Imma be completely honest but sometimes honesty is the best policy, it sounds like your just reading a script I don’t know ur intention for how u want ur verse to go but if ur going for just standard rapping you might wanna put a bit more energy into it but I can’t rap or sing so I can’t judge at the end of the day just my opinion take it as u may
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It does sound like you're just reading from a script, not sure if that's intentional or not but there is no energy there.
Imma be completely honest but sometimes honesty is the best policy, it sounds like your just reading a script I don’t know ur intention for how u want ur verse to go but if ur going for just standard rapping you might wanna put a bit more energy into it but I can’t rap or sing so I can’t judge at the end of the day just my opinion take it as u may
Nah bro it's great
It's not easy doing it and putting yourself in the public eye like that