"What makes people hyped, is seeing other people hype." So on point. This is called "herd behaviour" which could be utilised effectively in marketing pretty much anything.
I have a tendency to think of my characters in vine scenarios. When I would watch vines, I would think "Who would be in their places?" And I get really hyped from that. I'm so old school with that, but I just think it's so fun. 😆
Pinterest made me get Throne of Glass because all the beautiful fanarts of the characters kept popping up, and then I just kept seeing people rave and now I’m reading it! Art is definitely huge. There were a lot of photos of just a page in the book they loved and that was fun to get a quick glimpse at the writing and a character even if I didn’t know who they were.
WHOA I do draw my own characters BECAUSE I LOVE THEM I AM THEIR NUMBER 1 FAN FR FR 😭 i thought it was weird how the author obsessed with their own works! I draw them like a "fanart" lol 😭 and i planned to make a something for it instead making the book 😶😩😭 (but i'm still gonna working on it! Love you Abbie!)
that too could be marketing. I might do a video on how I wrote some really horrible scenes that I definitely didn't want to dive into but were essential to the story,
Hey! I have a quick question-- how do you make different character voices sound different? For example, a proud character, a quiet character, an insecure character, a logical character, etc.
Indie author I follow literally got me to read her book by being the leader of her own fandom. Her enthusiasm got me to buy the book and that worked. Have seen stuff also that has NOT made me buy a book on TikTok-“if you like X trope/genre buy my book!” “Do you like X? Try Y!” 🚫 I can smell the desperation when I see those posts. Just, show me why you loved it enough to write it and geek out about those characters and I’ll potentially read it. ❤
Please please do a more in-depth video on this. I'm starting a social for my book and would love to know how to do so without spoiling the whole thing before it's published🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾
Hey Abbie! I've watched a lot of your videos and also read 100 days of sunlight (read it all day long and though it was my first contemporary, it was quite amazing. Also read Best Christmas ever (Tessa and Weston) during Christmas vacation, coz why not. And super thrilled by the trailer of the other world, so will read that too. I write too and I'm stuck at a scene which is very crucial, where many characters meet and have their first conversation. Well it would've been easier if they were all strangers and I had one pov. But I have more than one pov in this case and some are familiar to one another, ina way that okay okay frndship, some share frenemy bonding and some are total strangers They all grouped up to meet at one place,say in a market or spent a whole day at a trip (it's a fantasy story btw) So I would genuinely appreciate if I could get some help on first conversation with all such flavours added into it. What I am really focussing here on is fleshing out their personality with each line of dialogue or act that they do. I'm stuck coz in this one or two scenes, I have to do plenty of things like showing world building, new characters and pov (first time switching into another pov) and also flesh out distinctly their personalities and relations with one another and how this affects my other main pov. You see how it's complex. Well I love complex stories and I just need help to excel it. Plus my main focus and the other reason why I'm stuck in such a complex scene is the switching up pov (2nd pov) is a comedic relief character And I don't know which books will be helpful or which type or comedy I want him to be, but he also has a hidden pain that he's keeping a secret from everyone. It would be great if I get a video guidance or some guide book recommendation. Overall sorry foe the lengthy explanation and I would be glad if you would ever read or reply to my message but thanks in advance to anyone who reads and helps.
Hey Abbie! Can I ask you a question? What do I do if I have a story Idea I am confident in but when I finish my first draft/manuscript I end up despising it? How can I feel confident in my work again? How can I change my writing in a positive ways?
It's not uncommon to feel disappointed or dissatisfied with your work after the first draft. However, it's important to remember that writing is a process, and initial drafts are meant to be imperfect. Here are some simple steps to help you regain confidence in your work and make positive changes: Take a break: Step away from your draft for a little while. Give yourself some distance from it so that you can approach it with fresh eyes and a clearer perspective. Taking a break can help you detach from the initial disappointment and gain a more objective view of your work. Identify what's not working: Go through your draft and pinpoint the aspects that are causing your dissatisfaction. Is it the plot, the characters, the pacing, or the overall structure? Identifying specific areas of improvement will help you focus your efforts on making targeted changes. Seek feedback: Share your work with trusted friends, writing groups, or beta readers. Getting constructive feedback from others can provide valuable insights and perspectives. Consider their suggestions and viewpoints, but remember that ultimately, you have the final say in what changes to make. Analyze successful examples: Study books or stories in the same genre that you admire. Examine what makes them successful and analyze how they handle elements similar to the ones you're struggling with. This can inspire new ideas and approaches to improve your own writing. Make a revision plan: Once you have a clear understanding of the areas that need improvement, create a revision plan. Break down the changes into manageable tasks and set specific goals for each. This will give you a structured approach and make the process less overwhelming. Revise with intention: When making changes, focus on strengthening the weak areas while preserving the elements that work well. Be open to rewriting, restructuring, or even discarding parts that aren't serving the story. Stay connected to the core of your story and ensure that each revision aligns with your vision. Embrace the iterative process: Understand that writing is an iterative process, and it often takes multiple drafts to refine and polish your work. Embrace the opportunity to grow and improve with each revision. Remember that even experienced writers go through this process to create their best work. Celebrate progress: Acknowledge and celebrate the positive changes you make along the way. Recognize that every step forward is an accomplishment and brings you closer to achieving your vision for the story. By approaching your work with a fresh perspective, seeking feedback, and making targeted revisions, you can transform your draft into a stronger and more satisfying piece of writing. Trust in your ability to improve, embrace the process, and remember that confidence in your work often comes from perseverance and dedication. Hope that helps??? 😉💫
I am probably my worst fan. The points I find importants, others don't care about while others find parts important I don't find as interesting. Why my blurbs suck no matter how many times I rewrite them.
Stan Lee said he wrote stories he enjoyed. He explained I'm just a regular guy & If I make adventures I enjoy hopefully others will as well.... Trust yourself I'm sure it's good!
How do I write a book with a single protagonist, and no consistent side characters? I know it can be done (e.g. Hatchet), but I don't know how. Can any of y'all commenters help me with this?
I think the best way to do this is to make the book character-focused. Give the main character flaws, a misbelief (Abbie discusses this often) that they work through throughout the book. The scenes should all develop the character, if only by a small amount. Alternatively, you could make the book very action-packed and plot heavy, but that is difficult to pull off without seeming boring and/or baseless. Ultimately, the story is about the characters. What makes them special, and what makes their story... well, theirs? Hope this helped :)
Hey Abbie! I've watched a lot of your videos and also read 100 days of sunlight (read it all day long and though it was my first contemporary, it was quite amazing. Also read Best Christmas ever (Tessa and Weston) during Christmas vacation, coz why not. And super thrilled by the trailer of the other world, so will read that too. I write too , fantasy debut series is my wip and I'm stuck at a scene which is very crucial, where many characters meet and have their first conversation. Well it would've been easier if they were all strangers and I had one pov. Its none of those cases. I have more than one pov in this case and some are familiar to one another, in a way that they share okay okay frndship, some share frenemy bonding and some are total strangers They all grouped up to meet at one place,say in a market and later to spent a whole day at a trip. So I would genuinely appreciate if I could get me some help on first conversation with all such flavours added into it. What I am really focussing here on is fleshing out their personality with each line of dialogue or act that they do. I'm stuck here since a week , haven't written a word, coz in this one or two scenes, I have to do plenty of things like showing world building, new characters and pov (first time switching into another pov) and also flesh out distinctly their personalities and relations with one another and how this affects my other main pov. You see how it's complex. Well I love complex stories and I just need help to excel it. Plus my main focus and the other reason why I'm stuck in such a complex scene is the switching up pov (2nd pov) is a comedic relief character And I don't know which books will be helpful or which type or comedy I want him to be, but he also has a hidden pain that he's keeping a secret from everyone. (So I don't want him to be doing insult comdey or acting dumb coz he isn't ) It would be great if I get some guide book recommendations and advices from your experience. Overall sorry for the lengthy explanation and I would be glad if you would ever read or reply to my message but thanks in advance to anyone who reads and helps.
Hello, I understand that you are facing a complex challenge with your scene involving multiple points of view and diverse character dynamics. Let me break it down into steps to help you flesh out the personalities, relationships, and comedic relief character effectively: Establish the setting: Begin the scene by describing the market or trip location in a way that reflects the world-building aspects you want to showcase. Use sensory details and vivid descriptions to immerse the readers in the environment. Introduce the characters: As the characters gather, introduce them one by one, highlighting their unique personalities through their appearances, actions, and mannerisms. Consider their body language, speech patterns, and how they interact with the surroundings and other characters. Show distinct relationships: Demonstrate the different types of relationships between characters. For friends, portray their camaraderie through inside jokes, shared memories, or playful banter. For frenemies, showcase a mix of friendly and competitive exchanges, veiled insults, or subtle power dynamics. For strangers, emphasize their initial awkwardness or curiosity towards one another. Dialogue and actions: Use dialogue as a tool to reveal the characters' personalities. Each character should have a distinct voice and way of speaking. Their conversations can reflect their individual traits, such as humor, wit, sarcasm, or warmth. Consider their reactions to jokes or comments made by the comedic relief character and how it affects their interactions. Character dynamics and reactions: Pay attention to how each character responds to the comedic relief character. Some may find their humor endearing and engage in lighthearted banter, while others might be annoyed or dismissive. Show the impact of the comedic relief character's presence on the overall group dynamic, highlighting moments of laughter or tension. Reveal hidden pain: As the scene progresses, gradually reveal glimpses of the comedic relief character's hidden pain. This can be done through subtle hints, introspective moments, or brief glimpses of vulnerability. Balance the comedic aspects with moments of depth and introspection to add complexity to the character. Regarding guidebook recommendations and advice, here are a few suggestions: "The Comic Toolbox: How to Be Funny Even If You're Not" by John Vorhaus: This book offers techniques and insights into the craft of comedy writing, providing tools to create humor in various forms. "The Hidden Tools of Comedy: The Serious Business of Being Funny" by Steve Kaplan: This book delves into the theories and principles behind comedy, exploring different comedic structures and techniques. "Creating Character Arcs: The Masterful Author's Guide to Uniting Story Structure" by K.M. Weiland: This book helps you understand the process of creating compelling character arcs, which can be particularly useful in developing a comedic relief character with hidden pain. Storytelling is a process, and it's natural to face challenges along the way. Embrace the complexity of your scene and use it as an opportunity to showcase your skills as a writer. Keep exploring different resources, experimenting with writing techniques, and trust your instincts as you bring your characters to life. Good luck with your writing journey! Hope that helps???? 😉💫
@@theauthorgodswill thank you so much. For my debut series, a major issue has been about:- I didn't know any rules or techniques for writing when I started thinking and mentally plotting my entire series. And since I started learning side by side, I got to know that there are structures such as 3 act or Hero's journey or others. But the struggle is to fit my story in the ready made mold, if you understand what I mean (mold being the structure) And I've tried to fit it in, aa much as I understood. Again I know one size doesn't fit all, I shouldn't try to do too much of it, but how will I know if my story is interesting, if I deviate from the structure. How should I reverse the process of (having a story and then putting it in the place of the structure for it to make sense), when normally people study the structure and then form story accordingly.
@@37_vanshiDLakhani It's great that you've been learning about different story structures and techniques while developing your debut series. While story structures like the three-act structure or the Hero's Journey can be helpful guides, it's important to remember that they are not rigid rules that every story must adhere to. Here are some suggestions to strike a balance between incorporating a structure and maintaining the unique qualities of your story: Understand the purpose of story structures: Familiarize yourself with various story structures and their underlying principles. Rather than viewing them as strict templates, consider them as tools to understand storytelling patterns and effective narrative techniques. This knowledge will help you make informed decisions about how to structure and present your story. Analyze your story's core elements: Identify the key components of your story, such as the main characters, their goals, conflicts, and the overall narrative arc. Evaluate how these elements align with the principles of different story structures. Look for areas where your story naturally fits into the structure and areas where you may need to make adjustments. Adapt the structure to fit your story: Instead of trying to force your story into a predefined structure, adapt the structure to suit your narrative. Modify or combine elements of different structures to create a framework that enhances your story's flow and impact. This allows you to maintain the uniqueness and authenticity of your story while benefiting from the principles of established structures. Seek feedback from trusted readers or editors: Share your story with beta readers or editors who can provide constructive feedback. Ask them specifically about the pacing, character arcs, and overall coherence of your narrative. Their insights can help you gauge the effectiveness of your story and whether it engages and resonates with readers. Trust your storytelling instincts: Ultimately, trust your instincts as a writer. While it's valuable to learn from established storytelling techniques, remember that creativity and originality often arise from deviating from the norm. If you have a clear vision for your story and believe it's engaging, it's worth exploring and embracing its unique qualities. Iterate and refine: Writing is an iterative process. As you gain more experience and insights, you can revisit and refine your story. Don't be afraid to make changes, adjust the structure, or experiment with different approaches. Allow yourself the freedom to evolve and grow as a writer. While it's beneficial to study story structures, don't feel confined by them. Use them as tools to enhance your storytelling and make your narrative more compelling. Embrace the unique qualities of your story while applying the principles that resonate with your vision. By finding the right balance, you can create an engaging and satisfying reading experience for your audience. Hope that helps????? 😉💫
@@theauthorgodswill thank you for your advice. I'm rewriting as in working on the second draft of my debut series. I changed the storyline after finishing the first draft to a large extend and now it feels to write most of it all over again, so its getting tedious and boring. I don't know how to spark excitement all over again and get done with the story to publish it this year
@@37_vanshiDLakhani Revising and rewriting can indeed be a challenging and sometimes tedious process. Here are a few tips to help you spark excitement and stay motivated as you work on the second draft of your debut series: Remember your vision: Reconnect with the initial inspiration and excitement that led you to write this story in the first place. Remind yourself of the unique aspects that made you fall in love with the concept. Revisiting your original vision can reignite your passion and help you see the bigger picture, making the rewriting process feel more purposeful. Set clear goals: Break down your rewriting process into smaller, manageable tasks and set specific goals for each writing session. This will give you a sense of progress and accomplishment as you complete each task, making the overall process feel less overwhelming. Celebrate these milestones along the way to maintain your motivation. Take breaks and recharge: Writing can be mentally and emotionally draining, especially when you're rewriting a significant portion of your story. Remember to take regular breaks to rest, recharge, and engage in activities that inspire you. Stepping away from your work can actually enhance your creativity and help you approach your story with fresh eyes. Find a support system: Seek out fellow writers, critique partners, or writing groups who can offer support, encouragement, and constructive feedback. Sharing your progress, discussing challenges, and receiving input from others can help you stay motivated and provide valuable insights to improve your work. Experiment and have fun: Use the rewriting process as an opportunity to experiment with new ideas, perspectives, or writing techniques. Explore different possibilities, take risks, and have fun with your story. Sometimes, injecting fresh elements or trying out new approaches can reignite your excitement and bring a renewed energy to your writing. Visualize the finished product: Imagine holding your published book in your hands and think about the impact your story could have on readers. Visualize the sense of accomplishment and fulfillment that comes with completing and sharing your work. Keeping this vision in mind can provide the motivation and drive needed to push through the rewriting process. Stay flexible and open-minded: Allow your story to evolve and be open to unexpected changes and improvements. Embrace the rewriting process as an opportunity to refine your characters, strengthen your plot, and enhance the overall quality of your story. Stay flexible and willing to make necessary adjustments to create the best version of your debut series. Rewriting is an essential part of the writing journey, and it's during this phase that your story truly takes shape and reaches its full potential. Stay committed, trust in your abilities, and approach the process with patience and perseverance. You are one step closer to publishing your story, and with dedication and passion, you will reach your goal. Hope it helps 😉💫
What is the best way to become a writer as a 13 year old. It had always been a dream of mine to write a book. Any tips? Ilysm btw you are amazing!! #askabbie
That's wonderful that you have a dream of becoming a writer at such a young age!Pursuing your passion for writing can be a fulfilling journey. Here are some simple tips to help you embark on your path as a young writer: Read widely and regularly: Reading is a fundamental part of developing your writing skills. Read books, novels, poetry, and articles across different genres and styles. Pay attention to the writing techniques, storytelling, and language used by authors. This will help you expand your vocabulary and gain a better understanding of what makes good writing. Write consistently: Practice writing regularly to improve your skills. Set aside dedicated time each day or week to write creatively. Experiment with different genres, characters, and themes. Don't worry about perfection in your early drafts; focus on expressing your ideas and honing your storytelling abilities. Start a journal or diary: Keeping a journal can be a great way to document your thoughts, experiences, and observations. It allows you to explore your own voice and helps develop your writing style. Use it as a safe space to experiment with different writing techniques and techniques. Seek feedback: Share your writing with trusted friends, family members, or teachers who can provide constructive feedback. Consider joining a writing group or workshop where you can receive guidance and support from fellow writers. Feedback will help you understand your strengths and areas for improvement. Embrace different writing exercises: Engage in writing exercises or prompts to challenge yourself and explore new styles. Experiment with descriptive writing, character development, dialogue, or creating engaging openings. These exercises can expand your creativity and push your boundaries as a writer. Learn grammar and language skills: Pay attention to grammar, punctuation, and sentence structure. Developing a solid foundation in language skills will enhance the clarity and effectiveness of your writing. Explore online resources, books, or take writing courses to improve your understanding of grammar and language usage. Emulate and find your voice: As you develop your skills, it's natural to be influenced by the writing styles of authors you admire. Experiment with emulating their techniques while also working on finding your own unique voice and perspective. Your voice will emerge as you gain more experience and confidence in your writing. Stay curious and observe the world: Cultivate a sense of curiosity about the world around you. Observe people, places, and situations, and draw inspiration from them. Ask questions, explore different perspectives, and use these observations to infuse depth and authenticity into your writing. Edit and revise: Remember that writing is a process. After completing a draft, review, edit, and revise your work. Pay attention to clarity, coherence, and tightening your prose. Don't be afraid to make changes or seek feedback during this stage. Enjoy the journey: Writing is a creative outlet, so enjoy the process of exploring your imagination and storytelling abilities. Embrace the ups and downs, the challenges, and the moments of inspiration that come with being a writer. The more you write, the more you'll grow as a writer. Remember, becoming a skilled writer takes time, patience, and practice. Keep writing, stay passionate, and believe in your abilities. Writing is a lifelong journey, so embrace the joy of storytelling and the power of words. Hope that helps??? 😉💫
how can you promote your book anonymously? I don't have a social media and my novel is based on characters some friends already know (we play dnd) but im to shy about letting the people know I'm writing something
You should simply start at the beginning of the book. But where is that? In every story there’s a moment where the plot really starts. A meet cute in romance, for example. Or the murder of the main characters friend in a mystery. Figure out what that moment is, then take the reader back just a little bit. Let’s say the meet cute is at a coffee shop before work, show us the characters ordinary morning before the meet cute. Show us their life and who they are. Then, push them in a totally different direction. Or in the mystery you can show us the characters interacting, and show us why we care about this death I also recommend outlining. It doesn’t need to be super detailed, just some basic bullet points is fine
If u have the idea just sit down and begin. Few adventures start at the beginning. Throw readers into the action to hook them. Go back later to give more insight after u already have them interested. GST
Hi, Just to let you know that you don’t have to start at the beginning of the book. I sometimes work backward or out of order. Remember the first draft will most likely change. And sometimes you find the beginning you thought will end up being different. The important thing is to start and remember that it is a process that is always evolving.
"What makes people hyped, is seeing other people hype." So on point. This is called "herd behaviour" which could be utilised effectively in marketing pretty much anything.
Also seeing someone excited about something they make shows how much work they must’ve put into it and how much they loved to write it.
I already do #1, to a fault. I keep making “fanart” instead of actually working on the book.
I have a tendency to think of my characters in vine scenarios. When I would watch vines, I would think "Who would be in their places?" And I get really hyped from that. I'm so old school with that, but I just think it's so fun. 😆
@@RoseCadenza WTH relatble!! Also like memes and alignment charts memes
Same 😂 oops
Same!
Pinterest made me get Throne of Glass because all the beautiful fanarts of the characters kept popping up, and then I just kept seeing people rave and now I’m reading it! Art is definitely huge. There were a lot of photos of just a page in the book they loved and that was fun to get a quick glimpse at the writing and a character even if I didn’t know who they were.
WHOA I do draw my own characters BECAUSE I LOVE THEM I AM THEIR NUMBER 1 FAN FR FR 😭 i thought it was weird how the author obsessed with their own works! I draw them like a "fanart" lol 😭 and i planned to make a something for it instead making the book 😶😩😭 (but i'm still gonna working on it! Love you Abbie!)
Omg same my character are literally my best friends and I am constantly drawing them
Thanks for all the help Abbie! Love you!
So grateful for people like you 🙏
I don't know. My novel kinda scares me. It needs several trigger warnings. 😶
that too could be marketing. I might do a video on how I wrote some really horrible scenes that I definitely didn't want to dive into but were essential to the story,
same bestie. how's it going?
This is really helpful, thank you!!!
I love it! I thought about it and you just proved it right! Perfect! Thank you so much...
Hey! I have a quick question-- how do you make different character voices sound different? For example, a proud character, a quiet character, an insecure character, a logical character, etc.
Good advice. Thanks so much. I will do some research and check out examples🎉😊
That's great advice! Thank you!
More on this topic, please! Also, content in general. Growing a writer’s Instagram. ❤
Indie author I follow literally got me to read her book by being the leader of her own fandom. Her enthusiasm got me to buy the book and that worked. Have seen stuff also that has NOT made me buy a book on TikTok-“if you like X trope/genre buy my book!” “Do you like X? Try Y!” 🚫 I can smell the desperation when I see those posts. Just, show me why you loved it enough to write it and geek out about those characters and I’ll potentially read it. ❤
Please please do a more in-depth video on this. I'm starting a social for my book and would love to know how to do so without spoiling the whole thing before it's published🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾
But how do I promote my book WITHOUT acting like a tiktok teen?
Are the teens successful? If so why reinvent the wheel? The kids have their hand on what works... Follow their example...
GST
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@@demonrulzends777 I'm not going to pretend to be something that I'm not just to make money
This is a great tip👍
Hey Abbie! I've watched a lot of your videos and also read 100 days of sunlight (read it all day long and though it was my first contemporary, it was quite amazing. Also read Best Christmas ever (Tessa and Weston) during Christmas vacation, coz why not. And super thrilled by the trailer of the other world, so will read that too. I write too and I'm stuck at a scene which is very crucial, where many characters meet and have their first conversation. Well it would've been easier if they were all strangers and I had one pov.
But I have more than one pov in this case and some are familiar to one another, ina way that okay okay frndship, some share frenemy bonding and some are total strangers
They all grouped up to meet at one place,say in a market or spent a whole day at a trip (it's a fantasy story btw)
So I would genuinely appreciate if I could get some help on first conversation with all such flavours added into it. What I am really focussing here on is fleshing out their personality with each line of dialogue or act that they do.
I'm stuck coz in this one or two scenes, I have to do plenty of things like showing world building, new characters and pov (first time switching into another pov) and also flesh out distinctly their personalities and relations with one another and how this affects my other main pov. You see how it's complex. Well I love complex stories and I just need help to excel it.
Plus my main focus and the other reason why I'm stuck in such a complex scene is the switching up pov (2nd pov) is a comedic relief character
And I don't know which books will be helpful or which type or comedy I want him to be, but he also has a hidden pain that he's keeping a secret from everyone. It would be great if I get a video guidance or some guide book recommendation.
Overall sorry foe the lengthy explanation and I would be glad if you would ever read or reply to my message but thanks in advance to anyone who reads and helps.
Hey Abbie! Can I ask you a question? What do I do if I have a story Idea I am confident in but when I finish my first draft/manuscript I end up despising it? How can I feel confident in my work again? How can I change my writing in a positive ways?
It's not uncommon to feel disappointed or dissatisfied with your work after the first draft. However, it's important to remember that writing is a process, and initial drafts are meant to be imperfect. Here are some simple steps to help you regain confidence in your work and make positive changes:
Take a break: Step away from your draft for a little while. Give yourself some distance from it so that you can approach it with fresh eyes and a clearer perspective. Taking a break can help you detach from the initial disappointment and gain a more objective view of your work.
Identify what's not working: Go through your draft and pinpoint the aspects that are causing your dissatisfaction. Is it the plot, the characters, the pacing, or the overall structure? Identifying specific areas of improvement will help you focus your efforts on making targeted changes.
Seek feedback: Share your work with trusted friends, writing groups, or beta readers. Getting constructive feedback from others can provide valuable insights and perspectives. Consider their suggestions and viewpoints, but remember that ultimately, you have the final say in what changes to make.
Analyze successful examples: Study books or stories in the same genre that you admire. Examine what makes them successful and analyze how they handle elements similar to the ones you're struggling with. This can inspire new ideas and approaches to improve your own writing.
Make a revision plan: Once you have a clear understanding of the areas that need improvement, create a revision plan. Break down the changes into manageable tasks and set specific goals for each. This will give you a structured approach and make the process less overwhelming.
Revise with intention: When making changes, focus on strengthening the weak areas while preserving the elements that work well. Be open to rewriting, restructuring, or even discarding parts that aren't serving the story. Stay connected to the core of your story and ensure that each revision aligns with your vision.
Embrace the iterative process: Understand that writing is an iterative process, and it often takes multiple drafts to refine and polish your work. Embrace the opportunity to grow and improve with each revision. Remember that even experienced writers go through this process to create their best work.
Celebrate progress: Acknowledge and celebrate the positive changes you make along the way. Recognize that every step forward is an accomplishment and brings you closer to achieving your vision for the story.
By approaching your work with a fresh perspective, seeking feedback, and making targeted revisions, you can transform your draft into a stronger and more satisfying piece of writing. Trust in your ability to improve, embrace the process, and remember that confidence in your work often comes from perseverance and dedication.
Hope that helps??? 😉💫
Juhuuuu❤❤❤ Amazing! Thank you Abbie!!!
Tsuru deserves a spot
I am probably my worst fan. The points I find importants, others don't care about while others find parts important I don't find as interesting. Why my blurbs suck no matter how many times I rewrite them.
Could you tell me a little about your blurb? If you’re comfortable of course.
Stan Lee said he wrote stories he enjoyed. He explained I'm just a regular guy & If I make adventures I enjoy hopefully others will as well.... Trust yourself I'm sure it's good!
Lovely advice.
How do I write a book with a single protagonist, and no consistent side characters? I know it can be done (e.g. Hatchet), but I don't know how. Can any of y'all commenters help me with this?
I think the best way to do this is to make the book character-focused. Give the main character flaws, a misbelief (Abbie discusses this often) that they work through throughout the book. The scenes should all develop the character, if only by a small amount.
Alternatively, you could make the book very action-packed and plot heavy, but that is difficult to pull off without seeming boring and/or baseless. Ultimately, the story is about the characters. What makes them special, and what makes their story... well, theirs?
Hope this helped :)
@@normal_spirit_in_elysium Wow, thank you!
Agreed 🎉
Anybody else just wanna start making memes about there Ocs, and gush about their dynamics or… just me?
No ur not alone 😭😭
It's so me. I have dynamics that I didn't mean to make, and now I have ships between them that are my OTP.
@@RoseCadenza FR, FR
Hey Abbie! I've watched a lot of your videos and also read 100 days of sunlight (read it all day long and though it was my first contemporary, it was quite amazing. Also read Best Christmas ever (Tessa and Weston) during Christmas vacation, coz why not. And super thrilled by the trailer of the other world, so will read that too. I write too , fantasy debut series is my wip and I'm stuck at a scene which is very crucial, where many characters meet and have their first conversation. Well it would've been easier if they were all strangers and I had one pov. Its none of those cases.
I have more than one pov in this case and some are familiar to one another, in a way that they share okay okay frndship, some share frenemy bonding and some are total strangers
They all grouped up to meet at one place,say in a market and later to spent a whole day at a trip.
So I would genuinely appreciate if I could get me some help on first conversation with all such flavours added into it. What I am really focussing here on is fleshing out their personality with each line of dialogue or act that they do.
I'm stuck here since a week , haven't written a word, coz in this one or two scenes, I have to do plenty of things like
showing world building,
new characters and
pov (first time switching into another pov) and also
flesh out distinctly their personalities and relations with one another and
how this affects my other main pov.
You see how it's complex. Well I love complex stories and I just need help to excel it.
Plus my main focus and the other reason why I'm stuck in such a complex scene is the switching up pov (2nd pov) is a comedic relief character
And I don't know which books will be helpful or which type or comedy I want him to be, but he also has a hidden pain that he's keeping a secret from everyone. (So I don't want him to be doing insult comdey or acting dumb coz he isn't ) It would be great if I get some guide book recommendations and advices from your experience.
Overall sorry for the lengthy explanation and I would be glad if you would ever read or reply to my message but thanks in advance to anyone who reads and helps.
Hello,
I understand that you are facing a complex challenge with your scene involving multiple points of view and diverse character dynamics. Let me break it down into steps to help you flesh out the personalities, relationships, and comedic relief character effectively:
Establish the setting: Begin the scene by describing the market or trip location in a way that reflects the world-building aspects you want to showcase. Use sensory details and vivid descriptions to immerse the readers in the environment.
Introduce the characters: As the characters gather, introduce them one by one, highlighting their unique personalities through their appearances, actions, and mannerisms. Consider their body language, speech patterns, and how they interact with the surroundings and other characters.
Show distinct relationships: Demonstrate the different types of relationships between characters. For friends, portray their camaraderie through inside jokes, shared memories, or playful banter. For frenemies, showcase a mix of friendly and competitive exchanges, veiled insults, or subtle power dynamics. For strangers, emphasize their initial awkwardness or curiosity towards one another.
Dialogue and actions: Use dialogue as a tool to reveal the characters' personalities. Each character should have a distinct voice and way of speaking. Their conversations can reflect their individual traits, such as humor, wit, sarcasm, or warmth. Consider their reactions to jokes or comments made by the comedic relief character and how it affects their interactions.
Character dynamics and reactions: Pay attention to how each character responds to the comedic relief character. Some may find their humor endearing and engage in lighthearted banter, while others might be annoyed or dismissive. Show the impact of the comedic relief character's presence on the overall group dynamic, highlighting moments of laughter or tension.
Reveal hidden pain: As the scene progresses, gradually reveal glimpses of the comedic relief character's hidden pain. This can be done through subtle hints, introspective moments, or brief glimpses of vulnerability. Balance the comedic aspects with moments of depth and introspection to add complexity to the character.
Regarding guidebook recommendations and advice, here are a few suggestions:
"The Comic Toolbox: How to Be Funny Even If You're Not" by John Vorhaus: This book offers techniques and insights into the craft of comedy writing, providing tools to create humor in various forms.
"The Hidden Tools of Comedy: The Serious Business of Being Funny" by Steve Kaplan: This book delves into the theories and principles behind comedy, exploring different comedic structures and techniques.
"Creating Character Arcs: The Masterful Author's Guide to Uniting Story Structure" by K.M. Weiland: This book helps you understand the process of creating compelling character arcs, which can be particularly useful in developing a comedic relief character with hidden pain.
Storytelling is a process, and it's natural to face challenges along the way. Embrace the complexity of your scene and use it as an opportunity to showcase your skills as a writer. Keep exploring different resources, experimenting with writing techniques, and trust your instincts as you bring your characters to life. Good luck with your writing journey!
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@@theauthorgodswill thank you so much. For my debut series, a major issue has been about:-
I didn't know any rules or techniques for writing when I started thinking and mentally plotting my entire series.
And since I started learning side by side, I got to know that there are structures such as 3 act or Hero's journey or others.
But the struggle is to fit my story in the ready made mold, if you understand what I mean (mold being the structure)
And I've tried to fit it in, aa much as I understood. Again I know one size doesn't fit all, I shouldn't try to do too much of it, but how will I know if my story is interesting, if I deviate from the structure.
How should I reverse the process of (having a story and then putting it in the place of the structure for it to make sense), when normally people study the structure and then form story accordingly.
@@37_vanshiDLakhani It's great that you've been learning about different story structures and techniques while developing your debut series. While story structures like the three-act structure or the Hero's Journey can be helpful guides, it's important to remember that they are not rigid rules that every story must adhere to.
Here are some suggestions to strike a balance between incorporating a structure and maintaining the unique qualities of your story:
Understand the purpose of story structures: Familiarize yourself with various story structures and their underlying principles. Rather than viewing them as strict templates, consider them as tools to understand storytelling patterns and effective narrative techniques. This knowledge will help you make informed decisions about how to structure and present your story.
Analyze your story's core elements: Identify the key components of your story, such as the main characters, their goals, conflicts, and the overall narrative arc. Evaluate how these elements align with the principles of different story structures. Look for areas where your story naturally fits into the structure and areas where you may need to make adjustments.
Adapt the structure to fit your story: Instead of trying to force your story into a predefined structure, adapt the structure to suit your narrative. Modify or combine elements of different structures to create a framework that enhances your story's flow and impact. This allows you to maintain the uniqueness and authenticity of your story while benefiting from the principles of established structures.
Seek feedback from trusted readers or editors: Share your story with beta readers or editors who can provide constructive feedback. Ask them specifically about the pacing, character arcs, and overall coherence of your narrative. Their insights can help you gauge the effectiveness of your story and whether it engages and resonates with readers.
Trust your storytelling instincts: Ultimately, trust your instincts as a writer. While it's valuable to learn from established storytelling techniques, remember that creativity and originality often arise from deviating from the norm. If you have a clear vision for your story and believe it's engaging, it's worth exploring and embracing its unique qualities.
Iterate and refine: Writing is an iterative process. As you gain more experience and insights, you can revisit and refine your story. Don't be afraid to make changes, adjust the structure, or experiment with different approaches. Allow yourself the freedom to evolve and grow as a writer.
While it's beneficial to study story structures, don't feel confined by them. Use them as tools to enhance your storytelling and make your narrative more compelling. Embrace the unique qualities of your story while applying the principles that resonate with your vision. By finding the right balance, you can create an engaging and satisfying reading experience for your audience.
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@@theauthorgodswill thank you for your advice.
I'm rewriting as in working on the second draft of my debut series. I changed the storyline after finishing the first draft to a large extend and now it feels to write most of it all over again, so its getting tedious and boring. I don't know how to spark excitement all over again and get done with the story to publish it this year
@@37_vanshiDLakhani Revising and rewriting can indeed be a challenging and sometimes tedious process. Here are a few tips to help you spark excitement and stay motivated as you work on the second draft of your debut series:
Remember your vision: Reconnect with the initial inspiration and excitement that led you to write this story in the first place. Remind yourself of the unique aspects that made you fall in love with the concept. Revisiting your original vision can reignite your passion and help you see the bigger picture, making the rewriting process feel more purposeful.
Set clear goals: Break down your rewriting process into smaller, manageable tasks and set specific goals for each writing session. This will give you a sense of progress and accomplishment as you complete each task, making the overall process feel less overwhelming. Celebrate these milestones along the way to maintain your motivation.
Take breaks and recharge: Writing can be mentally and emotionally draining, especially when you're rewriting a significant portion of your story. Remember to take regular breaks to rest, recharge, and engage in activities that inspire you. Stepping away from your work can actually enhance your creativity and help you approach your story with fresh eyes.
Find a support system: Seek out fellow writers, critique partners, or writing groups who can offer support, encouragement, and constructive feedback. Sharing your progress, discussing challenges, and receiving input from others can help you stay motivated and provide valuable insights to improve your work.
Experiment and have fun: Use the rewriting process as an opportunity to experiment with new ideas, perspectives, or writing techniques. Explore different possibilities, take risks, and have fun with your story. Sometimes, injecting fresh elements or trying out new approaches can reignite your excitement and bring a renewed energy to your writing.
Visualize the finished product: Imagine holding your published book in your hands and think about the impact your story could have on readers. Visualize the sense of accomplishment and fulfillment that comes with completing and sharing your work. Keeping this vision in mind can provide the motivation and drive needed to push through the rewriting process.
Stay flexible and open-minded: Allow your story to evolve and be open to unexpected changes and improvements. Embrace the rewriting process as an opportunity to refine your characters, strengthen your plot, and enhance the overall quality of your story. Stay flexible and willing to make necessary adjustments to create the best version of your debut series.
Rewriting is an essential part of the writing journey, and it's during this phase that your story truly takes shape and reaches its full potential. Stay committed, trust in your abilities, and approach the process with patience and perseverance. You are one step closer to publishing your story, and with dedication and passion, you will reach your goal.
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Hey Abbie , how do I write perfect fight scenes
What is the best way to become a writer as a 13 year old. It had always been a dream of mine to write a book. Any tips? Ilysm btw you are amazing!! #askabbie
That's wonderful that you have a dream of becoming a writer at such a young age!Pursuing your passion for writing can be a fulfilling journey. Here are some simple tips to help you embark on your path as a young writer:
Read widely and regularly: Reading is a fundamental part of developing your writing skills. Read books, novels, poetry, and articles across different genres and styles. Pay attention to the writing techniques, storytelling, and language used by authors. This will help you expand your vocabulary and gain a better understanding of what makes good writing.
Write consistently: Practice writing regularly to improve your skills. Set aside dedicated time each day or week to write creatively. Experiment with different genres, characters, and themes. Don't worry about perfection in your early drafts; focus on expressing your ideas and honing your storytelling abilities.
Start a journal or diary: Keeping a journal can be a great way to document your thoughts, experiences, and observations. It allows you to explore your own voice and helps develop your writing style. Use it as a safe space to experiment with different writing techniques and techniques.
Seek feedback: Share your writing with trusted friends, family members, or teachers who can provide constructive feedback. Consider joining a writing group or workshop where you can receive guidance and support from fellow writers. Feedback will help you understand your strengths and areas for improvement.
Embrace different writing exercises: Engage in writing exercises or prompts to challenge yourself and explore new styles. Experiment with descriptive writing, character development, dialogue, or creating engaging openings. These exercises can expand your creativity and push your boundaries as a writer.
Learn grammar and language skills: Pay attention to grammar, punctuation, and sentence structure. Developing a solid foundation in language skills will enhance the clarity and effectiveness of your writing. Explore online resources, books, or take writing courses to improve your understanding of grammar and language usage.
Emulate and find your voice: As you develop your skills, it's natural to be influenced by the writing styles of authors you admire. Experiment with emulating their techniques while also working on finding your own unique voice and perspective. Your voice will emerge as you gain more experience and confidence in your writing.
Stay curious and observe the world: Cultivate a sense of curiosity about the world around you. Observe people, places, and situations, and draw inspiration from them. Ask questions, explore different perspectives, and use these observations to infuse depth and authenticity into your writing.
Edit and revise: Remember that writing is a process. After completing a draft, review, edit, and revise your work. Pay attention to clarity, coherence, and tightening your prose. Don't be afraid to make changes or seek feedback during this stage.
Enjoy the journey: Writing is a creative outlet, so enjoy the process of exploring your imagination and storytelling abilities. Embrace the ups and downs, the challenges, and the moments of inspiration that come with being a writer. The more you write, the more you'll grow as a writer.
Remember, becoming a skilled writer takes time, patience, and practice. Keep writing, stay passionate, and believe in your abilities. Writing is a lifelong journey, so embrace the joy of storytelling and the power of words.
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@@theauthorgodswill oh my god! Holy crap, thank you so much!! This means a lot! Thank you, thank you, thank you!
@@lilycole2398 you are welcome 😉💫
how can you promote your book anonymously? I don't have a social media and my novel is based on characters some friends already know (we play dnd) but im to shy about letting the people know I'm writing something
I can't put start my story bcz idk what should I write at first ....can anyone help me?
You should simply start at the beginning of the book. But where is that? In every story there’s a moment where the plot really starts. A meet cute in romance, for example. Or the murder of the main characters friend in a mystery. Figure out what that moment is, then take the reader back just a little bit. Let’s say the meet cute is at a coffee shop before work, show us the characters ordinary morning before the meet cute. Show us their life and who they are. Then, push them in a totally different direction. Or in the mystery you can show us the characters interacting, and show us why we care about this death
I also recommend outlining. It doesn’t need to be super detailed, just some basic bullet points is fine
@@Anna-B thank you 🤝🥂
If u have the idea just sit down and begin. Few adventures start at the beginning. Throw readers into the action to hook them. Go back later to give more insight after u already have them interested.
GST
Hi,
Just to let you know that you don’t have to start at the beginning of the book.
I sometimes work backward or out of order. Remember the first draft will most likely change. And sometimes you find the beginning you thought will end up being different.
The important thing is to start and remember that it is a process that is always evolving.
this is something that I want to do
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