Analysis of 'Young and Dyslexic?' by Benjamin Zephaniah

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    Analysis of 'Young and Dyslexic?" in preparation for the Edexcel IGCSE English Language exam

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  • @FinnMoan-f2w
    @FinnMoan-f2w ปีที่แล้ว +7

    Hello Miss Rumsey - English mock tomorrow and a little bit of extra revision last minute never hurts. You've been my go-to for the last 4-5 weeks, so thanks for helping me out!

    • @mrsrumsey
      @mrsrumsey  ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Good luck!

    • @thedancingschoolboy2128
      @thedancingschoolboy2128 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@mrsrumsey what does allusion mean under dyslexia is not a measure of inelegance

  • @matthewrodrigo336
    @matthewrodrigo336 ปีที่แล้ว +25

    uhm idk why but is 6:48 cut??

    • @mahaining4540
      @mahaining4540 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Yeah, same situation here.

  • @amadif1793
    @amadif1793 ปีที่แล้ว +25

    Rest in peace Benjamin Zephaniah 🙏

    • @AA-me4yv
      @AA-me4yv ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Wait for real😭

  • @Redrum9128
    @Redrum9128 5 ปีที่แล้ว +55

    about to have my exam in 20 hope all the best for me boys

    • @Hasnain.
      @Hasnain. 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      how did you do?

    • @ArqamSilat
      @ArqamSilat 4 หลายเดือนก่อน

      @@Hasnain. how did u do

  • @benefc
    @benefc 5 ปีที่แล้ว +94

    Like to pass

  • @nim.t955
    @nim.t955 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    Good luck for tomorrow everyone!

  • @anaiskersh4722
    @anaiskersh4722 6 ปีที่แล้ว +44

    these are so good please do more on the other anthologys/poems!!!

    • @mrsrumsey
      @mrsrumsey  6 ปีที่แล้ว +12

      Thanks! I plan to have all of the poetry section uploaded by the end of next week and then I’ll move into another section.

    • @pudthailee
      @pudthailee 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      Yes

  • @bentaylorr
    @bentaylorr 5 ปีที่แล้ว +146

    Lmao I have a mock tomorrow and havent revised a bit, howdy partner

    • @bentaylorr
      @bentaylorr 4 ปีที่แล้ว +5

      @Brodie Williams watched these videos religiously and then didnt do my gcses 🤣🤣

    • @roz2692
      @roz2692 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      AHHHHHH same pray for me 😭

    • @antoan1186
      @antoan1186 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Hello brother, same happening here just now haha

    • @muhammadishaqalblushi3054
      @muhammadishaqalblushi3054 4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Can u help me in the test ?

    • @jonathanmarais8304
      @jonathanmarais8304 3 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      lol a mock smh try the real ones

  • @mornarie
    @mornarie 4 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    She is very clear and i understood every detail thank you Mrs . Rumsey

  • @notmadeleine2637
    @notmadeleine2637 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +9

    ig the day after tomorrow there’s literally no hope for me anymore

  • @liv_son
    @liv_son 9 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    got my mocks tomorrow so i’m speeding through these videos

    • @mrsrumsey
      @mrsrumsey  9 หลายเดือนก่อน +1

      Good luck!

  • @Mia-ry7ul
    @Mia-ry7ul 2 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    Hi Miss R! thank you so so so much for your videos they have been tremendously helpful as I have just changed from the Spanish education system back into the English one your videos have helped me pass all my English exams.

    • @mrsrumsey
      @mrsrumsey  2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Great to hear you’ve found them useful! Congratulations!

  • @josephcosta8831
    @josephcosta8831 5 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    These lessons are really helpful and stimulating. Please create lessons for all the anthology texts as well.

    • @mrsrumsey
      @mrsrumsey  5 ปีที่แล้ว

      Part 2 will be uploaded by end of October. Glad they’re useful!

  • @BuilderLemon
    @BuilderLemon 6 ปีที่แล้ว +7

    At 6:57 the audio got cut and you kind of skipped a paragraph...

    • @mrsrumsey
      @mrsrumsey  6 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      BuilderLemon oh dear! I will review once I’m back from travelling and see if I can fix it. Thanks for letting me know!

    • @flowerpetals5455
      @flowerpetals5455 6 ปีที่แล้ว +9

      It is still the same... Long travelling huh...

    • @cubisticdog6646
      @cubisticdog6646 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      lmao @@flowerpetals5455

    • @George-hr4ro
      @George-hr4ro 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@flowerpetals5455 my g

    • @amalpereralk
      @amalpereralk ปีที่แล้ว

      ​@@flowerpetals5455 4 years later it's still the same... 😂

  • @DemonXWasTaken
    @DemonXWasTaken ปีที่แล้ว

    Excuse me miss rumsey, i have found a problem with ur video, at 6:52 or somewhere there the video cuts, another question i have is what is a temporal marker pls help my exam is tmrw regards coolgamer

  • @ISRA-k3c
    @ISRA-k3c หลายเดือนก่อน +1

    omgg thank you so much❤❤

  • @CarLoverSafwan
    @CarLoverSafwan 20 วันที่ผ่านมา +1

    I hav test tmrw and learned everythin', Just for clear explanation; I watchin' it🏎️💨💨

    • @mrsrumsey
      @mrsrumsey  20 วันที่ผ่านมา

      Good luck!

    • @CarLoverSafwan
      @CarLoverSafwan 20 วันที่ผ่านมา

      @mrsrumsey thanks and don't forget to comment here on 21/01/2025 ok?

  • @ridasheikh8080
    @ridasheikh8080 2 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    Is “A high percentage of the prison population are dyslexic, and a high percentage of the architect population.” also a parallel structured sentence?

    • @mgaesthetic
      @mgaesthetic 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      I would say it is, because it shows the two different possibilities dyslexic people can end up in.

    • @zeenaabdalla1328
      @zeenaabdalla1328 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      no, a parallel structure would be 'A high percentage of the prison population are dyslexic; a high percentage of the architect population are dyslexic.' BUT it is an interesting sentences to talk about in terms of contrasting images. does that help?

    • @ridasheikh8080
      @ridasheikh8080 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@zeenaabdalla1328 yes! Thank you

  • @inesgoodwin5467
    @inesgoodwin5467 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    this video saved me bc this text dropped in my IGCSEs (January 2022) thank you!!

    • @Leon-nc3xk
      @Leon-nc3xk 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      did you do edexcel? and the non R paper?

    • @serenity7637
      @serenity7637 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      fr?

    • @inesgoodwin5467
      @inesgoodwin5467 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@Leon-nc3xk yes i did

  • @amalh2578
    @amalh2578 6 ปีที่แล้ว +14

    thank you! this was really good!! could you please do one on 'explorers or boys messing about?' im having some trouble with that one

    • @mrsrumsey
      @mrsrumsey  6 ปีที่แล้ว

      Happy to help! This video will be uploaded by the end of Feb.
      Ms. R

  • @goirapidtv
    @goirapidtv 5 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    do you have any predictions for what text might come up, please inform us

    • @mrsrumsey
      @mrsrumsey  5 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Sorry! I hate to guess! The reality is that it could be any of the texts. My advice is always not to take any chances.

  • @tsunades106s
    @tsunades106s 2 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    thanks this helped me write my assignment and helped me identify different language techniques

  • @allahisgreatest122
    @allahisgreatest122 8 หลายเดือนก่อน +2

    Got my test in 8 minutes wish me luck 😭😭😭

  • @anaiskersh4722
    @anaiskersh4722 6 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    do h is for hawk plsss

    • @mrsrumsey
      @mrsrumsey  6 ปีที่แล้ว +2

      Hi IzzyandEm,
      I’m currently working my way through the anthology. ‘H is for Hawk’ should be uploaded within the next two months. I suggest, if you haven’t already, that you subscribe so you are notified when I upload the video.
      Ms. R

    • @anaiskersh4722
      @anaiskersh4722 6 ปีที่แล้ว +4

      thank you, loving the new content!@@mrsrumsey

  • @farisbtw8579
    @farisbtw8579 2 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    i love this video so much i watched it on repeat for 16.5 hours

  • @FlixRacing
    @FlixRacing ปีที่แล้ว

    THANK YOU!

  • @charukarasinduekanayaka8730
    @charukarasinduekanayaka8730 5 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    is "young and dyslexic?" an rhethorical qustion?

  • @cookieswift136
    @cookieswift136 4 ปีที่แล้ว +13

    do i need an operation 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 i would laugh so hard if this come on exam 🤣

    • @vintageipadfanaccount6254
      @vintageipadfanaccount6254 4 ปีที่แล้ว +7

      Same I got this on my exam and died laughing LOL they cancelled my exam but the lols were worth it!

  • @berrotlist
    @berrotlist 6 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    can you analysis about explorers or boys messing about by steven morris

    • @mrsrumsey
      @mrsrumsey  6 ปีที่แล้ว

      Hi Critical Games,
      These will be uploaded by the end of January. I advise, if you haven't already, subscribing and clicking the bell symbol so that you'll be notified once I upload them.
      Ms. R

  • @archiegoddard3372
    @archiegoddard3372 2 ปีที่แล้ว

    better than my English teacher

    • @rody3711
      @rody3711 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Mrs R is clear

  • @quesadylanhd7303
    @quesadylanhd7303 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    When he talks about Chinese being a pictorial language is that Logo's?

    • @quesadylanhd7303
      @quesadylanhd7303 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      Logos*

    • @quesadylanhd7303
      @quesadylanhd7303 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      Logos

    • @mrsrumsey
      @mrsrumsey  5 ปีที่แล้ว

      Yes, since Chinese has symbols rather than Roman script (such as English).

  • @Maxibgolf
    @Maxibgolf ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Am I the only one who has written model 12 markers for each poem?

    • @ivy_swiftie13
      @ivy_swiftie13 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      could you share? My exam is in 3 days

  • @jadeadekugbe236
    @jadeadekugbe236 6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    what do u mean by language of academia

    • @mrsrumsey
      @mrsrumsey  6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Hi Jade,
      Words that relate to the world of academia such as "University" and "professor" help emphasize the academic abilities of one with dyslexia. Considering Zephaniah's unsuccessful experience in school, it is particularly impressive to learn that he has a career in academia. This gives hope to those with dyslexia that the academic world, such as university, is not off-limits.
      I hope this helps!
      Ms. R

    • @jadeadekugbe236
      @jadeadekugbe236 6 ปีที่แล้ว

      Tysm!

  • @sabilashanganeshan224
    @sabilashanganeshan224 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    a doubt why we say it is a language of academia?

  • @MerC_prodxy
    @MerC_prodxy 4 ปีที่แล้ว +6

    ah Ms.Rumsey i have to 2 thigs to add here first
    We could add that the writer had added time expression "when i was 11 or 13,21"to add more realisticity to the text.
    The second is that the writer juxtaposes the main possibility of being dyslexic the writer actually said that"we are the architects,we are the designers" but really the writer became a poet,novelist so that tgis highlights the choices he made and would encourage other young and dyslexic poeple to follow your passion or your dream . Could u tell if this two points are correct or is there something more to addd here because i have 6 hrs and 43 mins from now? anyway thank u for helping me with the texts it really means a lot.

  • @sarahj7723
    @sarahj7723 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    THANK YOUUUU DO MORE PLEASE

  • @fatherpucciofficial
    @fatherpucciofficial ปีที่แล้ว

    Watching in the bus i didnt have time to revise 😢

  • @chrlttchpmn
    @chrlttchpmn 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    You are a life saver !

  • @maithaalhammadi8575
    @maithaalhammadi8575 6 ปีที่แล้ว +5

    can you analyse the game of polo passage? please its important

    • @mrsrumsey
      @mrsrumsey  6 ปีที่แล้ว

      This will be uploaded over the next few weeks. Make sure you have hit the notification button so you know when it’s up!
      Ms. R

    • @maithaalhammadi8575
      @maithaalhammadi8575 6 ปีที่แล้ว

      aw, thank you but I am already having my essay tmrw :(
      @@mrsrumsey

  • @flowerpetals5455
    @flowerpetals5455 6 ปีที่แล้ว +4

    I just love it❣
    Would you please make an analysis of "Night" by Alice Munro? Please?

    • @mrsrumsey
      @mrsrumsey  6 ปีที่แล้ว

      Thanks for the feedback! I do plan to upload Part 2 of the Anthology, but this will not be for another few months.

    • @flowerpetals5455
      @flowerpetals5455 6 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@mrsrumsey thanks for your reply and attention... I hope that you will be able to upload Part 2 of Anthology soon... At least before next year's IGCSE examination...
      ☺🙂

    • @pudthailee
      @pudthailee 5 ปีที่แล้ว

      Sure

    • @susmitaseshicha903
      @susmitaseshicha903 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@flowerpetals5455 Thanks for your reply and attention... I hope that you will be able to upload part 2 of anthology soon... At least before next year's IGCSE examination...
      ☺🙂

    • @susmitaseshicha903
      @susmitaseshicha903 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@pudthailee Sure

  • @Lizzopatel
    @Lizzopatel 6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    what do you mean by allusion, an allusion of what?
    thanks x

    • @mrsrumsey
      @mrsrumsey  6 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Hi Liyah,
      If I remember correctly, I would have been referring to the quote: “The past is a different kind of country”. This is an allusion to the first sentence of the classic British 1930s novel “The Go Between”. You could argue that the literary allusion highlights how well-read Zephaniah is - something that would contrast with the expectations of his teachers at the time.
      I hope this helps!

  • @ilavanji6747
    @ilavanji6747 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    bruh i think this shi gon come up for tmrw

  • @absorbingart955
    @absorbingart955 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    verryyy goood

  • @petergilbert-allen9886
    @petergilbert-allen9886 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    edexcel gang hypepepepepe

  • @sabadaqqa9662
    @sabadaqqa9662 11 หลายเดือนก่อน

    mock in a few hours

    • @mrsrumsey
      @mrsrumsey  11 หลายเดือนก่อน

      Hope it went well!

  • @theultimateamazing3722
    @theultimateamazing3722 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    thank you so much

  • @jackbosher8711
    @jackbosher8711 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    hero

  • @ilavanji6747
    @ilavanji6747 4 ปีที่แล้ว +3

    whos writing theirbexams tmrw wohooo

    • @itssuhforyou
      @itssuhforyou 3 ปีที่แล้ว

      What came in your exam???

  • @onellikarunaratne7523
    @onellikarunaratne7523 3 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you so so much for thiss !! So helpful :))

  • @islathornicroft6538
    @islathornicroft6538 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    So helpful thank you!!

  • @sammullins1159
    @sammullins1159 3 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    This is so much fun

  • @ilavanji6747
    @ilavanji6747 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    2020 november exams wya

  • @crotar9375
    @crotar9375 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Negative crescendo tricolon

  • @hannielholness6134
    @hannielholness6134 4 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Thank you - this was *really* useful! Can you please explain what you meant by 'imperative verbs' I found it hard to find in the text.

    • @mrsrumsey
      @mrsrumsey  4 ปีที่แล้ว

      Glad you found the video helpful! Off the top of my head (it’s been a while since I did this video!), I believe I’m referring to line 79: “don’t be heavy on yourself”. The imperative “don’t”, although sounds forceful, is really Zephaniah being encouraging.

  • @zainyare7051
    @zainyare7051 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    meaning of juxtaposition

    • @mrsrumsey
      @mrsrumsey  6 ปีที่แล้ว +3

      Juxtaposition is the placement of two things next to each other for a contrasting effect.

    • @zainyare7051
      @zainyare7051 6 ปีที่แล้ว

      @@mrsrumsey thanks alot💯💯👍👍👍

  • @aminahassan2935
    @aminahassan2935 5 ปีที่แล้ว

    Thank u mrs Rumsey.....

  • @walidaboukarroum3701
    @walidaboukarroum3701 4 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    i had 10 adds ngl

  • @KianLalani1
    @KianLalani1 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    My G

  • @user-qn1en5ys2m
    @user-qn1en5ys2m 5 ปีที่แล้ว +2

    thank you!

  • @noorehab8273
    @noorehab8273 4 ปีที่แล้ว

    but wouldn't saying "i didn't stab anybody" also shows sarcasm?

    • @txm40
      @txm40 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      🙉

    • @noorehab8273
      @noorehab8273 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      Hmm

    • @txm40
      @txm40 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      @@noorehab8273 bros been waiting a year for a response

    • @noorehab8273
      @noorehab8273 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Lol

    • @noorehab8273
      @noorehab8273 2 ปีที่แล้ว

      Lmao come to think about it that statement was dumb
      I was soo half dead on the exam about it I somehow got a decent mark

  • @alattar8115
    @alattar8115 6 ปีที่แล้ว

    Dear Ms. R Greetings Please can you do the Necklace Anthology? Thank you

  • @terminateddreamer4396
    @terminateddreamer4396 5 หลายเดือนก่อน

    boutta get cooked by this exam

  • @__deen__1
    @__deen__1 5 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Stop commenting and start learning

    • @txm40
      @txm40 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

      sir yes sir 🥵

    • @mya.tatum.
      @mya.tatum. 8 หลายเดือนก่อน

      ironic

  • @ttvitzpol0893
    @ttvitzpol0893 2 ปีที่แล้ว +1

    Sick video keep up the grind. Can you give me some vbucks tho?

  • @thedancingschoolboy2128
    @thedancingschoolboy2128 10 หลายเดือนก่อน

    What does allusion mean @mrsrumsy