time to share those thoughts. They sure made a body feel good to read 'em haha and glad you enjoyed the movie.
That's it! Jane Fonda style it is!
This story caught my undivided attention today. It made me cry, then it made me smile, then it made me inspired, lots of emotions. But then it ended.....and I wanted and needed more of the story. Beautifully written, an engaging story for sure. Watching from Canada.
thank you for taking the time to write such a nice message, @lizharley5723. It’s an awesome thing that people who’ve never met can connect to a story in the same way. Reassures one’s faith in the future and in the human ability to come together to uplift one another and work towards good together.
Omg! This was a top notch production, insanely good script, good cast, good music - you name it they topped it! ❤
Thanks, cheebacheeobusiness3893, really appreciate you taking the time to watch and write. Sure was fun to make. Looking forward to the next to come
I love this short. First it's heartwarming (why are so many dark or sad??), second it co stars a woman (why are lead women roles so rare in shorts??? Many have no women!), third Jake you are compelling to watch on screen as is the woman, excellent acting. thanks for making tis film and sharing it.
Hi Nick, my pleasure, thanks very much for watching and taking the time to write such a nice message. And I'm with you--a little positivity every once in a while is good for the soul 😁
Special movie that utilizes the wisdome and grace of an older woman very well. I appreciate the uniqueness.
thanks, flower girl. appreciate you taking the time to watch and write
renews my optimism to find something like this! thank heavens someone believes in characters and exploration, and hats off for the age differential. intelligent and relevant, without going cutesy. Kris Ann Russel is excellent. more please.
Thanks, Martin, really happy you enjoyed it. I'll be sure to let Kris know you liked her performance as well 😁
Yes I agree ....fantastic find
Unbelievable story. These two actors are great. Thank you...💕
thank you and thank you for watching, Andrea 🙂
I love this movie! My bf was 30 years older than me, makes me miss her so much…she had Ann’s enthusiasm ❤
that’s awesome, @lasallemj. Cool thing when people connect regardless of age. Thanks for watching 🙏
Even better the second time. Really proud of you dawg! This is a wonderful film.
Ayy Karuga, thanks, man 💪
Really trying to find my place in life now that I’m older. This resonated with me
thanks for watching, Laura, and glad the movie meant something to you. Change in life is definitely tough and so is getting older, which is something I’ve been thinking a lot about lately. So, I hear you. I always try to remind myself that all of it is just another diverse part of the adventure of life to appreciate and enjoy for the time we get to be here. Wishing you all the best.
i never found my place really, or at least, i did once, and lost it…there re plenty of us out here, laura 🩵🩵🩵💗💗💗🩵🩵🩵
Very touching, emotionally deeply connecting, great subtle music, absolutely phenomenal acting so true! Definitely need more story to develop full length! One of my top 5 fav shorts in couple years, 2 became movies😊 will follow you🎉
Thanks very much for watching and taking the time to write, Joanne. I'm honored that you enjoyed it so much, and hoping I can follow suit with those other 2 😁
I was absolutely invested in this short from the get go. Well done, so nice to see an intergenerational friendship.
hi @lizziem, that’s awesome. Glad to hear the story pulled you in. Working on developing the feature script, so stay tuned. Hopefully more to come in the future. Thanks for stopping by and tuning in
It's an incredibly heartwarming film with outstanding performances! We are humans, irrespective of age, gender, or nationality; at the end of the day, we all need human connection, and it was beautiful to see in the film how that longing drives them to connect with each other. I loved the natural flow of conversations and laughs. It really left me wanting to see more of the characters, how their friendship develops, and how organically the layers of the story unravel. I loved it. Thank you :)
Hey @ashhilthakar980, thanks very much for watching and taking the time to write. And yup, that's really where the idea for the movie came from, a love for people and the kindness they can show for one another despite all their differences and challenges that appear to be keeping them apart
I absolutely loved this short film. So genuine. Straightforward, deep yet simply told. Beautiful work. Well executed. :)
Hi Priya, thanks so much for taking the time to write. I really appreciate you having watched and am glad you enjoyed it :)
@@jakeebright1041 you appear to have some Indian heritage? Idk regardless, I feel for some reason a cultural connection with this peace. Maybe because I internalized a lot as a child. Maybe it was the way it was filmed a bit distant like idk
@@priyachi3 Yup, half indian :)
@@jakeebright1041 ya I thought as much. Well your family must be so proud as we say lol. But seriously 👍
What a heartwarming story. And the acting was as good as it can possibly get! Congratulations on a fine film!?💯❤
Thank you, Kurt 🙏
You ladies never lose it.
thanks for watching 🙂
... I loved close up at the white rose in a small vase passing to each other and the sentence " a new beginning" fits perfectly.
thanks, Anjetka. I liked that bit, too haha. One of my favorite shots of the whole movie was the push in on the rose in the window sill early on the movie with the white curtain behind it
You are a talented young man and thanks for posting this inspiring mini movie for free 💙💛.
Thanks, Almond Trees. Haha, sure was a lot of work, so I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for watching 😁
** Note from the Director: If you enjoyed the film, please like, comment, or share with anyone you think might also enjoy. Thank you for your time in watching. **
This is a short film that could be an EXCELLENT movie! I want to know more about these characters and see how things pan out with them.
much obliged, jtettman. Planning on doing a lot of writing for the feature this summer, so stay tuned 🙂
@@jakeebright1041 looking forward to it, loved this!
Great short didn't want it to end 😊
@@lloydhunt496 same
More, More, More!!! Brilliantly done.👌👌👏👏❤❤
Thanks, Jo. Looking forward to making more in the time to come 🙂
This warmed my heart like nobody’s business. Both characters connected with me. Amazing job, Jake. And thank you for reminding me that we all need an Anne in our lives.
Thanks, Daniel. I'm glad to hear that, man haha. And yup, someone extending a hand kindness can sure go a long way.
I really liked this! It kept my interest the whole time!
Wonderful! Thank you.
Thanks for watching, glad you enjoyed it 😁😁
Just to say I’ve only just come across this, but I absolutely loved it, I wish it could have gone on longer bravo both of you it was fantastic👏thank you 👌👍
Thanks, Terry, much obliged for giving it a watch. Love to hear it when people wish it would've gone on longer haha. Working on the rest of it and hope to make it someday in the future, so stay tuned 😁
Very Cool. and yes we are all actors.. All the Worlds a stage and we are merely players (many roles we play)
Thanks for the kind words, figinformer
Dudny want it to end. Well played well written a great job. Just goes to show how with just a little effirt you can connect with people you would normally ignore and discount . . If only more people would behave like this their workd woukd become richer for it.
Haha thanks, Christine. Really glad you enjoyed it and thank you for taking the time to write
The first film of yours that I've seen, but will watch more, for sure. Excellent
Thanks, Raja. Really appreciate you taking the time to check it out.
Very enjoyable.
The actors had real personality
and a connection as the flow
of the scenes moved along.
Seemed very real to life.
I think there's some
real talent here!
Yes, obviously I enjoyed the
interaction of the two actors.
Too bad this is just a beginning.
I look forward to more,
if possible.
This really had some charm!
+ Durasaxon + ✝️
Thanks, Durasaxon, much appreciated for taking the time to watch and write 🙏
Wonderful and engaging short film. I fell in love with the characters who were beautifully acted - very genuine. I would love to see more of the story unfold in future shorts perhaps?
Hey there, thanks for watching. The hope is to continue developing the characters into a full length feature script, which I'm currently working on. Stay tuned for the future and fingers crossed we get some luck and can make it once I'm done writing 🤞
Somehow this kinda reminds me of my late great grandma who was my best friend. Loved it 🥰
Hey Albert, thanks for taking the time to write, and I'm sorry to hear of your grandma's passing. Makes me happy to know you felt a connection to her through this story. Wishing you all the best, man
Great story man, really a breath of fresh air, very heartfet.
Thank you, Faund, really glad you enjoyed it.
awesome movie Jake, wish there was more friendships built up like this one ... would mend a lot of lonely hearts! Kudos
thanks very much for taking the time to watch and write, mindfuldistractions. just read this excerpt somewhere a few days ago about how the most important thing in our lives are the relationships we form with others. that’s what matters most while we’re living and when we look back on our own life. seems pretty accurate to me as I think on it
@@jakeebright1041 you are so right about that Jake!
Wow! Such a great short film! I loved these 2 characters and how the relationship developed. Well acted and produced. Hope we can see more of these 2 characters. Stay safe! Mark
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Hey Mark, thanks for taking the time to write, man. Hope to complete their story sometime in the future. Fingers crossed and God willing 🙏🤞😁
@@jakeebright1041 I can only imagine how much time and effort goes into producing these short films, and I’m glad you were recognized via the awards you’ve received. It’s well deserved. 👍🏻 I subscribed to your channel so I can be notified if you post more of your work.
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This is a great movie and pleasant to watch. No profanity. The characters are really decent and good hearted people.
thanks, @LNCMD2023, really glad you enjoyed it. And agreed, I really dig Ann’s character haha
You are extremely talented Jake. I really enjoyed your film. Thank you to you and your crew and of course your costar. She is a delight.
thank you, Michelle. I very much appreciate the kind words and you’re taking the time to watch our movie. I let Kris know you enjoyed her performance as well 😁
17:07 ‘Same as most things I guess… It just sort of happened’
- reminds me of the famous John Lennon quotation ‘Life is what happens while you are busy making other plans’…
I always liked that line too haha. It’s kind of a weird process hearing things you’ve written said on screen-it feels almost like they take on a life of their own, like they’re not not even quite your words anymore, as if you’ve surrendered ownership of them when they’re released out into the world.
@@jakeebright1041 Yeah, I know. Feel the same about my plays. It is the challenge as well of the beauty of writing.
Ohhh, what a beautiful video!!!! Thank you and congratulations from Argentina.
Thank you, Ivan. I love Argentina. Lived there for a while in Buenos Aires and stayed with an awesome family. Beautiful country.
@@jakeebright1041 Ehhh, ¡que bonito ché! You are welcome back. A hug. Where can I follow your work?
My Instagram would be a good spot. I'm always posting new updates and progresses there. IG: jebright45 🙏
Oh, I loved it!!!
👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼
Great acting, beautiful story!
Thank you so much, MK3, really happy you enjoyed it
@@jakeebright1041
You’re more than welcome Jake!
It was beautiful!
Brilliant, entertaining, amusing, thought-provoking. Well done!
Thank you, Greg. Very much appreciate your time in watching and writing
Wow! Great short! You are one talented being: acting, writing, directing, producing, musician and God knows what else. Good on you! Wish you the best.
Haha thanks, Helene. Much appreciate the kind words. Glad you enjoyed it 🙂
Just delight and heartwarming !! Congrats for a great job.
Much obliged, Heraldo. Very much appreciate you taking the time to watch and write.
Can someone explain why I enjoyed every second of this film?
Haha thanks, Glen, glad you enjoyed it. Feel free to share with anyone you think might like it, too 😁
Very cool ! much talent and creativity shown in this film; from sound track to story line..
and yes, We are All Actors. -- each playing many parts and have our entrances and exits..,
Thanks for the kind words, figinformer
This is such a touching short film. She's beautiful when she smiles with that warm smile and his eyes . . . dio mio! I'm an old singer and still singing well. Keep up the creativity, but what was the book about?
Thanks for the kind words, Richard. Glad you enjoyed the film. The book is just meant to connect the two of them; however, I'm intending on going more into that in the feature script. I'm also meaning to change up the book to be something more significant to the two of them. In the short, it was just a screenwriting book, but in the feature I'm thinking I'd like it to be The Alchemist, which is about following one's dreams and following your destiny.
@@jakeebright1041 thanks for responding and good luck!
Mr. Ebright, your film is à propos for showcasing a friendship between two people who are four or more decades apart in age! I was born in '64, and my friends range from born in '02 at the youngest to '22 at the oldest (yes: 1922). Other friends tell me I would be a great comedic actor, so please let me know if you need a male actor my age to add to your project of a full-length version of this wonderful film!
Hi Ralph, thanks for watching and taking the time to write. And wow, 1922--that's wild haha. I will keep you in mind for sure. Wishing you all the best, man 🙂
Very good Jake! Keep up with new adventures and inspirations! Cheers!
Thanks, John, will do, man. Thanks for giving it a watch and taking the time to write.
The interest grows with these two characters….Hey Jake,you need to go further with a chapter 2. Both well acted and give off a unicorn magic which draws you in wanting more with their friendship. That’s to you both. 👏👏👍👍❤️❤️🙏🙏
Hey @rsrfm24, thanks very much for watching and for taking the time to share such kind words. Really glad you enjoyed it. That there was some magic there is music to my ears haha. That’s what I love most about books and movies, that they capture your imagination and deliver a little bit of magic and beauty.
Loved this movie! It made me feel good!
haha thanks, Brian. That’s awesome to hear. Good thing, too, cause the world could definitely use a little more of that.
Heart-warming and enjoyable!
Thanks, Chris!
Fantastic acting. Lovely characters. Thanks for posting. Foster Lee
Thanks, Foster Lee, it's my pleasure. It really makes me happy to share something I've worked on like this so that other people can interact with it and feel some connection to it--and hopefully be affected in a positive way
Gracious from India. Incredible treatment of contemporary problem with a graceful classy touch. i have seen and feel so many things together in this movie, wonderful. Please keep working and be blessed all ways.
i leave writing capital i few years back. Please don't mind. Thank you.
Thanks so much for watching and taking the time to write, Shivaji 🙂
Waiting for part two!
Thanks for giving it a watch, Dan ✌
This film was great. Ms Russell was such a delight to watch and you were so believable.
Thanks, Jack, very much appreciate you taking the time to watch and to write. Hope you have a merry Christmas and happy holidays on the way here
Beautiful story.
Thank, you, Tamara 🙂
This was lovely!! And Ann was so naturally funny ❤
haha she sure is, thank you and thank you for watching and writing
Jake you are very talented!!
haha thank you, @farokhnaegamvala1707. Appreciate you taking the time to stop by and write
Eight comments before mine..... all are excellent comments. You seem to be a beautiful young man Jake. The "geriatric" lady was wonderful. I'm 72, so I guess I fit into that category now....ha.
Thank you, Ron. I really appreciate it. And she sure was--she "loved" that line as well haha
You were both wonderful in this, and I would love to see it as a movie. 😊❤
Thank you, Darby, really appreciate you taking the time to watch 🙂
This was a great short. Now I need to see the whole movie. Get busy making it . Please...
Haha thank you, Bob. I'm working on it. If I keep up the work and can get struck by a little bit of lucky lightning, we just might be able to make it into a full movie. We shall see haha. Stay tuned :)
I've never connected with two characters as much as this in 20 minutes. Thank you . What a piece of work you gave us.
Great story/film
thank you, Richard 🙏
Beautiful work 👏🏿👏🏿👏🏿
Thank you 🙏
Very enjoyable.... reminds me of my mind teens when I did yard work for elderly women and they would treat me very well
Thank you, James 🙂
Thank you. Great short story.
Hi Lawrence, thanks so much for taking the time to watch and to write. I really appreciate your kind words.
I loved it. I want more!!❤
thanks, Bowiespace. Glad you enjoyed it. feel free to share with anyone you think might like it, too 🙂
Wonderful acting, filming and genuineness in the story and characters.
thanks, @SusannahPerri. glad you enjoyed the story and really appreciate you having taken the time to write.
Jake, I enjoyed watching your film a second time! It's now one of my very favorite films! It's so touching and a lot of fun! I love both of your characters! You are great together! Are you familiar with the channel, "Omeleto?" It's short films, and it would help more people have the opportunity to see your film! ❤
Thanks for watching and taking the time to write, poppylove. That’s super cool to hear that it’s one of your favorite films. Also, no, I don’t believe I am familiar with omeleto at the moment. Does one just reach out and see if they will add your short to their channel?
Such a beautiful masterpiece and a feel good short flim❤️
Thank you for watching and taking the time to write 🙂
What a great story! 👏👏👏
Thanks for watching, Geraldine 🙂
I think there needs to be a part 2, really enjoyed this!
Thanks @acer4237, working on it. Submitted first draft of the feature to the Academy Nicholl Fellowship this year. Still got work to do but really believe in the story, so hopefully we can get a little Good Will Hunting type action sometime in the future. Whatever the odds, a man can dream haha
After a second watch after 6 months this video is still heartwarming ❤
Thanks for coming back for a second watch, @anjetka_2910, and for taking the time to write as well. Very appreciative of you and glad you still enjoyed it haha
Really liked the typewriter/piano.
thanks, flyspeckcafe. Really appreciate you taking the time to watch and write 🙏
@@jakeebright1041 Yessir
Great story and totally relatable.
Thank you, Paula. Really appreciate you watching and taking the time to write
Left me wanting...MORE!!!
Haha thanks, Shawn. Working on that, stay tuned 🤞😁
@@jakeebright1041 Laurel, Md here!
@@sean4661 Huzzah, another Marylander!! haha
brilliant, thanks to all envolved :-)
thanks for watching @fionntainmacb and very happy you enjoyed it 🤘🤘
Great job. So much better than the usual garbage designed to try and interest everyone. Thanks!
Thanks, Roy, much obliged, man. Appreciate you taking the time to watch and to write and glad you enjoyed it.
What a gem! Both of you were spectacular, I couldn't take my eyes off you. Please please please make a sequel!;)
Thanks, @Milisenta777 haha. Glad you enjoyed it and rest assured, I'm working on it 😁 Hopefully in the next few years we'll be able to do it, we shall see.
@@jakeebright1041 We're counting on you;))) Seriously, though, there's such an adorable chemistry between the two of you!